Nand Kishore entered.
Nand Kishore: Karan! Kunal!
Karan and Kunal froze, they couldn’t hide as Nand Kishore had already seen them.
Nand Kishore walked to them.
Nand Kishore: What are both of you doing here? You know that this is a ladies only function. Why did you come here?
Kunal: Dad! Actually…
Nand Kishore: Karan! Did you bring him here? I know Kunal won’t do all of this by himself, you must have brainwashed him!
Karan: Papa! Why would I brainwash Bhai?
Nand Kishore: So that he would get scolded by me! What can I even expect from you? From someone who has hidden himself behind his mother all his life! Nalayak!
Kunal: Dad! Karan did not force me to come here! I…
Nand Kishore: Stop covering up for him, Kunal! I did not expect this from you! You should have refused to come here! How could you come into Karan’s words?
Kunal: Dad!
Nand Kishore: Stop it, Kunal!
Karan walked away.
Naina followed.
Scene 2: Outside Meghna and Naina’s home
Karan had curled himself up into a ball and was crying.
Naina: Karan!
Karan: Hmmm
Naina: Uncle ki baaton ka bura kyun maan rahe ho?
Karan: Tumne suna nahi ki Papa ne abhi sab ke samne kya kaha? Mein nalayak hoon kya?
Naina: Karan! The people who look for faults in others spend no time correcting theirs. The negative things they say are a reflection of themselves. Aur tum nalayak nahi ho! You’re one of the most beautiful souls I’ve ever met!
Karan looked up.
Karan: Sachhi?
Naina: Muchhi!
Scene 3: Meghna and Naina’s room
Kunal: Meghna! Why is Dad behaving like this?
Meghna: Chodo, Kunal! It’s ok! Papa he wo, unhe gussa hone ka poora hak hein!
Kunal: I agree! But not like this! How could he? Karan would never do this on his own! I wanted to see you and so Karan made a plan and we came here. It wasn’t Karan’s fault at all! How could Dad think that Karan brainwashed me?
Meghna: Kunal! Ek baat poochu?
Kunal: Haan.
Meghna: Papa ko kaise pata chala ki tum dono yahaan hein?
Kunal: Yes! How did Dad get to know? Only Karan and I knew about this plan!
Meghna: We’ll have to find out!
Kunal: Yes! Why don’t we check on Karan?
Meghna: Let’s go!
Scene 4: Outside
Meghna and Kunal met Naina and Karan.
Kunal: Karan! Did anyone else know that we were coming here in disguise?
Karan: No, Bhai! No one knew! I don’t understand how Papa came to know!
Meghna: We have to find out.
Naina: Haan.
Kunal: Karan, I want to talk to you.
Karan: Yes, Bhai!
Scene 5: Meghna and Naina’s room
Kunal: Karan! Tu theek hai? I know I have never shown care for you ever since childhood but aaj pehli baar mujhe aisa laga jaise Papa tumse nafrat karta hai! Maybe, I never noticed because I was always outside. I am sorry!
Karan: Bhai! Why are you saying sorry? Late hi sahi mujhe ehsaas to hua ki mere bimaari ke bawjood log mujhse pyaar karte hein!
Kunal: Kaunsi bimaari?
Karan: Meri bimaari!
Kunal: Kab aur kaise? Mujhe iske baare mein kyun nahi pata?
Karan: Bhai! Are you serious? Aapko meri bimaari ke baare mein pata nahi tha? I have a skin disease.
Kunal couldn’t believe it. This fact had been hidden from him for so many years! No one had ever told him that his younger brother was suffering from a disease. He felt so guilty! He had made fun of Karan for such minor things! He dropped to the ground crying.
Karan: Bhai! Bhai, why are you crying?
Kunal: I’m sorry! I didn’t know!
Karan: It’s okay, Bhai!
Kunal: It’s not okay! How could I?
Karan: Bhai! Stop crying! I love you and that’s all that matters!
Kunal looked up and saw a different Karan. A confident Karan.
Kunal: I love you too!
Precap: Meghnal’s wedding + Nand Kishore’s demand
I’m so sorry sbout this. I know it was a very boring chapter. I can only continue this ff after my exams get over and I am extremely sorry for that. I truly feel terrible to keep you all hanging like this. I will be able to continue after December 15th.
I’ll post my next chapter on the 15th of December. Now that I’m taking such a long gap, I would like to thank all the people who supported me throughout these 7 chapters.
Amena, Fenil Bhaiya, TuttiFrutti, Sunny, Anushka, Sofia, Aafiya, Palak, Minakhi, Niyu, Ashnita, Sruthi, Asmi, Resh, Akansha, Tanya, Devu, Mallika, SRK- Meri Jaan and Seyal. I am extremely sorry if I missed anyone’s name.
Most importantly, thank you Fenil Bhaiya. Agar aap nahi hote to mein ye fan fiction kabhi nahi likhti. Thank you so much!
31 Comments
Hey Mansi,How are you ?.
Chappy was fabulous,NK’s drama an Karan’s pushing himself back lil one before that Naina manage him,Kunal’s stands for his lil brother.Meghana and Kunal are perfect.Kunal’s emotional break down knowing Karan’s truth-I want scenes where now Kunal will confrontation to family about the same.loved it.It’s all your hard work..that’s only my wish to read something from you.
Thank you so much Bhaiya!
Yes, I’ll include scenes where Kunal stands up for Karan…
Nahi…seriously I had the idea but I wouldn’t have put it into action if it weren’t for you.
I loved it Di!
This chapter was fantastic.
Kunal rocked this chapter. His reaction when he got know about Karan’s disease was amazing.
The way Meghna supported Kunal and Naina supported Karan was cute.
Mansi Di!!! The way you write is unexplainable. You leave me speechless with every single chapter.
Your writing style is just amazing.
I hate Nand Kishore so much. I wonder who told Nand Kishore that Kunal and Karan went to the Sangeet.
Don’t worry Mansi Di. The chapter wasn’t at all boring. How can your chapter ever be boring?
You know Di, your ff was the first ff I commented on. You gave me a positive response and I must say that it inspired me to comment more. I got the confidence to comment on other ffs only because you gave me such a positive response.
Best of luck for your exams. I know you will do very well.
I’ll wait for your next episode.
Take care and stay safe.
Love you Di.
Awww! ?
Thank you so much Mallika! ?
So much praise in one comment!
I’ll keep the person who told Nand Kishore the truth secret for now.
I would say that I am extremely lucky to have you as one of my readers! The love you’ve shown me has been great! I’m extremely lucky to have you as my younger sis! I feel like I’ve found a family here on Telly Updates!
Love you too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Fabulous chapter it was an awesome and lovely chapter keep posting
I am sure after 15 dec you will able to post regular
Do well in ur exams
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Thank you so much Palak!
I’ll surely post regularly after 15 December.
Loads of love! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Hello Mansi!! This was really amazing.. Seriously NK is too much.. He always talks so rudely.. Hope Naina and Meghna will give some brain to him.?
Waiting to know who told NK about them!!
And NaiRan was really sweet and same with MeghNal. Both of these couple are soo good.
But this chapters best part was Kunal and Karan scene. Both the brothers are so good. Their bond is amazing and the scene was amazing and emotional too.
I loved it.
Will be waiting for 15 dec to pass soon.
And all the best for your exams! You with do great.
Loads of love.❤❤
Thank you so much Anushka!
Yes! I love both the couples so much!
Missing Swabhimaan so much! There has been news about a Season 2 coming up very soon. I really hope it comes true!
Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Wow??? I read it and it was very beautiful..? I loved it very much and waiting for the next chapter.. Pls post soon??
Thank you so much Devu!
I’ll post on 15th December…
Loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️️
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It is awesome dear….very well written….loved it to the coree….do update soon…love u sis ? ?
Thank you so much Niyu!
Loads of love! ❤️❤️❤️
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Fabulous…O lovedthe dialogues between Nairan when she is soothed him about Nand kishore’s bitter words. And also Kunran’s brobond. Would love to see more of how kunal supports karan. Kunal’s reaction about karan’s disease was really heartwarming.
Thank you so much!
I’m so sorry for the late reply…
I’ll surely add more scenes of Kunal supporting Karan!
Thank you so much once again!
Loads of Love! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Hey no sorry and no thank you among friends and looking forward to next episode…I may not be able to comment back to back since I am not regular at tellyupdates but would definitely tell you when I read them.
Oh!
I’ll keep that in mind! ?
I’ll wait for your feedback!
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This was a short and beautiful episode!
It was nice to see Kunal trying to defend his brother.. Nk has been too harsh on Karan, I.felt realy bad.. But Karan has his new formed army to support him and boost his confidence… The concern Naina showed was nice.. And they.raised up a good and important question, which was impressive!
So, is it Sandhya again?
Question arises..
All the best for your exams.. do well dear..
Just waiting for your next update to pop up!
Loads of love to you :-*
I guess I clicked the correct emoji! 🙂
Thank you so much Resh!
I love Nairan so much! ?
I’m waiting for your next chapter as well…the Vishyati moments ?
Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Wow! It was awesome… Beautiful.. Karan and Kunals part was nice… All the best for your exams.. Do well….. Meet you in the TU on December 15th…baye.. Take care…
Thank you so much Aafiya!
Loada of love! ❤️❤️❤️
Bye!
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*Loads
Frst of all sry for late rply bcoz im little busy ….btw lets strt today epsd that is awsm im totally enjoy…nairan, meghnal n mostly nk scane is to much good??…so im waiting ur nxt epsd in 15th December……n All the Best for ur exm?
Loads n loads of love ??
Thank you so much!
Please don’t say sorry…I totally understand how busy we can be ?
Loads of love to you too! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Superb naina..its too good and sweet.really it was cute and nice epi..nk karan ko kb samjega??kunal is with karan..superb..
Amazing
Thank you so much!
It really means a lot to me!
Loads of love! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Hai the chappy was soo good… I loved it a lot… Naina being so caring and lovely…. Sooo cute… All the best for ur exams
Loads of love
Thank you so much Seyal!
Loads of love to you too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Hi Naina.Sorry for being late actually i was busy and was having problen with my keypad.Now aslo it is.So sorry for the typos.I loved this one.I read it earlier.It was awesome.Its ok come back after your exams.Will be waiting.Loads of love.Post?? asap…
Thank you so much Amena!
I’ll post as soon as I can!
Loads of love to you too! ❤️️❤️️❤️️
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Don’t be sorry..I’m so happy you commented
Thank you so much Bhaiya!