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Note :
I m sorry if i hv disappointed any of u with D3 team sense…but fact is that i hv not seen even a single epi of that serial…then also i tried to write something on some of your request…
Moreover, i m managing writing this parts with lots of difficulties bz of my hectic schedule…
My exam is going to start from 20th April…So i can write this till 10th April max…
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Ch-21 link :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-21/
Precap : swasan & raglak romance & their masti with D3 team…
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Ch-22 :
Now only six contestants were left in the competition & their future in the show will decide by public voting..so these week some old season contestants were going to dance with this season’s contestants…
So for that Salman, Dharmesh sir, Raghav, Bhavna, Mohina & Sanam has come..pairs were like this…
Shona – Salman
Ragini – Sanam
Lucky – Raghav
Sanky – Dharmesh sir
Kabir – Mohina
Raj – Bhavna
They all were very happy with this as they were going to perform with their favorite dancers…specially lucky & sanky were extremely happy to get a chance for performing with their idles…
Swasan & raglak with their new dance partners were there in the rehearsal hall…after some practice they all sat talking & having fun…
Sanky : ( happy) i m extremely happy to meet u all….i hv learnt many things watching your performances…
D sir : thanks dear..we all r also very happy to meet u…there is a very tough competition among u four…u all are fantastic dancers…
Lucky : u know me & Shona used to download your every performance & just try to do each & every steps just like u…
Salman : thanks lucky…Shona..i hv also learned like this when i was at initial stage…it actually helps us so much…
Shona : ya..we still hv all your awesome dance collections…practically speaking u 4 & some other contestants are just our roll models…
Ragini : i am also fan of your dancing…i just loved watching u all performing…u r inspiration for many peoples…
Sanam : arre thks Shona..Ragini…but i must say that now on you all are going to be roll models & inspiration of other dancers..
Raghav : (in his baba ramdev style) aree..Wah Wah Wah…
Salman : (laugh) here comes the Raghav baba…
All sat around him….he start his acting…
Raghav : are..wa.wa..beta swara…beta laksh…u r doing very good stunts…it seems u r wearing jumping shoz 24/7…(Ragsan laugh on them)
Raghav : arre..wah..wah..wah…y u both are laughing ha…(to Sanky) when one of u is having bone problem & (to Ragini) other is stomping foots on floor everytime..
All laugh on his dialog…& at last…
Raghav : balako..don’t you think u all were becoming senty….i can’t handle all this…y u r making it complicated just say it simply na that we all are the one of the best dancers of India… 😉
All laugh & hugged eo…they again started their practices..they become very good friends..Swasanraglak learned many new things from them..finally the performance day has come…
Salman & Shona :
“Lahu munh lag gaya
Lahu munh lag gaya
Soya tha nas nas mein
Ab ye jag gaya
Aye lahu munh lag gaya
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Bachke sab se lab se lab
Ye rag se rag gaya
Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya ”
(THEY START DANCING IN PASO-DOBLE STYLE..IN PERFORMANCE SHONA WAS BULL & SALMAN WAS MASTER…THEY DO OUTSTANDING LIFTS & STEPS)
Raghav & Lucky :
“Aankhon ke panno pe
Maine likha tha sau dafaa
Lafzon mein jo ishq tha
Hua naa hothon se bayaan
Khud se naraaz hoon
Kyun be-aawaaz hoon
Meri khamoshiyan hain sazaa
Dil hai yeh sochta
Phir bhi nahi pataa
Kis haq se kahun bataa
Ke Main Hoon Hero Tera ”
(THEY START DANCING ON THE CROCROZ STYLE, I MEAN SLOW MOTION & ANIMATION…THEY BOTH WERE DOING SOME OUT STANDING STEPS..)
Sanam & Ragini :
“Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina…”
(THEY START DANCING IN CONTEMPORARY STYLE…THEY BOTH WERE PERFORMING VERY EMOTIONALLY…THEIR EXPRESSIONS WERE FABULOUS..)
D sir & Sanky :
“Kudiye ni tere, brown rang ne.
Munde patt te ni sare mere town de
Kudiye ni tere, brown rang ne.
Munde patt te ni saare mere town de [2x]
Koi kam utte jaave na
Roti paani khaave na
Gori gori kudiya nu
Koi muh laave na
Kudiye ni tere brown rang ne..”
(THEY BOTH STARTED DANCING ON LYRICAL HIPHOP…THEY WERE PLAYING WITH BEATS BY THEIR HEART TOUCHING MOVES..THEY PERFORM JUST MINDBLOWING)
All performance were completed..results were going to declared on next week…so they need to wait..they hv got awesome complements from judges & their seniors…all seniors left wishing all the contestants all the best…they hv enjoyed the whole week & performance very much…
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Next day…morning…
As usual Shona woke up at 5:30 for her routine practice…she come back to her room at 8:30..at that time Ragini come out of the washroom after getting ready…
Ragini : (smile) good morning kiddo…done with your morning practice…
Shona : (smile back) good morning Di…yup done..
Ragini : (tease) Shona i hv seen sanky becoming impatient to come near you in last week..but he couldn’t due to seniors presence…poor guy…
Shona : (blush) Di…you started in morning only…(tease back) btw lucky’s condition was lil more poor than sanky..may be he was missing his wild cat..(wink at her)
Ragini : (blush) Shona..i share this things with you that dosen’t mean you will tease me…now on i will not share anything with u…(sat on bed & make faces)
Shona : (smile)arre..my sweet Di..i was just kidding..ok fine..i will not tease u…
she start tickling her…they both do pillow fight & laugh whole heartedly…then they ly on bed besides eo breathing heavily due to their fighting…
Shona : (become serious) Di…? Can i ask u something…?
Ragini : (confused) ha Shona…y u become serious suddenly..? What happened…?
Shona : (get up & hesitantly) Do u think i m hurting sanky by not letting him kiss me…?( teary eyes)
Ragini : (sat besides her) (try to make her understand) Shona..he loves u so much…and u r not at all hurting him…its all about trust & comfertness…i hv let lucky kissed me bz i trust him & i m comfortable with him…i knew that he will not cross his limits anytime..(cupped her face) it doesn’t mean that u don’t trust sanky or love him…but u r not comfortable may be due to fear…that’s it…it happens with everyone..moreover u r 1 year & 4 months younger than me…(hold her hand) most imp you both are connected with eo by your hearts & souls…its the main thing…nd not physical relation..(wipe her tears) so now just stop crying my kiddo…don’t think about this much…ok..?
Shona : (smile with teary eyes) thank u so much Di…i m glad i got u in my life…bz we can share anything with sisters which we can’t share with mothers…today you hv made me understand about true relation very easily…(hug her)
Ragini : (smiles) anytime kiddo…i m always there for u…ok now u go take bath & get ready…i m going to sanlak room…u locked the door from inside…bubye…
Shona : (smile) bubye Di…
Ragini left….Shona locked the door, take her cloths & went into washroom..
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Ragini entered into sanlak room…sanky was doing his study of MBA while lucky has just come out of the washroom after getting ready..
Ragini : Good morning lucky…anything special today..u got up so early…?
Lucky : (hug her tightly) gm angel..nothing special..just wanted to meet u soon…
They were still hugging very tightly…sanky was watching them with smile…lucky plant kiss on her shoulder while hugging…sanky smile naughtily…
Sanky : (teasing) Ahhm…ahhhm…lucky Lado…i think u both r forgetting that i m sitting here…
Raglak Brock the hug…Sanky smirked at them…Ragini blush but lucky smile…
Lucky : (tease back) As if u care about our presence when my kiddo comes in front of you…ha..(raise his brow)
Sanky : (seamlessly) yup…i don’t care if its just u n Lado when i wanna hug her….(wink him)
Lucky : (same tone) than y should i care…(smirk) hey.. i think we should do hugging competition…lets c who will win…me & my angel or u & ur princess…
Sanky : awesome idea dude…i will love to take part in such competitions…
Both sanlak smile & share hi fi…Ragini was shocked listening them..
Ragini : Ohh god..hv some shame guys..(hug sanky) good morning dear…subhe subhe reading n all..ha..not bad…
Sanky : gm Lado…yup i hv to do it now..afterwards i will not get time..due to Shona & dance & u both…
Ragini : hmm..(serious tone) hey i wanna tell u one imp thing…Shona….
Sanky : (worried) what happened to her..? Is she fine..?
Lucky : (tensed) ya tell us fast angel…my kiddo is ok na…
Ragini : calm down guys…she is fine actually she was upset feeling guilty………..(she told them everything)
Lucky : (emotional) thank u so much angel for making her understand…i m glad she got u as her Di…i don’t know how i would hv make her understand all this thing if u were not there..she is such an idiot thinking about all this…
Sanky : (teary eyes) ya..u r right lucky…she is an idiot…btw thanks Lado…
Ragini : (angry) u guys r mad..u r talking as if she is nothing to me..common guys she is my lil sis..u don’t need to thks me…its my duty to help her..
Sanlak : (hold their ears) sorry..Shona’s sweety Di..(Ragini smile)
Sanky : ok now…i m going to meet her…bye..
Raglak : Bubye….(he left from there)
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As soon as sanky left…lucky hugged Ragini from back….she put her hands on his hand which was on her belly…
Ragini : (taunt) you were emotional sometime b4 n now u r ready for this…
Lucky : (packed her nack) ya..i was but..i know that sanky will handle her…so now i want my good morning kiss b4 going for dance rehearsal…
Ragini blush..lucky kissed her check from back..then he remove her hair from right shoulder & start kissing there..she tightened her grip on his hands..she turned to him..they both looked at eo & leaned…they kissed passionately for sometime…then hugged eo…
Lucky : i love u angel…
Ragini : i love u too lucky…
Then they Brock the hug & went to rehearsal hall for their dance practice….
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Sanky knocked…after sometime Shona opened the door…he went inside & locked the door…they both greet eo gm & hugged…
Shona : (hesitantly) Sanky i wanna tell u something….
Sanky : (cupped her face) but before that i wanna make u understand one thing clearly..in only one thing i can’t compromise is that i just want hugs from you…other than that u r not at all hurting me..i can wait for you to get comfortable with me forever…
its NOT that..
” I LOVE U BECAUSE I NEED U ”
( main tumse pyar karta hu bz me tumne pana chahta hu )
But it is that…
” I NEED U BECAUSE I LOVE YOU ”
(main tumhe pana chahta hu bz me tumse pyar karta hu..)
They again hugged eo..Shona was overwhelmed after hearing him..bz he has said a very big thing in that two tiny sentences…now she know she trust him & she is also comfortable with him…
so she Brock the hug…sanky was looking at her..she tip tose on her feet…she kissed his both the checks & then hurriedly packed his lips…& turned back…
Sanky touched his own lips..he was surprised…shocked…happy…he make her turned towards him…they both looked at eo..
Sanky : (whispered) Shona…?!! I..i mean…
Shona : (shyly) u can sanky…(looked down)
Sanky become very happy & pinned her to the wall…he went closed to her…he was just about to kiss her…when..
Shona : (shyly) Sanky…i wanna tell u something…
Sanky : (look at her) hmmm
Shona : (hesitantly) woh…actually…
Sanky : tell me Shona…if u r not ready then no need to do this…(he was about to go back)
Shona : (hold him) (speak in one breath) woh….i don’t know how to kiss…?
Sanky : (widen his eyes) what…? (unbelievable) this was the reason u were not ready till now..(laugh) i mean seriously..u r crazy..
Shona : (pushed him) (make angry face) hey don’t laugh…its just i dont know how..
Sanky : (interrupt) ya ya…as if i hv done PHD in this…duffer no one knows to do it at their 1st time…
Shona : whatever…i don’t wanna talk with u…bye
She was about to go when he pulled her closed to him & pressed his lips on her…he start kissing her passionately…soon she also start following his lead…sanky smile in kiss when she start responding to him…they both were enjoying their 1st kiss…they brock when they were out of breath…Shona hugged him tightly…sanky hugged her back…they both smile & whispered I love u to eo…then they compose themselves & left for rehearsal hall to join raglak…
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At breakfast time..@ Hall
Swalak come down stair first & start going towards dining area..no one else was present there bz breakfast time was after half & hour….
Shona : hey..lucky stop…one min…
Lucky : (confused) what happened kiddo…
Shona : (smile naughtily) don’t u think we hv not done what we used to do everyday at this time…??
Lucky got her intentions…he also smile back naughtily…they both looked into eo’s eyes..took their positions in standing besides eo facing towards dining area…at that time ragsan come down & looked at them confused…
Shona : ready…
Lucky : steady…
Both : Go…
And they both start racing towards dining table…this hall was bigger than their house..lucky was lil ahead then Shona…and as Shona don’t like to lose, when they both entered into the dining area, she pushed him lil making him losing his balance…she touched the dining table first happily…
Ragsan also come there…they saw Shona giving winning look to lucky who was sitting on the floor fuming in anger…
Shona : (happily) yeh i won…you lose lucky..as usual…
Lucky : (stand up) (taunt angrily) ya u won by cheating…you CHEATER…
Shona : (angry) hey you LOSER..don’t call me cheater..
Lucky : (angry) huh…u call me loser…now i will call u cheater only…Shona is a cheater..cheater…cheater…cheater….
Shona : (very angry) shut up you loser lucky..
Swalak looked at eo angrily…they start beating eo…just like we do while fighting with our sibling & friends..they both were slapping & smacking eo…on hands & legs & shoulders…pulling eo’s hairs..
Ragsan were shocked watching their fighting….they hv seen them teasing eo, doing small cute fights…but they hv not seen them doing seriously fighting like this..they immediately ran to them…
Sanky : (hold lucky from back) Shona..lucky stop it u both…
Ragini : (hold Shona from back) are u both gone made…? How can u beat eo like this…? Just stop it…
Sanky was pulling lucky & Ragini was pulling Shona from back making them apart so that they can’t hit eo…
Shona : (angrily) leave me Di…today i will not leave this lucky…how dare he call me cheater.
Lucky : (angrily) sanky..leave me…she pushed me..& won the race by cheating…& moreover she called me loser…
Ragsan : (come infornt of them ) (shouts angrily ) STOP IT u both…I said just STOP IT u both…ENOUGH now…
Swalak stop seeing their anger…still glaring eo…
Ragini : (scold lucky) how can u beat her like this…r u gone mad…what if she won the race..can’t u be happy seeing her happy…she is right u r loser…
Lucky was listening her looking down at floor..As soon as she complete her sentence…
Shona : (shouts) Di…you can’t scold him like this & call him loser…infact you should take his side rather than taking my side…bz you love him & he loves u…nd it was my fault not his..
Ragsan mouth fall wide open…they were hell shocked…
Sanky : (strict tone) ya..you are right Shona…it was your fault…why u do racing with him if you can’t play fairly…lucky is right you r a cheater…
Shona looked down after hearing him…lucky can’t see her like this…
Lucky : (shouts) enough sanky…i will give u tight punch..if u will say a single words against my kiddo…how can u blame your princess…it was my fault…i should hv taken it easy…
Lucky went near Shona and hugged her…she was crying & he was also having tears in his eyes…
Ragini : (whispered to sanky ) when we come they were fighting like they will kill eo…
Sanky : (same tone) we made them apart with lots of difficulties…
Ragini : Shona scold me when i took her side & scold lucky for hurting her…
Sanky : ya and lucky scold me no no warned me when i took his side & scold Shona…
Ragini : nd after scolding us…now they r…
Sanky : crying & hugging eo…
Ragsan : (looked at eo) they are unbelievable…(they looked at them)
Shona : i m sorry lucky…i should hv not done cheating…it was against our rules…sorry (hold her ears)
Lucky : no no kiddo…i should hv not called u cheater…i should be happy with your winning….i m sorry…(hold his ears)
Shona : no lucky..sanky has also said rightly na..it was my fault…
Lucky : no way..Ragini was right…it was my mistake kiddo…
Shona : lucky..it was my fault..so i will ask apology…
Lucky : no..my kiddo..i m telling u na..it was my fault…so i m sorry…
Shona : no my fault…
Lucky : no its my fault…
Ragsan looked at eo after seeing them…they went near them…
Ragsan : (shouts) it was our fault ..but now plz stop it.. will u…?
Swalak : (together) i m sorry sanky…sorry Lado…for scolding u without your faults & troubling u…
Ragini : (smile) its ok …u both are very cute…can do fight with eo but can’t let anyone scold other one…
Sanky : ya..Lado is right…u both are just crazy but at the same time very lovable…
Swalak : (together) just like u both..
Ragini : Ohh plz…we don’t fight like this…we just tease eo…nd ya he sometimes irritate me…
Sanky : huh…when i hv irritate u..? Its you who always ready to attack me by teasing me…
Ragini : (angry) don’t lie Sanky…bz fact is that u r the one who trouble me al the time with your philosophic lectures…
Sanky : (angry) Lado..i m warning u now stop it…and accept that u trouble me more…
Ragsan start fighting…Swalak smile & share hifi…they start laughing…Ragsan stop their fight hearing their laugh & realize what they hv just done..they all laugh & share group hug…after that..
Shona : (hug her) i love u Sanky….
Sanky : (hug back) i love u too my princess..
Lucky : (hug her) i love u angel…
Lado : (hug back) i love u too lucky…
They were hugging eo…after sometime they brock the hug & sat on the dining table as it was time for breakfast…Nikhil has come there when both couple hug eo & said i love u to eo…he become angry…
Nikhil : (monologue) Ohh no..my dought was right…Ragini & lucky loves eo…sh*t..i can’t let this happened…i want Ragini in my life…i hv to do something to break their relationship….
Screen split in Swasanraglak smiling face & Nikhil’s angry face…
Precap : Nikhil try to create mu between raglak…& shocking elimination
The end.
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