Hi friends this is Vaishanavi. Janu is little busy with exams after 1 month she will start updating fiction.
I’m here with a new story of and . I think most remember them in hope so.
Swara: 23yr girl who obeys her parents without arguing with them. She calls them amma and nana. She belongs to iyengar family. She is brought up with strict nature. For her books are the best friends. She has friends but they never treat her as friend instead they make use of her most of times. She smiles and accepts things because she loves her friends. She is very innocent who believe people without thinking much about them.
Sanskar: 25 yr guy who is doing his PhD. He has a sister. She is only girl whom he knows as he studied in boys school college and spent most of his life in hostel. He loves to stay with his parents but education made him stay away from family. Holidays are best days of his life because he spends his time with parents. He wants to open a company with his friends. His mom want him to get married and settle in life.
Story starts….
A girl is praying for results. She is really scared of results. She says please save me God I know I didn’t do my exams well but please God please save me. Small boy see her and laugh say akka come let’s go home. says please manu wait please.. He hits head with flower basket and say this akka..please God save me from her.. comes to him and say come let’s go now. Both leave in car.
At home….
Amma is preparing lunch.. murmuring this girl is 23yr old I don’t know when she’ll learn to cook..when I was her age was already in my womb..but this girl what shall I say..if I talk about marriage she starts giving excuses. She hears car horn and say came back..let her have lunch then I’ll speak with her.
and manu comes inside.. amma call her for lunch.. manu (swara’s adopted brother. started working after 10th. Asked her parents to adopt a baby. Her parents did according to her wish because they love her) Amma tells them to sit and have food. Manu says amma kept praying for results she didn’t do what you told her to do.. Amma see and say I have done it manu don’t worry she’ll be married before she join job. Swara leave from there saying I want more 3 yrs please amma..I want to complete MCA and do job for 1.5 yrs please…I want secure manu’s future first amma. While amma tell her manu is her son she’ll take care of him ask her to worry about marriage then manu. says please amma.. while climbing steps. Amma smiles seeing manu and say manu your akka’s future in laws are coming on… Manu says Sunday morning at 11.. Amma hugs manu and smiles…
Swara’s room…
She is sitting with teddybear in her lap and say amma I don’t want to get married and go away from you nana and manu.. She see’s her phone says friends..no1 are you’re friends everyone want you only when they have work. She cries and sleeps off…
Swara wakes up with manu’s scream.. she asks what happened now? He shows homework books and say I didn’t do. She smile and say my cutie didn’t do homework. He says swara akka come let’s do homework. She hugs him and say ok baby.. both sites doing homework. She see him and think you’re my life really..after you came into my life I started leaving..you thought me friendship brother sister relationship..I’m really lucky to have you manu. He see her lost and say princess you’re prince charming is handsome na… she asks him to repeat.. he screams loudly my sister is dreaming about her prince charming.. she starts chasing him.. he laughs and runs to amma… she says manu you’re becoming naughty day by day.. Amma holds manu and ask swara to stop. Manu says amma see she’ll be always dreaming about prince charming.. Swara try to hold manu … he laughs and say you can’t hold me you can’t run like before…because you became fat swara akka… he shows his teeth… Amma starts laughing and say first he said truth.. Swara says you both ??
Manu says let you get your prince charming fast meri bacchi.. Amma and Swara are shocked but both start laughing. Swara says amma from now onwards manu won’t watch serials with you see him how he is acting.. Manu says swara akka you don’t know about anything learn from ragini of Swaragini to cook and gopi of SNS how to obey MIL it will help you.. Amma close his mouth and say swara prepare coffee I’ll see this monster.. Swara leaves from there.. Manu and Amma give hifi to each other.. Amma hugs him and say mera baccha.. Swara comes with coffee cups and boost. Manu smiles says swara akka Maggi time.. Swara says ok but your homework. He smiles and says 2 more days holidays I’ll complete. She says okay.. Amma say them Maggi but with that you both will drink horse water 3 cups at least ok.. Swara says ok amma.. manu nodes no..swara signs him and winks. He nods yes then. Day ends like this….
Next day…
Amma is talking with someone in phone.. she asks them to come early. She smiles and thinks about a guy…
A guy is shown…no no his legs are shown.. a girl comes there and says Sanky get up..it’s already 8am.. He says chinnu wait for a while..I want to sleep. She pulls bedsheet and says my big brother…dad will be waiting come na.. he gets up and say you’re really dad’s chammchi only chinnu.. She laughs and say come down after taking bath.. he heads for taking bath..
Dinning room..
Sanky’s dad is siting with paper.. chinnu comes there and say goodmorning dad.. He smiles and say good morning chinnu.. she says I’ll bring breakfast and go inside kitchen.. she see her mom cooking and say mom I’ll cook you go and sit with dad..bro is coming down. Mom smiles and goes outside. Dad and mom see Sanky coming down. He comes to them and wish them good morning.. they wish him back. Sanky say on Monday I’ll go for bank for applying for loan dad.. Mom tell him keep yourself free on tomorrow we should meet someone. Chinu come with breakfast. All start having..Sanky ask chinnu what mom talking about? She replies we are going to see your wife.. he gets shocked and drops his spoon.. She start laughing.. mom see them. Both compose themselves and continue eating.. Dad leave for office after that. Sanky and chinnu ask whether they can go to movie. Mom give them permission both leave for mall. Sanky asks chinnu please help me.. she laughs and say I can’t this time…
he says please I’ll get you my creditcard.. she start laughing say bro first see her if you don’t like her then I’ll help you.. he nods ok. She asks him what qualities you want in your wife? He says she should be innocent obey elders independent and education should be same as me or similar type at least because she should be earning well but never give her salary to me. Chinnu asks why? He replies she should give her salary to her parents or do whatever she wants with it. Chinu say ok brother.. Mom who was listening this feel proud about Sanky(chinnu had called mom when she asked Sanky about his wife) Chinnu ask him what about physical appearance? He replies she can be fat or thin I don’t have problem with it because physical appearance change with time not character.. She smiles… Both reach mall. Watch movie and enjoy their time..
At swara’s home..
She is watching cartoon..Amma see her say I’ll get lollypop also wait.. Manu asks amma shall I go and bring it..Amma says yea go.. He runs to bring chocolate. Swara smiles and says amma.. Amma tell her come help me with preparing food. Swara nods ok.. Amma teach her how to prepare sambar. Swara thinks mixing chemicals is easy compared these.. Amma say her from today you only prepare food at night.. Swara says ok.. Manu comes there and says amma.. She asks what? He says swara akka..is cooking…today rain will come na… Swara says manu.. Amma say you both stop now.. Swara and manu go to hall. Amma taste sambar and say it’s good only. She goes to hall and say tomorrow my friend’s family is coming in front of them both of you don’t fight. Manu tomorrow you’ll meet my friend son you should be friendly with him don’t fight do whatever he asks you to do. Manu nods ok.. Amma say swara tomorrow get ready in traditional wear don’t wear these jeans or shorts ok. Swara says ok amma. Amma says swara morning help me with preparing lunch tomorrow ok. Manu says I’ll also help you Amma. She nods ok goes to give orders to servants to clean whole house. Swara says manu amma will be Hitler from now till. He says till they come. ..we should behave like good children. Swara says we are really… Manu says bad.. both start laughing.. day finishes with amma’s tension swara and manu’s talks and homework.
Next day…
Swara is busy with cooking manu is cutting fruits for salad. Amma say them be fast. Manu says swara akka go get ready you completed na. Amma asks her to go. Manu smiles.. Amma say him Sanky is coming.. He nods ok.. Swara is getting ready..she thinks amma I know some guy is coming to see me ill ready to do anything whatever you wish to but I’ll say him whatever is real in my life. She gets ready in red half saree with simple jewellery… Manu comes there and say princess you’re looking beautiful..nana will be here by 10 am itseems. Swara asks really nana is coming today? Manu nods yes.. She hugs him and says thank you love you manu.. he says love you akka..
Otherside…
Chinu is trying to wake up Sanky. He says idiot sister please let me sleep. She says idiot bro get up else mom will come here.. He says at least one day you stop saying about mom for waking up me. She says bro how many days I’ll come to wake up you…you’re wife will come she will wake you up. He stare at her and say hate you idiot sister. She smiles says she is lucky to get you as her hubby.
After taking bath Sanky get ready and come down. Chinu give him boost and say bro we’ll have lunch at her house..she might have cooked special things for you. He says really chinnu you’re.. mom and dad come there.. Dad asks shall we leave now? Sanky and chinu go out with mom. Dad thinks Sanky why don’t you speak what’s in your mind. Sanky says I’ll drive. Mom tells ok and give him address. Chinu and mom sits in back seat. Dad tell Sanky you should say whatever in your mind. Sanky says mom and her wishes are my first priority dad. After 1hr they reach swara’s home.
Manu see car and says nana amma they came. Nana go to welcome them. Dad and mom come inside. Amma talk with them. Manu comes to Sanky and chinnu. He starts talking with them. Sanky and chinnu talk with manu..they enjoy talking. Chinnu asks manu where is your akka? Manu says she went to temple she’ll be coming. Sanky gets call. He excuses and goes outside. Swara coming with her childhood friend ragini. They both are talking with eachother. Ragini see a guy near pillar..show swara. Swara see him..says mostly they came. Ragini and Swara rush inside home..Sanky just see swara’s hair..hear her bangles sound. Swara greets everyone. Mom and dad bless her. Chinnu smiles seeing her.. ragini and Swara go inside. Manu goes to call sanky. Dad tell swara’s parents they are fine with relationship but Sanky and Swara should decide whether they want to be together or not..we will not force them. Amma and Nana are okay with it. Ragini and chinnu keep talking. Sanky comes inside. He see’s ragini think she is not that girl she was wearing bangles.. Amma asks them to have lunch.. everyone go for having lunch. Manu says swara akka.. Sanky try to see.. chinnu smiles..say bro she is soo pretty..beautiful..but you have to wait to see her. Ragini and chinnu goes inside kitchen. Others sit.. Manu and Sanky sit together. Amma calls swara… she comes their followed by ragini and chinnu .
Then dad asks them to have lunch with them.. Chinnu makes swara sit opposite to Sanky.. Manu asks Swara to give him fruit salad. Sanky see her.. chinnu smiles seeing him..asks what through her eyes.. he nods nothing..thinks she didn’t react anything means what?…chinnu msg him “ swara’s parents didn’t tell about marriage” he see msg. He nods ok. Chinnu smiles. Mom see them..think these two never change texting talking through signs.. all complete their lunch. Amma asks servants to clean everything..and Swara to bring ice cream. Swara goes to bring. Manu pulls Sanky and go to garden. Chinu and ragini follow them.. Swara brings ice cream and serves everyone. Amma asks her to take it for manu and friends. Swara nods ok..
Chinnu see swara coming and sign ragini.. Swara comes and give them ice cream.. Manu after having ice cream runs inside saying I’ll bring more one.. ragini runs behind him and chinnu also say I want 1 more and go inside.. Swara and Sanky left alone..
Sanky: hi I’m sanskar all call me Sanky
Swara: hi I’m Swara close one’s call me shona.
Sanky: I think you don’t know about our meeting.
Swara: I know but it’s my first time I really don’t know how to react..
Sanky: same here..
Swara: smiles.. says I want to show you something… she shows her daily pic say this is real me..I don’t like makeup or heavy jewellery..I don’t have many friends..I just want to study and get a job.. and…
Sanky: smiles and says hold on madam..you look cute in that pic..you can do job or study I don’t have problem. But one thing..you shouldnot give your salary to me..you should give to your parents or you can keep it for yourself..
Swara: I want to deposit half of my salary in manu’s account.
Sanky: you don’t need to say anything about it.
Swara:but I want to say something..
Sanky: you can..
Swara: I want to complete MCA after that only I can do anything..
Sanky: ok but we have to talk with our parents..
Swara: ok then..
Sanky: then friends?
Swara: ok friends..
Sanky: I want to open company..I want to some time before getting into relationship..
Swara: ok…but I forgot to ask you whether you like me.
Sanky: that I do..
Both look at each other and say we spoke so much without talking about. Swara smiles.. Manu comes there and say come inside else you both will become dark like black chocolate.. swara hits him.. Manu says amma asked me to be like good child till Sanky’s family go home.. Swara holds manu and say be silent.. Sanky smile and say you’re really naughty boy… Manu says not only me Swara akka is also naughty she is asked to be silent. Sanky look at swara.. she looks at manu..Sanky smiles and say manu come let’s go inside. Manu runs inside. Sanky says you be like yourself..don’t need to be silent…I want my friend to be herself.. Swara smiles and nods ok.. they both go inside.
Sanky’s family left after sometime. Amma asked swara about her decision. Swara smiled and said yes. Nana hugged her and told I’m happy for my daughter..my princess got her prince charming.. Manu and ragini congratulated swara. Amma blessed her and told her now I’ll also pray for your results. Swara smiled. Manu says akka race gurram movie after 15 min..go get fresh up.. swara and ragini go to room. Ragini hug her and say you are really lucky he is good and you’ll get two friends in that house.. swara asks what? Ragini says chinnu and Sanky two friends na.. Swara smiles. Ragini say her I’ll leave now tomorrow I’ll come at 5pm ok. Swara nods ok..ragini leave where as swara goes down after changing. Manu and Swara sit watching movie. Nana tell amma marriage will happen after 2 yrs I have spoken about that but they are thinking of engagement. Amma say him swara will be okay with it don’t worry..but I’m worried about her friends college girls..you know na how sweet they act but show their true colors when results are announced..Tomorrow is her results..I’m really worried because of them…. Nana ask her not to worry..only ragini will come here..not others..I’ll ask swara not to receive anyone’s call tomorrow. Amma nods ok. Nana tell swara studies and achieve it but those girls were behind relationship things and won’t study then end blame swara for getting marks..Swara will be crying more then being happy na…
Amma say him I’m thinking to ask Sanky help in this matter..because he should know everything about swara na. Nana nods ok.. they both join swara and manu.. all enjoy movie.
At Sanky’s home.
Sanky say his parents he is okay with marriage but he wants to wait for 2 yrs atleast. Dad tell okay for that. Mom tell him after 5th sem swara and you’ll be enaged ok. Sanky says ok mom I’ll try completing my dream before that. Chinnu brings coffee. All have it. Chinnu and Sanky go their room.
C: bro swara is good na.
A: yea she is really innocent..
C: you know what manu is swara’s adopted brother itseems. Ragini said me.
A: but they both don’t look like that na.
C: swara love him more than anyone..he is her life till now..
A: means
C: hehe… after marriage you’ll be her life na..
A: I wish so…
C: what?
A: nothing…you go and sleep early.
Chinnu say good night and go to room. Sanky thinks of swara..says she is really innocent her smile her eyes really she is something different… he sleeps on bed..closes eyes remember swara’s face..sit and say Sanky you are going mad in first day of this relationship only…
He smiles and see his phone. Think of swara..see her whatsapp profile pic and say she is pretty without makeup only..she is something different from girls I have seen. See her online…think of texting her…he sends hi… she replies hi… he asks had dinner? She says no u? He says had..why what happened sounding low? She says tomorrow evening results…I’m scared.. he says don’t worry you’ll get good marks. She says I want my friends also get good marks. He smiles replies don’t worry they’ll get..good night sleep now. She replies good night sweet dreams. He thinks from today I’ll get sweet dreams only that is about you… he sleeps..he remember swara..her talks..her eyes.. he says Sanky sleep for today…enough of her thoughts…. He sleeps…
Swara wakes up..see Sanky’s msgs and smile..says good morning..wish this day goes well. She sends good morning msg to Sanky. Manu comes there..he smiles says good night akka..she says good morning..not night … He says you don’t know anything…person who falls in love for them night turns morning and vice versa…. Swara opens her mouth…be shocked… Manu starts laughing.. she gets up from bed start chasing manu…he runs down..keep laughing.. Swara says idiot you’re really…Manu says akka I said truth only ask amma if you want.. Amma and Nana see them…say started morning morning only… Amma holds manu…Swara says today I won’t leave you… Amma asks what happened? Manu says akka say na what happened..and winks.. Swara says amma that I he… Manu starts laughing…Swara says manuuu… Amma leave him…he starts running swara goes behind him… Manu stops near main gate..Swara says finally you stopped… manu says wait I’ll give you something..he comes near her and kiss her cheeks…
Swara says I don’t want.. he says then return it.. Swara says ok..he says yesterday Sanky gave me…you return to him only I can’t give him na? Swara says really from today you won’t watch any serials… He runs to amma say swara wants chocolate it seems. Swara says no amma..he is irritating me.. Amma see manu he says she wants give something back i don’t want it amma see she started scolding me.. Nana asks what’s this swara? She replies nothing…goes to room see flowers and teddy bear.. she goes near it..a voice says all the best for your results ash.. she turns and see’s nikil standing their… she says bhai you here.. he smiles and says I came to know that my princess got her prince charming so came to see him..
she smiles.. he asks how he looks? Handsome na? Manu says prince handsome cute cool.. but he won’t talk much… Nikil start laughing says really manu… Swara says nikil see na.. Manu hugs nikil. Swara says really my two brothers are … Nikil says we watch serials swara..go get ready we have to go meet Sanky then temple madam it’s your result today.. Swara goes inside.. Manu says Sanky is really good he said she can study and do job also..amma was telling.. Nikil says you shouldn’t hear to elders.. Manu says sorry I won’t do it from today. Nikil smiles..
Swara comes down after bath..All have their breakfast. Manu says ragini.. Swara see towards door.. ragini come inside and say swara results are out… Amma asks did you check? Ragini nods no. Nikil says come let’s see.. swara says first ragini’s then mine… nikil see ragini’s and say she got 85% Swara hugs ragini and say congrats… Nikil checks swara’s results and say 87.5%… Ragini hugs swara and says congrats
.. swara and ragini take blessings from parents and nikil hugs them and say both are toppers. Swara says see class results please..
Nikil says you go bring sweets I’ll check. Swara goes. Ragini and nikil see class results. Ragini say most are passed…that gang also passed this time. Swara comes there and asks about results. Nikil says all passed now let’s go to temple.. Nana tell them to meet Sanky while coming back and reach home by 6 at least. Nikil says uncle don’t worry we will come early. Then they leave.
Manu says swara akka give your phone. She gives it. He msgs Sanky about results and asks to meet them near cafe. Sanky replies him ok boss. Swara asks whom you texted now? Nikil says I had asked him to text Sanky that we want to meet him. Swara says ok. Ragini and manu keep talking but slowly. Swara see them. Manu says akka I need rasgulla. Nikil start laughing.. ragini says be silent. They reach temple. Swara goes inside leaving manu.. he runs inside and says sorry akka. Swara doesn’t reply. Ragini and nikil come there. They all pray. Swara thanks for results. Manu loudly says swara akka should forgive me..I like teasing her..she looks cute in red nose when she gets angry.please God help me to convince her.. Nikil and ragini laugh hearing him.. Swara smiles.. Manu see swara and say thank God she smiled…now God bless Sanky to have strength to be with Swara akka.. Nikil lifts manu and runs from there. Swara run behind them…says really this manu…
Precap:Sanskar and nikil meet.
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