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Home»Fan Fiction»swabhimaan ff (chapter 04) long lasting love
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swabhimaan ff (chapter 04) long lasting love

ThreemaimaiBy ThreemaimaiMarch 29, 201719 Comments4 Mins Read
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wow you guys are awesome without all of you i couldn’t write this far. thank you so much for your support. suggestions are warmly welcome. so enjoy the story.

chapter 04
karan suddenly pushed his head back and hit it Window
“awwwww… thats hurt” he is frowning to naina
” ohhhh karan let me see” once again caring naina appears. she tried to look at his head which karan refeuse to show.
” ohhh naina take your hands.. aaa no no no”
” sir .. madam look really worried let her see your head i think it hits really badly” driver was laughing and said himself ” young love”
they passed beautiful scenaries both enjoyed their journey.
” welcome sir , welcome madam” old lady came to welcome them and she show them where they will spend next seven days.
its a beautiful wooden houses. simple and relaxing. karan falls in love with the house and surrounding with the first sight.
“wow naina i love this place. this is exactly my dream place to live”
” karan i am glad you like here. so you can enjoy as much as you want.”
driver put their bag inside and had little chat with naina and left with heart full bless for the couple.
naina prepared dinner and karan enjoyed stomach full.
next day when karan waked up he saw naina was missing. ” Naina.. naina…. where are you? ” he got out from the bed and ran out of the room. “NAINA…”
” Karan don’t screem i am in the kitchen”
karan ran to the kitchen. all he needed to see nainas face but still couldn’t figure out why.
” ohhh you are here. where are you going?”
naina already dressed to go out.
” karan here is your breakfast i will be back 12.30 bye karan enjoy your day”
naina leave the kitchen. karan heard the front door open and close.
” hmmmm what should i do?????”

at chauhan house
” meghana did you got any massage from naina?” kunal was getting ready to go to office and meghana was helping him with his tie.
” not yet kunal” , ” hey topper how you stay so cool” , ” because i am the topper..”
smile came to kunals lips.
” i wish both of them are safe. still can’t believe nainas bravery”
” neither do i kunal i have never seen such a brave ac… na behavior from cheeku, done go down stairs and have your breakfast my king”
” if my queen ordes me how could i refeuse”
he kissed meghanas forehead and left.
meghanas phone rang
“hello”
“di it’s me cheeku. ” , “CHEEEKU…”
“shhhh di someone will hear you. i can’t talk to you longer. tell dadu that karan agree to stay here for one week”
“one week… are you sure karan will fall for you within a week” meghana was laughing
” aaaa di stop talking nonsense i have to go try make some stories that we are fine so ma want be much worry about us”
” i will my champ take care of yourself and fighting..”
“thanks di bye”
meanwhile karan was walking here and there he saw small girl sitting on a bench and drawing pictures. he saw something in common between them and that’s the umbrella. little girl also noticed the same and gave a dashing smile just like naina
” hi i am cheeku and you are?” she offer her umbrella to him and karan offer his umbrella to her with a surprise ” CHEEKU… i am karan” they shaked hands through the umbrellas.

to be continued

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19 Comments

  1. kashaf on March 29, 2017 8:44 am

    Its awesome

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 9:58 am

      thank you… 🙂

  2. Juveria on March 29, 2017 10:40 am

    It was mind blowing i love it. Please post as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and post longer one please

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 11:20 am

      thank you so much.i am super happy that you guys enjoyed the story. i will try my best to post quickly 🙂

  3. Tamihna0808 on March 29, 2017 11:23 am

    Wow! This is so interesting! So they’re at a place where there’s a little girl version of Karan and Naina! That’s so cute! I wanna read mooore! Update soon!! ??❤?

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 12:20 pm

      ya she will be the key. thank you so much. me too waiting for your next ep 🙂

  4. Shabnam on March 29, 2017 12:08 pm

    Amazing ?????

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:16 pm

      thank you so much

  5. Aarzu on March 29, 2017 12:08 pm

    It was Gud….. I like it

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:16 pm

      thank you…. 🙂

  6. Naina on March 29, 2017 1:04 pm

    Nice episode. Loved the last part.

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:18 pm

      hehehe… glad you like it thank you

  7. Nila on March 29, 2017 1:35 pm

    wow amazing and interesting yaar

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:19 pm

      thank you…… 🙂 🙂

  8. Shruthy on March 29, 2017 2:50 pm

    Hmmm so finally they reached the place, Naina has decided to cure Karan from his inside frustration. Living in a place he actually likes, meeting a little girl that actually behaves like him but actually smiles widely like Naina does. I guess the story of the three in this one week will bring out the “hidden” feelings of Karan towards Naina. THRILLING! <3

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:22 pm

      hehehehe… thats a secret. you will see.. i will try my best to write it mind blowing way 😉 thank you sooo much….

    • Shruthy on March 31, 2017 12:39 am

      Woooo! Secret! Mast ☺️?? Will be waiting. ??

  9. Prettypreeti on March 29, 2017 3:14 pm

    Wow wow woww..yaar its so cute one..i lived meghnal scenes and tge last scenes were just heart taking..
    U r marveellous threee…awesome
    Love ur ff alot..
    Keep writing.
    Superbbbbbb……..
    ?????

    • Threemaimai on March 29, 2017 6:24 pm

      oooo thank you dr i am super happy to see you guys comments. thank you thank you sooo much 🙂 <3

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