Hello frnds ….thanx fr commenting….. I didn’t expected this much comments….iam back with 2nd chapter….maybe u will get a hint about the pars….
Pls keep reading and commenting.. frnds if u fell tired of reading long chappys …..tell me I will make it short…anyways
Here is the story…enjoy
The screen shifts to MM
A girl is seen running up the stairs shouting….. bhaiiiii did u bring my book??
A boy is seen sleeping peacefully. Hearing girl shouting, he wakes up with a jerk and runs to the washroom hurriedly….saying
Boy : aab to tu gaya beta…voh chipkali piya tujhe chode gi nahi…
The girl is piya…
Piya enters the room. She kept her hand on her hip and with cute anger says…
Piya : again u forgot na… I wont leave u today
Sayin this she goes to the washroom door and knocks the door continuously …… bhai come out I wont leave u today
The boy is bitting nails worriedly in the washroom…
Boy: aaj to tu unluck hai lucky…..
Yes yes he is our laksh…aka lucky
Piya thinks something and smirks….
Piya: bhai iam going… I will see u later…
Lucky gives a relief sigh and comes out
Someone taps on his shoulders.. he turns and finds piya glaring at him angrily….
He gulps in fear…
Lucky: pi..pi..piya. voh…mai..mai
Piya: kya mai mai? Bhai u know na iwanted to take that book with me on trip…..
Lucky: I forgot to bye the book ..again..(says in ne breath)
Piya : shot daggers to laksh
Lucky: I am sooooo sorry again … I wll go to buy it immediately after breakfast…
Piya: till when u will return ..iwill leave na…..(angrily)
Jab mai 3 din ke bad aaungi na I wat that book at any cost….(saying this she beats him playfull and leaves )
Lucky nods..
Suddenly he feels weird.. but why..??
The screen shifts to my coffee café (MCC..SWARAS CAFÉ..it is posh and hifi)
She is seen sitting at the counter and checking new cakes recipes…
Her phone rings ….
She picks the call with a smile…and says iam coming…
MM
Laksh is standing in front of the mirror..(wearing blue denims and white shirt) he says to himself kya yaar lucky tu itna sad kyu feel kar raha hai…??he is in deeps thoughts…
A boy comes frm the back…lucky turns and the boy hugs him…and says happ…. But stops realizing what he was going to say….and becomes sad…
Laksh releases the hug…he understood that he was going to say happy…but why..??
Lucky: in a confused yet questionable tone… “aaj ka din mee liye… special tha kya???” bolna sanky…
Yes the boy is sanky…
Sanky: stammers lucky….voh..aaj…..na..
They heard pai calling them for BF
Both at union: han bhabi..comming
Lucky: phir why iam I felling that today WAS the an important day of my life….
Sanky looks at him with teary eyes….
Pari herd them… she comes and holds their ears
Sanlak: aah
Pari says..trying to divert the topic…
Pari: tum dono ko aj BF nahi chahiye?? Since when iam calling u….. and u both are chatting here…(with a fake anger)
Sanlak : sorry bhabi….
Lucky’s phone rings … he tells them that after BF he have to go to the arket to buy piyas book.he leaves..
Sanky : with teary eyes…. Haan lucky aaj special din tha tere liye…..
Pari consoles him…..
Pari: don’t worry sanky sab theek ho jayega …..
To herslf: don’t know I should be sad on what lucky said??or feel happy
To god – oh god pls return him his soulmate and his memory.. whom u have snatched 1yr ago…pls god unite them ……they loved each other somuch…..
To herself: don’t know where is swara and how is she….
GM
Shaan: maa iam feeling bad for swara di and jiju…its their MARRIAGE ANIVERSARY and they are not together just bcuz of that stupid accident and lost their memory….
Sumi looks at him with full anger…..
And says……with anger boiling
Sumi: yes its their marriage anniversary, it’s the day when my daughter went against me and married that laksh….who was not gud for her… they use to fight everytime ..didnt you see…then how could he keep my daughter happy. She married against her familiys wish…she knew na that I hate maheshwaris…… destiny has given me another opportunity to make my daughter’s life happy…..and I wont live this opp..
Shaan : but maa they lov…
Sumi interrupts and says shutup shaan ……never ever bring this topic again…
She leaves…….
Shaan prays to god to unite them
Hospital
Ragini is sitting in her cabin…. She is thinking about swaras words ..She calls swara….
Ragini: hello swara
Swara: hi ragini
Ragini: ur ok na?? (sad concerned and low tone)
Swara: kya baat kar rahi ho… mujhe kya hua? Tum aisa kyu puchrahi ho..??
Rags: kuchnahi bas aise he…..
Swara: offo ragini….accha the hai… mujhe kahi jaana hai mai tum se baad me baat karungi…
Rags: shona …kaha ja rahi ho?
Swara: to meet some one
Rags: who?
Swara: someone who fills my life with sweetness….anyways bye
Rags is confused…….
she gets someones message and gets happy……the person asks her to meet at xyz park…she leaves…
At park
Ragini is waiting…someone comes and hugs her from behind ….she say finally u came..ithought u forgot…
The boy turns and is revealed to be……………………………… sanky..
Sanky: haha very funny(sarcastically)….u know na ilove u…..
Rags : I love u tooo…lekin( she becomes sad)
The screen shifts to market….
Swara and laksh are both in a same market…
Laksh is messaging someone……with a broad smile
Swara is messaging someone: where are u ???
She sees someone and walks towards the person with a smile……
Laksh and swara are coming to eachother smiling…..
The screen freezes on their smiling face…..
So guys how is the ep…..its a swalak and ragsan ff…..sorry to swasan and raglak fans….guys pls comment and keep supporting…I hope you will not withdraw ur support after knowing the pairs…. Trust me ull enjoy the storyline.… I will be posting a promo toooo …pls do read …bye…pls comment
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Exactly fan girl and jayanti u r right I totally agree with u…always appreciate the content.yaar it is very difficult write something..muskan has done it so appreciate it..and yeah muskan even I know u r story and I think u have taken good choice on couples…I mean swalak are apt for that role..Swara can be bubbly at the same time good information pain same with Laksh so plz go ahead with it..waiting for nxt update.. and swastika seriously didn’t u watch the show earlier everyone thought it will be ragsan when Sam was pretending To be mad..really don’t hurt anyone with u r half knowledge
omg….seriously crying with happiness by seeing ur alls support………..seriously i didnt expected this much love…………………..thannnnnnnnnnnnnnku soooooo much yaar……………now iam feeling on hundreth cloud………………thank u soo uch every one….and a big wala thnx for ur support and love………..love u….muuah:)
I am a big fan of tejaswi she was given negative role but still I watched it ..because content meant more to me..plz stop giving negative comments..and there are many swasan ff year so stop bashing other FFS plz…
people are not same Shrilatha, we DIDN’T ASK MUSKAN TO STOP WRITING, did we ?
so stop create new drama
Sorry mica if I had hurt u really sorry
Shri… if sharing our POV is bashing… then i must say “U R SUCH A KIDDO” awwww “GROW UP BABY” then come n comment.. !! uff today’s Kiddos naaa.. !!
Sorry I just said in general but really sorry
Dr any swasan fan didnt bash muskaan…they just share there pov that they r true swasanian or raglakian nd will not read it!
Muskaan we r saying dont think mch nd continue writting as many r still there 4 supporting uh ! If uh want to share ur feeling with any1 anytime then without thinking uh can msg me anytime! Continue ur ff all the best
For Muskan.. i NEVER EVER have a problem about your choice, it’s yours
we NEVER EVER asked you to STOP WRITING, rite ?
i understand that you follow your heart…. but really if any readers ask you about the pair. better you reveal it, as YOU SHOULD RESPECT OTHER FEELING ALSO..
wish you understand my point even thought your supporter seem misunderstand about it..
Micaaaaaaaa !! it’s a wrong number i guess !! omgggg take a chill pill dear.. ! U know what they wants n we know what we talking about.. !! some KIDDOS don’t know the diff b/w bashing n sharing our povs.. soo just blabbering.. hahahha.. !! *puah u to ice-water to cool down..
*jump to Deep pond to cool down myself…
haaaaa.. hypocrite also, talking about story line, but she even did the same.. ciihhh
i have replied to ur questions in above…in jayantis part..
well i know they were supporting you, but by bashing others without even knowing what the truly happened, it kinda pathetic dear,….
so don’t blame yourself as i didn’t blame you at all, …
it’s OK to ask others to read your ff, for me it’s good thing to see a writer with such excitement, many writers done that also….. that why we came here to read.
It’s OK to follow your heart on writing, i love consistent writer…
so chill about that..
about reveal the pair, instead as bashing comment, i mean it as an advice for you since i knew you are new here…
and don’t fell bad as i bashing and rude to your supporter, they started, not me..
but don’t make a reason about reveal the pair as reader asked you already on first episode.. about wasting time (your answer on Jayanti) even you thought same as me that hiding the pair will waste time for readers, rite ? so.. for FANS GIRL.. OPEN YOUR EYES,.. IT’S NOT JUST ME TO THINK THAT READ FF but dunno about the pair well waste someone time….
guys pls stop making such a big issue………….it feels sooo bad , thinking iam the cause of ur argument…..
note: the people who wants to read can read its my pleasure….:)
if any one is not inrested they can g…. i dont have any problems
iam sooo sorry fangirl and jayanti…cuz of me u got such replys
and sorry mica and kakali….
Thanks for swalak ff
This comment is only for who said rag…san ffs r ruling in tl more than swasan…well i think they lost their eyes…firstly pls check ur eyes…swasan ffs r so many…we r loyal swasanians?we love both swasan equally..n we know who r writing rag…san ffs definetly they r ragini fans just like that it goes to swa..lak fans…it is ur wish to write for whom u want…but again saying to the writer of ff pls just dont give hope…just admit whom u want as pairs in first day itself..orelse this will only happen…n we swasan fans r so happy with swasan ffs..but sorry to raglak true fans…i know rag…san ffs r more than raglak ffs…it is only story according to u…this page is swaragini page..u have right but write a story who r existed …SWASAN N RAGLAK R COUPLES N SWARAGINI SERIAL IS ABOUT THEM…SWA..LAK R DEVAR-BHABHI N RAG..SAN R BRO-SIS(RAGS CALLED SANKY BRO IN FIRST)anyways…all the best to writer n love my #SwaSan?
Awesome yrr I love it love swalak and raglak I like ur concept???
Interesting …surely going to read….and about pairs…. I to like both…tc…?
Awesome. The pairs nice. Continue dear
Thank you so much dear for swalak. I am a very big fan of swalak.. thank you once again