Hellllllloooooo!!!! I m back with the climax of my horrible os.Thank you soo much for your lovely comments.
Let’s begin
Swara ka Sanskar! Mind it!(swasan os)
CLIMAXX
Swara is mumbling Sanskar’s name in her semiconscious state. She is sweating badly.Her hairs and face was wet bcoz of profuse sweat. She was moving her head here and there.Tears were flowing nonstop from her eyes. Someone saw her condition and got shocked so jerked her saying” swara swara..” But she was not responding as she is lost.The person was Sanskar who was trying to wake her up.After trying for sometime,he got successful in waking her.Swara opened her eyes then instantly again closed.Sanskar caress her face and said” swara look at me”.Swara feeling his touch calmed little and slightly opened her eyes.Only he can see her Sanskar’s face.She felt like she got her life back after seeing him.she immediately got up and hugged him tightly that even air can’t pass in between them.She started crying bitterly making Sanskar worried. He rub her back but it didn’t effect her.
Sanskar let her cry bcoz then she will feel better. After crying for very long she
Stopped but still sobbing. She stopped not bcoz she is fine now but bcoz her tears were finished. Sensing her silence, Sanskar slowly broke the hug.She was all pale tired.Sanskar was not understanding what happen to her suddenly she was alright when they slept.He cups Swara’s pale face and she looked in his eyes.” r u ok?”asked Sanskar. Swara just nodded.”u had seen some bad dream?” Said Sanskar which made swara remembered all things but she uttered’ u r only mi..ne Sans..kar” some fresh tears flow down her cheeks.sanskar got confused at her statement and wipes her tears and kissed her forehead.Swara was staring him and then moved little up and placed her soft but dry lips on his lips astonishing sanskar.She was kissing him with full dominance as if there is no tomorrow. Sanskar also responded. Swara’s one hand moved towards his hairs and other was busy in rubbing his chest. She don’t want to be in senses and remember all that.Sanskar hands were caress her belly under her nighty.
After kissing roughly and passionately for long time both were out of breathe but were not ready to break it.swara take her lips at an inch distance to inhale and mumble”Make me yours sanskar” Sanskar was looking at her pleading eyes. He don’t know what happened to her suddenly but one thing was clear that she badly needs him. Both look in each others eyes and shared intense eye lock.Sanskar pulled her towards him and nuzzles his face in her neck and started kissing bitting then sucking her soft skin.Swara was feeling extreme pleasure of being loved by her husband.She was not moving and allowing Sanskar to do what ever he want. He gives trail of wet kisses from her throat to Visible cleavage and he bite their while Swara morn” sanskar plzz”.Swara’s start opening his shirt button with shivering hands.
Sanskar opened the knot of her top letting it to fall down.He started kissing her shoulder and made her lie on bed not leaving her skin for once also.It was raining outside but the heat in their heart was burning them.It didn’t took long time for them to lost in each other. The emptiness they were feeling till now was filled by their love.They complete each other. Swara totally forgot that she was hell scared some time back but now lost somewhere in the love which her husband is showering.They never thought that they will become one like this.Their union was witnessed by rain pouring out showering its blessing on them. Whole night they didn’t left each other though they were hell tired.In the morning,when light enters inside the room. Sanskar falled on Swara completedly exhausted.
Both were sweating profusely indicating their long and passionate love making. Sanskar lie on his side and engulf swara who had already slept due to tiredness. He kisses her forehead and soon drifted to deep sleep.
(Sooo sorry agar romance Jada ho gaya ho.)
Afternoon:
Swara’s sleep got disturbed due to the bright light entering their room.She opened her eyes and saw around and realized that she is in hotel room.Then her sight caught Sanskar lying almost on her chest.The flashes of last night starts coming in front of her eyes.All the things that happened in cottage, about kavita, Sanskar in the pool of blood, then their union.She looked at sanskar and smiles as she remembered last night.But then eyes got watery when she reminiscences sanskar going away from her.She thought to see that cottage again.So she moved away slightly not disturbing his sleep and then wore her nighty and went to balcony.As it was day now she is clearly able to see the cottage She start shivering seeing it.
Sanskar who didn’t find her beside him got up and saw her standing in balcony.when he moved little closer he got shocked seeing her shivering and teary eyes.She is staring at the cottage and sanskar followed her gaze and got confused that why she seeing there.He placed his hand on her shoulder breaking her trance.As soon as swara saw him she hugged him tightly and buried her face in his chest. Sanskar relax her and took her inside and give her water.Little later Swara felt better.Sanskar held her hand and said “swara plzz tell me what happened” swara looked at him and thought to tell her and asked” do u remember kavita?”sanskar shook his head in no.
“She was in our batch in college” said swara.Then it strike sanskar’s mind and he said”she died last year in accident na”.swara nodded.”then what about her?”asked sanskar.”she told me that she loves u and want u”replying swara started crying. Sanskar side hugged her and said”shhh when she said”said Sanskar”yesterday night” swara told sniffing. Sanskar got confused as how such dead person say something. So he asked”but she is dead.how can she say”swara looked at her”she told me in my dream”sanskar give her unbelievable look”like seriously you are crying this much since night just bcoz of dream”.swara said” but I m scared u know what happened….. ”
Then she narrated him whole dream.He understand that its fear in her mind that’s why she is behaving like this.
Sanskar”just forget it, its just dream don’t worry now get fresh up and then we will have lunch”he made her understand and she nodded and left to washroom.
After two days:
It has been two days since Swara saw that horrible dream.Swasan were enjoying roaming here and there. But still the fear of that dream was still there in her.Sanskar noticed Swara’s changed behavior.She speaks less and always lost in her thoughts.Even he saw her many times staring that cottage. He always try to cheer her but the fear was not ready to leave her.
Sanskar now got really worried for her health.He even told that they will go back to Kolkata but she is not ready to spoil their holidays also.So Sanskar called their family doctor and explained Swara’s condition.He told that its dangerous for her bcoz now she is just thinking about it but slowly slowly she will start hallucinating it and at the end lead to depression.Sanskar got scared even imaginating Swara like this. So he asked doctor to suggest the cure and he told that take swara to that same cottage at night and show her that what she saw in dream was not true.
Sanskar agreed to it but it was not that easy to take her there.
Night:
Sanskar came from washroom and saw swara sitting on bed lost in thoughts.He had decided that today he will take her to that cottage as he had already visited there.He came and sit in front of her and said” Swara get up we have to go somewhere”swara looked at him and asked”where?”.”I will tell first get up”said sanskar standing up.”no first tell than only I will come” told swara being stubborn. Sanskar signed and picked her in arms.Swara got astonished seeing his act”sanskar leave me what are u doing”.Sanskar said”when u r not ready to listen then I have to do this only”.swara give him look and said”okay I m coming put me down”.Sanskar put her down and both went down.
Swasan came out of hotel and swara got shocked seeing sanskar going towards forest.”where u r going there” swara said being scared.”to that cottage only”Sanskar told coming closer.Swara got numb.”swara”sanskar jerk her.”noo plzz we will not go there” swara pleaded to him”but why there is nothing swara i Will prove u today” Sanskar said determinedly.”noo she will take u plzz”cryingly Swara requested him.sanskar held her hand and said”just trust me I m there with u.
Don’t u have faith in your love?” Swara said instantly”I have”.Sanskar said” then no can separate us”Sanskar started moving towards jungle. Swara has held his arm tightly. They enter inside the Forest. Swara start remembering how she came alone in her dream was so scared. She don’t want to see all that again so when she feel afraid she close her eyes.Sanskar was asking her again and again that she is fine or not.Swara just hummed as no word was ready to come out from her mouth.Finally they saw the cottage. Sanskar felt that Swara stopped so he look at her and said “swara come”she shook her head in no and said”I don’t want to come plz” sanskar said “now don’t back off u have come till here” swara slightly nodded.
Then they were standing in front of cottage and Sanskar knocked the closed room.Swara’s heart is beating at the speed of light but still she knows Sanskar is there.A lady in her mid thirties opened the door and said”yes?”
Sanskar said”I came here and told u that my wife want to see this place”It reminded her when he came earlier also here.”yea sure come inside”she said moving aside from door.Sanskar took swara inside and she signed in relief seeing inside atmosphere. There was a man of about forty and a child of about 10 years.They ask them to sit.”actually my wife swara want to see house like this we never saw all this in big cities” sanskar said giving reason for their arrival.”ohhh its good to see your interest in our this small hut”the man said.swara is just looking around and trying to erase what image of this cottage is formed in her mind and form new one.The lady came with tea and give to swasan.Swara is now far better bcoz the place is normal only.”why are u living here alone”asked swara. Sanskar smile at her that finally she spoke something.” My husband is woodcutter so it was different for him to come here after covering long distance from our old house so we started living here”lady explained”ohhh”
swara reacted.After talking for sometimes they came out.”now u believe there is nothing like that”swara nodded.Then swara saw at the shed in front and saw cattles are standing there.Now she has believed that it was just her dream and will never come true.Soon both left from there to hotel.
Room no.405
Swasan are sitting on bed with swara’s head on sanskar’s shoulder.”Thank you”swara said”why?”sanskar asked. “For taking out fear from my mind”she replied.” I can do anything for my shona” Sanskar said.Swara just smiles. “I m only Swara ka Sanskar! Mind it!” Sanskar told her giving warning while Swara chuckles and said”yes no can snatch u from me.I love u”she genuinely confessed”love u too”he answered and kissed her forehead. “hmm don’t u think our honeymoon is more horrible than romantic” Sanskar complained.” Then who has stopped u from making it romantic” swara whispers huskily. A shiver passed through Sanskar’s body listening her tone.”be ready than” Sanskar said and took her beneath and again lost in each other.
We often see dreams some we remember for long time but some we don’t even remain in our mind when we got up in the morning. Dreams we see at night are Just about those things which u had seen or read or thought during day.Dreams can have worst effect on person if one can’t come out of bad dreams. So just remember good dreams and forget bad one’s bcoz both won’t come true.Its that good dream will give little happiness while bad will depress u when u think about them.
(Bas itni philosophy bahut hai)
MORAL OF THE STORY:
Whether chudail come, bhootni come or khoi era geara insaan(samj gaye kaun…….# samjdaar swasanians) Sanskar belong only and only to his swara bakiyo ke liye special
BABA JI KA THULLU….
The end
Honestly saying I really felt bored while writing this part .Hope so it won’t be that boring while reading.
Now your turn leave your comments plzzzz.
And yes next week I will give another os pakka only one part no climax hehe but if I get good response on this one.Even I had thought title also
“BREAK UP PATCH UP” it will be teenage story.wait for it.
Silent readers leave your comments otherwise no break up no patch up….. I m not threatening justttt requesting hehe.
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76 Comments
Its really good
Moral is just awesome
Thank you so much dear
marsuu!!!!
first of all a big sorry yaar just saw climax sorry dear
thank God it was only a dream hufff you scared me to hell .
it was amazing dear
we all are samajhdar swasanian hihi koi shak??
love u
I won’t say come soon I know u will hihihi
love u so much dear
Phale tho thank you sumu aur apni sorry apne paas rak mujhe nahi chahiye.yup esme mujhe khoi shak nahi bcoz swasanians are Veryyyyyy samajdaar
Aurrr lovvvvee yooou reh gaya tha hhehe and I will come sooonnn
Aww thank u marsuu
Huh!! Only love u no thank u
awesome
Thank you dear
Amazing…..loved it