Guys I am too busy so no time to bak bak but I will do bak bak in next episode
Sorry for short update
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Episode starts with raglak entering inside their house,
Ragini in nervous voice, ok, I will sleep in this room.
Lucky just nods.
Both are in auquard situation, so no one dared to talk, so both moves towards there room.
Ragini enters in that room but forgot to close door, her eyes fall on her mirror which was showing her reflection.
Ragini moves her hand on her face, thinks, am I this much bad that everyone hates me,
Why god why, you always give me pain, why it always with me.
For other people mirror shows virtual reflection but this mirror is showing me defeated and helpless ragini who dont have anything, which is fully dark from inside where no light of happiness, only darkness took place in my life. I always wanted that from now I will live happily but, no every time destiny plays game with me and make my life hell.
She sits at that place with thud sound, she cries bitterly, I am sorry swara, I am sorry for what I did with you today, I always wanted your happiness and for your happiness, I xan go to any extent, so today I sacrificed my life for your happiness swara, I know you will be very angry on me but I am helpless, I didnt had any option to support you because If I would not had been acted bad and as lucky wife so whole life you would not be able to move in your life because you whole time would be thinking about lucky only but now you will hate me as well as lucky and this will help you to move in your life swara, but I am really happy swara that I could help you in your life, I just pray for you that you will live happy life, again I my life played with me and now I am living with lucky just for agreement only ,
Ragini wipes her tears and thinks, from childhood I didnt got love but after my mother death, guardian supported me and I gone through so much painful life but I didnt got my love. But I still remember that day when I mate with sanky, he is really good guy who always took care of mine and supported me in every bad situation,
He was only person who helped me to come out of me hell life, I started liking his friendship and I got attracted towards him, because of his care, support and friendly love towards me because he was also alone in his life, I have seen his struggling life but always he supported me as good friend even if he was in deep tension, slowly slowly I started thinking that he has fallen for me only, I always used to think that he helped me too much so he must be loving me, so I started dreaming about him only, I had different type of love towards him which is not found in couples but I had some attraction towards him.
but my destiny again played, he didnt loved me, he just likes me as good friend but not more than that, which again made broke down in my life which is unacceptable for me.
I just thought to live my life with him happily but no he has some attraction towards swara. So he wanted my help to make swara out of this hell life, I also wanted to see my friend happily, so I got happy to see swasan marriage because now my both the friends will be happy in their life because my life is just like joker who dont have any value, neither any love,
While doing work with lucky, I dont know what happened to me I started attracting towards him but I dont know it was different, the attraction towards sanky and lucky was totally different, I dont know what type of attraction I had towards lucky and this is reason, i kissed him, I know very well how much I cried that day, but sanky was there to support me as always as best friend, but the day at which I crossed limits with lucky, from that day only I just took out the thought of living happy life in future because now no one will accept a non virgin girl who slept with strangers, that day again made big hole of my life but I never complained to anyone because it was not his mistake also but one thing, I know I cant get love in my life, I just suppressed my feeling towards lucky also, thats why I tried to go away from him, because I cant accept one more break down in my life, I cant break down again. But destiny played with me and I came to his house.
Just than she hears knocking sound of door.
Ragini immediately stands, lucky comes towards her.
Ragini makes herself presentable in front of lucky.
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Sanky takes swara in his house.
Swara sees his house which was not better than maheshwari mansion but it was good house where any one can live closer comfortable.
Sanky shows her room and says it is our room
Swara- our room means
Sanky – mine and your
Swara – angrily I can’t live with you
Sanky – but you have to live with me because you have no chance
Swara – no I can’t live with you got it
Sanky holds swara hand whisper please come with me
Swara resist but sanky holds her hand and made her sit on the bed
And he sits on his knees where his face and he was seeing swar.
Sanky places his hand on swara hand and continues I know you are very angry on me because of my deeds but please try to understand swara. I didn’t did anything which hurts you, all I did to save you swara please try to understand
Swara – in stern voice never please don’t start this drama again, I will not come in your trap
Tears escaped from sanky eyes but he hides it,
Sanky – it’s OK swara, its fully your wish, I will not say anything
Sanky stands and goes and bring tablets
Sanky – swara this is your tablet
Swara – but how
Sanky – I brought this tablets before only so eat it and sleep today you are very tired
Swara don’t resist and eats tablet,
Sanky made her lay down on the bad .
He sleeps other side by giving good space between them
Swasan thinks of their past life.
But no one slept
Background music
Khamoshiyaan aawaaz hain
Tum sun-ne to aao kabhi
Chhookar tumhe khil jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqaraar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..
Silences are sounds,
Sometime, come to listen..
They’ll blossom by just touching you,
Sometime call them home.
They’re restless to talk to you,
Let them speak..
(swasan were seeing each other with painful eyes of there past relationships and what all happened now, but no one open each other mouth but still sanky was feeling her pain)
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyaan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyaan
Silences, yours and mine,
Silences, wrapped around us, silences..
Kya us gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua
Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua
Mera samay to waheen pe hai thehra hua
Bataaun tumhe kya mere saath kya kya hua
Have you been to that street ever (again)
That the world hasn’t passed by for long..
My time is stuck there only,
What do I tell you what has hardened with me..
(sanky thinks of his past life and his bad days where he thinks no one would have gone at that place which is worst, swara also thinks of her dreadful past)
Khamoshiyan ek saaz hain
Tum dhun koi laao zaraa
Khamoshiyan alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le zara
Bekaraar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa.. haan..
Silences are a musical instrument,
You bring some tune,
Silences are words,
Come, sometime hum it with me..
They’re restless to talk,
Let them speak for a bit..
Khamoshiyaan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyaan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan
(sanky can feel restless tears of swara, but he has guilt thet he is also one of the reason of her tears but couldn’t speak because the dead silence of this room is speaking many things without uttering a word, only little cold air voice was coming in the room but full of pin drop silence )
Nadiya ka paani bhi khaamosh behta yahaan
Khili chaandni mein chhipi laakh khamoshiyan
Baarish ki boondon ki hoti kahaan hai zubaan
Sulagte dilon mein hai khaamosh uth-ta dhuaan
Even the river water flows silently here,
There are a million silences hidden in blossoming moonlight..
Where do raindrops ever have tongues,
In burning hearts, there is for rising silently..
(sanky place his hand on swara cheeks to remove her tears but swara don’t give any reaction because she was totally involved in her own thinking)
Khamoshiyan aakaash hain
Tum udne to aao zara
Khamoshiyan ehsaas hain
Tumhe mehsoos hoti hain kya
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zara.. haan..
Silences are sky,
Come, come to fly..
Silences are feelings,
Do you feel them?
They’re restless to talk to you,
Let them speak..
Khaamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khaamoshiyaan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan
( sanky was removing swara tears but no one was speaking but both were feeling touch of each other body in this bad time also which was making them calm from this all worries and tensions, but only heart beats sound was coming inside them because of there touch
Slowly after some minute of there silence love both slept)
116 Comments
great
i must say ragini’s character is very twisting but i like her character
and sanky how cutely was he trying to pacify swara
Thanks for liking rags character and liking story
Keep supporting me in this way rosy
And there will be many good swasan scenes
Heyyyy broo……………………… remember me………………. ur chotu sis yashu………………. ohhhhhhhhhhhhh god u have done such a marvellous job i mean dnt hav words i can connect to each emotion and really hav tears in my eyes !!!!!!!!!
Hats off to u bro…………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i’m speechless in ur honour………
awesome epi………….. just looking frwrd for happy moments between swasan and raglak…………………….. hope they get a happy life………….
Wow after long time I got your amazing comment
How can I forget you
You are really good
Sorry for bringing tears in your eyes but really I am happy to see after long time
By the way how was your exam
it was awesome like always bro……….
ya i knw how can u forget this idiot………………..hehehehe……………
Oh cool
Awesome update
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
Feeling bad for ragini, so many struggles in her life
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
awesome………
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
willing not to comment but cant control myself hoping for some raglak moment but again you did not give it. Hope get them in next part plz dont make next part boring by long flashback and normal convesation between raglak because in whole ff from 1st episode getting only on or two raglak moments otherwise they were talking about their previous life.feel bad for ragini hope in future she got true love and swara will understand her why ragini do that
First of all I am not writer who will write anything
My stories are always taken little slow and one more thing just for raglak I can’t ignore swasan because swasan readers are reading story so daily swasan are must of this ff because I am happy by swasan readers that no one told that I gave more raglak part but all supported me and one more thing they all also supporte me when I wrote any raglak special but here raglak fans are 3 to 4 only and they don’t have much problem with swasan because they are reading for story not for useless swasan and raglak fight and in this only 2 to 3 are there including you who are pure raglak and you guys never give any good comment even if I write raglak part but you will always bring out useless mistake so as a writer I know very well where to give raglak or swasan scene and one more thing raglak were taken neatly in this story
One more thing till yesterday you were bashing me because in story ragini was shown negative but today when I showed ragini positive than again problem
I don’t know your thinking criteria
One more thing if you really can’t say good things to person than we should also not say bad words also because I am also human and I told you before now raglak love story will start than also you are not understanding anything, I told this thing 100 times but I don’t know what is going in your mind, I really got pissed of you guys tantrums
One more thing I know you will feel bad but think about me who madly thinks of its readers that they will never feel bad but you guys never gave me any satisfactory comment.
So before pointing out any one first think 2 times
Hey ankita I can understand ur problem but yar trust me and if I give good raglak scene than at least give good comment because your every comment dissapoint me
I think you got my point of view
so you value only good comments i definetly do that if i feel that but i also disappointed a lot
you really do well with ragini part
You have to think little with broad mind because at this time it is needed to show ragini good Character and without giving raglak scene only her character can be revealed so today episode was needed but you told you dissapointed but I think you only like romance part only as you told I don’t like normal conversation so what is remaining in it either some happy time or romance which can’t be given now so understand story don’t revolve your mind around raglak only
Think about story not on this fans fandom fight
I like criticising comment and suggestion type comment but I hate these useless immature fans fandom comment
I am not talking about raglak romantic moment as you already said there love story is coming soon I am expecting there touchy moments so don’t assume youself
So please have patience in all these touchy moments and all
Don’t do hurry everything will come but slowly slowly as story will proceed
We can’t give anything directly
I know what type of scene you want but for that you have to trust on me that you never do
I will try to trust you and yes pavani di is right she can only understand
Oh god leave it
I really don’t want your trust
I am fade up of all these arguments
Because this thing will never make you understand anything
what is this Pathan ? no your bak bak, no joke time, no intense romance…:D 😀 😀
*igniting fire
oohhh poor Ragini…. Laksh there for you Dear!
Sanskar’s heart beat for Swara only…
OK from next time I will give joke time and bak bak pakka and about romance scene that are coming soon
Just wait for ahem ahem ahem in this story
Thanks for liking story
Wow the swasan moment were awesome…. ?thank u for the update… N ragini did for swara wow she is so sweet ???????
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I am happy that you regularly giving your valuable comment
Keep liking my story
nice amazing raglak scene plzz
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
Lovely episode… Feeling bad for Ragini… When I read Ragini’s part I was felt to cry… Very emotional episode…And the song was also very good… One of my favourite song… Waiting for the next episode… Stay happy and blessed… Keep smiling…
And one more thing where is joke time??? Its really disappointing ?… I know that you are really too much that’s why you didn’t do your bak bak also(don’t feel bad) but one joke is needed… But it’s OK no problem I can understand you situation… And the translation was also very good…I know that you took it from internet but it also took a lot of time… But I really like the episode so don’t feel bad…
Oh god I replied to you before but I think couldn’t replied
OK I am again writing by the way I also think from now I will surely give joke time that is really very good because it make story good
And don’t take tension on next episode I will write good bak bak
But really happy that you understood about my struggle in song selection it really means a lot to me
You are really good
Keep smiling always
Hey when you replied me???And where???I didn’t get you your point…
First of all thnx 4 chusing dis song…Bcz dis z 1 of my favr8favr888888888888888 song….But der z a big wala reason 4 lving d song dis much….OK d ep was really vry nyc….D translation also..I know tht u tuk it from net….Feeling bad 4 my cute Ragini n 4 SwaSan also..Stay blessed n keep smiling always…
Hey dont feel bad whatever u did in this ep it was really heart touching..N no need for ur bak bak..U can do it in future eps also…
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I am glad to see your support towards my ff and don’t take tension in next episode I will give long bak bak which will be in place of today’s bak bak so wait for next episode
Thanks for liking ragini
I know you must be happy today
nice
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
Nice
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
Thanks for ur beautiful comment sister
Sorry for not replying you but today I will reply you
Thanks bro?
My poor rag nd u made her that much mahann really I don’t like this much goodness
Yes Di she is very mahan thats why I was telling to wait for 2 episodes but some useless reader cant understand anything
It’s OK you don’t like but I only had two options either to make her mahan or to make her negative which is unacceptable by pessesive readers so batter to make mahan
But what to do Di raglak fans badly wanted to make her mahan so I have to make it but then also, no one praised me and told some useless mistakes except you Shruti and Riya which you guys always do
He he he yaa I know u was little irritated with some raglak fans I can understand but plzz don’t take them wrong bro they like u nd ur writing skills so they were expecting raglak story from u that’s it ya I know it’s hurting u by their comments but they really love u.iam not supporting them iam just telling their view nd I already told u there will bee bashing while writing but take them positively nd goo onn those will make u strong to face the society I know I have given a big lecture but I just said my view if u feel my words are fake then also no problem it’s ok just try to understand them don’t start hating them we all love you
No it’s OK Di you are correct but I don’t know what type of hurt they are if I write raglak scene than also they will bring some new mistake
I saw these type of useless comment from my slums story where raglak were really having better love story than swasan
There also
Here in this story when ever I write anything about them
If I wrote there s*x scene also in that 3 to 4 gave me lecture and told there useless point but now what they did really I am pissed of all these fans fandom
But don’t take tension
I will write good raglak story even if they say anything
You know very well only on your words I told to write good raglak story so don’t take tension there will be very good raglak story
Yep I know u r writing raglak track only for mee that’s y I always supports you nd ya iam not tensed about the role I was little concedered that may be all these things u may not hate ragini that’s it nd don’t worry we can not satisfy every reader that doesn’t mean we are not good writers as a writer I can understand ur intention as I too faced this type of bashing in one of my ff where swasan fans used to say will u doo this with ur hus and all then I just laughed at their immeture toughts
I don’t know Di about your ff but you are correct this thing is common in swaragini but don’t take tension
I know these fans fandom always create problems but leave it
Because I am writing for 3 to 4 people who always support me that are you Shruti riya malika sreevinjay
Oh my goddness…wt wz dat bhai……m just dumbfound….u r amazing….d way uhhh potrayed der feeling wz just awestruck…….n i knew it uh won’t make ragini bad……so dear bashers do uh wanna say anything now….i think ua mouths r zipped ..??????…..yahooooooo ….n nxt tym before bashing think abt ua wrds n abt whom u r talking…..keep smiling alwyz bhai……????
Wow sister such a good reply to bashers
I am happy that you liked ragini positive part but I was telling from before to these bashers to just wait for 2 episodes because sabar ka fal mitha hota he but these guys didn’t understand and bashed
But it’s OK I am happy that you trust me unconditionally
Uh r ryt bhai …sabar ka fal hmesha mitha hi hota hai …bt dez bashers r too much restless dat they can’t wait fo 1 or 2 episodes to reveal d mystery…..i hope now dey will thnk thrice bfr typing doz unacceptable wrds….
You are fully correct my sister
Well done Irfan…. loved d way u portrayed Ragini’s self conversation…
it’s very painful to know about it… But don’t worry Ragini time is going to change ,, ur life is going to change ,, ur sorrow is going to convert into happiness ,, u just have some faith to GOD…(it’s for some readers too)
Coming to SWASAN part ,,,, it’s really pleasurable for mee..Sometimes silence speaks more then word n work..The song u selected wass preety much perfect with d scene..loved it…
Sanskar’s heart only beats for his princess… awwwwwwww…. thiss iss soo true… if u didn’t tell me na though i knew itt… it’s UNIVERSAL TRUTH…like sun rises in d east ,,, n my SWASAN love each other unconditionally…. *board smile*
But Swara don’t u trust him ¿*confuse* huhhh u do u doo ,, that’s why u r with him…. accept it okkkk….
Thnxx Irfan for d chappy…
Kakali please forgive me. ?????? and radhika is saying that we are fighting like them. Just read her reply. I didn’t get any email from you. ?????????
Really dii ??? but i did … don’t know what’s wrong ¿¿¿ today also i mailed u…just cheek once dii…
n about Radhika she iss a sweet kiddo ,,, she is just joking…
Yes but we really are not fighting naaa like raglak. Tom and Jerry. Just tell me one thing did you email radhika if she reply then tell her about me. She will explain you mine situation.
Nooo diii neither she nor u replied… huhhh…anyway take care…
Thank for your beautiful comment kakali and really thanks for liking ragini part
Oh I know your sanky loves your swara unconditionally so don’t take tension he will make her understand
One more thing swara will soon understand him and his care because now she is little scared about it
Awesome
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and I think you commented first time in my ff
But happy that you commented
Aahh bro i m really confused wth rags charcter…well c did all dis fr swara..its rlly gud..hope truth come out soon…nd swasan scene ws too good…loved it…waitng fr nxt
Thanks for liking my part by the way tell me why you are confused with ragini character
I will clear your confusion
superb.swasan part r too gd……
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
wow! what an emotional chappy Bhai…. Literally I feel like crying…. how could you write so good about everyone’s feelings….? I mean seriously day by day you are making me a very big fan of yours…. plz post the next part soon….
I am amazed to see your amazing comment for me
And I am happy that you are liking my story in very good way
Keep supporting me like this
always Bhai….
Raginiiiiiiiiii feeling bad for you.!!!!!!! What is this yr irfan. Hate you. !!!!!! She suffered a lot. She sacrifice everything for her friends Swasan. Aaaaaaaah. It was emotional yr when I read ragini scene. It touch my heart. Why why so much sadness. Can’t see her like that man. When I read ragini part tears was forming in my eyes but when I read swasan part I started crying. Everyone swasan, ragini, and laksh also suffered a lot. It was really painful yr.
Yes mica truly speaking .ragini !!!laksh is there naa for you don’t worry. He will fill your life with happiness and love. For swasan they need each other company and support. Irfan you are very bad. You made me cry!!!!!!! Aaaah i missed her yr. I missed my friend after reading your ff. You say that you don’t know how to write emotional scene then what is this.??????? Y
Update soon!!!!! And yes if you get time please be regular. I know you are busy still please. Can’t wait for next ep. Keep entertaining us but not like this ep. I don’t want any painful and enotinal scene . Sorry if you feel bad. May Allah bless you.
And the song was fabulous. Heart touching. ??????
I am happy to see your suggestive comment but what to do story badly needs emotional part and in ragini part if I would not had added emotional scene to make her positive and didn’t told her mahan work than raglak readers would really had bashed me.
So I really trying my level best to keep story liked by every readers but from next time I will try my level best to best to decrease emotional scene because from now emotional scene are too much in this story
I am happy to see your amazing comment towards my ff
Don’t think much about your friend because now nothing can be changed but just pray for her that she must be happy whenever she is
OK boss I can forget her in my mind but not in my heart. I always pray for her and you all also. Don’t worry about them . If they truly love ragini then they will understand .
OK cool thanks for understanding me
Amazing yaar I love Rags Charakter poor Girl….Feeling really Bad for her…n also for swasan
Thanks for loving swasan and ragini part
Amazing yaar I love Rags Charakter poor Girl….Feeling really Bad for her…n also for swasan ?????
Swasan part is soo lovely
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
nice..
Thanks for ur beautiful comment
Nice
Thanks for commenting
Awesome
Thanks for commenting
hey !!!!! pathan 😉 😉
howz u……
in previous chappy i didn’t able to comment more of my health issue ..but m fyn dis tym 😉
coming to chappy….
superb part as always 🙂 🙂 🙂
ur writing skills are awsm .
give some to me that i can score well in my law subjects 😉 😉 😉
ya… post asap….tc…
ya ya bhabhi se milne ta tareeka pooja ko pasand aaya !!
carry on guyzz…!!! 😉 😉
Thanks for liking my story and it’s OK I can understand ur studies are more important and don’t take tension of commenting whenever your are free you can comment on my ff
And it’s cool you liked mine idea
By the way in your laws subject you have to merge up everything
merge???
sorry i didn’t understand
Felt bad fr my ragini..nice update dear…waiting fr intense raglak scenes
Thanks for commenting
And are you raglak or swasan fan
Am a ragini fan..nyone wid ragini is ok fr me…if u ask btw raglak and swasan den definitely raglak
OK cool
I just got chance to read your ff as I was not well..so ragini has sacrificed for swasan …you have amazing writing skill but when it comes to me I always got low marks for literature..waiting for next part…