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SWARAGINI (DIL KI DOR) Part 26

Hey guys , replied to your comments , misha dear i asked you something in promo , please reply i am really confused……….
Guys i am seeing that from last two episode , many new readers are commenting but many older readers are not , guys i want to tell you something that is that it doesn’t hurt when people don’t read your story from very start because its clear that they don’t like your concept but it does hurt guys when you leave the story in the middle because it shows that there’s some problem in the storyline which is so bad that it can’t be improven , guys i don’t wanna loose my old readers so please if you are there just comment , even one word but please do……………………..just to tell that you are reading and if you don’t like anything , just speak up because i wanna improve myself and that will help me…………………………….
Links to previous episodes:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=DIL+KI+DOR

the episode starts with swaralak being shocked seeing the place.
Its a shed type of place in the middle of forest , totally decorated with lights and flowers.
Aliya is in the middle and rose petals are falling on her.
She smiles and hugs a boy , his face is shown and it is revealed to be zain.
Aliya while hugging : wow zain , i loved the surprise , thats amazing……………….
She now breaks the hug and beats him lightly on his chest and says : why you kidnapped me???
Zain holds her shoulder and smiles and says : so what , i kidnapped my wife only na……………………
He laughs saying this while aliya says : oh god , zain you are impossible.
Swaralak eye each other confused while swara suddenly speaks : its your mistake….
Laksh eyes her shocked and says : excuse me………………….how is it my mistake…………………its your mistake…………………….you took me here…………………….
Swara trying to put blame on him : no..no..no………..its your mistake…..
Laksh shows her his finger and says : oh hello , just shut up ok na…………………its your mistake……………
Zain and aliya hear them fighting and are shocked to see them
Zain confused : who are you both ?? and why are you here??
Swara was saying when laksh holds her hand and says : wo, actually we are lovers(swara eyes him with a ”what” look while he tries to avoid her) we didn’t knew that you were here……………..sorry………………………our car got broken so…………………..

Its already evening.
Aliya smiles and says : no problem………………..you can stay with us……………
Swara shouts : what???
Zaya eye her confused while laksh fakely smiles and says : oh god, baby………………….i love you…………….(to zaya) she tells me to say ‘i love you” to her every minute and if i don’t do , she acts weird……………………….
Swara eyes him angrily while laksh tries to control his laughter.
Aliya : see , this shed is divided into two parts , you take one part, we’ll be in other……………… we will leave you to your home tomorrow morning……………
Laksh nods while he makes swara too to do this.
Zaya leave them to other side while swara shouts : what is this????????????
Laksh keeps a hand on her mouth and zaya return.
Zain : is everything fine……???
Laksh nods in yes while after they go swara frees herself and says : what are you doing??
Laksh eyes her angrily and says : so , what should i tell them , we thought him as kidnapper……………you broke my car…………….we can’t even go back so you will have to stay here with me this night miss…………….yaar what is your name..???
Swara angrily : why should i tell you………………………….ma will be worried for me……………huh…………..
Laksh eyes her and then says : ok , miss billi(cat)
Swara eyes him and says : what you said??
Laksh smiles while adjusting himself on a mat laid on floor and says : your new name………….
Swara too tries to sit on the same mat and says : ok , mister Bandar(monkey)
They both pass each other fake smile and in swara’s mind : maa , will be worried , where i am caught with this monkey………..
Laksh thinks : yaar , where i am caught with this cat…………..??? huh…….
Ragini asks swara laughing : oh swara , you were caught with him, so sad………………..but his character sketch , i would love to meet that laksh , seriously……………..
She laughs.
Sanskar on phone cuts laksh and says : oh………………..she is just like swara you know………………………angry bird(this name is given by my reader maghs to swara and i just loved it so used it here for swara)
He too laughs while ragsan ask to swaralak : what next??
Swaralak together : nothing else……………………..signal was not there but we both played on our phones the whole evening and then we slept at night……………next morning home……………nothing else……………………….
Ragini to swara suspiciously : paaka , nothing else…………….
Swara eyes her smiling and says : no mata………………nothing else……………but i just hate that monkey…………………i wish i never meet him again……………………….
Ragini laughs and says : i wish you meet him soon…………
Swara :ragini……………….
She runs behind ragini while ragini laughs.
Sanskar to laksh : i don’t think my laksh was with some girl alone and he did nothing………….
Laksh angrily : bhai……………..what are you speaking……………..i with that billi…………..huh…………..
Sanskar smiling : oh , my cute laksh…………..
He laughs while laksh cuts the call in anger.
Sanskar laughs.
In swaragini room :
Ragini is sleeping while swara is not getting sleep , she wakes up and starts seeing the moon smiling while remembering that night………………………..
Laksh is eyeing the moon smiling and thinks : after meeting her , i love cats too………………..
Flash back starts:
Swarlak are fighting for the mat and sleeping together, swara has kept a cushion between them.

Suddenly laksh wakes up and his eyes go on swara who is sleeping peaceful , automatically a smile comes on his face…….
Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…

she tries to turn in sleep and a strand of hair comes on her face , he smiles and then tucks it behind her ear………..
he thinks : sote hue billi bhi cute lagti hai(she also looks cute while sleeping)
he smiles and then lays down again smiling………………
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

after some time :
swara wakes up as she was not able to sleep and eyes laksh, seeing him a smile comes on her face and she thinks : this monkey looks so cute when he starts his bak..bak , (and now analysing) not to cute while speeping.
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

she smiles and then tries to stand up but she falls on laksh by mistake.
Laksh wakes up and eyes her on himself.
They both have a passionate eyelock.
Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein

laksh suddenly breaks the eyelock and says in a dramatic tone : oh ,seeing yuvraj laksh alone , you are trying to take advantage…???
swara eyes him and then beats him on his chest and says : just shut up ok na………………..
laksh stops her while they both again have an eyelock.
Ho.. tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage hain
Himmat ke tukde bator
Ho bhaage zamaane se
Chhup ke dabe paanv jaise koi chor
Jaise koi chor…

laksh : bache ki jaan loge(will you kill me)
swara smiles and stands up and says: you are not that bad…………….
laksh too sits up with her and says : i know , i let you take my advantage na, thats why i am good………….
swara angrily: you……………..
she again starts beating him.
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore.. (repeats)
They both spend the night like this(fighting and patching up) while the next morning zaya leave them to swara’s house.

In swara’s house:
Swara runs inside and hugs sumi.
Sumi normally : where were you??
Swara eyes her shocked : you don’t care na ma………………if something would have happened to me???
Sumi smiles and says : my shona is not so weak………………..i trust you…………….
Laksh comes from back and says :oh shona………………
Swara angrily stares him and says : just shut up ………………..ok na………………
She says to sumi : maa, tell him to go………….
Sumi angrily : shona very bad……………..he helped you na…………………..
Swara eyes her like a child and then hides behind sumi and stares at laksh..
Laksh stares at her smiling while she sticks out her tongue.
Laksh laughs and says : ok , aunty , i’ll go now…………………by the way thanks for understanding that i helped her…………………..
The episode ends on swara-laksh coming out of fb and smile seeing the moon, the screen is split up into the two.

So guys , i end this episode here…….

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