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Friends…
Initially in introduction part i said that i will wind up this story in 7-8 part max…but now i m here posting my 28th part…i m feeling so happy..its become possible just bz of your such wonderful support….i m glad you all are loving my ff very much…though i m not at all writer…
I m happy that Some of u hv included my ff in your analysis of best ffs… 🙂 i m really thank full to all the readers & supporters of this story…
Thank u so much for your best wishes for my exams…
After this ch..i don’t know when i will post next one…bz i m going to take breck of my exam…nd i will definitely try to write in between brecks if possible…so before taking breck…
I m giving you all…a EXTRA LONG CHAPTER…
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Ch-27 link :
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-27/
Recap : Swasanraglak, Barun,Sanaya,Drashti, Arjun & Kanchi masti…fights…cricket match…
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Ch – 28 :
Arjun’s team need to chase 72 runs target…Drasti team took their place in ground & Barun & kabir come to bet 1st…Barun was on strikes..Kanchi was going to do 1st over…………
She throw the 1st ball..nd its a four…2nd its a six…3rd its another four…4th they took 2 runs…5th no run..6th another 4…
Arjun’s team was celebrating & cheering…Drashti & team were looking sad & upset…kabir was on strike now sanky come for the second over..
1st ball no run…2nd ball kabir got catch out…finally they do some celebration…now Shona come for betting…she was on strike…
Sanky throw 3rd ball..she couldn’t hit it…so no run…sanky smile at her…
she become nervous & start chewing her lips & making them wet in nervousness…it was pure innocent act…but unfortunately sanky notice it & lost his focuse..
he throw a very slow ball & Shona hit it…nd Sanaya drop catch & it went for 4…Shona start jumping…sanky looked at her..
She again was doing same with her lips…he couldn’t control himself from looking her wet pouting lips..she again hit for 4 runs…
Sanky : (scold himself) Ohh god…sanky focuse yar..don’t looked at her lips..i know she is doing it unintentionally but i m having urge to kiss her..aahh..stop it…looked at stumps not her…yah…
At last ball he don’t see at her at all…& throw the ball…& yah she is out…sanky smile…she do sad pout..sanky’s breathing got fast looking at her innocent acts..
Third over was of Sanaya…Barun was on strike & Arjun was other side…both Barun & Arjun made runs trough fours & six..she was very sad…other team was celebrating…
Arjun : (taunting) someone was speaking that they are the best…hahahaha…what a jock it was..
Drashti : (angry) you..do concentrate on game…& shut your mouths..
Barun : (laugh) Ohh..someone is getting frustrated her…
Sanaya : (glaring) game is still on..u r not winners yet…so no need to happy…
Drashti throw her 1st ball…Arjun hit six…2nd 1 run…3rd Barun hit 4…5th again 4…and at last ball Barun got catch out…lucky do awesome catch…
Sanky : (happy) yeh…you guys be ready to lose bz its lucky’s turn now & u still need 8 runs to win…he will not let u do it…yeh..
Ragini : (coming for bet) we will see sanky…shut up now…
Ragini took strike position…she nervously smile at lucky making her cutest face…lucky smile seeing her & decide not to let her out…so he throw normal ball which passed by stumps…
On 2nd ball he let her take one run…on 3rd ball Arjun was on strike..4th no run…5th no run..
Lucky looked at ragini who was looking very upset…he looked at Shona she was so sad…he can do anything for his Angel & kiddo to bring smile on their faces..
so he throw very slow ball and Arjun hit six..
Jai : (excitedly) So Its a TIE…
Drasti & other team mate was upset…Shona & ragini smile brightly…lucky smile seeing them..sanky come near him…
Sanky : (angry) What was that lucky ?
Lucky : (nervous) woh nothing sanky…its just bad delivery..
Sanky : (laugh) abbe idiot…i know y u did it…i hv understand your intention on your 1st ball only..nd i m happy u did that…
They both looked at Swaragini who were laughing & jumping…
Snalak : (smile) We can do anything to see this smile of their faces…
There Swaragini also understand that lucky did it to make them happy…they smile looking at sanlak & mount I love u…sanlak nodes & reply in the same way…
All team members stand in front of eo…they were now looking eo with normal expression..
Kanchi : so guys we played match to decide who are right…
Sanky : as it is tie… Shona : so no one is winner & no one is loser…
Lucky : that means both were…. Ragini :right as well as wrong…
Arjun : (accept) Ohhk i agree that i could do thay step perfectly to prove me infornt of them…so some credit goes to them also…
Drashti : (sorry expression) no i should hv not made fun of you…i should hv thought that it was not at all easy step…
All say sorry to eo & share hug…they all sat on grass talking with eo making circle…then at last they all start dancing….
” jumme ki rat hai jumme ki bat hai..Allah bachaye muje tere PYAR se…”
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2 days passed
Its Sunday night 11:50 pm…
Swasanraglak were in the Swaragini room..talking & having fun with eo….
Sanky’s phone ring for 5th time from last 45 mins…he was yelling on other side person everytime…but this time he cuts the call…making angry face…
Shona : What happened sanky..? Who was that…? Y u cut the call…?
Sanky : (frustrate) what else should i do yar…my clg best friend Jay…is calling me BY USING DIFFERENT NUMBERS after every 15 mins & irritating me…i m gonna kill him for this…
Again his phone ring…it was unknown no..sanky cut in anger…after 3-4 min again it rings..another unknown no & he cuts the call…
Poor guy was so much frustrated that he didn’t see that its 12:00 o’clock now …b4 Swaraglak wish him..again unknown no flash on his screen…sanky loose his temper…
Sanky : (yelled without listening at other side) Abbey Kaminey…sale idiot…don’t u hv other work…y the hell u r irritating me…(angry expression) U mor*n…i m gonna kick you hard…now listen me carefully if i will see your bl**dy call again then very next sec u will be in hell…got that clear you useless stupid irritating creature…
Other side person : (shouts in anger) SANSKAR………….
Sanskar drop his phone on bed after listening that angry scream…he was shivering…ya it was RP who called to wish him….
Lucky put phone on loud speaker..
RP : (angry) is this the way to talk with your father…don’t you hv manners & shame how to respect elders……………………(continue scolding) (sanky was making sad & baby faces after listening to him) (his tongue got steal) (he was closing & opening his eyes on rp’s words) (biting his nails)
RP cut the call without wishing him..& he make baby crying face..
Ragini : Ohh no…dad cut the call without wishing u…but u should hv checked it b4 speaking na…
Shona : (checking the no) arre sanky its dad num..may be your call setting got changed so only num was flashing & not name…
Sanky : (baby face) my birthday start with yelling & scolding of my dad… 🙁
Lucky : (sympathy) Ohh poor u..never mind…anyway..(hug him) Happy birthday dear…
Then Swaragini also with him..they give him his birthday gifts & birthday card which was made by them…sanky got emotional seeing that handmaid card…he hugged all of them & said i love you to them…
they dance on happy birthday to you song…finally sanky come out of troma of that phone…they ate chocolates…nd then raglak went to sanlak room…swasan ly on bed.
Swara kissed him on his lips for few mins & again wished him happy birthday…he was very happy… They both doze off in eo’s arms…
Around 2:30 pm…
Sanky woke up by sound of scary songs…he was not afraid..get up on the bed to check from where it was playing…but the sound was coming from diff diff areas of room…now he got bit nervous… He woke up Shona…
Shona : (sleepy) what happened sanky…we will talk tomorrow..gn..
She was about the ly but he shake her…
Sanky : (nervous) Shona..can u hear some scary songs playing in our room…?
Shona : (open her eyes widely) (try to listen ) (confused) No sanky…nothing is playing..its silence her.. May be your ears are playing…now sleep & let me sleep…(She slept)
Sanky : (murmur) She couldn’t hear the song but its still playing from diff diff places…does it mens (scared) GHOST…(assure himself) no no sanky there is nothing like.ghost nd all…now ignore it & sleep…
He ly besides Shona…he can still hear that scary sounds.. he cuddle her tightly in fear…it continue for 1 hour..then he doze off with scared face…
@ 5:30 am..
Shona went for practice…sanky was sleeping…he woke up by sound of alarm…he was not willing to get up…he turn off it..after 10 min another alarm play on table…he cover his ears with pillow…but sound was loud so he get up..went near table & turn off it…but by this time he was woken up…& he didn’t find Shona..so he thought to get ready & join her in dance practice…
He went to the washroom to take shower…he stand under shower & turned it on…& he freezed…it was icey cold water…that to in morning 5:45 am…
with lots of difficulties he turn the shower nob off & wear his cloths after drying himself with shivering hand…he was not able to think anything…he come out of the washroom with shocked face…he was litterly shivering & immediately went inside the blanket…& made crying baby face.
Sanky : (sadly) what a birthday yar…?!!! 🙁
After sometime when he become normal he went to RH…Shona again wished him..& give morning kiss to him…then raglak also joined them..then his day went normal..he asked apology from ram & at last rp forgave him…
@ 3:45 PM :
servant come to their room with one parsal on sanky’s name…then he left…
Lucky : (excited) wow…birthday gift…who has sent it ha…?
Ragini : (smile) its looking very very nice…common sanky open it up fast…
Sanky : (check box) yar name hs not written on it…
He thinks it may be prank of Swasanlak…so he gave that parsal to
Shona for opening it…
Shona : (casually) sure yar..y not…i love to open gifts..
She start unwraping the gift paper & it was one box……..
Lucky : (excited) wow…its i-phone 6s….awesome…
Sanky become extremely happy & start jumping & dancing…like mad..
Shona : (happily) sanky plz stop it & open it…
Sanky : (come running near her) yah..yah…let me get that in my hand…yahoo…
He hurriedly & excitedly open the box &………..it was totally empty…..
He become sad & sat like a child from whom someone has snatched the chocolate…
Ragini : Ohh my god its totally empty… Lucky : Ohh no…i think sanky someone has done prank on you..
Shona : (hug him) its ok dear…we will purchase it after this show…don’t be sad…
He was still sitting like kid pouting his lips…swalakrag console him & made him engaged in dance…
@ 7:30 pm :
Swaragsanlak & kabir were in the hall…to celebrate sanky’s birthday…..a beautiful cake was placed on table…sanky blew air to.candles & & cut the cake…all laugh & clapped for him..& sing happy birthday song…
he took one small pice of cake in his hand & was about to put in Shona’s mouth but Shona took that pices from his hand b4 he made her eat & put it the whole pices in his mouth….
After few sec sanky’s eyes widened in shocked…he start coughing badly…all start laughing seeing him…he looked angrily towards them…
It was salty cake…
Sanky : (angrily) i m not gonna leave u idiots…dam it…oh no…it was too salty…i m feeling like vomiting…
All stop laughing…Shona took out new fresh cake…& replaced it with previous one…she took one pices from it & gave to to sanky…he refused..so she gave it to lucky…he happily eat….then Shona Ragini kabir also took one one pices & ate…after checking every thing is safe, sanky finally ate the cake….his salty mouth become sweet due to Yummy cake….
Then they throw cake in eo…& do some masti & dancing…..they all enjoyed a lot…
Shona turn on the hall tv & attached her phone to it…she played one vedio…sanky widen his eyes in shocked…& gave death glare to swalakrag…
In vedio :
1st sanky’s phone conversation with RP… 2nd sanky hearing some scary sounds in night… 3rd Alarm were playing 2-3 times.. 4th sanky coming out of the washroom with his shocked face & shivering.. 5th sanky jumping & dancing seeing i-phone box…& his upset & sad expression after opening it.. 6th & last…his expression after eating salty cake…
Vedio ends…
Swaraglak & kabir laugh after watching the vedio…They looked at sanky who was boiling in anger..he start beating them & throwing things on them…
Sanky : (angrey) Salo kamino….how can u do this to me…? Nd that to on my birthday…
Lucky & kabir made him sit on couch & hold his each hands so that he can not beat them…
Shona : (attitude) It was revenge Mr. Kapoor…revenge…
Ragini : (same) yah…we hv not forgotten what you hv done with is b4 few days…so it was just TIT for TAT…
Lucky : (smirk) nd which day will be better then today for torturing you….
Sanky : (angry) how did you do that…? You dramebazzo…I even don’t get signal doubt on you…
Shona : (start explaining)
{friends try this out on your close once’s birthday…u will hv blast of fun.. I can say it from personal experience 😉 }
They only hv told his friend to call him & irritate…they hv deleted ram’s no from his phone so that it flash as no only…..
They hv put 5 small phones in diff places of room…setting their ringtones in scary one…raglak were calling one after another call so that sound come from everywhere & u can not find the phones…
Shona has set all alarms…& when she went to take shower..she put some ice which can not melt easily opening the shower head…to give him cold shower…
RP has sent his birthday gift last night only…they took phone & all other things out & again wrap empty box in gift paper…
& last salty cake…
Lucky : so in this way we gave u punishment…
Ragini : for your pranks on us..and..
Shona : took our revenge from you..
They start laughing loudly holding their stomach…sanky start them with anger..all try to control their laugh seeing him..but soon he also joined them…
Sanky : (laugh) Ohh gosh…it was dam funny….u all hv troubled me to the hell yar…i can never forget this birthday in my entire life…btw whose plan was this…?
Raglak : (pointing to Shona) Your Princess 😉
Kabir : (surprised) Ohh god…such a dangerous planning…
Raglak & kabir laugh…sanky glare Shona…She avoid eye contact with sanky..they enjoyed for sometime..Ragini give him his i-phone gifted by RP..then they went to their respective room after taking dinner…
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Swasan went to Swaragini room…they opened the door…sanky turn on the lights & surprised to see full room decorated with balloons & candles & flowers…
Sanky : (happy) wow…princess its beautiful…i just loved it…when did…
He looked for Shona but she was not there…then she come out of washroom wearing Hot red one piece dress which was till her knee..another surprise for him…but not completed yet…Shona plays the song….
“Ang laga de re Mohe rang laga de re Ang laga de re Mohe rang laga de
re Main toh teri joganiya Tu jog laga de re Jog laga de re Prem ka rog
laga de re Main toh teri joganiyaan Tu jog laga de re..”
She starts dancing on that song around sanky giving him another shock Of the day…she was moving her hands, waist, legs in sensual way…
At first he was shoked & feel nervouse seeing his princess bold step..he was standing like statute & just staring her…but soon he come back to his sense..
He hold her hand and pulled her to him making her crash on his chest..he start dancing holding her…he packed her nack for some time..she closed her eyes..she also kissed him on his shoulder & take off his tee…& looked at his shirtless hot body for the 1st time…
He smirk & she blush…then he twirral her around him…he hugged her from back putting his hand on her belly…they both moves along with music in same position for sometime…
They dance very closely giving eo kisses & packs…he picked her up in his arms when song ends…he place her on bed…they both looked at eo & start kissing eo passionately for sometime…they broke the kiss when they were in lack of oxygen..
Shona : (breathing hard) i hv tortured you like anything from last night…so i wanted to compensate it…(blush) nd i thought to give you good surprise…did u liked it…??
Sanky : (happy) r u talking about liking i just loved this… (smirk ) If after playing pranks on me you will compensate like this then i m ready to become your victim everytime…
Shona : (blush & playfully smack) sanky…this special treatment is bz..its your birthday today…u will not hv it everytime…
Sanky : (smile & paked her lips) this is the bestest birthday of my life princess…thank u so much for making this so special…i love u soooooooooo much…
Shona : (blush) i love you too my prince…
Sanky roll off from her & took her in his tight embrace…they talked for some more time & doze off after having such a adventurous day….;)
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Meanwhile, Raglak come to sanlak room & locked the door…
Ragini : (laugh) wow…we hv blast of fun today…i hv totally enjoyed it very much…
Lucky : (excitedly) Ohh god..what a adventurous day it was…specially for sanky…poor guy…(sadly) don’t you think angel we did little extra…after all it is his birthday…
Ragini : (smile) don’t worry lucky…this birthday will be his best birthday…bz the way Shona planned to trouble him..she has also planned to please him…
Lucky : (confused) what do you mean angel..? (she told him everything)
Lucky : (surprised) Ohh god…i can’t beliv my kiddo is going to do this…(smile) aww sanky is dam lucky yar… (looked at Lado) i wish i would also hv such romantic night…(pout)
Ragini glare him angrily & went to washroom to change her cloths…lucky smack his forehead…
Lucky : (scold himself) idiot…what was the need of speaking it…now see u made her angry……
When he was besy in his self talk…Ragini come out of the washroom…..lucky looked at her..& stand up from bed…she was wearing hot royal blue one pices till her knees..
Lucky gulp seeing her…she smile & start music…
yeh raat ruk jaaye, baat tham jaaye, teri baahon mein
khwaishein jagi hain pyaasi pyaasi labhon pe
khud ko jala doon, teri aanhon mein
aagosh mein aaj mere samaa ja
jaane kya hona hai kal
aa ja zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se, jee le
She start dancing sansuasly around him…he wrap her hand on his nack & pulled him closer..she sit down on his leg & stand up giving twist to her body…she start opening his shirt bottns one by one while dancing & take off his shirt…
But after seeing him shirtless for first time she become nervous & stop her dance…now lucky come back to his senses & smirk…
He hold her hands & start dancing closely…he roamed his hand on her belly, back, legs…she also start feeling his body blushing…
He kissed her on his nack & shoulders…now song ends..he pinned her to the wall & start kissing her wildly…they both were lost in eo…then they Brock their extra hot kiss & smile looking at eo…
Lucky : (smile) thank u so much angel for making this night so beautiful for me without any special reason….i love you soooooooooo much…
Ragini : (blush) we don’t need any reason to spend good time with eo…nd i love you too my sweetheart…
They both went to bed & doze off peacefully in each others warm embarrass…
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3 days passed…
its performance day…
All finalists were suppose to dance with television celebs…all were very excited bz they just hv to enjoy tonight…there was no elimination & these was their last performance on studio stage…next week was grand finale which will held somewhere else…
Jai : welcome to Zara Nach k Dikha powered by flipkart…so audience..hold your hearts because tonight is the party night & some of your favorite celebs are here to support our finalists…so now without Westing time lets call our 1st performers…Kanchi & Kabir ..
They complete their dance…all clapped for them & judges gave their comments…then all start performing turn by turn…
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RAGINI & ARJUN :-
Song : (movie : honeymoon travels)
“Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi Hoti Kya Hai
Jawaani Suno Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha Waqt Hi
Aur Tha Jab Woh The Ajnabi……………..”
[THEY START DANCING DOING DANCING IN JAZE STYLE…SPREADING THEIR LEGS & HANDS IN ONE AFTER ANOTHER DIRECTION WITH A PERFECT ATTITUDE SMILE…END WITH ARJUN LIFTING RAGINI ON HIS SHOULDER]
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SHONA & BARUN :
Song : (movie : zindgi na milegi dobara)
” na mein samjha, na mein jana,
jo bhi tumne mujhse kaha hai senorita,
magar fir bhi, na jaane kyun, mujhe sunke accha laga hai senorita..
mujhko baahon mein tum ghero,
samjhi na senorita,…………….”
[THEY BOTH START DANCING ON TANGO STYLE..THEY BOTH DO AWESOME TANGO FOOTWORK BY HOLDING HANDS…BARUN TWIRRAL SHONA FAST…END WITH SHONA DO SPLIT HOLDING BARUN’S HAND & WITH THEIR CONFIDENT SMILE]
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LUCKY & DRASHTI :
Song : (movie : Kapoor & sons)
“arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(chull chull…)
arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(chull chull…)
yeah..
dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
ladki nahi hai tu hai garam maamla…………………..”
[THEY BOTH START DANCING ON PURE BOLLYWOOD…WITH LOTS OF LATKE JATKE…THEIR EXPRESSIONS WERE OUTSTANDING..THEY DO SIGNATURE STEP OF SONGS..END WITH LUCKY THROWING DRASHTI ON AIR & CATCHING HER…]
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SANKY & SANAYA :
Song : (movie : Dil Dhadakne Do)
” har dil ki apni hi taal hai
apna hi ek raag hai
har dil ki apni dhadkane
apni hi ek aag hai
jazbaat pighle pighle hain toh kyun na ho
khayalaat behke behke hain toh kyun na ho
har dil dhadakne do
dil dhadakne do…
dil dhadakne do!……”
[THEY BOTH START DANCING ON SALSA…SANKY LIFT SANAYA & ROLL HER AROUND HIM…THEY DO SOME QUICK LEGS MOVEMENTS..END WITH SANAYA STAND ON SANKY’S KNEES WHILE HE SAT HOLDING HER HANDS]
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All judges & audience gave them standing ovation…they were extremely happy after receiving this much of love & appreciations…performance of the day was LUCKY & DRASHTI…all hv enjoyed alot…they actually hv fun like party…they thanked all the celebrities for coming & supporting them…All celebs wish them all the best for finale…they were also happy spending time with them…all left the studio with bright smile on their faces….
PRECAP : THE GRAND FINALE…ALONG WITH ONE SURPRISE
The end
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Friends do you think by showing this pranks & all i m not concentrating on my story… ??
Bz for me its a part of my story only…as my story is based on love, friendship & dance…i think i hv shown all their emotions, masti, romance,fun,pranks,trust,love all th thing along with their dance journey…plz tell me what do u think about this ?
Sorry if i hv made u bored with this chepter..i just write it down..plz tell me what do you think about this part ..? Please friends do comments..i m waiting for your opinion…positive negative whatever it is…i request everyone to comment..plz
AND TELL ME YOUR FAVORITE SONGS WHICH YOU WANT ME TO INCLUDE IN FINALE… 😉
31 Comments
Not at all
Loved your ff
It was fabulous fantastic superb.
Fabulous di…it’s not boring at all..I’ll miss ur regular updates..wishing you the best luck for ur exams u just concentrate on them cz study comes first..I’ll patiently wait for ur updates di..love u
Loved it extremely di…..can’t wait 4 next epi
yaar i loved it literally no one can imagine birthday like this i was seeiously rooling on.the floor thinking abt sanky
and abt songs
sab tera( i loved this song)
and bolna
awesome dea rocked it poor sanky …LO!!!………again a wonderful episode to say a super duper episode all pranks on sanky were too good ……….loved it n all the very best for exams…..:-)
Hai…nams…i’m back…does ur ff end after grndfinale?…
I lyk d pranks..bcoz dat shows masti nd bonding…bw dem..
The songs i lyk:-
1,lets nacho
2,bolna
3,jee karda
4,sun saathiya
5,gallan guttiyan etc
i was spending tym wid my cousins nd dey just irritated me wid pranks nd fights…i had to bath 5 tyms today bcoz of dem…tnk god u updated ur ff otherwise i should have killed myself..but still i love those little devils…and d smallest one has d cutest pout ever..nd my anger melts down seeing dat…
Write ur exams well…nd make sanky win…
wow!!!! di its just awsm….
plz u include pranks also
its damn funnyyyyy!!!!!!!!!! seriosly……..haha…….
post wen u r free i mean tension free of xams…….
luv u diiii…….tc……
My cutie namu diiiiiiiiiiiiiii u always rock his ff as usual fantastic energetic etc etc di everything was perfect and clean di r u going to end this ff ?pls don’t at all end it u r my best di and this ff rocks also shona’s prank was awesome raglak and swasan dance was superb luv u di and all the best for u r exams ??
no narmata pranks r one f d best thing f ur ff…..its very nice narmata…..i love sankys prank a lot…..that too on his birthday seriously it will b very nice…..nd about cricket match u made a tie….i dint expect but simply nice…..overall asusual fantastic dr…..
bday prank was awesome……performances of all contestant are superb……
Di pls enter songs like jaise banjare ko ghar, suno na sangemarmar,sanam re, abhi toh party shuru hui hain, disco dewane, Saturday Saturday etc etc for the finale
its awsome dear… simply loved it….. <3 <3
Awesome di… mind blowing…. swasanraglakkabir masti with the celebs…. lucky he is so nice….. swaraglak prank on sanky ….. extra ordinary…… shona’s gift for sanky after playing pranks was too good….. ragini’s too….. rp’s gift for sanky…I Phone -6 …I wish I cld also get one on my birthday…… imaginig their dance performances… getting a feeling…. that they are really good….. swasanraglak bonding… I wish I cld get a friend like lucky … so caring… sanky … so cute and affectionate … ragini as a di … her supportive nature towards shona…..swara …. a childish… cute ……. smart girl lol… cricket match was awesome….. lucky once again… I hated him…. but just like swasanrag…. I have started to like him a lot …
And di plz after yr exams continue writing……
And BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAMS…. I know u will surely get good marks… as one who writes so well can do anything ♥♡♥♡
And di its not at all boring… u can’t write something boring……
Keep smiling…..
Will miss u and yr ff for some days but plz continue after… yr exams….luv u di…
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Sorry fr such a long comment … but will miss u thats why…
You are superb dear……..I’m silent reader & totally enjoy ur ff very much
Awesomeee episodee
Wohhh hooo! !!!! Again an awesome update! !!!….simply awesome and d prank is mind blowing my surely gona try it on my friends. …and the epic scene would be seeing there expression. ..ha ha ha …lol!!!
Swasan n raglak romantic moments were superb!!!..u have shown there bond in a unique way!!!!
I have told u this earlier also n again saying u that ur authenticity is ur asset….u r writing almost ur own life story n dats very good…u r doing what u love to do and is passionate about….
U say that u r not a writer. ..but it’s not true …A writer is a one who can influence others by it’s thought n opinion n indeed have a effect on the readers. …n u r exactly doing that dear !!! Every episode u bring a new phase of friendship love n of course dance!!!!!!….u r writing for ur self not for others n dats what u hold it with a pride…..love u …ll miss u all d best for your exams n to. 🙂 🙂
awesome namu.. all the best for your exams.. loved this update also.. in all updates you bring something special in it.. your story is not filled with dramas and twists.. it filled of dance, romance , and entertainment.. that is why i love your ff
U gave a full dose of entertainment masala. Loved Sanky’s bday. My fav songs r:1.Sanam re (please show swasan ) 2. Sun Saathiyan ( please show raglak) 3.Already u have added it Kar gayi chull..tqu 4. Gerua.. Waiting 4 the GRAND FINALE.
Superbbbb dear and all the best for ur exam
High heels plzzzzz make swasan dance on it or swara along with any judge on finale night
Awasome dr n for sure i also try these pranks on my frnds….songs for d finale
Bolna
Lets nacho
Rock tha party ( rocky handsome)
Sab tera
Gazab ka h ye din (for group)
Or
Matargashti
Hope these songs help u dr…..
I have no words for your episode, as I have been waiting from yesterday and you have made me happy. To say that I am feeling happy is a small word but the way you were showing the bond between the four is just awesome. I knew that you wont be posting for few days as you were having your exams. All the best dear for your exams
super
i really loved ur ff’s today’s update
These pranks are really vry good nd funny parts are also needed in a story right? So it’s totally OK nd I loved the performances nd the pranks??
Sry namrata for not commenting in your last epi i’m not feeling well nowadays? but it was really vry gd?
Awesome i loved it and i cant wait for the grand finale and the songs: sun saathiya
First of all I m soo sorry dear as I didnt comment on previous part….what to do yaar I was busy with the exams and didnt get time to visit the site even….Today only I read all the episodes…..I was searching like a maniac for ur ff since yesterday….and today I got it…I thought to comment on each episodes individually bt as it was already known to me that others episodes are already uploaded I cant control myself and here I m finally commenting….I hope uh understand….once again sorry…
All episodes was amazing as always….u rocked….I love ur ff…..I love the way portrayed the character of everyone….i love their passion….i love their bonding…..i love every single thing of this ff….thanxx once again for suvh an amazing storyline…
And coming to this episoe….it was damn funny…they are so funny and cute….OMG…prank played on sanky was too good….it seems u too are so naughty as u said u have played these pranks on ur frnds….nice 😛
Keep writing and keep smiling…luv uhh a lot….and sorry again…