hi and hello to everyone who’s reading this!! i know swaragini was over long back but still i want to write the ff of that particular serial eventhough i really didnt like the storyline of the original series of swaragini ……and hey !! the ppl who know me .i hope u have already read my previous ff,”we will be united”(the dreamed ff of swaragini”)”..pls comment and support me …
ok lets start now!!
the scene starts from swara showing off the true colours of ragini before the whole family and everyone hates ragini except swara ,sharmista and sanskar who had a liitle sympathy on her becoz he was also a reason for ragini’s evil missions..now laksh is hates ragini to the core!!.. ragini’s dadi has slapped ragini for two times as her laddoo no no now she is no more her laddoo !!…
ragini is already half dead but with a pitty and difficult state she joined her hands and said
ragini(sobbing really hard); iam sorry !!! iam sorry she went near swara and bowed her hands and she was continuesly apologizing to her
anapurna; enough ragini!! do think that we will all believe ur crocodile tears again and again..are we fools to trust u again!! pls get out of this house!
ragini went out of the house and swara and sanskar tried their best to stop her but laksh stopped swara and sanskar from stopping ragini ..and sharmista was stopped by shekar
swara,sanskar and sharmista wer not able to do anything as the situation was that terrible !!
at the road
ragini was walking like a lifeless person with her eyes still sobbing and it was late in the night around 11;30 pm no one even cared of her going out the house in late night alone
at the maheshwari mansion
everyone went to their respected rooms ..swara was very anxious about ragini’s condition .so she sent sanskar out to search ragini ..swara also wanted to come with him but sanskar told that
sanskar; swara if u also come out with me and at the same time if someone come to our room ….we will be caught swara ..so u be here and tackle the situation if someone comes to our room !!
then he goes to search ragini
at the road
a car suddenly came to the side of ragini and there were four goons inside the car …they were having ragini’s pic in their hand
goon; i think she shud be the girl in the photo..
they open the car door slowly and from the car a hand is shown ..the hand slowly grabs ragini’s waist and her luggage and they closed her mouth using a piece of cloth …she tries to shout but before that they take a drug injection and they inject it in her hand in a harsh way …now she is in a dizzy state ..she was conscious but she was not steady ..she really tried her level best to take out her phone to escape..but they were not letting her to do anything ..and they injected another dose of drug in her neck ..she was in an alcoholic state..
the goons were going in a high speed …and on the other hand sanskar was searching ragini ..every where..but there was no clue about her ..all of a sudden sanskar saw a car with full speed ..and somehow he saw ragini ‘s hand ..lying in the window of the car which was going in a full speed ..he conformed it was ragini who’s inside the car ..becoz the bangles she had in her hands were known to him which she was wearing when she went out of the house…he tried to follow the car but it was too late ..and he didnt see the car’s number plate
sanskar(in confused tone); i think ragini must got into trouble !! ..oh no! i have to inform to the police about this ..before that i call shekar uncle..becoz sharmista aunty told that shekar uncle has no problem with ragini in their house becoz she is their daughter .i will call them !!
galodia’s house
sharmista was searching ragini everywhere in the house but she was not there at all
sharmista was shouting and was calling everyone
dadi; y r u shouting in the late night …what will the ppl in our colony will think??..
shekar;;what happened sharmista??
sharmista ; ragini is missing !!
shekar(in a angry and a bit emotional tone); where she is gonna go?? ..even though she is here in this house ..i will never consider her as my daughter!! understood!! ..she will be on her way ..who knows maybe she would be buying some poison to kill us..becoz her truth has come out know!!
dadi; he is right sharmista..the girl who went to the very end to kill her sister will also be like that to us also!!
sharmista; she is our daughter!! how can u say like that shekar??
shekar; SHE IS NOT…MY……..(SUDDENLY SHEKAR’S PHONE RINGS)
shekar; hello ?
sanskar; uncle..its me sanskar..
shekar; tell me beta …any problem ..y r u calling in this late night ?? any emergency?
sanskar; uncle ..did ragini came there..??
shekar; pls beta ..dont talk about her!!
sanskar; uncle..this is serious ..pls throw ur anger away and pls say whether ragini came there or not
shekar; no beta
sanskar(in a shocked state); uncle ..ragini is in trouble now..i think someone has kidnapped ..i tried to chase the car but it went with full speed and before i could catch the car ..the car suddenly disappeared
shekar; r u sure??..maybe it can be a own drama by ragini to create sympathy !!
sharmista; enough shekar..the problem is serious !!…
sharmista takes the phone from shekar
sharmista; sankar beta..u tell me what happened clearly
sans explains everything
sanskar; aunty ..iam gonna give a compliant to police station now..can u come now??
sharmista; yes beta..but do ur family know about this??
sans; no
sharmista.; then we will first inform them and we will go to the police station
sans; but aunty ..they will all refuse to this!!
sharmista; u dont worry about it ..we will tackle it !
sans informs to swara and the whole family about ragini ..and they rush to the police station but laksh stops them with a paper
laksh; swara and bhai ..y r u wasting ur precious time by falling into ragini’s new drama..!!
laksh; swara pls forgive me for what i have done
swara; its ok laksh ..i forgave u long back
laksh ; if u really forgave me ..then sign this divorce paper with sanskar ….this divorce paper was already made ready by u two ..am i correct ..then y r u both delaying ..sign it
everyone was shocked .
laksh ; bend down with his knees and said ” swara will u marry me”
swara; laksh…r u mad ?? ..how can u ask this to me ..after u have dumped me !! huh??
sanskar; laks have u gone out of senses ..we r going to the police station to file a compliant as ragini is missing ..and u r not even bothered a bit about her condition ..and still ragini is ur wife laks..but i feel very sorry for ragini..as how she loved a person who does’nt even care if she died or not ??
swara; laksh ..what u want now..me &sans shud divorce now ..fine!!..give me the papers
before they cud sign the papers suddenly the police came to the mansion
then sans said he only called them now as laksh was not letting him and swara to go the police station and he said he called the police to check whether ragini is been kidnapped by anyone in this house..as everyone is against ragini
durgaprasad; have u gone out of ur senses sanskar?? how will we kidnap ragini ??
sanskar; bade papa..this the enquiry of the police ..not mine…there are possibilities like that too..thats y i called them
then the divorce papers flew away and laksh got it and he kept it in the cupboard ..everyone was tensed ..the police was enquiring each and everyone ..but still there was no clue about ragini ‘s kidnap
the police assured them that they will find ragini as soon as possible
the scene shifts to the car where ragini has been kidnapped
the car reach a old building ..
the goons were holding ragini’s hands and they were draging her upstairs..she was stumbling with her mind as she is been injected by drugs ….she didnt know what to do
the scene ends with ragini’s dizzy state..and the harsh dragging of the goons
hope u guys will support me to continue this ff ..and dont worry guys ..this story is not like the story which happens in cinema..this is going to be different..so stay tuned to the upcoming episode!!
and pls do comment ..especially to all my silent readers!!(pls comment) ur comment is like a boost to my brain to write interesting ff’s
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Namu don’t ruin our track, SWASANIANS EVER MEMORIAL TRACK dear! I don’t care RagLak fans care about their track or not but I do, we SWASAN fans do.!
So we are saying you so nicely, so cutely, so sincerely that don’t dare to touch that track!
Write on whoever and whatsoever couple u want, but do spare my SwaSan n that REAL TRACK.
Ragini needs different bedmates,that’s cool. Do write on her and her men but don’t play with that track.!
M repeating again and again! Huffff!
Being a girl you know the marriage value well, I guess so!
So obviously after your marriage you aren’t going to accept ur sister’s husband as your husband..(Just a thought)! Isn’t it?
Hope you got my point.!
Sometimes writing reflects our moral,mentality etc and definitely that is against our maral.!
Hope you understand.!
This is going to last long! This fight isn’t going to end soon.! SwaSanians will not support you dear! You don’t even need to write on SwaSan just concentrate on ur fav(whatsoever they are) n leave that track.! Thnk u..
i agree with u kakali..we dont want n expect swasan ff….but dont make fun of our dream track…
a request from me as swasan fan…pls dont spoil our lovely dream track of swasan n dont make fun of marriage…write something fresh abt ur pairs..but not like this…
i respect each and everyone’s feelings …so i will change the storyline as your wish dears !!..(i meant the couples)…..and i knw some ppl have asked me to write ragsan and swalak but according to the majority of the ppl who have commented ..they said they want swasan and raglak ….and guys i was not hurt by u actually i got goosebumps becoz of the love u had in the couples swasan and raglak ..and iam flattened too!!…and i am a person who strongly respect logic so thanks for keeping me in the logic track ..and i am happy that u openly said ur comments !! so the next epi will be more interesting i hope becoz of the pairs u were all expecting are joining soon!! yepeee!! bye..with lots of love
i’m glad u got our p.o.v…thank u for understanding…n we swasanian’s are not against u…but ur story…bcs marriage is not fun according to our swasanians…we criticize if story line is bad..and glad that u took in positive way…i respect u for this…but u can write new stories on whomever u want as pair…i think most of swasan fans will not comment bcs of ur 1st mistake…may be it is not mistake according to u…but in our pov it is blunder…we dont expect also u to write ff or anything on swasan…satisfy ragini fans…showing new raglak love story…orelse start new stories on ur pairings…sorry if i hurt u…n thank u for caring our emotions…good luck…all the best…
Your story, your wish. I have no problems either way. But please do focus on Ragini, this story seems to be based on her and the twist does revolve around her, right?
oh ..thats ok seebu-s and thank u for ur wishes…and for me my readers are more important and majority of u said that u want swasan and raglak..so i have finished writting my 2 chap..now ..so i hope,,it will be published at 2pm or 3pm..so iam sorry dear for my 1st mistake…and thank u for all ur suggestions..if u havent’nt suggested it.. my storyline cud have been worst..and yep u were right ..i’ll write new stories on the couples i wanted…afterwards..
iam glad that u openly told about ur comments..and pls do read my 2nd chap!!
ok dear…but pls dont make any lead negative…n hope u satisfy both pair fans☺all the best
dont worry seebu ..iam not going to make any lead as negative..and i will clarify that in my upcoming epi!!
Hey, I like the concept, thanks a lot for this story.
I honestly have no idea what the furore is all about, it is a fiction based on another fiction and well, you have the right to express yourself as a writer. I am right in believing that this story takes on from that day when Laksh, Swara and Sanskaar fake Laksh’s death, right? Good going.
Do not worry, I stand with you in this. Let people say what they want, even if it is something derogatory and cheap( bedmates for Ragini, seriously?). Write and let others write. If people don’t like it, they are free to stop reading it, as I have done with numberous stories in this page.
All the best?
Nice concept dear. Loved it
thank u rehna..for ur heart warming comments…and pls do read my 2nd chapter of this ff
and by saying this story is not nice…some ppl are saying we r bashers…yes it is your story ur wish…but ppl who will read genuniely should not feel disgusting☺it may ne good for some fans as they r specific fans…i commented here as u took story after swasan love story started and marriage also over…it is disrespectful…so i suggested…but ppl always make our swasan fans as bashers….but everyone know what truth is…!anyways sorry for suggestion n thank u for understanding swasan pov…
not a problem babe ..and i dont consider any swasanians as bashers and to be honest i havent considered anyone who commented here as bashers..becoz..u all have the right to give suggestion to me and u all just said ur critics…as a reader ..so there is no need to be sorry seebu….and u all just said ur point of view know..so i have no problem with it honey !!…ok enough of all these sorries dear..we are all globalised people here and we have all the rights to state our opinion …so u did what is right only ..so cheer up seebu and i will be happy if read my 2nd chapter of this ff!!
thank u bela..and iam really glad that u like my concept and thank u for ur wishes dear and once again thanks for ur supportive words!..and here’s a good news for u…there is going to be raglak and swasan….so iam sure u r a fan temish ..and even iam a die heart fan for temish aka raglak..and pls do read my upcoming epi!!
I guess you understood. If it is SwaSan I am in. ?
Nammu…. thank you so much for understanding, but i don’t want to disappointed you further, seemed i won’t read your next story.
Let me clear, i’m here not for SUPPORTING you, but DEFENDING my Favorite couple, as i don’t want anyone to RUIN my SWASAN and IT’S MEMORABLE TRACK.
You, yourself admitted that you die hard fan of Raglak, Rag—————san and Swa—-lak, so, i think maybe you don’t need to hurt yourself by writing on Swasan as i know you have NO feeling for Swasan. We are not a child to offering ice cream when we are angry.
Better you focus to your favorite, but please if you can’t stop yourself to write a story of Ragini steal her sister husband AKA Rag——————————–San, at least DON’T WRITE THEM IN CURRENT TRACK OF SR. just it.
Call Us SWASAN AS OBSESSED FANDOM, but the TRUTH we DEFENSE what we belonging and it’s our RIGHT, our DUTY. SWASAN FANS LOYAL about couple, We are not kinda Rag Fans who happy to see our favorite to change BEDMATES everytime they want except PURE RAGLAKIAN.
And we are not the one, check this, other fandom have objection too when their favorite couple ruined as ragini need other man to be her partner , http://www.tellyupdates.com/true-love-episode-8-2/ .
About Bedmates, i know it’s sound cheap, but it’s true, husband is wife bedmates, so if on a story Ragini married to a man which always changed, it’s mean she has many bedmates, right ?
Sorry if i disappointed you for next story, but be frank i only read Swasan story, even i less to read Swaragini story, moreover we have different fav.. Thank you
mica ..i want to clear ur doubt clearly..first of all … its just a serial named “swaragini”..did u hear it ??….and after reading the link u gave,,..i need to clear that ..if some fans of rags are writing ff like that ..it doestnt mean that all the fans of her wud write like that…understand??.
and i will clear u another doubt …it is just a” FANFICTION”…OK ???..and how can u be so offensive like this??….just put yourself in my state ….will u be happy ..if someone has said u like this to your story..how will u feel??…and as per my readers wish which i also liked and wished to do it with full heart ..and i make u remember this again …iam also a fan of swasan..did u hear it mica??…and iam not making ragini to be with another man (to be frank and clear to u)
so if u cant encourage me then pls for god’s sake pls dont atleast discourage me…i hope u got it……and sorry to interfere u like this….becoz i felt that i shud clear everything to u ..thats y i commented like this
Nammu.. since beginning i knew that there is serial named SWARAGINI which have COUPLE RAGLAK AND SWASAN ONLY, swa—————lak was only intro and rag———————– san NEVER exist, so what ?? anything wrong in my words ? just tell me ?
you called yourself Rag fans, on that serial Rag only love Laksh.. soo FROM WHERE you get Rag———————–san as pair ha ????
Ohhoooo…… you even planning to write Rag—————–San in this story, so why can’t i include you to them who love to SEE Rag with different man except her husband ?
Dear, i dunno which one i should to believe, HERE YOU SAID YOU LOVE SWASAN, but on your previous comment you say this :
” thank u to everyone but ..iam sorry …iam a die heart fan of ragsan,raglak and swalak..but that doest’nt mean i dont like swasan ..i too like swasan ”
Between LOVE and LIKE, there is different feeling dear, SORRY if i said that you have NO feeling to Swasan, but from your some reply comments above, you kinda offering to write Swasan ff as compensation…. i just wanna clear you that we don’t need it. WE DON’T NEED ANY COMPENSATION BY NEW SWASAN FF for RUINING SWASAN MEMORABLE RACK.
We don’t want you write Swasan FF feeling FORCED, wish you understand my point.
and to be clear, i DON’T discourage you, i’m try to be honest for YOUR EXPECTATION about my further SUPPORT as i’m only read Swasan story, not swaragini’s story, moreover you are rag fans, definitely this story will CONTENT Ragini more.
That why i give kinda Apology comment.
Well if only you love Swasan and not feeling forced to write it…. maybe someday i will glad to read it, after all, your writing kinda enjoyable to read.
Wish everything clear on you.
really sorry if my forthright hurt you, but i don’t want to fake anything.
no dear …i didnt say that i have no feelings for swasan..i too love swasan…and actually iam having a new experience in writing a love track for swasan and raglak..and iam happy about it and pls dont hurt others feelings too..by saying rag’s fans(which even includes me) like that …becoz it really hurts mica..and i am apologizing becoz of my mistake..and also i replied u that i respect ur opinion and iam already into it but ur still saying that iam not a of swasan and y shud u drag rag’s fans here??..i am sorry too say..i am really disappointed only becoz of the current comment u have commented…but its ok becoz its your right to comment your views but that doesnt mean that u have to hurt others feelings..ok lets leave this issue ..i hope we are good now…. and iam extremely sorry if i had hurt ur feelings..becoz iam a little sensitive
Glad that you love swasan also, as i read you only like swasan, not love it, maybe i missed it..
Dear,,,, i dunno since when you join TU, but this STEALING HUSBAND thingy become BIGGEST issue among us…
I INTENTIONALLY say that WORD as they NEVER ever understand about it.
If IT’s HURTING you, so, STOP IT !!! STOP TO MAKE RAGINI to be SO characterless kinda like that !
You (all), Ragini fans said that you love Ragini, but by YOUR (all) EGO, You created Ragini such a girl who greedy in men, Stealing other girls partner to be hers.. (PURE RAGLAKIAN not included)
Why you can’t happy with RagLak ? Ragini love laksh to the core, but here and there, her fans busy to paired her with every men and even you, ALMOST PAIRING HER with her sister’s husband, right ? 😀
We are just outsider who so much angry as our couple got stolen.
We tried polite way to make them understand, but nothing happen…
Don’t you see, even other fandom called Rag fans as shameless, right ? it’s not nonsense talk as on many FF many author pairing Rag with other men and her fans ACCEPT it.
Oh ya, sorry, despite the fact that Rag-fans already IN as kakali said, i always love to drag it also 😀 to reply rag fans comment about us…. (if only you notice everything) 😛
btw, good luck all the best for your story..
ups, still if you feel hurt that Rag fans or even rag to be called as characterless, just stop to portrait Rag characterless by changing partner,…i’m sure that bad thing will stop also.
mica..i love the couples swasan ,swalak,raglak and ragsan.. i also read different ff’s about them and that doesnt mean i will always change their pairs in a ff and a 1000nd sorries for my first mistake and pls dont think that i will always change pairs of ragini in one ff ..and not all the fans of rags will be changing her pairs as u said ..only some do like that….and i admit that i almost tried to pair her with her sister’s husb ..and iam sry for that ..but pls dont include me that i always change pairs for ragini..no iam not now….in this ff iam not going to change any pairs..and in the future if i write any ff’s i wud write it in a new storyline with the other pairings..as it is a new story…and pls dont misunderstand me again that iam swaping the pairs for a new story in my future ff’s because i want to write different stories with different pairings…that’s my p.o.v..so pls dont say again that ragini’s fans always change the pairs everytime..it is not like that ..it differes from ppl’s opinion..i hope u took this in a positive way
Thnk u sooo much for considering out feelings Namuuuuuuuu.! Wish you the best for your upcoming episodes.!!
Namuuuuu, Mica hasn’t dragged Ragz fan here, because they are already IN.! You was supposed to write on Rag_____________San ruining our ever memorable track.! So I guess Ragini was already included here..!!
Whenever writers will try to pair Sanskar up with his sister Ragini,
SwaSanians will say about Ragini & her fans as they can accept anything..!! No matter what.!
You are sensitive so as WE, every time writers(Rag_________San,bro-sis lover) snatch Sanskar or any other man(You can also include Ranveer,Manik,Kunj,Omkara etc) hurting SwaSan fans.! Urghhhh! Nobody is having the LICENCE to hurt others! BUT THEY DO.!
SO THE REACTION IS INDEED FIXED.!
Blehhh, see what I’m blabbering as if it’s going to affect someone..!!
Once again Thnk u for understanding our emotions dear..!! ;-*
no probe kakali..and thank u for ur wishes
Nammuu….. seem you misunderstood what i told you about change pair.
It’s not about what happen in A story…. but about the all story..
You know what ? in this Fandom world, every Characters have their own RESPECTIVE PARTNER, WHICH HAVE THEIR OWN FANDOM.
Kunj belong to Twinkle, Ranveer belong to Ishani, Sanskar belong to Swara, Manik belong to Nandini, Abhi belong to Pragya, Arjun Mehra belong to Radhika, Raman belong to Ishita, Mann belong to Geet, Arnav belong to Kushi, Laksh SHOULD belong to Ragini..etc, etc, etc.
It’s kinda untold rule that EVERY CHARACTER SHOULD BE PAIR WITH THEIR OWN RESPECTIVE PARTNER…. EACH EVERY FANDOM RESPECT THAT EXCEPT YOUR FRIENDS…..
I NEVER see Any Fans who busy to steal other partner to be their favorite’s partner except Rag fans. (sorry if it’s hurting, but it’s the real truth)
We all busy to create story ON OUR FAV with their respective couple as we ADORE THEIR LOVE STORY,.
ISVEER FANS BUSY TO WRITE STORY ABOUT ISVEER, they never think to pairing Ishani with Mann who belong to Geet, or pairing Ranveer with twinkle no matter what..
Arshi fans busy to write Story about Arshi, withot thinking to pairing to others..
Twinj Fans never think to pairing one of them to other or at least steal other partner to be Kunj or Twinkle.
BUt, at least Rag fans…… Sometime pairing Rag with Omkara (kunal) on 1 ff,
sometime pairing Rag with Ranveer( shakti)’s ishani on other ff,
pairing Rag with Kunj’s twinkle on Wattpad
pairing Rag with Manik’s Nandini.
and LOVE to STEAL HER SISTER HUSBAND, Sanskar…..
That’s why once Isveer fans knew about it, they call Rag fans shameless as they pairing Rag with other character except her ONLY HUSBAND, Laksh.
And now, you preparing to write Rag——————————————san as pair…
(UNIVERSAL TRUTH THAT SANSKAR IS SWARA HUSBAND)). so, i don’t have choice except joining you to them na.. sorry…
btw, call me offensive, but many fans will do what i done,
you wanna prove ? try to pairing Rag with Kunj or Manik or Ranveer and post your story to TEI page or Manan page or MATSH page… you will get bash for sure.
uugghhhh,,, sorry!! what i was blabbering na… do whatever you want…allthe best for your story