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Guys listen one thing
This is last second episode of this story and I mate many girl here on this ff because many people read my ff and also on this journey really I got one bad point in few girl (only very few girl I am telling)
I really don’t like one thing that if they don’t like the track then what they will do, they will stop commenting but why can’t you say that if we are not liking this track so you should tell that Irfan it’d not good track or you should change it but no one will say like this why I don’t know, one more thing guys I am writer not god who will know that I am writing good or bad, I write what I feel so you guys have to tell that Irfan you are not on track or anything like that, I never feel bad but I accept their comments, this problem I didn’t faces in this story.
In this story maximum are reading till now but in my last story I felt like that so before going from here I just thought to tell this point
One more thing I really felt here, if by chance I argue with anyone or I couldn’t reply to there comment or I couldnt took there comment seriously or forgot to complete there wish then what you will do, just stop commenting because girlish ego will be hurt isn’t it, that’s why I just think too much before commenting here because I know girl character they don’t say anything and will just feel bad and stop commenting but if you want real solution than you must tell that Irfan we told this and you didn’t do or you can say you are hurt from my comment or my any act or I replied your comment rudely, I will really ask sorry for it rather than vanishing because if you vanish how I will know my mistake.
One more thing to some commwntors Mt comment was rude but really guys as a writer first we took too much stress to write ff then we gets criticising comment of fandom everyday but also I try to make myself calm but also by chance sometime in replying to any comments I really gets rude so your girlish ego will hurt but rather than hurting girlish ego if you feel me as friend you must tell your problem
I know many will hurt but really I want you guys be frank.
Guys I am again telling sorry if I hurt you, but I am just telling for your future.
Guys I have seen this thing in my freind and real life also because I have seen many friends and girl get angry but we never know what is reason so please try to be little open in the thing if you don’t like anything, you should tell because this thing will help in decreasing distance and misunderstanding which sometimes created without telling your heart out
Here on tellyupdates also I got these type of character so I just thought to tell you
If you felt bad I am again saying.
I know sometimes some had did little kidding with me but I took seriously here, to them really I am asking sorry, I know they must be reading also so I am telling sorry to them, that people got hurt but guys really here in replying comment I really don’t think much and just reply normally and may be without thinking I replied to there comment so they must had felt bad but guys my mind don’t work , so sometimes I reply in bad way
So sorry but if you have any problem with me to any people so big sorry from my side because story will end in next episode so I thought to tell
So guys sorry for such long bak bak
If you have any problem so please tell me openly without hesitation
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Episode starts with person is lying on Sanky lap,
Sanky shouts lucky bro.
Lucky says in my life I can’t show brotherly love to you but.
Sanky cries says no bro you will be fully fine please don’t loose hope.
Just than police arrived and catches to every criminal, and ambulance also comes and they take him to hospital.
In hospital.
Ragini and swara sitting just than doctor comes and tell that operation is successful any she is fully fine now.
Swaragini gets happy, just about to enter in room than they see sanky coming while taking person in his hand,
Sanky runs towards operation theater, swaragini sees it and also runs to see what happened.
Sanky lie lucky on bad.
Swara cries while seeing his condition.
Swara ask what happened to lucky.
Sanky while crying says bro is shot by bullet.
But other side ragini condition was worst, she can’t speak word out, her mouth was sealed, her thinking ability also stopped.
She was seeing lifeless lucky, her heart starts sobbing out, tears were escaping from her eyes without any emotions.
Just than doctor comes and tells them to come out.
But ragini doesn’t move.
Jise zindagi dhoondh rahi hai
Kya ye woh makaam mera hai
Yahaan chain se bas ruk jaaun Kyu
dil ye mujhe kehta hai
The one which my life is searching Is this that destination?
Why does my heart say to Just stop here?
( sanky sees ragini condition, he comes near her and takes her out of room but ragini only cries she don’t know what’s happening to her)
Jazbaat naye se mile hain Jaane kya asar
ye hua hai Ik aas mili photo mujhko
Jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai
I have got new emotions
I don’t know what effect is this
I got a ray of hope again
When somebody accepted me
( ragini sits on ground while leaning to door, she don’t know what’s happening to her but she can’t bear separation from lucky, her hope of happy life was going from her)
Haan Kisi shaayar ki ghazal
Jo de rooh ko sukoon
ke pal Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Like a ghazal bya poet
Which brings peace to the soul
I have found somebody as if A gypsy has found a home
Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Like a morning of a new season
Or afternoon of winter I have found somebody
as if A gypsy has found a home
Jaise koi kinaara Deta ho sahaara
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par
Like a corner gives support
I found him/her at a turn
( ragini thinks that how he showed care and love towards her, her heart starts feeling with happiness but again this separation came, her ray of making happy married life came after seeing him)
Koi raat ka taara Karta ho
ujaala Raise hi roshan kare
woh shehar
The way a star lightens up the sky,
She/he lightens up the city
Dard mere woh bhula hi gaya
Kuchh aisa asar hua Jeena mujhe
woh phir se woh sikha raha
I forgot all my pain Such was the effect She/he taught me live again
( ragini thinks how he told her to live her life happily, how he supported her when she was going to give him divorce and gave her name of him )
Jaise baarish kar de tar
Ya marham dard par Koi
mujhko yun mila hai Jaise banjare ko ghar
It’s as if rain Or a medicine for pain I have found somebody as if A gypsy has found a home
Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar
Muskaata yeh chehra Deta
hai jo pehraa Jaane chhupata
kya dil ka samandar
Auron ko toh har dam saaya
deta hai Woh dhoop mein hai khada khud magar The smiling face is keeping watch I have no idea what is hidden in his/her heart
He/she gives shade to all the whole time
But is in sunlight himself/herself
( arginine cried bitterly says no I wanted to become your shade, i can’t leave without you lucky I can’t live, my soul will die once again, you are my hope please come back please)
Chot lagi hai usey
phir kyun Mehsoos mujhe
ho raha hai Dil tu bata de
kya hai iraada tera
Why am I feeling the pain
When he/she is wounded Heart,
tell me what are your intentions?
Main parinda besabar
Tha uda jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar
I was like a impatient bird
That flew here and there
I have found somebody as if
A gypsy has found a home
Naye mausam ki sehar
Ya sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Jaise banjare ko ghar
( ragini also think how much pain she is beating now, she whispers I LOVE YOU LUCKY, I LOVE YOU,
I never realised in time but now I realised I will tell you when you will be fine.
While other side SWASAN were crying and thinking about there past incidence with lucky.
Sanky stands up and think no he can’t be week, he says today my sister and my brother needs me.
I have to see both of them.
Sanky removes his tears moves to uttera room with heavy heart.
As he enters in room, sanky sees uttera seeing him with teary eyes,
He goes and hugs her so that she can’t see his tears.
Uttera also receprocats hug and tells bro don’t hide your tears, I know lucky bro is shot by gun.
Sanky sees her in shocked face.
Uttera – I got to lno everything please don’t cry.
Both brother sister cry while thinking about there changed life.
Time goes like that only lucky condition starts becoming good because he was not injured badly.
NEXT DAY
doctor comes out of room and says thank god lucky got conscious and he is fully fine now and everyone can meet.
Ragini got too much happy to know that which is noticed by swara, sanky was about to go but swara stops him as tells ragini to go and meet him .
Swara comes closer to ragini whisper it’s nice time to tell your feeling also.
Ragini nods, enter in room.
As ragini enters both raglak sees each other With lovely eyes, the spark of love was clearly visible in there eyes after tragedy.
Ragini sits near him and starts caressing his hairs while lucky feel her touch and smiles seeing her ,
Ragini Says do you know lucky when you injured, you don’t know I have gone made by seeing it than I realised one thing lucky, I know it’s not correct time and I also know may be you don’t have feelings but today I am very scared by seeing you in this condition so I can’t wait for other days,
Lucky I love you, I love you lucky.
Now there was deep silence between them.
Lucky got happy as well as shocked by seeing her confession.
Lucky just see her lovingly
Ragini thinks he must be angry she about to say but lucky pulls her and kisses on her lips.
Ragini got shocked but after sometime she also respond to his kiss with same passion, after kiss both parts away, ragini feels little shy but lucky whisper I love you too ragini, I loved you when I saw you but I realise very late but thank god to gun shooter because of him you realized you love ,
Ragini angrily – never says this word again in your life I will die .
Lucky – OK I will never.
Just than they hear voice from behind, if your love is over than we are also there to whom you can love.
Ragini turns and see SWASAN standing behind time while sanky was smiling naughtily.
Ragini feels embarrassed and went out while all three laugh by seeing her antiques.
Sanky sits near to lucky says bro you don’t know how much we got afraid but happy that you are fully fine but I am sorry bro because of me you.
Lucky @ stop here only sanky you are my brother and I can give my life for you please don’t ask sorry, I will feel bad z
Sanky – OK never ever.
Lucky – how is uttera is she fine.
Sanky – bro don’t take tension she is fine but in 2 to 3 days she and you both will be freed from here.
In 3 days uttera got fine, and lucky also they all happily went to maheshwari mansion
AFTER 3 DAYS IN MAHESHWARI MANSIO
Police comes.
Swara sees it and ask what happened.
Police – we came here to meet uttera about that death case of factory, because we want to confirm that Mr. Malhotra is real culprit or not.
Just than they hear voice behind them it was uttera, she says yes Mr. Malhotra was also there in murder case but real master mind was Mr. Durga Prasad.
Lucky shouts no utttera you are wrong, he can’t be.
Uttera – yes bro real culprit is him only, I know you must have seen him lying on bad lifelessly at the end of life stage as he is going to die but reality is that when dp got to know that shekhar have unwanted relation with ap aunty from that day he decides to kill them because he can’t accept the society taunts so he killed ap aunty and no one knows about it but I saw him killing her so he tried to kill me also, and he shot gun on me and ran from there but after that I don’t know.
Swara speaks I know what happened after that, me and ram uncle came and saw uttera lying lifeless so we took her to hospital but they told to take her to Switzerland than from that day she is treated and now she got fine.
Police – but where is dp Now.
Lucky – he is died on his normal death only after factory case.
Swara – yes dp is died but he was acting to be going to die before and doing all cheap tricks to kill my father.
Sanky speaks and at last in that case he killed your father and trapped my father .
Police hear there point and also Mr. Malhotra accepted his crime, that he did with dp.
At last police frees ram uncle.
Now all got too much happy in there life.
Ram accepted swaragini as his daughter in law.
While they had happy family,
Swara -i can’t believe that we got our all happiness back.
Ram – yes beta, but I couldn’t prove myself good father because of me my both son have to face so much problem and also my daughter.
Sanlak comes and hug him, no dad never say li that you are best and now we don’t want any bad thing to happen in our life.
Now we will have happy life.
Ram – yes beta. He caresses lucky hair says I didn’t able to love you, I missed big part of your life beta, I am sorry.
Lucky @ no dad please don’t think now we are happy, we should forget our past.
Sanky says now I am bringing papers to merge our every propety.
As he goes to bring paper he found same file which swara didn’t shows to anyone.
Sanky sees that file while thinking
That is May be of someone.
As he opens it sanky got shocked by seeing it files.
There was medical report of shekhar after that factory case that mean he was alive after that case.
In this clearly written he died because of his daughter carelessness because she didn’t gave him her bone marrow transplant
What swara did that he died , sanky gets confused by this.
He immediately rushes towards swara and ask, swara why you didn’t told that your father is not died that day.
Swara didn’t say anything she was about to move but sanky hold her and ask that why you didn’t tried to check your bone marrow to your father bone marrow when doctor asked to do that,
Swara was numb by his words , tears were flowing from her eyes but she don’t tell anything.
Sanky again ask tell me reality swara what you are hiding it.
Everyone comes and ask what happened.
Sanky tells everything ragini and ram gets shocked that he got to know everything
Sanky tells swara please tell reality I want to know
But only tears were escaping from swara eyes, she can’t take anything anymore so she runs from there leaving sanky shocked.
Sanky shouts what happened to her I will ask her reason, sanky started going towards swara but ragini shouts he hears voice from back.
SWARA IS NOT REAL DAUGHTER OF SHEKHAR GADODIA………………….
sanky legs stopped moving he got shock by her words sanky turn and sees ragini who is standing, she continues yes I told correct she is not daughter of shekhar gadodia but today you gave her pain to think about her past life…………….
Sanky still shock, than who is she………………..
Episode end on shocked face of sanky and angry face of ragini
Precap – swaragini real past, swara painful life, sanky ask forgiveness from swara romantic way , last episode.
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Guys again I am telling sorry from my side if I am wrong
And if anyone has problem with me tell openly because I don’t want to go from tellyupdates world with heavy heart.
One more thing you don’t know guys I never thought that these much people will read this ff
This ff when I started I felt that no one will read but I never thought this much people love it
But one-thing I want to say you all guys are too too good.
It’s like blessing like me person who just came in tellyupdates newly only and got this much popularity and love and also like me person who is not good writer just time pass writer I am but you gave me too much love.
I do too much mistake in writing than also you guys read my ff with so much difficulty and also never complain.
I really love that you all guys are too understanding.
But sorry from my side if I did some mistakes guys.
I know somewhere I may not go to your expectations for that big sorry guys
Don’t take tension last episode of this ff will be updated soon as possible
And anything you want to ask you can ask
Keep smiling always
Stay blessed
86 Comments
Nice twists
Interesting
Thanks for commenting
nice and finally mytery reolves
Thanks for commenting
Just loved it a lot. I am a regular reader of your ff. I like it a lot all types of twists and turns you hive makes it more interesting. Upload ASAP…??
Thanks for commenting
Just loved it a lot. I am a regular reader of your ff. I like it a lot all types of twists and turns you have made makes it more interesting. Upload ASAP…??
Awesome as always….!!
Thank for commenting
Are you crazy koe itna sara kesy lecture lekh sata hai only for sorry gussa sub ko ata hai per choro soch rahy hogy yai kun hai jo itna bol rahe hai ek bar comment kar k chale gae per mery papers horahy thy na and sorry ager mai ny kuch galat bola ho
First of all I understood your half comment only
But one thing I am only telling that I didn’t felt bad by this story
I was telling about last story
I know many have exams so best of luck for it
Thanks for commenting
No problem its good you don’t understand and one more think your ff is awesome
I understood now everything and don’t take tension I am not angry on anyone of this ff because I got same love from starting to end but in my last ff I just felt bad but this much I wrote today that reason I will tell you tomorrow and I just read and yes it is really too too much I wrote
Mai ny only yai ff read kya bake ka pata nahe and best of luck for your future
OK cool but if you want to know what type of cheap language few girl uses in my ff then you can ask me I will give you link of it.
That type of cheap comment you even can’t read also
Ok I don’t need to read cheap comments bus itna bolna hai chill jahan flower hotay hain wahan thorns bhi hoty hain
Thanks
Yew you are correct but one thing to be noted that here there are many thrones which daily pierce me so it’s better if we clear one day than next time there will be less thrones
But it’s OK leave it
Really thanks for understanding.
You are correct at your point also
And you are also correct on your point
Cool girl
Amazing
Thanks for commenting
Interesting and amazing ☺
Many twist to come……
Raglak confession is just mind blowing
Swara is not real daughter of shekhar gadodia ……. hmmmm……very much suspense .
Correctly said bhai . We girls have so called girlish ego . It’s to much to handle . And in that when we hurt others feeling . We can’t understood .
It’s a big thing that you kept your morals first? . And you didn’t bash any of us and our comments . You respected a girl’s feeling . Even after so many of us bash your way of writing .
??Congrats for your 2nd last episode ?? . Hope to see you writing a new ff in future . In your free time .
Next part soon bhai . Surely give us epilogue too . It’s a request .
Thanks for supporting me sister
I am glad to see your comment but I really wrote too much today and it’s reason I will tell you tomorrow
Ohhh gosh wt wz dat again a big shock….uh r becoming mysterious king bhai…..too much shocks i can’t handle……n d uh song uh selected wz just fab…..it really expressed ol der emotions…..m nt finding words to appreciate uhh….uh said na dat v cn ask anything ….so i want uh to strt a new story atleast on 8 jan cz its my b’day …i know its too late bt if uh cn post b4 ds i vl b glad… .plzzzz… n i cn neva frgt ds story itz too close to my hrt….cz here a got a sweet bro lyk uhh …….stay blessed…..
Thanks for commenting
Your birthday is on 8th January it’s good
Yes I didnt decided for new story
I may come with small stories in month or may be os or may not be
So that I have to see
Till that time you can contact me on email
My email address is [email protected]
awesome irfan and i can understand ur pov and u r correct at ur point dont feel sorry and ya i want a happy ending thatsall and ya i ll try to come wattpad
Thanks for commenting and supporting me
And ending is happy only
Hello bhayya,.. I’m new here. Can i get the summary of ur stry..bcz there r many episodes.
I will give analysis of my story only because next episode is last episode of this ff
So after that episode I will write analysis of this story is which i will show what I showed in this story
Nice part u talk a lot bhai and yes girls are shy and sensitive and get hart very soon but we say our point openly we are not always shy some time we become very bold then boys become shy and they look very bad
OK you are correct and today I really told too much
and irfan i created account on wattpad but i dont know how it works because i dont know how to operate it will u please help me
Message me I will help you on wattpad account
Or do one-thing you can give your whattpad I’d so that you can contact me
I will surely help you
my wattpad id is “mahi016”
hey !!!!!!!!!!!
u made me sad with ur bak bak pathan
by saying u r going 🙁 🙁
m gonna misss u badly………
amazing chappy…… as usual…….
finally mystery gonna reveal……..
so excited for nxt chappy……
post asap…..
tc…….
come back soon 😉 😉
It’s OK don’t feel bad you can talk to me on whatsapp or tellyupdates private messages also
But for starting new ff I really didn’t decided
I have plenty of ideas but still thinking whether I will able to go for it or not
But happy I got lovely reader like you
Bhai… Frst of all m so sry for not commenting… But frankly saying I didnt do it purposefully…. Actually I didn’t get time to read ff. When I used to get time I used to write my ff so today I got time I have read all the parts which ever I didn’t read but shocked to know that u r sad becoz of nt commenting. Whatever m sry for that Bhai. N yeah u said crct girls have somewhat girlish ego…. I think shld be there but not too much. But I want to say many don’t have too much of ego…. N I’m gonna miss ur ff. Plz come with other ff soon… M waiting
No it’s not like that I didn’t felt bad for low commenting.
Because in this story I got too much support till now.
But I was telling about my last story
Most important I got argued wish 2 girl and in angry way I wrote this all useless things
Really I also feeling guilty what I wrote
Don’t feel guilty Bhai. Normally anyone don’t loose their patience level unless some one really make u angry… Ok but sry once again for not commenting… I hope u will forgive ur little sis
Hey don’t ask sorry from my but I am happy that you are reading my story
This is biggest thing
Keep smiling always
And if you can’t comment in future it’d OK I can understand
Keep smiling always
Tq Bhai…. I’ll try to comment….
Its OK cool
awesome raglak part is amazing give more raglak scene at least in last episode
From 23rd episode I am giving good raglak part
But happy to see your comment after long time
as usual an awesome chappy Bhai…. n why are u telling sorry…? u r not at all wrong in any way… so plz don’t be sorry… we just love you a lot…. n this ff will always remain in our heart… coz this is one of the best ff I’d read in telly updates…. I enjoyed this story a lot…. n I’m gonna miss u verrrrry much…. plz do come with a new story if possible… take care n stay blessed…. n thanks for giving us such a wonderful ff…..
I am glad to see your love towards my ff
Keep supporting me
Happy that you understood me
Hai irfan….and u didn’t reveal abt the person who was blackmailed laksh…..and l m a silent reader of ur story….i didn’t missed episode.this story is really good….
I revealed who blackmailed lucky and that was mr. Malhotra
Happy a silent reader commented on my ff
Nice
Thanks for commenting
Wow pathan what an emotional episode… And why you choosed this song…its my best friend’s fvrt song and now she is in hospital… Even in episode it all about hospital scenes so I just cried away…
But wow raglak scenes were awesome… And the song on situation was like cherry on for my emotion it was just too hard to read in one go….
And then swara’s past no guessing just waiting for next
And about your note on ‘girlish ego’
To be frank and straight forward I think it was a lil much….its OK if they don’t say anything but its a prob when you say something coz their words are only for you…but your words are for all of your reader..and you know almost everyone is here are girls the word ‘girlish ego’ was a lil rude…coz for girls its not ego its their way to show u are wrong… U know as it is said”not to speak anything is also a way to tell that you did wrong”…and how can we forget”silent screams cause more destruction”…. So its not ego Mr.irfan pathan…you better got that….
Stay blessed
I am not telling about those people but I am telling for few
I think I just highlighted 2 times the word few.
I only point on those girl who went in my nerves,
I am too much tired first because of useless some girls who proposed me and just used some cheap things.
Secondly I am too much tired of raglak fans bashing and some girl bashing that I write anything I don’t know how to take plot and I am making people fool
And I am unnecessarily promoting story so there are many readers of my ff
One more I am tired of useless argument which many do who don’t read story fully and argue on character that swara did wrong and sanky did wrong and after argument they vanish because there ego hurt
Too many examples I have
But today I just told anything what I want to say that I couldn’t say clearly.
But really after writing this part two girl of tellyupdates really messaged me and unnecessary started qualering.
My mind really got too disturbed because first I take too stress to write ff then I they quarrel like hell if I show to other, they wil also get shocked.
So after that quarrel I started writing note and in angry tone I just told too much so for it big sorry from my side miss. Haya malik.
One more thing I just saw plenty of cheap comments also here who just badly badmouth me many times.
Some were to whom I told no that I will not become there boyfriend and for many girls I really didn’t got to know real reason why they are unnecessary angry on me
Sorry before waiting this part two girl quarrel with me and I got very disturbed and all past thing and bashing came in my mind and in fully angry and disturber mind I wrote anything may be it is too much so for it sorry
Irfan I had another doubt swara was a little girl when uttera was shoted and ram was a poor man then how could they admitted uttera at swizerland….and after tht accident also shekar was alive only so she might be helped the ram with that medical’s report then y she didn’t help him…..y ram didn’t say anything abt uttera to his own son atif who is crying for his sister’s death…..y he didn’t say anything to atif that swara is meeting him……and y he didn’t say anything abt atif to swara……
Yes I got your point and it’s answer I gave in next episode please read it
Really thanks for commenting and liking story
As well as asking doubt
Keep smiling always
If you have more doubt you can ask me without hesitation
Off bro how mch u wasted ur energy by gvng such a big lecture nd dat too fr only sorry??
Nd to da point u said right only about our ego coz i hav also experienced in my life..nd ha some girls r not frank, thy r shy nd often we get hurt nd took simple thngs seriously..well m nt dat bro..m mch frank nd i always try to undrstnd da situation nd points..nd frankly m tlng u dat watevr i flt by rdng ur ff i cmmntd whole heartedly.even of ne othr writer i want to b frank in cmmntng…nd dnt misunderstud me m nt tkng ur tlk on me..i just said it nrmally..i dnt want to hurt u..u r really a good writer nd i appreciate ur writng..well enough of my bak bak..c nw i ws tlng u abt big lecture but i gave sch a big one??
Cmng to epi it fantabulous..loved it..mny things revealed tdy..nd rlly i m shocked dat by knwng swara is nt real daughter of shekhar..
Nd raglak confession ws soo good..it ws in emotional way but loved it
Nd i dnt have an accnt on wattpad but will create it nd will followu but i wl create after completion of my exam..
Waitng egrly fr nxt part
Thanks for commenting here
I am happy to read your point of view
You are really good person
And you are fully correct at your point
Please don’t feel I will get hurt
You are good person keep smiling always
Awesome n amazing
Eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
Thanks for commenting
At first what you said that “I am not a good writer only a time pass writer I am” right?What do you mean by this statement??????Tell me…You are a time pass writer…Oh yes that’s why many times you crossed century in comment…You are a time pass and not good writer so this is the reason you crossed century isn’t it…See at first I was really very happy after seeing your ff in tellyupdates page of Swaragini…But after reading your today’s bak bak my mood got spoilt and I am hell angry on you…Why you said like this????You know what I am feeling to kill you by my hands…Why you always considers yourself as a bad writer????For some cheap commenters… They are always there to bash you…Even bashers are also there to bash anyone…. For some useless commenters you are saying like this…And I also know this that there are some girls who bashed very badly or very bad things they said to you…So what???There are many readers who supports you always…Then why are you saying like this???Some girls have girlish ego I also know this…And I said also said this that yes girls are like this…But what you will do for it???You can’t change their behaviours…And from when you are bothering about these things???Very bad thing is this…I am telling you that don’t say like this in future…If you will agian say like this then surely I will kill you????…
Now coming to the episode…Raglak part was amazing superb….And thanks a lot for giving the song banjaara by my request…It really means a lot to me…And thank god that Ragini realised her love…But today’s episode is too much shocking…Today also you gave a lot of suspense…Swara is not Shekhar’s daughter….Then whose daughter she is???Eagerly waiting for the next episode…And I am happy that(not that much because of your bak bak) Laksh and Uttara are fine now…Update the next episode soon…And again I am telling that don’t say that you are a time writer again in future…And if you will say this again then you know its cconsequences… And again thanks a lot for giving my most favourite song…Stay happy and blessed…
OK sister your anger accepted
So from next time I will never do this type of big mistake.
I will keep this thing in my mind sister
So from next time I will not use this type of words
Happy that you supported me unconditionally
You are fully correct at your point and sorry for dissapointing you
Happy yoy loved today chapter
Keep smiling always
Whaaaaatttt swara is Not dougther of Shekhar poor Girl yaar…
Awsome epi yaar feeling bad that you will end soon…
Thanks for commenting and supporting me but I have to end this ff
Hey bro after many days naa actually I was really very busy first navrathri pooja nd next my cousins marriage so didn’t get time to read nd comment sorry .nd u r ending it y soo soon nd again lot of suspences
Don’t ask sorry Di and I know you must be still busy now also because of Diwali and all
But happy you commented and don’t take tension Di whenever you get free
Tell me I will give you link of previous parts
Awesome… Amazing…
Thanks for commenting
Hi iam a silent reader for this story I started to study from middle only but I was a reader not a commenter then one more thing about girlish ego yes we have but that does not mean we get angry hyper we should or directly comment over silent speaks thats girls nature when you din get comment its simple we dnt like so we dnt use or comment using words and less like boys when girl get Angry we will be silent but you boys talk too much and atlast simply tell a sorry just forget.really. OK leave but from my point this story is some wat different from others some odd movements may be there but according to me it’s too different and peculiar.iam telling in good way only.some like to write some like to read that’s all.about appreciation part though they din comment then try to search for your other ff because of your writing when some one search for over other creativity it’s a appreciation from my point of view. Last but not least nice story like for this generation
Oo Sakshi please correct
Here I got worst character of girl.
I never thought any girl will use cheap cheap words to say anything to boy.
I never thought in my dreams also the person to whom I don’t know.
I became there enemy really this is very immature mentality I found in few girls.
One more thing if we are arguing than second day they will stop commenting
One more thing keeping silent is not solution if you have problem than you must tell frankly only
Keep it.
But I never found in anyone .
Here if by chance I forget to reply comments to any commentor than they will stop commenting because there ego hurt.
I have seen in some girl so I am telling really i got too much annoyed by all these things
But happy you liked my story as well as concept so keep smiling always
Hi pathan this is the first time I am commenting in your ff I am a silent reader in the starting days frankly to say I used to skip your description and went directly to story but ur conversation is so casual and open hearted that I started to read it
Today my reason for commenting is I laughed by reading ur conversation today it’s true that guys think abour girls like that only.in half way it’s true only. Anyway coming to the story part it’s a different concept and it has variations so it has these many readers.don’t think too much about who are commenting about this story wrongly and u first stop thinking that this story Base is not that much good .try to come with different thoughts next time……
First of all I have many readers in my ff so I never feel bad
But about my thinking I am telling that really this tellyupdates girl suck my mind.
The immaturity they showed really too much many times I saw this think in my ff
I never had any feeling about girl like this but I pointed on few girl if you point out.
So I am telling to few girl who unnecessary eats brain
So I am tired of all these useless fighting and all
I know it’s base is good and happy you loved it
Keep smiling always
Hey it was awesome but plzz don’t end it, it is one of my fav ff
Thank for commenting