I just wanted to say a HUGE thank you! The last chapter was a milestone for me and it’s all down to you guys! Every comment and word you guys wrote just gave me a huge push. I know there are silent readers out there! Please I just want to know of you’re enjoying my FF! Thank you so much! Sometimes I don’t know what to say when you give me such sweet compliments so all I have to say is”thank you” I know it’s not enough but it’s the only way u can express what I feel! Love you all so much! ????
Hope you’re having a good day! ?❤?❤?
Part 81:
They all went downstairs but no one was there.
Karan: Come on Aman, let’s go and get everyone.
Meghna: Thanks guys, Chiku you sit here with the twins okay?
Naina: Okay Di.
Karan and Aman went to Dadajis room and saw him sitting on his chair.
Karan: Dadu?
Dadaji looked at the door.
Dadaji: Come on in you two.
Aman: Dadaji, Meghu Di is preparing breakfast.
Karan: She wants you there.
Dadaji: I don’t feel like eating.
Karan kneeled down in front of Dadaji.
Karan: You can’t do that Dadu, your health with get affected.
Aman: Karan is right.
Karan: Dadu, eat for Bhai’s sake?
Dadaji gave in.
Karan: Aman, you take Dadu downstairs, I’ll get Dad and Mom.
Dadaji: They haven’t eaten either?
Aman: No.
Dadaji: I’ll call them.
Karan and Aman smiled.
Dadaji knocked on NK and Nirmalas door.
Nirmala open it: Bauji?
NK saw his father at the door.
NK: Babuji, come in.
Dadaji took a seat next to NK.
Dadaji: It’s breakfast time, what are you two doing here?
Nak: I don’t feel like eating.
Nirmala: Did you eat?
Dadaji: Not yet, I’ve come here to take you two with me.
NK: Babuji, you should’ve eaten.
Nirmala: It’s not good for your health to eat late.
Dadaji smiled: What about your health?
NK and Nirmala looked at one another.
Dadaji: I know you’re both worries about Kunal, we all are but we can’t fall ill and let him see us like this.
Nirmala: You’re right Bauji.
Dadaji: Come on down.
NK walked down with his Father and Wife.
Naina looked up at them and smiled.
Sandhya and Arjun also came to eat breakfast.
Meghna was distributing everyone their food. Naina called Meghna to sit and eat with her and she fed her older sister.
It was 8 am.
Aman: We’re going to see Kunal, only 3 more people can join me.
Dadaji: Meghna Bahu, Nirmala and Karan will go with you.
NK: That’s a good idea.
Sandhya: Make sure you call us on your way back okay?
Arjun: Me and Naina Bhabi will take care of the babies.
Meghna: Thank you.
Aman drove himself and the rest to the police station. Karan sat upfront, Meghna and Nirmala sat at the back holding each others hand.
Nirmala: My chest is hurting.
Meghan: Karan, do you have water?
Karan: Haan Bhabi.
Karan passed Meghna the bottle of water and Meghna fed Nirmala the water.
Meghna: Does it feel any better?
Nirmala: I don’t know.
Aman: Auntie, we’re almost here.
Nirmala: Don’t worry Aman betaa, just get us there.
Karan: Maa, if you’re not feeling well then we could take you to the doctors.
Nirmala: No Karan, I want to see my Kunal.
Meghna hugged Nirmala: It’s okay Maa, not long left now.
They got to the station. Nirmala walked in holding Meghnas hand, she looked around and saw things that scared her.
Meghna: Maa?
Nirmala: How did he spend a night here with all these people?
Meghna: I don’t know Maa.
Aman: Auntie, I’ll go and give the bail papers in.
Karan: We’ll wait here.
Aman: Sure.
Aman went and handed the papers and came back to them.
Aman: They’re going to get Jeeju out.
Meghna smiled at Nirmala and Karan who were also very happy.
They waited for Kunal, it’d been 30 minutes.
Nirmala: What’s taking so long?
Aman: I don’t know.
Meghna got up from her seat and then walked but stopped when she saw Kunal waking in with two police officers.
Meghna: Kunal?! What have you done to him?
Nirmala, Karan and Aman looked at Kunal.
Kunals hair was messed, there was blood on his head and lips.
Meghna ran to him and held his face.
Kunal didn’t feel any pain. He put his forehead onto Meghnas.
Kunal: Meghna.
Aman: What is the meaning of this?
Karan: How could you beat him up?
Aman: The justice system does not work like that.
Nirmala: My son is…
Nirmala went to Kunal and hugged him.
Nirmala: Kunal.
Kunal: I’m fine Mom.
Karan: Mom, Bhabi let’s take Bhai home.
Aman looked at the police officers: I’ll be back to discuss what you’ve done, this isn’t right.
Policeman: Son, you don’t need to tell us how to do our job.
Meghna: Your job? This is your job? Not knowing the truth and then punishing people?
Karan: Punishment isn’t even in your hands.
Aman: You’ll need to find another job soon.
Aman and Karan walked away in disgust.
Today’s question will be what’s your favourite drink?!?! I love water ? but other than that I love capri-sun don’t know if you’ve heard of it! And I love Pepsi! Hope it doesn’t change your opinion on me cause trust me some people don’t like you of you like Pepsi! ?
Enough of me talking! Let me know what you thought of the chapter! Hugs&kisses to you all! ?❤?❤?
44 Comments
ooooo… those police officers should be suspended… plz do that for me…. 😉
i like how you create the family bond. awesome epi …. love it…
lemonade is my favorite… other than that faluda 😀
Thank you! ? there are bad people on the world! That warning from Aman was them being suspended ?? Lemonade! So yummy! Thank you once again! Loads of love! ?❤
Sis it was very nice chapter i want those police officers should have punishment for what they did
You are awesome writer
My favourite is pepsi and coca cola
Thank you so much! ? Don’t worry Aman will handle the police! ? you’re really kind! Yaay Pepsi!? I enjoy drinking Coca Cola too! Thank you once again, loads of love ?❤
I love drinking water.. also coke.. and sprite.. and lemonade..???
Well coming to the epi.. its marvellous.. really twists ki rani.. by the way am loving this track..❤️
Post soon.. will be waiting??
Haha! I know how it is! You write one thing and then you thinking of something so your list gets bigger! ? love your list! ? Thank you so much! ? So happy you’re enjoying it! Loads of love ?❤
Di today’s epi was nice and update the next part asap…
Coming to the question my favourite is vergin mojito and mocha…
Thank you so much! ?I love Mojitos! So refreshing! Thank you once again! Loads of love! ?❤
Awesome! Naah its just a word for how amazingly you write everything!
God I dont have any praises left for your ff!
Its so damn good that you left me speechless! Believe me or not I have to find words sometimes to comment on your ff!
I dont have any words left to say about the chapter!
I love cold coffee! Its the only drink I love! Other then that I love coke! ?
Loads of love and hugs and kisses~KOMAL ???
Oh Komal! Why are you so sweet?!?! Thank you for always praising me! All the time! ?? I hope you continue to enjoy it! I don’t drink coffee ??? I know everyone loves coffee and there’s me… a tea drinker… very British of me! ? thank you once again! Loads of love! ?❤
Awsm update di……. I hope those police officers lost their jobs I hate them ahhhhh police are for helping people not to harm them……..you are just ? awesome writer
My favorite drinks are orange juice and litchi juice (freshly prepared not packed one) and then I love all milk shakes specially chocolate milk shake mango shake and cold coffee and hot coffee too…. I don’t like Pepsi and other packed drinks…. ??? but still I like Pepsi milk shakes, and I love pepsi + ice-cream (I know it is quite weird but try it di it tastes delicious ?)
LOVE YOU keep writing ? ? ❤
Thank you so much Arushi! ? Aman has the police handled don’t worry! ? yaaas fresh juices! Oooh milkshakes as well! I want an oreo krushum now! ? I’ve never tried Pepsi shake or ice cream! ? I’ll definitely try it when I get a chance to! ? Thank you and love you too giiiirrrl ?❤
Nice update. please post as soon as possible. Answer to your question. I love to drink fresh juice and frooti???????
Thank you so much! ? Fresh juices sounds so good now! You can get Kunal, Karan and Vaibhu to make them for you! ? once again thank you an d loads of love! ?❤
Hi Tammy!! Mine is lassi and cold coffee as usual it was a master blaster episode…..at last kunal is out of the jail and am glad that the story is spicing up well congratulations to you for reaching 81 episodes!!!! I hope you complete 100 episodes…well coming to drinks well I am a fusion kind of person so I am desi nd modern as well….so as being desi with lassi and modena with my cold coffee…NYC na????so watch about you where do you study and how you develop interest in Swabhiman by being in London???? This is my question for you today..☺Well have a great day ahead…Love you loads!!???
Thank you sooooo much! ? nice combo of drinks from the East and West? now coming to answer your questions I don’t study any more ? I’m free from that! ? and colors TV is very popular over here! I remember watching the add for it and thought “this will be a very interesting show” I think I’m right about that to be honest. I remember when I watched one of the promos on YouTube and people were comparing it to Swaragini. I was thinking ” Stop right there! The only similarity is the fact that they’re two sisters!” That promo showed that Meghna wanted to take a stand for her mother that’s why people thought Meghnas character was Raginis character but they are sooooo wrong. Ragini was naive and simple. Where as Meghna is smart and can see through people. I don’t think people thought Naina and Swara were the same but if they did then they’re wrong. I genuinely think Swabhimaan is a much better show in terms of storyline and sending a message out to people. It’s not just a love story. That how I came to fall in love with the show and with the characters. Thank you for being so sweet! Loads of love! ?❤
WATER & NECTO!
Awww the children made the entire family have breakfast and finally Meghna, Karan, Aman went to get Kunal bailed. So the jail joirney of Kunal ends here right ?
I can feel the pain of the 4 of them seeing Kunal all beaten up and bleeding. ? That’s so sick how people took power in their hands and think to do anything, not even knowing the truth. And when they will, they will just say sorry and case is closed. ??♀️
Anyways… why am I getting headache early morning talking about them ? ?
It was as usual marvellooooous, but quite short na, compared to the previous ones. But you still gave something which is something better. ☺️
Waiting for update number 82. ❤️ Love love ??
Oooh! Love the choice! Thank you so much! ?Kunal isn’t out juuuust yet! But will be soon! Trust me, people abuse their power and it’s horrible! Sorry this one was short! The next one will be longer! Hope you enjoy what’s to come! Loads of love! ?❤
hiiii.I’m silent reader cominting for the first Tim. epi was too good as usual end my fev. cocacola…..
OMG ? Thank you so much for commenting! ? time to celebrate! ? but seriously, I’m so happy you commented! Thank you for reading my FF, really gold you’re enjoying it! ? coca cola is gooood! Hope to see you here more often! Loads of love ?❤
Brilliant conception and presentation. The episode was highly emotional and depicted the huge plethora of innumerable intertwined emotions in the life of the Chauhan family. Every scene was wonderfully composed and presented a unique side to every person. Reading about kunal’s physical injuries and all of the superficial wounds inflicted upon him is making my soul go up in flames right now. The mortal nature of humans which entices them to act eventhough they are ignorant of the truth makes me curse myself for being a person to their kind.
Nonetheless, the words of karan and aman have shown me a ray of hope in this dark overcast sky of despair and strife and has revived me. They make me believe in the fact that there is still some goodness left in this evil world which may as well some day dispel the darkness around.
This episode was surely an immaculate and pristine piece of magical art.
Thank you so much! ? Your words mean so much to me! Everyone’s words do. I’m really glad that I get to know how you feel after reading my work. People in the world can be really cruel and I kind of want to show that by having the policemen beat up Kunal. It saddens me as well, that we walk amongst people like that. Thank you and loads of love! ?❤
I am really in awe of the way in which you manage to surprise us readers with an unconventional question every time. It really feels good to know that there are some people who want to know more about people they are physically unaware of and show their eagerness for the same.
Nevertheless, I would be extrelely glad to assert the fact that I love to sip on milkshakes and fresh juices durimg times when I am low and have the sole company of songs like – channa mereya, judaai, noor e khuda and hasi to embodify my feelings or alleviate my turmoils.
There are some grammatical errors in my comment up there and I am extremely sorry for it. Here are the rectifications:
*extremely
*during
Thank you! ? I really want to know my audience! I feel like I’ve made a group if friends and just want to know them, for all I know, you might be a serial killer…? haha haha I joke! ? even if you were you like reading my FF and that’s all that matters! ??? I’m joking…I joke a lot?? don’t worry about your grammatical errors, I make too many and you guys never complain! So thank you for that! Milkshakes really lift my mood as well! ? oooh those songs are too good! Love them all! Loads of love! ?❤
hey di, thanks for ur help.l’m so happy that u likes m ff.and lfeel so sad for kunal.such a big accusation was on him.but his strength-meghna and his whole family is with him.they will get rid of this malayka devil soon..l really love ur ff a lot.keep writing…????? and my favourite drink is…nariyal paani????
You’re very welcome! ? thank you so much for all the support you are giving me. It means a lot! Yes don’t worry the Chauhans will get rid of her soon! Haha! Everyone loves nariyal paani! ?? thank you and loads of love! ?❤
forgot to add something..because l am from Kerala u know ???
dear..I wnt to ask u smthng..I’m reading all ur privous epi …so can I comment on that episodes …mtlb privous epi read kar ke me in Sab episode ka comment de sakti hun ….plz let me nkow dear bcoz after reading ur epi I CNT resist my self commenting
if u asked me,i believe so.then of course dear.l would love to read to all comments it makes me happy???
Hey Ayshakhan, I don’t know whether you’re asking me or Seyal but both of us would love to read everything and anything from you! Loads of love! ?❤
WHAT CAN I SAY DII…AP TO HAMESA HI BOHAT BADIYA LIKH DETI HO…AUR MAI COMMENT KYA KARU CONFUCED HO JATI HU.
IT WAS MARVELLOUS AWSM AUR KYA BOLU YAAR.
WELL MY FAV DRINK…I LOVE PEPSI,LEMONADE & COLD COFFE.
Aaaw! Thank you so much! ? I’m really glad you like it! All you need to tell me what you liked or didn’t like! If you enjoyed it or not! Your comments are always so sweet, compliment after compliment and yet you compliment after saying you have nothing to say! So much love for you! ❤? those drinks ??
Hi tami di ………. I’m extremely sorry for not commenting on previous chapters as I was busy in my work so I didn’t commented so now I’m back i hope I could comment every day but I read u r ff in my busy schedule i loved the all chapters all chapters are breathtaking I loved it this twist was just awesome and fabulous and coming back to u r question my favourite drink is americano and milk in loved to drink this drinks ……. and in ff u told ur favourite princess is rapunzel and Belle same me too I love both of them so much and can’t wait to read next chapter, post soon as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and u r fabulous writer and as I told story is becoming more interesting day by day I love to read u r ff,
love u,
post soon. ??
Hey girl! I missed your comments! ? thank you so much for being able to fit me and my FF into your busy schedule! Means so much! Thank you for letting me know your favourite drinks! ? also I love those two princesses! They’re just so relatable time me but I do love the other processes as well! ? thank you and loads of love! ❤?
thnxxxxxx
You’re welcome! ?❤
actually I was asking u both …both of u are just awesome…
You’re so sweet! ?❤ thank you!
I ws asking u both u 2 r just awsommm my dis…
All the love is overwhelming! Thank you! ?❤
Oooo again sooo good ??I can’t wait for the next bit my fave is 7up because its that best and only fizzy drink I like
Thank you so much! ? oooh! I love 7up as well! It’s soooo good! ?
Thank you and loads of love ?❤
Oooo again sooo good ??I can’t wait for the next bit my fave is 7up because its that best and only fizzy drink I likexx❤️