must read guys- first of all i am overwhelmed to see 100+ comment in consecutive 2 episode so for that happiness enjoy long episode, i never thought you all will realy
love in this extent its a big pleasure for me
second thing please not that yesterday i read saanvi os as she gave me link, i know many of you think that i do not know about fan fiction page how can i read her os
so the reason is i tolf her that i can read os so she gave me link of that os so i could go through it but mote that i can not read ff because i do not get time but
guys that os is really too too much amazing i tell you must read, i know you all have faith on me so with this faith just read her os, because when i read i just loved
that os it is really amazing and please do not go with the pairs in this os, i know pairs are ragsan but guys there are no intense ragasan scene so you can read it and
after reading that os you will realy say that yes ragini and sanky were needed in that os and it is highly inspiring os so just read without bothering about pairs you
will really love it its my assurance and here is link you just go through and read you will not regret it, for link click here – https://www.tellyupdates.com/pride-nation-ragsan-os-saanvi
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link of episode 11 of this article https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-11-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
link of episode 10 of this article https://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-12-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
link of all episode of whole article of this story is https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+unwanted+relation+with+my+husband+freind+
and link of whole article with new name https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+fixing+broken+relation+is+it+pure+or+impure
today i gave you 4 joke time because today part is emotional so must read joke time
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episode is long and i did not do proof reading
episode starts with the heavenly couple swasan were sleeping peacefully,
it is fine morning, air was very cold and fine which was flowing smoothly after rain, some rain droplets were also present in air, birds were chirping with full of
pleasure of cute morning, now the sun also comes to increase beauty of surrounding which made to open eyes of both couples
swara slowly opens her eyes she feels something hot on her chest side she sees sanky and same happens with sanky both see each other there was unnamed silence and eye
lock was between them, now they invvoluntery stand infront of each other and highly embrassed by seeing each other, both shouts nooooooooooooooooo……..
and turns there face,
swasan hurriedly pics there clothes and wear it
after wearing clothes
swara feels pain one her body and main organs, she thinks may be she slept with sanky, she screams noooooooooooooooooooooo it can’t be true
sanky turns his face and comes towards her to hug her
swara jerks him angrily in full and he falls on ground in she was in full rage by thinking what she did today everything of her night was coming infront of her eyes,
her intimacy her moans, her lost verginity, yes today she lost her verginity, she again scraems loudly that this can’t be truthn no no i can’t loose my verginity, i
can’t betrayed my husband, her mind stoped working her subcontious mind took lead on her mind, she knows she wanted this thing in her life, she badly needs it but she
never wanted this thing to happen with her with stranger, she madly sees marks of her hand of there intimacy, she moves her hand here and there and see markes on it,
she touches her neck she can feel all marks, she cries loudly oh god oh god………… tears of helplessness comes out of her eyes, she cries bittelry while seeing
her hand which remarked loosing her verginity, her head revoles round that what she did, she cries i can’t do like this i can’t…………………
sanky comes closer to pacify her she again jerks him madly which made he falls on ground but his head injured due to hitting but swara did not care about it, she was
lost in her thought, her sound of crying increased more, she is not state of accepting this truth, her eyes became big like cow due to excessive crying, only she could
use one word no it can’t be true, her eyes fall on sanky where blood was oozing out on his head, but we didnt find a single layer of concern on swara eyes, may be
layer of spark came to see him in blood which may decrease her pain by seeing him pain, her eys were totally showing mad hatred towards sanky, sanky understood swara
is out of control she can burst out any time on him like wild lioness, sanky tries to stand up but before that he felt immence pain on his right cheek which turned
into red, now again he felt pain on his left cheak, his eyes falls on blood boiling eyes of swara which were seeing him that anytime she can kill him, whose hands were
working to slap sanky madly, sanky angrily holds her hand and shouts have you gone mad swara, why can’t you accept this fact we intimated last night, swara jerks her
hand, ohhhh fact wow your so called womaiser fact, you will not have any problem but before she could complete again tears comes out, now she holds his collar and
punches him hard on his stomach which make sanky rinse in pain, she also punch on his main point by her leg which made sanky fall on ground with thud due to pain, she
angrily shouts this is punishment of yours to play dirty game with me,
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joke time
kya mausam aaya hai..
har taraf pani pani failaya hai…
tum bahar mat nikalna,
nahi to aisa lagega ki,
barish hui nahi aur mendhak bahr aaya hai…
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she sees the love marks given by sanky to her body which she hated most she can’t see this marks which was always making her remember her last night intimacy, for her
rather than that mark the mark of stick or of hot rod was good which give only physical pain when it is touched but these marks are giving her mental pain her
helplessness last night her lost verginity, her betrayel to husband, most important loosing her self respect in front of her only she sees them ” no i do not want this
mark i can not see them anymore, she madly scraches her hand but than also they don’t scaratch she sees hear and there and takes stick and beats herself to remove this
unwanted marks of her skin which were giving her immence pain in her heart, this marks are like happiness for other girls, this gives them more pleasure by seeing this
mark this shows love of there partner towards them, no girls want to remove this mark but swara case was different this marks were giving her immence pain, sanky could
see her beating herself, he hardly stands from his place and jerks stick from her hand
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joke time
ladki (atm room me) : muje apna balance check karna hai,
aap meri help karo… plz…
ladke ne piche jor ki laat mari,
wo muh ke bal giri…
ladki aage ke 2 tute danto ke sath khadi hoti hai…
ladka : balance to bahot kharab hai tumhara…
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baad mein ladki ne aage laat maari,
wo naagin ki tarah rengtey rengtey gaya…
ladka abhi tak ghar nahi pahuncha…
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swara- please leave me
sanky was in full angerness no never
swara tries to free herself
sanky pins her to wall, he angrily shouts please swara calm down it was not your mistake, it is also not mine mistake swara
swara- so what you want to say everything happened between us was correct
sanky in understanding voice, swara sometime our hormones over power our thinking ability
swara angrily stop your good drama you useless person, i know like you leave me let me give me punsihment
swara was not stoping her blubber, sanky angrily puts his lip on swara blubbering lips to calm her
swara eyes were opened by his sudden act,
sanky in angerness and to clam her starts sucking and eating her lower and upper lips one by one, taking her one lip between his lips, he starts giving torture to her lips swara
tried to get away but sanky took grip more tight and took kiss more dipper to calm her, he starts swallowing her lower lips inside his mouth by pulling with his lips to test them fully now her lower lip is fully inside his mouth and fives her torture to forget her pain, he now takes her upper lips also just like swallowing in his mouth by his lips, now both the lips of swara were fully inside his mouth to whom he was chubbing, sucking like lolypomp and greeting
in his teeth and sucking them madly giving tortures to her, swara slowly calming down, her subconsious mind affect was decreasing, she don’t know again her
desire was making a way in her heart but she don’t want her desire to overpower her now, in one way she was enjoying it and other way she was feeling disgusted by his
act but sanky was doing his works, still her both the lips were inside his mouth which were forcefully fixed by his hard lips now his tongue was touching surfaces of lips and moving overall the lips to to decrease pain and make her calm down, his tongue exploring her both lips, sometime enters insdide them to reach her mouth and taste her honey but he was tightly holding her, now he looses the grip of his lips which were holding swara lips which
made swara to take some air inside her but still her full mouth was in his mouth only, she could feel his hot breath was entering inside her body with air because she is taking air of his mouth only this was making her calm, her
subcontious mind was fully controlled now,his hot breaths was reaching every part of her body which was making her whole body and every part to feel relaxed, sanky could feel relaxaton in her body, swara unknowingly
enjoying it and his breath was like healing every part of her body from inside, sanky also calms down by sweat taste of her lips where still her both mouth were inside him they were fit like in matchstick box lower potion in which all matchstick are kept is wrapped by upper portion, in this way only both the mouth were fit where upper portion of matchstick box was sanky and lower or inside part was swara, now he moves his head
back to take out her lips from his mouth which were fully inside his mouth, swara lips were sticked in his mouth but it detached as increase in separation and her lips came out of his mouth,
he can easily sees swolen, red lips which was fully wet due to his mouth, but both the bodies calm down by this needed kiss, swara did not understand what is happening with her she falls
on groung unconssiously but sanky takes her in his arms and took her to hospital,
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joke time
baburao : aye raju… aaj meri kutti ne anda diya…
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raju : ye kutti kab se anda dene lagi…
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baburao : ye baburao ka style hai re baba…
apni murgi ka naam kutti rakha hai…
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in hospital
sanky was restless outside the room,
after sometime doctor comes and he ask about swara health
doctor- see mr. kapoor her condition in very bed, the medicines which she daily takes was directly affecting her mind, they were destroying her nueral system, becuase
these hormanal tablets and this high dose sleeping pills directly affect her mind, because they are working on her nervous system because there work to make her mind
to subcontious mind, so that people can forget all there worries and hormonal problem, in subcontious mind they sleep so by taking daily these type of pills she has
hormonal imbalance also, due to daily interference of this medicines in her mind is creating problem in functioning of her brain so whenver she gets angry and she is
sad her subcontious mind overpowers her, she looses her thinking ability in front of her subcontious mind, the thing which is running in her mind only comes again and
again whoch she can’t take it so for this this type of people think to harm themself so that there pain can be removed they never think of good and bed in subcontious
mind so she harms herself, but do not take tention i had given some injections which will make her normal but please remember one thing you should try level bes to
decrease her dependency on these medicines, because adverse affect of these medicines and excessive use of it will made her brain problems, and please try level best
to not to make her come in subcontious mind which is dreadfull for her……………….
doctor leaves by saying these words by leaving sanky speachless and in shock………………………
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joke time
must read
aaj kal to jiske 4-5 boyfriend hai,
wo bhi kahti hai ki,
“pyar andha hota hai…”
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arey ! pyar andha nahi hai bahan…
tune pyar andha-dhundh kiya hai….
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now its time to see raglak scene guys whats is going on there
in dubai
there was also sweat morning of hotel room where raglak were sleeping peacefully
small part of window was open from where sun rays were coming which falls on raglak eyes
raglak opens there eyes, first they feel it is hellucination or may be they are seeing dreams, they again closes eyes for sometime and opens it, after some confusing
eyelock both stands while shouting ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………….
ragini sees him turns her face while shouting wear your clothes (ragini body was wraped by badsheet and lucky was in his undergarments)
lucky gets totally embrassed by seeing him in this condition he immediately takes his clothes scatterd on ground by picking them where ragini was looking him
annoyingly
while picking he sees ragini upper garment, he ask whose it is
ragini thinks it is looking like mine garment but my garments will be on my body na but she feels her body loose loose she sees inside the blanket and found she did
not wear clothes now she screams noooooooooooooooo this can’t happen
till now lucky weared all his clothes and ask what can’t happen
ragini shouts how dare you to come in my room
lucky sees here and there and says are you insane it is my room you came in my room, he feels proud that she came in his room
ragini eyes falls on all over the room and finde she is in his room
ragini confusingly how can i come in your room
lucky- who know you must have only come
ragini- no i was in party after that, she stresses and says after that i do not know
lucky- hey you stop it but i know very well how i cam to my room
ragini questioningly how
lucky thinks but he says i also not getting anything but he sees that she has wrapped bedsheet so he ask, why you are wrapped in this bedsheet take it out
ragini- voh nothing (remember lucky did not get that she is nude )
lucky- what nothing he comes forward to take this bedsheet
ragini runs away to him she ask just stay away
lucky- while chasing her why to stay away, i am taking my favourite badsheet please give yar
ragini- no no
as lucky was moving he sees ragini lower part undergarment and her t shirt, he questioningly sees first of all we did not know how we came here and i was only in
underwear and second thing which girl was she her all clothes and undergarment are scattered on floor
ragini sees him in fear
lucky eyes fall on t shirt and ask this t shirt is of your ragini which you wore yesterday
ragini hesitately may be it is like my t shirt
lucky was very close to her now he takes his hand on bedsheet, he was about to take it from her body ragini shouts i did not wear any clothes
lucky sees her in full shock both have shocking eyes lock, there was silence in room both were looking each other in full shock now they are remembering everything
from morning like lucky clothes were on floor and ragini clothes also lying on clothes, they also got to know that in night after drinking that drink they don’t know
what has happend after it but by seeing some marks on ragini neck and ragini also sees lipstick marks on lucky face both came to conclusion and immediately shouts
s*xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
episode end on shocked faces of raglak as well as sanky
precap- sanky care for swara, swara tell everything to kavya and neha, raglak drama (which i will not tell now)
my hands are paining after writing such a long episode
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shock laga by seeing swara in full madness avtar, but the big shock was that sanky kisses swara in too too much intense way unexpectedly
i know many of you may be laughing by seeing raglak drama and loved it also and some also wants some funny and light hearted drama in swasan but that will come soon
because i can’t show funny drama because of swara that’s why
i know many of you wanted more in raglak part but i want to end in shock so guess what will be there reaction now think think think
by the way guys guess that now in normal state what will be swara reaction by seeing sanky, will she able to understand that sanky was also not in fault or some more
drama, just guess it is you can guess and what you feel of sanky character by seeing him today is something fishy or nothing or he is trapping her think about it
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by the way did joke time made you entertained in such a emtional episode or not guys
big big big sorry from my side that kiss was really too intense and vulgar but when i was writing, it wrote intense without my knowledge but you reallly did not like please say to me i know it is really vulgar
119 Comments
want lakshya to love ragini and want raglak scene next part soon
He will love soon because if he will start loving her now than there story will be ended this scenes you are getting will not be there so he will love later
Guys big sorry from my side I will never give this much intense and vulgar kiss and if you don’t liked it please please tell to m and you can criticize also because I want to go with you guys and again sorry for too vulgar kiss
awesome.
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
awesome yr.no need to be sry.scenes r perfect 4r story.superb.plz plz plz more swasan scenes plz
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and support towards my story
Both pairs will have good scenes
Awesome
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and your immense support towards my story
Hey Irfan PATHAN you are really romance king the way you gives romance in Amazing because romance is one of the weak point of writer but really you give romance very nicely with day to day examples it is really realistic
Grim where you get this ideas to compare romance with daily needed things
Don’t apologize it it is good romance
Oh god please don’t praise me this much I am glad to see your support towards me
I am really happy that you are liking examples which are used in comparison of romance it is best thing for me
Again thanks for liking my romance part
mark in hand ? i didn’t get it,,hmmmm
Mica ji???
You are a child right?? You don’t read intense romance and all ha??
Now what happened?? ??
You have problem with my romantic scenes?? Now what??…
Hey anisha I can understand your feelings and I am really happy that you are reading my ff but we shouldn’t fight here in comment box you can go in private messages because people will think that Irfan PATHAN is using cheap tricks to increase his comments in ff and I didn’t give any too intense type of romance in my story but only this episode was vulgar you can go to previous episodes I gave s*x romance of swasan and raglak which every age group can read it so she read that part because they can’t have any problem for it I have given link also you can go through it
Second thing every readers have different taste so we can’t force anyone
But I am really happy by seeing your support towards my story and keep supporting in this way
And if you felt my comment rude for that big sorry from my side
You can criticize my story by writing I Never feels bed but I like it that at least you criticized my story so that you are reading my story and giving me suggestion so that I can improve in my writing but I can’t here anything against to my readers they are very important for me and all readers have some good place in my heart so I don’t like if any one bash them bit you can criticize as much as you can
Sorry if I hurted by my reply big sorry for that and I am happy that you read my story
anishaaaa.. hahahhah, iizh i skipped the romance for sure (just the vulgar one, not the whole chapter, wish you get my point, on your ff, i skipped when i read c*nd*m), :3 :3 :3,
i did also on pathan previous part, that why i just comment about swara unfaithfulness.
now in this part, i commented about hand mark since i didn’t understand, what happened to ppl after getting romance….
mostly i will read the ff casually before read all chapter to make sure where i have to stop my read or continue it.
i’m not a child, but innocent lady :3 :3 :3
i have no problem with romantic scene since i can manage it myself..
but it will be big favor to me if the writer give warning about the intense romance…
i just so afraid that intense romance will eat my brain :3 :3 :3
you know, i’m normal person! *wink
Perhaps…..
Shall I tell you both something? Smarty pants??
Mica is one of my readers she just mentioned that she doesn’t read intense romance when I saw her comment here…. I was just awe!!…
And with that I just played a prank!!…
Pathan!! Chillaxx!!… It was a prank!
Mica??
U took it seriously??…
Don’t talk to me!
But really I will not get dreams that she is your friend Because it I see like this comment I usually don’t want because these type of comment unnecessary increases comment which I hate most and second thing it doesn’t look good in ff so I told like this but sorry if you felt bed but before this pranks please tell me first but it’s OK I can understand keep praking to your friends but really I replied you in hurry because I know there are many readers will surely bash you so I thought rather than creating fight I should comment you but please whenever you do prank just write kidding before it
prank ?? huh *kick anisha to the moon
Mark in hand means when in intimacy many times bangles may broke down due to force and jerks from male partner and due to intimacy many times both partner nails may dig because of holding to each other so Mark may come on hand and but they don’t get to know at the time of intimacy
aarrrgghhhh, so it’s about bangle ? hmmm, ok! ty
OK I am happy that you understood
By the way mica can you reply that when I used vulgar words in my romance section I think I wrote clear and neat romance in which there was not single word also I didn’t use it turn to vulgar in swasan part full part was descent that any one can read I think you got my point keep supporting my story in this way
hehehe.. let it be pathan.. using vulgar word or symbolic is doesn’t matter for me, as i know there is “something-something” i will stop myself… it’s about me.. don’t be bothered OK!
Awesome…. Really nice…. Kiss wasn’t vulgar…..the way you compare kiss with matchstick is appreciable….. Jokes are nice….raglak scenes were funny….
You are really amazing aapi the way you are supporting me from starting is really amazing and I am happy that you loved comparison of kiss with box it really means for me and also liking joke part keep supporting me in this way
you have your unique style of writing bro. some may call it vulgar but in reality in is different right :)..romance is my weak point to write but you write it very nicely 🙂
sorry I AM not able to comment on ur ff’s but seriously i am not getting time to connect 🙂
Oh you are really amazing sister I am happy that you supported my writing and feeling parts that are not vulgar it is really means a lot to me so I am happy that you are writer I think you must be very good writer who gives such a nice analysis you must be good writer and I can understand that you are not able to comment in my story I can understand you must have some important work but you are reading story it is good for me
By the way are you busy in studies or any other things keep supporting me in this way
Recently i joined college for my masters in computer science so it will take some time to adjust everything …coming to my writing i don’t think i am great writer… then see as a writer i know how difficult it is to portray such scenes…and haan once do check grammar while you write …like you write one sentence and see the vocabulary is fitting in a perfect manner simple i hope you don’t take me wrong…
sorry if i hurt you …..
And wish me luck for my cllge life 🙂
No shruthis I am really happy that you gave me such a good suggestion because I don’t do proof reading but from next time I will really do proof reading and I can understand u must be really busy but I am that u are reading my story
Its awesom
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
What should I tell..It is really important for Swara. And it is also important for calm her down… And Raglak part is really just awsm.Joke time is also very funny..????The entire episode was really just mind blowing… Fabulous…Wonderful…. You and your mind is really very wonderful….Just lvd this epi a lot…Stay blessed MR.COOL BOY.????
Oh you are really amazing sister I am happy that you supported my writing and feeling parts that are not vulgar it is really means a lot to me so I am happy that you are writer I think you must be very good writer who gives such a nice analysis you must be good writer and I can understand that you are not able to comment in my story I can understand you must have some important work but you are reading story it is good for me
By the way are you busy in studies or any other things keep supporting me in this way
Sorry I replied to you wrongly you are really amazing girls the way you are supporting me is too much for me I am really happy by seeing this keep supporting me in this way you are really good and thanks for thinking part is not vulgar
nice but dont show sanskar trapping swara..
OK I will take your suggestion in consideration but keep supporting me in this way
Uummm… Pathan talking about you….
I really don’t know what to say…..
You should express the things more properly… I have started reading your ff today itself.
Use some punctuation marks yaar….
Warna it’s really very difficult!!..
Thank You
Keep writing….
Well we have many things Comm’n…
Extra marital affairs and all… ????
Thanks for ur beautiful comment anisha and did you read my full story till now or just one episode
Second thing please Tell me where I am not able to express emotional correctly so I will change my mistake because I don’t know my mistake so please tell me because you are writer as you told so you will be able to correct my mistake because I am really not good writer I am just average writer so please the mistake which you are able to see please tell me I will change
Ya you are correct I don’t give punctuation mark many time and some spelling mistake so for that I already told to readers that I never do proof reading so this type of problems will persist so they told it’s OK but you didn’t like so I will try to use more punctuation mark
Really I don’t know anything about tellyupdates and I don’t read ff or tellyupdates so for that really sorry that I didn’t read your story but I am really happy that you also working on same concept and you must be really good writer because the way you cared about punctuation and everything it feels blessed that write is reading my story
Keep smiling always and tell me my mistake I will improve in it
It’s just I don’t read the notice….
Never in my dreams! ????
But OK…. I understand….
I understand anisha that you must have not read not part but I am really happy that you conveyed your feelings about my story
It really means a lot to me that you are reading my story and commenting also
Sorry if you felt my comment rude or felt bed
By the way you really must be good writer if your ff must be really good
I didnt feel bad!
And Ya i don’t know about that, if I’m good or not!!..
N
But not more than you I guess.
Lovely episode… But I agree with ami u r a romance king the way u always writes the romance with day to day example is totally amazing… No one can beat u in writing and giving romantic scenes…..Seriously u r a romance king….I can’t understands it that how u write this types of romance with day to day example….But it wasn’t vulgar…..And all the jokes was really entertaining…..U r an amazing writer…..
What to say about you you are really amazing sister who is supporting me constantly and it really feels too good by seeing your comment just keep supporting me as you always do
Raglak scenes are nice but please give equal importance to raglak
Thanks for your beautiful comment
Awesome
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
I liked swasan part the way Sanskaar calm her down
And in raglan it was funny
Thanks for ur beautiful comment I am happy that you liked sanky Calming swara
Superb episode
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and support towards me
Superb episode and Waiting for Raglak drama
There drama will be soon
very nice part as i was very eager to know swasan reaction n i just wish that swara start to love sanky
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and support towards me and they will be soon
Awesome dear… Kiss didn’t seemed vulger .. It is your speciality bro, that you can write intense or hot romance without getting vulgur ..It is the first time I’m seeing a writer who wrote romantic scenes at the most intense way and we didn’t feel it vulgur at any point
Waiting for more swasan scenes and raglak part was also nice
Oh god I never thought you liked my story this much it really feels blessed I never thought that you will like this much I am really happy by seeing your support towards me and I am average writer only but thanks for supporting me and not feeling kiss part vulgar
Nice one
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story
Good one 🙂 Keep rocking and nothing was vulgar in this episode.. It was needed to show how Swara was going through trauma and how she needs love n care to soothe down…
Oh god I am glad to see your immense support towards me saanvi Di and really liking my part
Hey Saanvi di how u know that I am Raglak fan?
Good
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story
Oh my God!! it was so awesome.. I love ur FF.. the way u write;, the way u describe their character;; the way u describe their feelings n emotions,,, these r jst tooooo perfect..?..
ur writing style is very unique as well as fabulous, mind blowing n tempting also….
I must say ur writing talent is GOD GIFTED…. thnxx.. n n n ur FF is just P.E.R.F.E.CT……???
Oh thanks kakali I am glad to see your analysis on my ff it really mean a lot to me and thanks for liking my writing skills
Hi,this soooooo nice chapter ,I love swasan chapter. Very feel bad for swara conditions. Oh super romance for swasan very good and keep it up. I am sorry I can’t give the prepare comments because I am get ready to go Andhara Pradesh for visit temple because I will go for monthly once to thirupati,so I am busy but in this time also I will study ur ff and comment, so sorry OK bye
Oh I can understand ur feeling and go to temple it is really good to know that you every year goes to temple and I am happy to see your beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story
Nice one dear…. Loved it… N felt very bad for swara…. Can understand from which situation she is going through…. Update soon ????????
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and glad to see your support towards me
hey bro !!!!!!!!!!! yaad he mein koun hu……………..hehehehehe ………………. aree sorry i read every episode actually i was having fever thatswhy didnt cmnt and u knw the worst thng is that my mid-term exams r again starting from 9-26 i think…………….. ohhh hooooo just exhausted abhi abhi toh huye the aur exams me TU par bhi nhi aa pati bt will try to read urs ……………………….. and bro u r just mind-blowing…………..
i mean no words……………………….
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i ‘m speechless in ur honor !!!!!!!……………………… ab aur kya keh sakti hu aapki tareef me just wish ki thoda talent mujhme bhi hota……………..
keep smiling n stay blessed……………….
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U R AN AMAZING AND AWESOME WRITER………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and glad to see your support towards me and now how is your health are fine and first study well
Tobaaaaa
Frm where u get these tips
Impossibl u bro
Limitless
Lovd it
Dnt b sorry
Oh I can’t think that you loved my ff in this extent keep supporting me in this way
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