Hello frnds………i ve started swasan story in a diff way….hope u all will lyk it….do comment n tell me….. Plz
Swara is standing in her new room of new house….she got married today….bt in her heart a pain is shooting….she d never thought dis will happen with her…..she has become d wife of d most eligible bachelor…sanskar Maheshwari…… Owner of maheshwari busainess….bt still she was nt happy…..
She was tricked into dis marriage….her father was helpless…..he did nt hav ny other option…..swara remembered his father’s words at her bidai…
Shekhar: beta…take care of you n ragini…i had sacrificed both of u…..m sry….m nt a good father….
Yes ragini…swara thought…y her….she d nt done nything wrong by loving laksh….Laksh too loves her dearly…..der only fault was dat….. Dey luvd n married secretly….nw ragini was pregnant…..
Swara remembered dp’s words to her dadi…
Dp: if u want laksh to marry ragini…den u ve to make swara agree to marry sanskar…
Who would had rejected dat proposal….bt swara luved someone else…..piyush was his name…his college frnd…
Bt she had to agree….fr her sisters sake….
Sanskar enters her room….
Sanskar: swara…
Swara: ji..
Sanskar: swara i knw…our marriage….. It was a forceful one…..
Swara: wen u knw den hw cn u agree fr dis…
Sanskar: sry swara….actually….. Hw cn i tell u d truth…
Swara: plz say
Sanskar: swara…i have a bitter past….which i dnt want to share wid nyone….
Swara: what
Sanskar: yesss…..n i dnt think so dat i cn even giv u ryts of a wife….
Swara: den y d marry me
Sanskar: swara ur kundli….it said dat when u come to dis house nthing will go wrong….
Swara: to correct the fate of ur house u snatched my love frm me…..(cries)
Sanskar: wat….u luved someone else…
Swara: y u did nt knw dat i luved someone else…..nt only luved….he was my fiance..
Sanskar: no….
Swara: dnt lie…u all r liers…
Sanskar: m nt lieing swara….
Swara: u ll never understand my pain….what u ll feel if someone u luv is snatched frm u….
Sanskar is silent….
A FB shows
A girl: sanskar…if someday someone will snatch me frm u den…
Sanskar: den i ll nt leave him…
Fb ends…..
Sanskar eyes start tearing up….
He hides his tears n looks at swara…..
He sees d same pain in her eyes….
Sanskar smiles….with pain in his eyes….
Sanskar: i ll unite u wid ur true lover…..dis is d prms of sanskar Maheshwari…..
Swara looks at him confusingly…..
Precap
Swara recieves a call…..she says what n cries
Guys hope u all lyk my ff….raglak lovers…dnt b depressed….der scenes will also b der frm nxt chap
15 Comments
awesome.. keep writting dear.
plzzzzzz focus more on swasan… niceeee one
Nice start yaar,had thought about a somewhat similar track before writing my current ff,but so glad to read yours,pls continue writing..it is nice.
wt for rags swara forcing married to sanskar… sanskar to unite swara with her lvr
super dear just continue Dr
Sorry shefali but it is a little bit similar to hum dil de chuke sanam
Nice starting….seems interesting
nice start
swasan. .
Nice
Thanku all fr ur comments….. Riha..i knw..its luking similar…bt its nt…jst continue to read dis…u ll get to knw d difference dear
nice start…..
nice
Awesome i like it
Awesomeeee superbb