EPISODE_1
hi ….every one this is #siddhita…mein pehli baar swasan par ek ff likna chahti hu i hope u guys like it………..
after ragini”s truth is revealed…….. and woh swara se maafi maangti hai…uske baad……..
In gadodia house….
shekhar: Ragini hum ne tum par kitna vishwas kiya…..tum par koi aanch nahi aane dia….yaha tak ki tumhare ;iye meine apni aur misti ke riste ko bhi dhaav par laga diya…aur tumne kya kiya…sirf dhoka..diya.hum sab ko ..apni maa baaba ko alag kar diya..apni behen ko marne tak bhi khoshish ki…tu itni buri kaise ho gayi…
ragini: papa plz aap hume samaj ne ki khoshish kijiye…hum ne yeh sab sirf laksh ke liye kiye…hum kisi ko bhi chot nahi pahunchana nahi chahte te sirf apne pyaar ko paane chahte te…….
dadi: …bas chori….beshrmi ki bhi had hoti hai…humne tume pehle hi keh diya na agar tum koi galat kaam kar rahi hogi toh sab se pehle hum tujse saare rishte tod denge…
ragini..par dadi ma hamara vishvaas ki jiye..humne jaan much ke kuch nahi kiye the..
swara and shomi looks at ragini sadly…and ragini is crying badly…
shekher: bas ragini bahoot ho gaya..tumhara drama..aaj se tumhaara hum se koi rishta nahi hai …tum is ghar mein sirf ek ajnabhi ho…
ragini: nahi papa..plz hamari baat suniye…maa aap toh hume samjti haina papa ko boliye na…
shomi: shekhar ek baar uski baat toh suno..woh apni galti ki maafi maang rahi hai na…usse maaf kardo…
swara: haa papa ..ragini ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya..plz usse maaf kar di jiye..
shekher:
nahi app log iski taraf daari mat karo…isne galti nahi gunah ki hai…mere nazar mein iski koi maafi nahi…aaj se yeh meri beti nahi…
……….hearing this ragini runs to her room crying badly……….
shomi tries to say smthing but shekher stops..her and goes inside…
swara goes to ragini…..
swara: ragini tum plz mat raooo…sab teekh ho jayega….
ragini: kuch bhi teekh nahi hoga swara…sab hume galat samajte hai..sab hamari hi galti hai….
swara: nahi ragini..ab tumne apni galti ka ehsaas hai..dheere dheere sab tumhe maaf kar denge..
ragini: nahi swara koi hume maaf nahi karenge..sab humse nafrat karte hai….hamara pyaar humse nafrat karta hinn…..humne apne jeene ki wajah ko kho diya….laksh hum se kabhi pyaar nahi karenge….kabhi nahi apnaayenge……
swara.: nahi ragini…tum chinta mat karo …mein aur sanskaar laksh se baat karege….sab teekh ho jaayega….
ragini is very disturbed and woh sanskaar ke naam sunte hi …fb sochti haii…..kaise sanskaar ne usse bhadkaya..kaise woh uske partnerbane the……aur kaiselaksh usse dur ho gaye..kaise woh sabke samne..buri bani hai.. sab…
ragini:…plz swara tum hamare samne sanskaar ka naam mat lo….yeh sab jho kuch bhi ho rahe hai na…sab sanskaar ki wajah se ho rahe hai….na woh hamare zindagi mein aata…na woh uske badle ke liye mera..istmaal karta..na mein itni buri…banti….
:yeh sab sun kar swara ko man mein bahut bura lagta…sanskaar ke khilaf wo yeh saari baatein nahi sunna chahti ti…
swara: nahi ragini sanskaar ab badal gaya hai…..use apne kiye par pachtawa hai……manti hu ki ussne hamare saath bahut bura kiya..par woh hazar baar maafi maang chukhe hai…aur jise apne kiye par pachtawa haota hai man se saaf hote hi…….tum bhi apne man se yeh saari baatein nikaal do…man shanth ho jayega…aur bahut raat ho gyi hai soo jao…
ragini: haa swara tum shayaad teek hi keh rahi hoo…humhe sanskaar ko in sabka zamidaar nahi manna chahiye…….
tum bhi jaake soo jao….
ragini lies on bed but unable to sleep tears are rolling from her eyes….
swara was also unable to sleep she comes outside,….to take some fresh air….
swara closes her eyes and sees sanskaar face infront of her….n she suddenly opens her eyes…
swara: to herself………..yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai…me hamesha sanskaar ke baare mein kyun soch rahi..hu..aur jab ragini ne uske baare me bura bola toh mujhe kyun itna bura laga…yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath…..mein itni confused kyun hu….
yeh sochte hue woh jaake soo jati hai…
i have trid smthng …if u lyk it i will continue….plz reply how is my first FF..
special thanks to laali☺☺☺-
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8 Comments
Nice start yaar siddhita but pls thoda thrill zaroor lana aur muje patha in no tym Yeh tum kar do gi !!!!
Hey but tumari story sach mein bohath hi achi hai yaar but pls hope will post d nxt epi soon !!
Pls cntinu !!!
Please write in english because I’m from Karnataka I don’t know hindi
It is really good,hats off to typing the hindi dialogues in English that too Ragini’s tone and all,perfect,but I think it will be easier for many to read if it is in English, and excellent wall paper,even I was thinking about adding a separate wall paper like this for mine but bad at editing ,please continue ur ff.
Nice but plz write in English
Beautiful….but plz write in English
nice and pleases write in english understand because i dont understand hindi
I guess I have already read dis. Sumwhere….not sure where……
It was superb and plz swasan scenes in the next ff