hello guys.. This is the first episode of my ff.. please read it.. and give me your valuable comments..
Gadodia Mansion..
something gone wrong there.. some people are angry.. while some just stand as helpless and some people are broken totally.. did you want to know what happened? ok.. it will be revealed while reading ..
sanskar: what the hell is this.. i couldn’t take it any more.. I’m leaving.. i can’t bear this stupid drama anymore..
laksh: sanskar please think about awara . just once.. she really loves you.. don’t leave her..her life will ruin if you left her..
sanskar: laksh , your sister is mad.. who will marry such an immature girl.. how can she attempt suicide ? if i marry her my life will be ruined.. god sake leave me..
ragini: sanskar bhai .. shona is not immature.. she really loves you.. you are her life.. she do thus because she loves you.. she can’t live without you..
sanskar: ragini you should support me.. I’m your brother.. i know you love laksh so that you are trying to glorify his sister..but don’t request me to marry that immature kid.. it is my final decision..
sanskar leaves .. all are shocked..
shekhar and shomi sat down as lifeless body..raglak glare each other.. what will they do now..
why sanskar reject swara?
why swara try to commit suicide?
will ragini and laksh seperate due to sanskar?
will swara’s life ruined.. ?
guys i know you have so many questions.. so please keep reading my story ..
10 Comments
Awesome yaar…waiting for next episode yaar
Good start, I’m loving it.. Even I had an idea of writing ragsan and swalak as siblings..anyways all the best and make it lengthy
its nice….
Nice dear
nice start
Good start dear
Wow superb continue update little longer dr
Sounds intrstng…why shona attempt to suicide??? Anyways waitng for nxt epi….thnks for swasan yaar..dey r d most cute nd adorable couples..nd ur name is nyc Ami if u dnt mind can u tell ur full name..if u dnt like to answr den no probz..
Good start… Keep going