Recap: Lucky gets angry on Sanskar.
Precap: Sanskar………..
@ baadi
Rags was moving here nd there. Her mind was not in her control. Where as Swara was worried fr rags.
Swara: wat might hav happened there? I’m sure rags wud hav slapped him harder. He is such a rude person. Wat if he does something to her?
Swaragini were lost in their thghts. Rags went out to hav a fresh breeze.
Lucky arrived there, rags ignored him and started to move,
Lucky: I’m sorry Rags fr wat all bhaai had done today.
Rags didn’t look at him. Lucky kept on following her.
Lucky: Rags talk to me. Wat hav I done? Plz ragini, look at me.
Rags: wah, lucky, ur brthr comes and hurts us and u apaologize on behalf of him. Lucky, v shall not meet again. These all happened as ur bthtr misunderstood out closeness. If it continues wat shall he do then? I’m sorry lucky,itz better to end this all here.
Lucky: rags, I know he did wrong, I saw repentance in his eyes too.
Rags: don’t try to defend him. Swara’s life is now on a good track. I dnt want her to go back again to a hell bcoz of ur brthr. Frndshp shudnt harm anyone’s life. So v shall not continue this.
Rags went from there vthout looking back at him. Lucky was hurt. He didn’t know whom shall he talk in favour of. Both hav misunderstood each other. He kept on thinking the solution………..
@ Sanskar’s mansion
Sanskar cudnt stay in his office. It was too suffocating fr him. He sat down on sofa and started to recall everything from mrng.
Sanky: the first mistake was tht I spied on my brthr. I hav lost his trust fr this.
Later he thght abt Rags, her words, the slap. He felt he has hurt both of the girls.
Sanky: I cud have thght some other way to sort the matter. Wat was necessary to do all this? I think I’ve over reacted. May b they r just frndz.
Sanky was disturbed by all these. He went to kitchen to hav a coffee. He prepared it. Each sip he consumed reminded him swaraglak.
Sanky: wat she might hav felt wen I said all such things abt her parents? I scolded her, harmed her, simply vthout her mistake. I know how it feels just by the thght tht our parents r not vth us. I’ve gone through the same pain too. But at least I’ve enjoyed their love. But this girl hav lost her parents vn she was a baby yet. Wat was Lucky telling abt her? Sufferings and all? Whatever, I don’t need all those. I want my brthr back. I think I hav to apologize those girls. Sanskar Maheshwari!! and apology!!! Itz OK, it was my mistake. I can do anythng fr lucky. I need to gain his trust back. Till then I shall not hav peace….
He thght to call lucky, he picked his phn. He refused due to the fear to face him. He later convinced himself and dialled the nmbr. Uh… Uh it was of no use, he didn’t pick. Moreover they r brthrs they share some similarities in attitude.
Sanky: Lucky, plz pick my call. I’ve realized my mistake tht I over reacted. Yar, I need u now, plz pick it.
He kept on trying vch was of no use. He closed his eyes recallimg all their brotherly moments.
Sanky: U were always there fr me lucky. Vn our family, evn my parents rejected me, it was u and uttara who lend their hands to console me. U both r my world. But now it has becum empty. And the most sarcastic thing is tht I’m the reason of all these. I thght u to b safe, I didn’t distinguish right and wrong, and now due to this, I lost ur trust, for whom I did all these. No Lucky, I’ll get my brthr back at any cost.
He thght smethng vch gav him a sign of relief.
Precap: swaraglak patch up and Sanskar tries to meet Swaragini….
Guyz I’m sorry if u feel this dragging. But to complete my plot, these r required. I’ll not drag too much. Until then keep reading and sharing ur views and suggestions. Love u all.
48 Comments
superb. ..plzzzzzzzzzzz make it swasan
Nice one announce d pairs nd make it swasan plzzzzz..
Swasan and raglak plz
I am sorry but plzz think about pairing again seriouly fed up with same pairing in serials and ff they are so many ff related to swasan loosing interest to read because you r giving importance to swasan only as untill now i read i thought if san and rags paired your ff will be out of world because story is different and u cant decide pairs on votting because you choose your story by yourself but not by voting.
I think you said first it will be ragsan and i started reading it .
Sry to say i didnt mean to hurt u all the best for your ff
Take care
Im totally agree wit u preti
Im very disappointed by d pairs u make…i lovr ragsan ….dis is my last comment..
Im really sorry aishu
M also disappointed
This is my last comment too
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Nice ?
Nice…nd thanks for pairing….
I am really disappointed yar me to leaving
Sry to say this but you dont miss us because you will have swasan comments naa then their is no need our comments for u sry if i hurt u but really i am very disappointed and feeling very hurt
Bye dear
nice but make it as swalak not swasano bored of reading swasan ff plsss announce pairs also in ur next ff plzzzzz
Don’t feel bad if you r not getting comments due to pairs as your story is good and majority likes raglak and swasan so plz do keep up the good work…
sry to say i m bored of reading swasan and raglak ur story is diff and pairs should u can check there is hardly one swalak ff plzzz chnge ur pairs don’t follow others its okk when there are less comments in starting days but after 2to3 days people will surely comment and like ur story but plz think about pairs as swalak and ragsan sometimes small chnge is gud
plz announce ur pairs also in starting of next ff
Very nice
Nice
I don’t think u r dragging the story aishu.waiting for next update. Interesting precap.
Pairing is perfect yaar …
Good… Keep going… Waiting for next…
Nyc… Thanq for pairing Swasan…
Just a suggestion …. Ragsan pair was so good in ur ff coz of their attitudes.. Ragini is bold and sanskar is rude… Ragini had the courage to slap sanskar speak to him and she made him realise his mistake … She shattered his ego and I liked it so much it was different but where as raglak scenes are typical yar
Aishu don’t take it seriously … And I just said I liked ragsan pair in ur ff … It doesn’t mean that I won’t read ur ff or comment if u pair swasan and raglak … I like the story how it goes … I just gave my suggestion and if u can make ragsan as besties yar
Swasan… Raglak …
Thanks for swasan and raglak
Awsm story I luv raglak very much .
They are my fav couple
Luv u yr for raglak.they are awsm
nice
please friends, don’t emotionally blackmail the writers by saying ‘it’s my last comment… you had disappointed me…’ and like that… please enjoy the story… comment about her way of writing, the portrayal of characters and the plot… yeah, i knew, you have freedom to share your views and i shouldn’t interfere and comment about it… and… decision about the pairs also didn’t favorable for some of you… but.. please think from writers point of view… how would they feel while reading those type of comments?
and, one request to writers, from my point of view, please don’t ask about the pairs to readers… you surely thought about pairs while shaping up your plot… please go with it…
i knew, i poked my nose into your matters… may be my words hurt some of you… for that, please forgive me… i am sorry…
regarding the plot, aishu, you are doing a good job!!! i loved it… swaragini’s bonding, everything!! way to go!!!
I agree with u totally …. Don’t bother about pairs its story matters
im sorry aishu even im dis appointed yaar u shld once again think abt pairs 🙁
Nice
Awsm yr thanks for raglak
Swasan…….
Very happy for swasan
I’m a silent reader but I want to comment now by seeing your comments
Why you guys are hell bent towards pairs?
Why can’t u see her beautiful storyline?
And u guys r hurting by blackmail like “bye bye” “I won’t read ” etc
There r many fans for both pairs but ultimately she have to select swasan or ragsan which is difficult for her too
But as she is the writer let her decide the pairs.
If possible encourage her or if u don’t like just leave the page but don’t hurt/ discourage her by your comments & blackmail
By the way Aishu story is very nice & there r many fans & silent readers for your ff. So don’t take these blackmails to your heart..