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Ch-17 link :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-17/
Recap : Shona’s decision, Dance face off & Swasanraglak masti….
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CH-18:
Next day all 8 contestants received their new theam of the week…Its parent special week…all need to dedicate dance performance to their parents…
They all were very excited…after all who will loose such opportunity to express their feeling for Parents…they all engaged in dance rehearsals…
Doctor has given permission to Shona for walking…still Dr was not sure about her solo performance…but Shona was confident…moreover she hv support of her buddies…so she know that she can do it…
swasan & raglak has decided that in early morning swasan & then raglak will do rehearsal turn by turn…and at evening all will do it together…
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After swasan were done with their morning rehearsal raglak were doing their practice…Ragini was dancing so gracefully…lucky was looking her..suddenly he notice tears flowing from her eyes…he turn off the music…Ragini stop & look at him pretending to be normal..but no one can hide anything from their lover once…
Lucky made her sat & he also sat besides her..he gave her water to drink…Ragini was holding herself from crying infornt of lucky…
Lucky : (heavy voice) No need to pretend my angel…i know you are thinking about your parents..you can’t hide anything from me…
Ragini : (hug him & cry her heart out) You are right lucky…i hv not even seen them also…they were died in accident when i was 1 year old..after that i m in orphanage only…i m not at all unhappy bz i got my Ma & other family members there who love me so much…(break hug) I hv received motherly love from Ap ma but…i hv never in my life received father love..& everyone says that girls are more closed to fathers..that’s the only thing missing in my life…(cry)
Lucky : (Tears eyes) (cupped her face) Stop crying angel…i can understand your pain bz i hv lost my mom after spending beautiful 12 years with her…it was very hard for me to come back from that shock..i hv not shared this anyone but i hv thought to commit suicide also but i didn’t take any courage for that…plz don’t tell this to Shona also…
Ragini : (shocked) lucky…??!! (hug him) thank god you hv not done anything like that….or else..no no i don’t want to think anything like that…(cry)
Lucky : (smile with tears) but angel…i got my mom back in Shona’s mom…she has taken care of me..she has supported me…she has never done any difference between me & Shona…(hold her hand) and you also don’t worry…now as you are my angel..you will get father’s love…n
Ragini : (smile widely) really…?? i will get my dad…
lucky : (happy to see her smiling) yes my angel..not only one but two…my dad & Shekhar uncle…they will love you so much…they will treat you just like Shona..thy will pampered you like small baby…your all wish will be fulfilled my Lado…
Ragini become very happy & hug him tightly..lucky crasses her back…they break the hug after some time..
Ragini : (smile) lucky, now as bz of you i m going to get what i hv missed in my life…(smile naughtily & went close to him) SO….
Lucky : (smirk) so……
Ragini : (whispers on his lips ) so i will
Lucky : (huskily) (looking at her lips) you will…
Ragini : (loudly) give you share from my ice-cream…
Lucky couldn’t understand for few sce..he thought she will kiss him…Ragini was laughing looking at his expression…
Ragini : (laugh) ha ha ha…Ohh god…lucky…ha ha ha…lol…your expressions are too cute…ha ha ha..lol
Lucky : (smile seeing her laughing) (but act as if he is angry) What is this Lado..you hv not done right…(nautanki) u can’t play with my emotions…
Ragini : (become serious) lucky…i m sorry i was just…(saw his naughty smile & understand he is doing drama ) (change) telling the truth…i m not going to ask sorry..
lucky : (shocked) what…??
Ragini : (fake anger) what else…you dramebazz..you scared me..you idiot…(beat lucky)
Lucky : ouch…ok ok…(with cute puppy face) angel…i m sorry…
Ragini lost in his charm…she could not control herself anymore…she hurriedly lean towards him & packed his lips…she turned other side feeling shy…lucky was surprised & shocked with her move..now he lost his control..
He hold Ragini’s hand & pulled her to him…thy both were very close..he lean on her..looked at her lips & ask permission through eyes..after getting +tive response..he pressed his lips on her..they start kissing eo..1st softly then passionately showing their love for eo…they Brock the kiss..they were breathing heavily…lucky wanted to romance with her..he went to her nack and start kissing her romatically making Ragini moun his name…
Ragini : (moun) lucky…..(blushing) Plz stop now lucky..we hv to do practice…
Lucky : (unwillingly agree) ya that’s true Lado…lets start our practice..(smile naughtily) but i will not leave you afterwards..(wink at her)
Ragini : (blush) who is telling you to leave me…(wink back at him)
She played music and start doing her practice leaving lucky once again surprised…He was happy seeing his angel’s this side…soon he also engaged in his practice…
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Meanwhile in Sanlak room :
Swasan were sitting there…Shona was reading for her CS exam & Sanky was reading for his MBA..they both actually studied for 1 hour..then Shona closed her book..
Shona : uff…enough..now i will read in evening…
Sanky : (also closed his book) me too…
Shona : (make pout) sanky i wanna eat chocolate…you all hv not let me hv even a single one from last week..plz plz let me hv it..plz..
Sanky : (lost voice) Shona plz don’t pout like that…or else…(come back) ok ok my princess lets we both eat..
He take out one silk bubuly from his bag…he went near her & sat besides her very closed to her…he start opening raper…Shona was looking at him like small kid…sanky smile seeing her..he finally opened it..he gave one small pices to her..instead of taking that pices she took whole chocolate & start eating like child..sanky was staring her smilingly…He hv only that small pices while she ate almost full…she finished her eating..her checks, lips, nose tip & hands were covered with chocolates…Shona look at him & realized that she ate without giving him…
Shona : (baby look) woh..i m sorry sanky..actually i used to hv almost 2-3 chocolate per day but i hvn’t hv any from last one week na..so in excitement i forget to share it with you…
Sanky : (smile) no worry my princess..its ok…i hv fully enjoyed the show watching you…
Shona : (blush) sanky..(sigh) thank god you are not upset on me…
Sanky : (smile naughtily) Why should i be upset on you when i can still hv my share of chocolates.
Shona : (confused) what do you mean..i hv eaten whole then how come you……..
Sanky hold her hand which was filled with chocolates..he took her hand to his lips & smile naughtily at her..now she understand his intentions..she blush hard..now sanky can’t control himself…
He start linking & sucking chocolate from her fingers one by one..Shona was blushing…he pulled her more towards him & went to her checks..He kissed her checks & ate chocolate from there…now Shona was breathing heavily…sanky kissed her on her nose tip..
Shona : (moun) Sanky…!!! (closed her eyes)
He received green signal from her with her moun…he loved the way she moun his name…he went to her nack & kissed her sensually…he start kissing & sucking her there…they both were enjoying their first ever romantic movements..
Then he looked at her she was breathing hevenly just like him…he kissed her forehead..then her both checks & at last her chin..He looked at her lips..then at her eyes..Shona got his intentions but she was not yet ready for that..she don’t know how to say no to him..Sanky got his answer..He get apart from her after kissing his checks once again…
Sanky : i m sorry my princess..i didn’t mean to make you uncomfortable..
Shona has not told him anything then also he got her answer…she was surprised & happy..she was overwhelmed by his gesture…at the same time she felt guilty for hurting him…
Shona : (overwhelmed) thank u so much sanky…you understand me so well…(guilty) i m sorry…i didn’t mean to hurt you..actually i m not…
Sanky : (place his finger on her lips) hey princess..you don’t need to give me any expiation..n i m not at all hurt..(change the topic) (naughtily) n anyways i hv enough of my share for today…
Shona blush & hide her face in his chest…he smile & took her in his embrace…they stay still in the same position feeling eo’s love..
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then they brock the hug..washed their hands & face..and sit there talking with eo…
Shona : hey sanky this week theam is just awesome..hena..? i wanna give my best performance after all my mom dad & dp uncle has supported me everytime…
Sanky : (emotional) ya..my mom has also supported me..but i wish my dad would hv also be happy with my dance..
Shona : (hold his hand) (feeling sorry) i m sorry sanky for bringing this topic…i..
sanky : (interrupt) no no Shona its ok dear…its my fate..i can’t change it..(almost in tear) u know even after watching me like this on the show..everyone is loving my dance but still dad hv not told me anything…he hv still not accepted me with my dance…
Shona : (hug him) Sanky don’t worry..when you will come out of the show..he will be the most happiest person of this world..dekh lena….
At that time raglak entered in room & heard Shona’s world..
Lucky : Shona is absolutely right sanky…you will surly received your father support…
Ragini : (sit besides him) and he will start talking with you & loving you…so don’t worry..
Swaraglak : keep smiling dear..
Sanky smile looking them..they all share group hug…Sanky’s phone start ringing…he went & picked up the call…it was SUJATA..
Sanky : (happily) hello mom…how r u..? i was missing you so much…
Swaraglak become happy after knowing its his mom’s call..Shona went near him & put phone on speaker…
[Note : Swasanraglak hv told all the parents & asked them about their relation immediately after their confession..so all the parents know about their love & happily accepted them..They all called eo parents as mom & dad]
Sujata : (fake angry) Juththa kahika…i know you don’t miss me even for once when you are with your buddies…specially my Shona..
Swaraglak : hello Mom..how are u…? not only Sanky but we all r missing u…
Sujata : (become very happy) Me too miss u all so much…last time when u hv come b4 your mega audition.. i hv enjoyed a lot with you all…
Ragini : we also hv enjoyed alot that day..
Shona : mom…i missed your hand made food also..specially that paneer sabji..yummy…i loved it..
Sujata : aww..you found it tasty…thks beta..
Lucky : (flirt) it has to be tasty after all it was made by your beautiful hands..and with lost of love…
Sujata : (blush) Ohh..lucky…
Sanky : (smile)oh god lucky you again started flirting with mom…
Sujata : ok..now listen me..you all are coming home tonight…(firm tone) i don’t want any excuse as i know that you can hv permission to visit home if it is in Mumbai once in 2 weeks…now as two weeks has passed i know you can come home today..
Lucky: (surprised) woho…mom how do you know about all this rules..?
Sanky: yah…we hv not told u about this anytime…?
Ragini : then who told you all this..?
Shona: (like obedient child) ok mom..we will come..how can we say no to you…your words are our command..
Sanraglak looked at her with shocked expression…
Sujata : (playfully) My Shona..you only know to respect the elders..n u all need to learn something from her…ok bubye..c u all at dinner…tc..bless u…
All : ok..bubye mom…
They looked at Shona suspiciously….Shona act normal..
Shona : what..? why r u looking at me like this…(try to escapes) woh..i need to do one urgent call..c u guys soon..
Lucky : (stand infornt of her) wait my kiddo…if it is that much urgent then call from here only…
Ragini : (stand near lucky) ya..we don’t hv any problem with it…
Sanky : (stand other side of lucky) and we promise that we will not disturb you also..my princess..
Shona smile nervously looking at them..she thought now she can’t escape & they seems lil angry…
Shona : (accept & speck in one breath) ok fine..i was missing my ma..so i only informed mom about this rules…(make her cutest face ever) i really want to meet her…
Sanraglak melt seeing her cute expression…all hug her together…
Sanky : aww..don’t be upset my princess…
Lucky : Ohh my kiddo is missing her mom…
Ragini : don’t worry Shona we will go there for sure…
Shona : (monologue) wow..Shona u r genius..you easily escapes from their scolding..infact they are consoling you…u r the best Shona..(smile)
Screen pause..they all were hugging..sanlakrag were having sympathy look while Shona was smiling naughtily…
Precap : All at Sanky’s home….D3 team come to visit the contestants..
The end..
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Friends plz tell me how was the epi…? did you like swasan & raglak romance…? their emotional moments..? i hope its not boring one…plz share your views..i m waiting for your comments..plllllllzzzzzzzzz do comments..