happy ganesh chaturthi to all my readers, i forgot to tell yesterday
hi guys i think all are amazed to see me this much early but i got time so wrote next part
guys i got to know that people really wanted to take story in next level, i am also thinking to take story in next level but i was thinking to take after 3 to 4
episode but i think people will loose there interest from story and many not like this track so i an thinking to take that track within 1 to 2 episode and i will wrap
up that part in 1 to 2 episode, that part is before swasan marriage, so i am thinking in this way to take this track little faster and do swasan marriage by seeing
viewers reaction. i will take that part little faster
link of episode 19 of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-19-irfan-pathan/
link of episode 20 SWASAN HOT ROMANCE PART of this article – http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fixing-broken-relation-pure-impure-episode-20-pathan-swasan-hot-romance/
LINK OF all episode of whole article of this story is – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+unwanted+relation+with+my+husband+freind+
and link of whole article with new name – http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swaragini+fixing+broken+relation+is+it+pure+or+impure
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REAL LOVE STORY OF RAGLAK WILL START AFTER SWASAN MARRIAGE ONLY
EPISODE STARTS WITH swasan were looking each other, there was intense eye lock between them
sanky sees tears from swara eyes which were oozing out again today,
again guilt took place inside her, swara knows this whole mistake of her only, she only did this mess again, swara don’t say anything, so she tries to go out of sanky
grip but sanky holds her tightly
sanky- whisper please don’t go swara………..
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RAGLAK PART
IN PARTY
ragini was standing at one place, lucky comes towards her
lucky- ragini why you are standing here
ragini- i am not interested in all these parties
lucky- oh its ok
ragini- your work is done
lucky- i don’t know but i think today it may be completed let us see what happen next
ragini- but what you did
lucky- gives her smile, you will get to know soon
ragini- oh its ok
lucky- do you know ragini
ragini moves her gaze towards him as he must be telling some serious matter and nods
lucky- i completed my one work yesterday and i think one more work today it may be completed if it is completed than i will be free from all mess
ragini confused what work and which mess
lucky smiles and smirk at her yesterday i made swara sign on divorce paper
ragini shocked what
lucky sees him and gives her winning smile, yes ragini i gave her divorce, now my one work is completed and one more work i think today it will be completed
ragini in serious tone which work you are talking about
lucky – you will get to know soon
ragini- ok
lucky- so i want to give you treat of my winning
ragini- what treat
lucky- let us go i will take you to my favorite place
ragini- which favorite place
lucky- let us go na
ragini just goes behind lucky,
lucky stops his car infron of ice-cream parlour, lucky signals ragini to see towards parlour,
ragini confused ice-cream parlour
lucky happily yes let us go,
he moves out of car happily
ragini got confused by thinking that lucky like person going towards ice-cream parlour that is also a road side type
lucky turns while going, ragini what are you doing here please come yar
ragini- yes i am coming.
ragini confusingly goes behind him murmering that why he likes this place
lucky can see her confused face and ask what happened ragini
ragini- vo vo… i am asking why you came here for eating ice-cream
just than shopkeeper replies mama he daily comes to this place from his childhood
ragini again got another shock, she sees lucky doubtfully
lucky gives her assuring smile and says don’t think much, first eat this ice-cream than i will clear your every doubts
ragini nods and gives fake smile to him
shopkeeper gives two ice-cream to raglak
lucky while taking ice-cream ragini it is special ice-cream of this corner,
RAGINI while eating wow its yummy
lucky- i know it is famous one of this place
both raglak eats it while ragini was about to go towards car, please stop ragin lucky says
ragini turns towards him, what happened
lucky- come with me there is garden
ragini again goes behind him
there was silence between them
lucky while looking beauty of garden, how this garden is ragini
ragini- its good
lucky- i know you will like it, and this is one of the place where i used to come here when i was living my happy days of life
ragini confused what
lucky- why that ice-cream parlour is important to me
ragini- yes tell
lucky- it is because in my childhood till 3 years before i used to come here daily
ragini- oh
lucky- i was very happy at those time of my life i and swara we both used to come here to eat ice-cream here and sometimes uttara also comes with us in childhood
ragini- you swara and uttara
lucky- yes ragini when i was small in my childhood from that time i used to come there
ragini- you really had good relation with swara than why you are taking revenge from her
lucky- you know reason
ragini- but i did’nt satisfied with your reason lucky
lucky narrowed his eyes and ask what
ragini- because i don’t think that is perfect reason for this revenge
lucky sees ragini, just gives her faint smile, ragini everything has its strong reason but its not correct time to tell you everything because i can’t tell anything
before completing my second work
ragini- its ok i understand but please think before doing all these things
lucky- yes i know it
ragini- by the way your sujata mom of ram uncle, where is she
lucky- i don’t know about her where she went
ragini confused i did not understand lucky
lucky- sujata mom left ram uncle
ragini- what
lucky- yes
ragini- but why
lucky- because of her boyfreind and money
ragini- i didn’t understand
lucky- sujata mom father married sujata mom forcefully to ram uncle, she never wanted to marry him but she had to do marry because of all these bussiness, sujata mom
was not happy by her marriage but still she was living with ram uncle for society sake,and gave birth to three children but when ram uncle came on footpath,she could
not live like this life, she always took help of her boyfreind to get money, both used to meet daily because sujata mom could not forget her love, she thought that she
can forget him but she could not forget him, so there life was going like this only ram uncle and sujata mom had hitted argument everytime because sujata mom could not
take care of children properly and she was very confused in her life, first she was not able to take care of there children properly, other side she was not able to
give time to her boyfreind and her husband, she was too confused in the mess created in her life, she also was not able to live in poor life, she was very
uncomfertable at this place, her life was fully messed, her boyfreind always told her to leave ram, she was not able to give that love to ram uncle also, so in her
children, her husband, her boyfreind and in proverty she was not able to understand what to do, her life was fully messed by all this things, so she decided to suicite
and she killed herself and by falling in river,
ragini- i am sorry lucky for asking about this i can understand your black past
lucky- its ok
ragini thinks lucky you don’t know real truth of all these incidense, you only knows what everyone told you but you don’t know reality lucky, it is just half truth but
real truth is different which i can’t tell you now lucky
but she tells lucky i can understand everything but whenever you take next step please think twice
lucky-i know ragini please don’t take tention
ragini- yes its ok
lucky- ya sure
ragini- now it has became too dark, we should leave from here
lucky- yes i also think so
both raglak goes and lucky drops ragini to her house and moves towards his house
ragini in her house thinks oh god ragini there is too much mess in all there life, i have to think to go for next step because no one knows my real idenstity…….
while lucky in his house thinks now its time to proceed on last stage of my work……..
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swasan side
swara did not cared about his words swara again tries to go out but sanky was adamed to not to leave her
swara cries please leave me sanky
sanky while holding her tightly no
swara stoped protesting she sees into his eyes and shouts please leave me
again swara was about to go sanky holds her and whisper till when you will run swara
swara gets shocked by his statement she sees him in full of shock
sanky understand she wants to hear his point of view, so he slowly sleep beside her and takes baedsheet and wrapes both of them in one badsheet only, both were still
nude, now swara tries to sit but sanky again takes her in his arms, swara head was on sanky arms, she was inside his arms both were looking each other very closely
swara breaks eye contact, ask what you want to say
sanky makes his grip on her more tightly, i am just saying till when you will run from reality swara…………………
episode ends on shocked face of swara
PRECAP- swasan emotional conversation, story takes leap,
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i know you all are too much confused about character but don’t take tention now revealation time is started of this ff, after wraping up this part in 2 episodes, your
each and every confusion is cleared because it is high time to reveal all suspenses in this story and i already decided that after swasan marriage everything will be
revealed in this story
GUYS I FORGOT TO GIVE YOU BEST WISHES FROM YOUR EXAMS BECAUSE I GOT TO KNOW MANY PEOPLE EXAM IS STARTED, SP STUDY WELL AND HARD
ENJOY TODAY SUNDAY BECAUSE I THINK TODAY ALL WILL BE FREE
ONE MORE THING GUYS MANY ASKING ABOUT ME AND BHABHI, SO SHE IS STUDYING IN SCHOOL ONLY AND SHE IS 2 YEAR YOUNGER THAN ME AND WE BOTH ARE BEST FREIND FROM CHILDHOOD
ONLY AND ABOUT OUR ENGANGEMENT AND ALL I WILL TELL YOU NEXT TIME BECAUSE TODAY I AM LITTLE HURRY SO SORRY FOR THAT
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AAAAAH SUCH A LONG COMMENTS SORRY BRO. I THINK IT’S YOUR TURN TO REPLY MY QUESTION I WILL WAIT BUT PLEASE REPLY TODAY ITSELF .
I replied to your comment in above comments
As some bhai . or kit ne he Suede didikhao ge . love it . from now I I’ll cmnt regularly.
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Hey samaira sorry what you wrote in other language I didn’t understand but I only understood the part you wrote in English that you will comment daily so thanks for reading story and commenting also
Keep smiling always
Bhai I wrote in Hindi . m writing from tab so mistake kka di
Oh it’s OK but I didnt understand because of it but its OK
Thanks for commenting
I heard a lot about uh frm my few TU frnds n came here to read it…. Wooww…. Its too good. I like the concept very much… I rarely read ffs here cuz of mu busy schedule. Even I hv taken break in writing.. But reading this gave me an ultimate pleasure… Coming to this chappy…. I luvf swasan in it…… M damn confused about Ragini…. Who is she????
Anyways I ll try to be regular and read this!!☺
Thank for your beautiful comment
I am glad to see that even if in this much busy schedule you took stress to read this ff and I also thanks to those person who liked my story and told you
Yes every confusion will be cleared soon as story proceed
Keep smiling always
Hi,has u wrote already emotional science,but it is different. First u wrote swara part yaa it is not emotional but I can understand her pain in that part,after raglak part yaa that little but emotional for her past but not up to react heart sorry. And next sanky and his father part yaa that also emotional scene l like that ,but friend it all about related to him past life. But this not like that how sanky convenience his full emotions is coming up to his heart,to explain swara how he feels at all ,hope u u understand the differences, what I will told. And thank u like my name. If I hurt u with mycomments i really very sooooooooo sorry please.
I am not hurt
I am happy that you wrote what you thought and about next part seriously telling I also don’t know what I will write I think it will be like that part when sanky comforts swara at the time of there first s*x scene in hospital I think you remembered it so this type of scene it will be there
I think you got sketch of next episode bu
One thing is clear that sanky Wil not speak to his heart out in next episode
But if I say really really I also don’t know what I will write in next episode because I didn’t planed anything in this story about future much
One more thing the way sanky comforts swara before that type of scene will be there and I think that was emotional one only which was liked by mane people but let’s see what I will write next
What to say????Awesome episode as usual… And story isn’t boring anymore… I never felt that its boring….Belated Ganesh Chaturthi to you too…And Eid Mubarak to you…. And yesterday I was busy with celebrating “TEACHER’S DAY”…Stay happy….
And I am not getting Ragini’s character properly… What she is up to???What she want to do????What’s her real intention????Who is she????What’s her real identity??? And how she knows Swara????? Enough of my questions…. But what to do totally confused about her character…
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my story and everything will be revealed soon
First of all b lated Ganesh Chaturthi 2 u 22 n also Eid mubarak….D ep was really awsm….N yeah I dont think tht its boring…How can u imagine tht ur ff vll b boring???N about Ragini’s character I don’t think tht its not a proper character…Bcz I think tht der vll b a jhatka which u always gives…. Actually I m vry much bzy vth my studies…Stay happy n blessed..
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and supporting me and same to you happy eid to you also as well as riya I forgot to say this thing to her and I can understand you must be busy in your work
And yes you will get jhataka about ragini character so just wait and read story
Keep smiling always you both
Just now came to home from clg after writing the exam …and checked the TU and found ur ff ….
Hmmmmmmm
Now I have no words to say ….wait I will think …hmmmm marvellous …
I think it is also ..less .hmm no words
It was super se duper se uper wala epi
Coz my swasan …really bhaiyo u r awesome keeping smiling
Thanks for ur beautiful comment sister and how was your exam and are all exams over
Really I never thought you will like this much extent this story
Your comment really makes me happy and study well keep smiling always
Take care
What is your point of view and today I did it. I say it wow I am very comfortable. Thank you sooooo much. Yes I am a big fan of raglak and ragsan also.
Thanks for it
And I am happy that I could help you
And eid Mubarak to you
It mean you are fan of ragini so that’s why like raglak and ragsan
But I hate ragsan from core of my heart because I really don’t like to change husband and wife
I know all or 90% raglak fans likes ragsan as pair because sanky is most liked person of swaragini so that’s why ragini fans like ragsan
Sorry if I hurt you by this fan fandom
Keep smiling always
whoohoo, Laksh blinded by his one side story.. waiting swasan wedding ohohooo
and Pathan.. omg…. the people on your ff are cheaters, the group of cheaters,, 😀
luv it ty
Thanks for ur beautiful comment mica but can I ask you one question why people on my ff are cheater
Means by which reason you told that they are cheater I didn’t understand and really really thanks for liking my writing and story
Stay happy
Take care
And please reply to this question
DP cheated Ap by hiding the fact that he was incomplete man
Ap cheated DP, laksh cheated Swara, Swara cheated Laksh, sujata cheated Ram
Ragini cheated swara.. see.. group of cheaters.. hehheheh
Oh yes you are correct but I really wanted to show different cases of extra marital affair in this story but really you only knows 30% truth till now and most important and real truth is remaining in this story which will come slowly slowly just wait for it
According to your point of view you are really correct
`i know, but somehow, no matter what the reason, extra marital affair kinda cheating to God, rite ?
it’s OK for me Pathan, it just a story rite ? everything can happen according to the fabulous idea of the writer…it just kinda casual comment from me, no offense..
Yes extramarital affair is like cheating only but what to do it happens in every 3rd or 4th house of India so as a writer I should show the real world and nothing else
Yes it is cheating but the pain which they go through really makes person cheater
They are also not happy by this things but they have to go through this things in few cases
i know it, but by justified the reason behind the act, we kinda push them to the valley. Sometime being to not understand with their situation will lead them to the rite part instead of being understandable and let the wrong happened..
aahh whatever the reason.. they are cheater…rite ? 😀
It’s OK I understand
Because you didn’t gone through this stage and you didn’t saw the people who are in prone to this things so you don’t know you are just thinking by taking yourself only
You are not thinking broadly about other people and we can’t understand there situation till we are not suffered from it and yes overall they are cheater but they have to go through we can take same example with some poor who steals money because they are hungry and here is same condition
But in this type of extra Marital affair in 85% cases people are wrong but 15% people have to go from this stage like swara
I think you got my point of view
hmm.. why you take it personally ? i tld you already that i’m comment casually about your character.
i know what your aim , but even if 15 % of them, should stand in that worst situation, we can’t hide the fact that they DO CHEAT, i talk about their ACTION, i didn’t talk about society judgement or my judgement..
can i ask you, did swara cheat Laksh or not ?
Did laksh cheat swara or not ?
Did Ap cheat DP or not ?
Did Dp cheat Ap or not ?
even if the poor steals money for foods, we can’t hide the fact that their action called as STEALING
i didn’t talk about RIGHT or WRONG, not yet, if i talk about rite or wrong, you then you can judge my point of view….wish you got my point.
It’s not like that I didn’t take personally I am just telling about those people I was just telling that we can’t think about there condition properly because we never gone through this type of situation and I know your comment is casual but I told you the point of view of those people and yes I am telling that they are cheating but somewhere they have to go through this situation to live there life like poor people if he is not getting money and he don’t have any source of money he have to do stealing for surviving in this world
So this is same condition of some people and don’t take tension I didn’t feel bad and if you hurt by my point for it big sorry from my side
I think we should stop this useless discussion because nothing will happen and next episode I will post soon
Keep smiling always
Take care
Bye
If you have more doubt about this topic you can personally message me on tellyupdates and ask I will surly help you
chill pathan ! you know i love to blabbering, moreover i want to increasing your comment , so just relax, i got your point either : D 😀 😛
i like the way you count the comment
Hi,yaa I will sketch the little thinks about next one. Yes I like hospital scene after her first s*x. Why sanky can’t speak her heart out,but I really think he love swara it has no doub about that one. Friend I frankly told u write anything about on swasan scene I really love that one,u have no doubt on its.OK bye goodnight.
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and liking my part
Really thanks for liking hospital scene part and keep supporting me
Everything will be revealed soon and keep liking story
Stay blessed
Keep smiling always
hi pathan i m back and my exams got postponded so i got a leave for 4 days but last 2days i was busy in my studies but now i m free till thursday and coming to the epi .i read all the epis which i missed and this epi it was really awesome what is laksh plan i m very eager to know it . the epi was really awesome.
After long time you got free but really happy that you commented here after getting free from your exam and really thanks for liking my today part and I am happy that you got time to study well
So study well and write exam
thank u and ya happy bakrid to you and u know i started to a ff .
Thank for it and I saw in my email as you sent
superb i like it
Thanks for ur beautiful comment