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In this ff swara is mentally challenged girl..even though she is 24 years old her mind us only of 5 year child.where as sanskar is business tycoon and also very kind hearted…he hated double faced people
So here the story moves:
A big mansion is found
The sun rays disturbs a young man of 28 eventually he gets up…
He removes the curtain and pulls it other side…
Just then a elder man comes to him
Elder man:sanskar beta
The man is mr sanskar maheswary…..
Sanskar:haa badepapa..
Durga prasad/dp:till when u will sit like this..come beta…see office works are even pending and what about our dream project…
Sanskar:I knw badepapa…bt I cant move on my life…how can I, when my heart is not there with me…what can I do badepapa..
Saying sanskar breaks down in crying
Somehow he composed himself….
Sanskar:no badepapa..I cant be weak..I have promised my shona that I will be always strong..
After somedays
Sanskar was coming frm airport…and drives hits a young girl and she falls on the road
Sanskar gets down the car and helps the girl to get up…
Sanskar was shocked to find the girl…
Suddenly some old ladies comes and hold the girl and left in their van
Sanskar notes down the name and address of the van…
Same day at evening
Sanskar called someone and gets some information
Sanskar:thanks a lot…im cominh there tomorrow itself…
Just then dp comes there
Dp:what happened sanskar…
Sanskar:badepapa..I have to go to kolkata for some business purposes
Dp:achcha…u can leave..
Sanskar reaches kolkata and looks at the board
“ANGEL MARY ORPHANAGE”
The lady staff welcomed him…
Just then someone hits him with a ball…
The girl turned out to be the same girl he met in accident
He was lost in her beautiful eyes…
The girl takes her ball and goes to ground with happily running with a cute smile…
Sanskar:this ladki
Matren:she is ragini
Sanskar:ragini (with a confused face)
Matren:haa sir, we got her 6 months before on a navratri pooja..we found her the river and later found out that she is havinh just the intelligence of 5 yeat child…we only named her as ragini…
Sanskar:no one came inquiring about her
Matren:no sir…probably u r the only one who asked about her…
Sanskar keeps stairing at ragini….
Next morning:
Sanskar gets up hearing a crying sound
He looks through the window and finds ragini crying
He comes out and screams swaraaaa
Ragini looks at sanskar
Sanskar soom realises what he called
Sanskar:r u kk swar..I mean ragini
Ragini nodes but still cries
Sanskar:what happened…why are u crying
Ragini:they tooks away my baloons…now how can I play…I want baloons….
Sanskar:im hear naa..ur sanskar is hear naa
Ragini:ur name
Sanskar:sanskar..sanskar maheswary
Hearing that name she gets some flashes…she holds her head..
Sanskar:ragini
Ragini:I want to peee
Sanskar silently cries and takes her to washroom…
She comes out and finds many baloons in sanskar hand
Ragini:hai…hooo…..
She opens her mouth in happiness and starts to jumb
Ragini:I got baloon..balloon…baloon…I will show it to everyone
Saying ragini leaves…..
Sanskar:why god…why are u doinh this with me…what have I done..plz return back my shona…my swaraa….
A pair of two eyes were continuesly stairing at him with teary eyes…
Soon ragsan become to see each other..when ever ragini sees sanskar, she used to laugh a lot bt still she was not able to say his name…
Ragini:ur name
Sanskar:look mere chotti….sa..sanskaaarrr..now say it
Ragini:ur name is so big….u change ur name…
(She says innocently looking at his eyes)
Sanskar:kk fine….u only choose a name…
Ragini thinks for sometime
Ragini:haa I got
Sanskar was excitedlu sitting to hear his name
Ragini:I will call u khush
Sanskar:khush??
Ragini:all day..u make me happy naa…that way
Sanskar:today..u say what all things u want
Ragini:haa I want to eat..that…that one…which have many holes in biscuit
Sanakar:50 50 buscuit
He smilea
Ragini; ur smiles is very good naa….haa…I knw I will name u musakn…im genius
She started to dance by clapping her hands….
Ragini:u knw muskan…I have a big teddy bear in my room and u knw I got many choclate
Sanskar:who
Ragini:many people cime hear naa..they
Sanskar:like me
Ragini; ha haa…
She talks to talk and talks…..
Sanskar was feeling very bad to see her like this….
Some time ragini was crying like a small child else she will start fighting..some time very silent…..
Every time Sanskar was there with ragini……
At night..
Sanskar was returning back home when he finds a girl killing 2 people…
He goes near her and
Sanskar:what are u doing
The girl turns back
Sanskar:swaraa….
The girl turns out to be ragini…
Ragini:(with teary eyes) who swara…..the swara that u knw have died a long back..
Sanskar:swara…plz….u knw I have searched fir u a lot…bt couldnt find u….where were u swara…how u became ragini…why are u doing this…whats this swaraa…I need an answer…
Ragini/swara breaks down and cries vigorously…..
Flashback
Swara/ragini was visiting temple with her orphanage people…by seeing the temle and all swara/ragini gets some flashes….
She holds her head and feels dizzy….
Just then pandit jii comes there….
Swara/ragini:hey bagwan…whats happening with me…why I feel connected to this temple…who am I….why are u doing this with me god…..plz help me…does I have a family…
Pandit:beta…u have a family…
Swara looks at him
Pandit:ur name is swara…..u r married beta….ur husband is sanakar maheswary..I have did ur marriage…and last month I have heard that u and Sanskar have a accident and u were fall in the river….
Matren:we got her frm river..we treated her bt she has already losted her memmory….so we gave her ragini…
Swara starts to sweat and recalls all her moments with sanskar…she decided to call him bt hangs it…
Swara:matren…let I be ragini for the whole world…who is just having the brain of 5 years…I need to do this…else my and sanskar life will be in danger…
Flashback ends..
Sanskar have tears in eyes
Sanskar:why swara…
Swara:these two have raped my ragini and even tried to kill me…do u remember the accident…it was a planned one…to kill me to destroy me …
Sanskar:what are u saying swara
Swara:this is truth sanskar….my ragini got raped infrnt of me…the day when I was going to file the case they did this accident….
Sanskar:at least u can come to me naa
Swara:how can I sanskar…u knw how much I feel when I see u ryt infrnt of me bt I was not able to hug u..it was difficult fir me to do this drama…..
Sanskar hugs her…
Swara:now I have fulfilled my revenge…
Sanskar:will u again become mine swara…
Both hugs….
The story ends…..
9 Comments
Very nice story. But the last part is little confusing .
Nice
Nyc
U nicely managed wit swaragini nice OS…
Nice….
awesome….
nice
It was gud but l m confuse. So Swara was only having the name Ragini she Wass actually swara.
Fabulous