Hi guys i hope u like my story….plz comment my friends ..otherwise i cant forward my story further….u r my support dears……u can give some suggestions or hints…… ragini also run to upstairs and reaches aditi’s room….seeing her condition swara become worried “what happened ragini???” she asked….ragini said “nothing swara ..am ok” ..at that time laksh came to aditi’s room by loudly calling “bhabhi” …by hearing his voice ragini felt an unknown shyness and went to their room .laksh saw her and called her “hey you…stop there” but she did not reply……swara felt something in ragini’s behaviour…but she ignored this…ragini came to their room and she tried to control her heart which beats beyond normal..she become blushed by thinking about the incidents which happened some times ago…a small smile appeared in her face by thinking about laksh… at that time in aditi’s room laksh: “arrey bhabhi…u look so beautiful”.. aditi: “stop teasing me laksh…i will not talk to u” laksh:”sorry bhabhi…i came lately…muche maaf kijiye” aditi:”ok laksh…i willl forgive u…..but repeat this” by hearing this laksh hugged aditi …she hugged back….seeing this swara smiled and amazed due to their brother-sister bond… aditi introduced swara to laksh…both of them greeted each other…swara excused from there and went to her room to bring a gift that she bought for aditi’s marriage….at that time waiter serves cool drinks to the guests in upstairs…swara didn’t notice this and collide with the waiter…all the drinks were spilled in her white dress and it become dirty…. seeing this waiter become panicked waiter: “sorry maam…i didn’t notice u…plz forgive me” swara: “oh bhayya…aap tar math karo….its my mistake…am in a rush…so i didn’t see u and accidentally collide with u…..am really sorry…all the drinks were fell down on the floor ….wait i will clean this” by hearing this waiter surprised with swara’s behaviour and said”madam…i will clean it…. sorry once again”….by hearing this swara smiled and went to change her dress…at that time without seeing laksh sanskar went to upstairs to check where he is….he called laksh’s name…but he is busy in making fun of aditi and everyone is laughing …..sanskar saw a room closed …it didnt closed…sanskar knocked but swara didnt hear this….swara is busy in wearing her lehenga…without hearing anyones noise he opened the door and entered swara’s room…he searched laksh in room but did not find him…he started to go out…at that moment he saw a girl trying to tie her chori…when sanskar entered the room swara thought that it is ragini..so she called her “ragini came here…help me to wear this” by hearing swara’s voice sanskar freezed to the spot “what a beautiful voice”he thought in his mind…..without seeing any movements from ragini(actually from sanskar) swara called”ragini….come fast and tie this…..we are getting late” sanskar opened his mouth to say that am not ragini but seeing swara’s struggle to tie the strip ….he came near to swara and tie the strips of her blouse….by doing this sanskar hand touched swara’s bare back….her breath stopped for a moment……she jerked and turn back…..by seeing sanskar cried loudly….to reduce her voice sanskar closed her mouth….she tried to free herself from sanskar ….in these process both of them fell down in to the bed …..sanskar’s one hand is in her waist and other one is in her mouth….swara’s gasped…and she shared an eyelock with sanskar…(tum hi ho….meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho……….song played in the back ground) swara’s hair flyed in the air due to wind…it increases her beauty…swara get stucked in sanskar’s eyes…..a hair falls in to swara’s face…this unclears his view…sanskar removed hair from swara’s face…swara closed her eyes when she felt his touch in her face…. precap: swara fell down from the chair and sanskar catches her in the nick of time…. ragini’s dhupatta flowed in the air and laksh gets this ..they shared another moment…. thapki and bihaan also entered in the marriage…..and swasan and raglak helps thahaan to realize their love……….
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Nice !
Thank u yashal …I will continue
Plz continu 😀
vry nyc pls continue
n pls make it swasan
Sruthi it will definitely be swasan…but some twists and turns are there to happen
Good one,pls continue.
Thank u veena…I will continue…
Nice
Thanks
nice yar
Thank u sri….tell me ur views like any correction from my part
Hello
Hiii anna
Hiii
Dude u write so well. Pls do continue. U will always have my support.
Thank u so much ammu…keep supporting me …give me ur suggestions….
hey naira nice story line dear.. continue writing 🙂
Thanks heer….I will try my level best
Very nice update next part
Thanks
Its was not good!!! Worst!
Sorry neha….I hav this kind of ability only….
How can u say this neha….if u don’t like the story then dont read it …but plz dont post these kind of comments…your comments make the writer so depressed…naira is a gud writer….plz don’t make her sad….so many people like her story…
Guys if u r supporting me plz comment….
Ofcourse U support u diya I liked story and one should not offend another like this if she didnt like it better not read it
U r right rudya…..look she ask her again to change the story line…so many of us liked her story….