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Ch-11 link :
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-11/
Recap: lucky’s confession…swaragini emotional convo…raglak romcom moments…swasan cute scenes..
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Ch – 12
@2:30, lunch time..
Swalak were having their lunch and talking about their dance practice & all..then…
Shona : (tease) lucky, from past 2 days..i m noticing something wearied in your behaviour…it seems u r in love with someone…
Lucky : (coughed) r u gone crazy Shona…me n love…u r mad..u r talking rubbish inspite of knowing about me…(serious tone) this lucky mehta can not be in love ever…did u get that…
Shona : (change topic seeing him serious) ok ok…baba…i was just kidding..i m sorry…(make her cute puppy face which always work on everyone specially lucky )
Lucky : (melt) Ohh its ok my kiddo..don’t be sad…i am not angry…(tease her) btw leave all that..u know i was shocked yesterday to see u hugging Sanky so tightly…!!!
Shona : (nervously) who actually..ha..i was bit tiered..nd…
lucky : (serious tone) u know that neither u can lie nor hide anything from me.. then y r u trying…i know that u hv started loving your Mr.Oversmart..hena ?
Shona : (smile) (blush) hmm…i hv realized that yesterday night only..ya i m in love with Sanky…(nervously) Do u like him..?
Lucky : (smile) off course i like him dear…otherwise i hv not let u go with him alone on bike na..he is very nice n carrying guy…when u r going to confess ur feeling..?
Shona : not so soon…i will confess when appropriate time will come..u also plz don’t tell him anything..
lucky : ok my dear kiddo…i am so happy for you…finally my kiddo got her prince charming…
Shona : (monologue) Ohh god plz let lucky accept his feeling soon…
they complete their lunch and get back to their practice..
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[friends its just friendly dinner not date so they will be in their casuals only…]
@ 6:30 pm…
Sanky left from his house to orphanage to pick up ragini in his car…he was wearing black jeans, red t-shirt with nevy blue blazer…he has used jel in his hair..he ware cool watch in his right hand…n was looking very hot…
He reached orphanage and called ragini to come out..she was wearing a white & pink kurti with pink leggings…she was also wearing some matching accessories..she has left her hair open..she has done light make up..she was looking like angel…
Ragini : Hii..Sanky…u r looking handsome…(she took her sit)
Sanky : Hii Lado…u r looking beautiful…(he start driving) (tease) i think lucky is going to die today..(wink at her)
Lado : (widens her eyes) h.how do you know..? did Shona told u ?
Sanky : i m ur best friend dear..i don’t need anyone to tell me about ur feeling..i knew from very 1st day…(smiles) btw nice choice..i like lucky very much..
ragini : (blush) (side hug him) thank u so much Sanky…
Sanky : (smile) i am so happy for u dear…i wanna see this bright smile on your face forever…
Ragini : (smile & node) (tease him back) btw Sanky how was your bike ride ??
Sanky : (stammer) vo..vo…it was good…(change topic) hey nice watch ? where did u buy it..?
Ragini : (laugh seeing him asking such silly question) Sanky..you r so cute…the way i can’t hide anything from you..u also can’t hide it from me…your eyes are telling me everything..u love her..right..??
Sanky : (smile nervously) woh…actually..(confess) ya..i love her so much…(serious) but ragini i don’t want to confess this soon..so you plz don’t tell this to Shona now…
Ragini : (happy) ok Sanky…i m so happy…
they reached hotel and call lucky…lucky told them that they are coming…after completing call lucky went to Shona’s room..he knocked the door…
lucky : Shona…common..lets go..they hv reached and waiting 4 us..
Shona : (shouts front inside) lucky you go..i will join you all in 5 min…
lucky : ok i m going…come soon…
lucky went down..lucky was wearing dark brown jeans with white shirt…he has done spiky hair..he was looking dashing…
Sanky come out of the car…they hug eo..ragini get down & come near them…lucky was dumbatruck looking at her..he has seen her in anarkli at d time of audition..but right now..she was looking like…like..a real angel..Sanky saw that both raglak are lost in eo…he smile..how can he leave such a chnce to tease them..
Sanky : (went near lucky ) (lower tone) She is looking very beautiful…right..?
lucky : (dreamily) Ya…she is…
Sanky laugh..lucky come back to his senses..he glare at Sanky…
lucky : hey..Lado u r looking very pretty…
Ragini : thank u lucky..you too looking very smart…(he smiles)
Sanky : (tease him) lucky you didn’t tell me how m i looking ?
lucky : (glare at him) u r looking good dude…
Sanky : (smile) thanks..same to u..(tease both of them) anyways..matching matching ha..??
raglak saw eo..both blush..but compose and take it easy…
lucky : Ohh ya..wow..ragini we both r wearing white..
ragini : yup lucky…what a co-incident…!!!
Sanky make faces as they were pretending normal..raglak laugh seeing him…
ragini : btw lucky where is Shona..? as i get to know about her..she will be in her jeans & tee..she even don’t like to wear any girlish accessory…then y she is taking so much time..?
lucky : (confuse) i dont know Lado..she never take this much time..in fact she gets ready b4 me sometimes..anyways she told she will come in 5-10 min..
Sanky : (monologue) Ohh god..how much time she will take to come out…i m waiting to see her from morning…plz princess come soon…
trio was talking & laughing..after 7-8 min..Shona come down to parking lot..
she was wearing a beautiful red designer kurti with black leggings…she has left her hair open..she had also ware some matching assasories..she has put light make up..she was looking gorgeous…
Ragini was shocked to see her like this…Sanky look at her and was lost in her beauty…Shona come near them..she was also staring Sanky..they both were having eye-lock..they come back to their senses with loud sound..”THOD”…
poor lucky…can’t handle this shock and fell down…ragsan help him to get up & stand..lucky was not speaking a word also..he was just staring her…
Shona : (smile & call him) lucky..???!!
lucky : (shocked & shouts) hey…who r u..? where is my Shona..? what hv you done with her..? she never ware such kind of cloths..who the hell r u…?
Ragsan laugh seeing him..Shona feel embarrassed…she went in front of him..
Shona : (start beating him) you..lucky…y r u making me embarrassed by doing all this…
lucky : ouchch..Shona..its hurting..ok ok…i accept you are my kiddo only…sorry…(seriously) Shona..today for the 1st time i m seeing u in girlish attire..you are looking really pretty…(tease) now i accept that you are girl…
Shona make cute angry face then smile & hug lucky…
lucky : (whispered in her ear) All this is for your love..your Sanky..m i right..!?? (wink at her) (Shona blush)
ragini : Shona u r looking really very pretty dear..(hug her)
Shona : (smile) thank u so much Lado..i mean Di…u r looking very beautiful…
Shona look towards Sanky…both exchange smile…
Sanky : you are looking gorgeous Shona..
Shona : (smile) thanks & u too r looking good…
Sanky : (smile) (tease her ) Ohhoo toh today miss show off is actually showing of her girl side…not bad..(wink at her)
Shona : (fake anger) don’t tease me you Mr..oversmart…
swasan were doing their cute nokjok..but they were stoped by raglak..
Raglak : (together) Sanky…!! matching matching ha..??
Sanky feel embarrassed as they back fire his teasing on him..whereas Shona didn’t get their teasing and become happy like kid…
Shona : (jump & smile) Ohh wow…Sanky…we both are wearing red & black…(pinch him hard) SAME PINCH…
Sanky : Ouch…Shona..ok ok same pinch…plz..leave me..
Shona leave him and laugh..Sanlakrag smile seeing her innocence…they all get in to the car..sanlak took front and swaragini took back seats..they start going towards restaurant…
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They reached the restaurant.. they took went to their pool side reservation..took their seats & ordered their dinner…they were having fun talking & laughing…
Manager : ladies & gentlemen..i m Mr.Arora, manager of this restaurant…i hv an awesome announcement for you…we are going to play music..you all are requested to join dance floor…but before that i request you all..if anyone of you wants to give special dance performance with your partners then u r most welcome…plz let us know..
now when it is about dance how our Swasanraglak hold themselves on chairs…so they stand up & went near stage…
lucky was about to ask Shona for dance but Shona went near Sanky and drag him to dance floor leaving raglak shocked..they look at eo..Swasan went on stage…
Sanky : (smile) (announced) hello everyone…hello Mr. Arora..myself Sanskar & (point towards swara) she is my friend swara…
Shona : hello everyone…(point towards raglak) they will give special performance of the night..
(smile) plz cheers for my friends Laksh & Ragini…
manager : that’s grate..then lets start the music…(to raglak) stage is all urs now…(everyone shouts & clapped for them )
Raglak were hell shocked by this…they both were glaring at swasan who were smiling innocently at them…as announcement has done they hv to dance now…so…
lucky : (hesitantly) (forward his hand) would u like to dance with me Lado…??
Ragini blush & put her hand on his hand…they went to dance floor & start dancing…
Song : (Movie : Fashion)
Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad )… (2)
[LUCKY HOLD HER ONE HAND & PUT HIS OTHER HAND ON HER WAIST..RAGINI HOLD HIS SHOLDER WITH ONE HAND..THEY START MOVING WITH SONG NOT LEAVING EYE CONTACT WITH EO EVEN FOR A SEC]
Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
[HE MADE HER TWIRRAL AROUND HIM THEN HE MAKE HER TURN & LIFT HER FROM HER HANDS..THEN HE PUT HER DOWN..SHE WENT BACK & WRAP HER ARMS AROUND HIS CHEST TIGHTLY HUGGING HIM FROM BACK..THEY MOVE IN SAME POSITION FOR SOME TIME..]
Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai..
Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi
[HE HOLD HER HAND & PULLED HER TOWARDS HIM & SHE FALL IN HIS ARMS..AT LAST HE WAS HOLDING HER BY HER WAIST..THEY WERE VERY CLOSED..THEY CAN FEEL EO HOT BREATHS]
The song has been completed..but they were in same pause for few minutes..all peoples around also were lost in their beautiful performance..they come back to senses with loud round of applause…
lucky made her stood straight…lucky was strange with his dance as he never get affected so much like this..while Ragini was controlling her blushing…they both smile..and come down of the stage…
Shona : (excitedly hug both of them together) wowwww…you both were soooooooooo amazing…i loved it…
Sanky : yup…it was mindblowing & Romantic performance…(wink at both of them)
Raglak blush..they were very happy with theri dance…but at the same time was angry on swasan…
Ragini : (angry) Sanky, Shona…how can u make such announcement without asking us..!!! ???
Lucky : (glar at them) i m not gonna leave u both for this..you….
he was interrupt by managers words..
manager : wow…that was amazing performance…thank u Mr. laksh & Miss ragini for this beautiful dance..(all clapped for them ) (shouts) wait..b4 u all start dancing..i want to request one more couple to give their performance…n i hv already selected them…its MR. SANSKAR & MISS SWARA.. (to swasan) ya we want you both to dance for us..plz plz come on the stage…(all cheers for them)
Raglak were extrimly happy with this announcement…1 is bz they knew about their friends feelings & 2nd off curse bz swasan were in same situation just like them…
now it was turn of swasan to get shocked…they both look at eo…they know that they hv to perform…
Sanky : (took courage) (forward his hand) May i….???
Shona nodes & give hand in his hand…they went on the stage & start dancing…
{{{SURPRISE : SWASAN DANCE }}}
Song : (movie : Razz 2)
Ooohoo
Baby Come Stand By My Side
Come N Be My Guding Light
O I Will Be What You Want Me To Be
I Will Give All My Love In Whole Of My Life
Soniyo.., O Soniyo..
Tumhein Dekhta Hoon To Sochta Hoon Bas Yehi
Tum Jo.., Mera Saath Do..
Sare Gum Bhola Ke Jee Lu Muskuraake Yeh Zindagi
( Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath
Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat Tu Bas De De Mera Saath )… (2)
[SANKY PUT HIS BOTH HAND ON HER WAIST WHEREAS SHE PUT HER HANDS AROUND HIS NACK…THEY BOTH START MOVING ON SONG WITHOUT TAKING THEIR EYES FROM EO ]
I Get This Feeling Now, I Cannot Wait No Longer
I Know Your Love Will Keep Me Happy
Will Keep Me Stronger
I Get This Feeling Now,I Cannot Live a Larger
I Know Your Loves The Only One What So True
( Raho Mein Tanha Hoon Sath Le Chal Yun
Sang Tere Safar Poora Karu.. )… (2)
Kya Kahun.. Aye Zindagi..
[HE LIFT HER & TWIRRAL AROUND…HE PUT HER DOWN & TURNED HER..HE HOLD HER TIGHTLY FROM HER STOMACH & PUT HIS CHEEN ON HER SHOLDER…SHE FELT HIS HOT BREATH..SHE TIGHTLY HOLD HIS HANDS WHICH WERE ON HER BELLY..]
Tu Hai Meri Saans Rehna Tu Paas Har Ghadi
Tu Dede Mera Saath Tham Le Haath
Chahe Jo Bhi Ho Baat Tu Bas De De Mera Saath
Tu Bas De De Mera Saath…..
[SHE BLUSHED & WENT LIL FAR FROM HIM…HE PULLED HER TO HIM..SHE CRASHED ON HIS CHEST..THEY BOTH WERE VERY CLOSE TO EO & WERE LOST IN EO]
They were still in the same position in their own world of passion..they come back to senses when they heard audience clapping and cheering for them…
they compose themselves..smile and thanks to all..& went towards their table where raglak were waiting for them with naughty smile on their faces…
Ragini : lucky hv u heard abt saying ” you need to pay for all your seens in this birth only ”
Lucky : (tease) ya..correct..Ohh god…Lado its so hot here…ufff…i m feeling like sweating…what a chemistry..ahh..!!!!
Swasan become embarrassed with their comments..they were avoiding eye contacts with eo…but they were jumping inside with happiness after all it was their first dance…
Soon they start behaving normally…they all were pulling legs of eo.. they complete their dinner and get in to the car…1st sanky drop swalak at hotel..then ragini at orphanage…& at last he reached his home…
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@night 11:30 pm….sanky called Shona…
Shona : (Smile) Hello sanky…what’s up ?
Sanky : Hii Shona…i thought to discuss about next step of Mission Unit raglak…
Shona : (seriously) hmmm…sanky i m thinking that we should postpone our next step as of now..bz this Dance reality show is dream place for all of us…
sanky : i was thinking the same…ok so that’s final..i will execute next part of plan after megha audition…btw hv u tried to talk with lucky..??
Shona : Ohh ya..(sad) you know today at lunch, i hv tried to talk with lucky about this but he become very angry..he is not at all ready to accept his love…idiot kahika…!!! 🙁
Sanky : hey….Don’t worry…they will be together soon…you MISS TENSION…!!! 😉
Shona : haa..huh…you again started MR. IRRITATING…
They both ly down on their beds & started their cute nokjok…they don’t realize the time…then they cut the call & doze off…
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after 4 days…Day of mega audition….
There were 48 contestants who were selected in audition round…now out of this 48…only 12 best dancers will be selected…
our swasanraglak are waiting with other contestants for their turns..they hv done enough of practice and are confident about their dance…they all are very excited for their performances…
one by one everyone was giving their best performances…judges comments & result of this round was supposed to given after all the performances…
Sanky ‘s turn : (Movie : Bang Bang)
” ……. Hona hai jo hona hai rahega hoke hi
Hota hai.. jo mill jata hai koyi
Hoga yeh.. hai jaana maine milke tumse hi
Are you feeling it tonight
I am feeling it tonight
Bang Bang, raat bhar baat kar …………”
[He was doing awesome break dance steps..along with cramping…he done moon walk in 4 diff way & give last pause in MJ style…]
Shona’s turn : (Movie : Mohra )
” tip tip barsa pani…pani ne aag lagayi…aag lagi dil me toh…dil ko teri yad ayi..teri yar ayi toh bhiga badan..me kya karu…tip tip barsa pani……………………”
[ she was doing locking & popping along with robotics…she do robo walk…she was catching every single beats..& end by giving pause as if better of robo got down..droping on he knee..]
Ragini’ S turn :
(friends its an awesome marathi song with rocking music on which we can dance like hell)
“apsara aali.. indra puri tun khali. pasarali lali ratna prabha tanu lyali.. ti hasali gali………….”
[She start her dance in lavni starting step taking pallu in her both hand…she use hiphop in between on music…she was dancing with full energy…her expression was outstanding…]
Lucky’s dance : (Movie : ABCD)
“Ek lau hai, sau parchhai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai
Aankhon ne yaadein barsaai hai
Duhai hai, duhaai hai…………….”
[He start with contemporary…he was talking awesome spins & Splits…then he done unbelievable contoson moves…he was giving justice to each words..]
Now it was result time…everyone was sent in pairs…swasanraglak were happy & confident about their performances & eagerly waiting for the results…
Precap : Swasan raglak sift to “Zara nach k dikha” house along with other contestants…lucky realize his love…Sanky getting jealous…
The end
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so friends how was surprise swasan dance..? hope you will like both couple dances…
friends i hv written this part in very bad mood…i hope i hv not made u feel bored with this part ..did u like this…? plz share your views..i m eagerly waiting for your comments…so plz do comments…
One more think i wanna ask you…plz friends give me two names whom u wanna see as winner in this story…
-Shona
-Sanky
-Lado
-Lucky
plz give me 2 names….& also comment about this chapter..
33 Comments
Shona and sanky
sanky n lucky ……….sanky for sure to prove it to his father plzz n episode is superbbb
Shona n sanky winners… n plz make shona jealous. …It will be more fun… actually shona don’t give heed to any guy so wo agar achanak attention degi thn it will be bad. .. I know swasan don’t lyk flirt bt sanky is more frndly than swara of anybody will come to talk to him he will nt bash her lyk swara did.. I know swara did dat bcoz he was showing attitude bt thn also making swara jealous will be more fun…BT story is urs u hhave to take decision. …n abt kissesu were saying in prev chapter … I agree frndly kisses r common
Awesome…… ragini winner so that she get confident and continue her courier in dance and second winner your wish
Winner should be SwaRagini or SwaSan..
Wow nice ….waiting for next part
Sanky to prove his father
It was awesome dear ….it wasn’t boring at all I enjoyed it ……I think shona and lucky …both r the best ..hope for the next episode …I am big fan of swasan also …
The choice is us as it’s ur story ….it’s just my suggestion …
Update asap
Rags and sanskar plsssss
difficult to chose.,.
make all winnerß
if not raglak/ ragsan
Superb dear and sanky and laksh
Sanky to prove his father of his dancing talents and Ragini to boost her confidence,realise her talents and she can do something for the orphanage. If u make Ragini the runners up in the dance reality show then u can make her win in a singing reality show like saregamapa. Anyway its up to u abt the winner. But please make sanky as the WINNER.
U can also make tie if they dance in pairs
They means raglak and swasan
Today u again nailed it dear! !!!….swasan n raglak dance moments were fabulous. ….ur song selection is also very good n connective….
N for the winners I wish sanky to win for sure as he needs to proof his father n for the other u can choose anyone…..
Sanskar and laksh continue waiting for next update
one s sanky bcoz he want to prove his father that he s a good dancer…..other s ur choice…..but I want shona bcoz I like helly a lot….;-)if other s ragini also no pblm 4 me….but my 1st preference shona….then today episode I loved it…ya swasan dance was awesome…..waiting for sankys jealous…..
HeyA!!!! Luv d part…….
I want shona & sanky 2 win..
U choose best songs dear…luv u…:-) 🙂 🙂
Loved Raglak dance and romance ??? r u a professional writer… U ff is perfect… It’s like reading a ff written by a professional writer… Cnt find any flaws in it… Waiting for Raglak moments… Let Ragini and lucky be the winner…
Awesome dear …. loved it a lot ….. mind blowing…. and again I see an outstanding writer in u… make swara and sankar win … plzzzzzz
Superbb dear …. loved it a lot ….. mind blowing…. and again I see an outstanding writer in u… make swara and sankar win … plzzzzzz
Make swasan as winners
Make ragsan winner’s. …plzzzzzz
Awsm yr
Sry Yarr but its very difficult to choose any two bcoz I love them all
Di please make swasan win and by the way what is your real name di and the epi was just great
Awesome epi…eagerly waiting for sanky’s jealousy and ya I want swasan to win but u can make grand finale with couple dance so all four will be winners…btw I was pretty happy after the 192 rating of india but unfortunately we lost…I think u r not in good mood for this and even i was but then i said “chill it’s just a game and we surely will get an opportunity to win and improve that India is the best”…hope u’ll return back in normal mood soon
shona and sanky
Shona should win nd mindblowing episode dear as usual u rockk…
make ragini n sanky as winners n dance of swasan n raglak was superb………abt mega audition performance it was amazing loved it…..u r amazing writer namrata……..
awesome
make sanky win as he could then prove to his dad that dance is good for him