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i am overwhelmed by ur beautifull comments
i got 88 comments in prologue (including mine)
78 comment in first episode (including mine)
77 comment in second episode (including mine)
73+ in third episode (including mine)
guys i will ask about romance in last part of episode please give ur suggestion if you feel so
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episode starts with lucky looking ragini with wide smile
club lady – so ragini roy came you can meet her
ragini comes near him and forward her hand,
lucky blinks at her whie shaking his hand
ragini- smile evily
club lady- hi ragini you are very good model why you need to come her
ragini moving her gaze on lady so what ?? with questioning look
club lady fumbles vo i was just.. asking here mainly married women and men comes who are unsatisfied with there marriage relation
ragini- so what to do reply without caring about her words
club women- vo its ok but can i ask you something relies by moving her gaze on other people
ragini- looks at lucky reply yes
club women- so if any other want to meet you will you want them to give payment
ragini looks at her as she will kill her
club women quickly went from there place
ragini sees her winks on lucky
lucky- so mrs ragini roy came here
ragini- yes just to spy on one person
lucky- who
ragini- there is someone i will not tell you (club women was seeing them from distance)
lucky- ohh so what you want from me
ragini- your company offered me for add
lucky smiles mischieviosly comes near her “but you said you will not come i think you were busy ” says by giving more stress on word busy
ragini- sees into his eyes and smiles so i am free now
lucky- by pointing her to seat on couch “but now ur popurality is not much ur fame is down so i will think of other model”
ragini remain stand and narrowed her eyes on his statement “ok by choose some other model”
starts going but she finds a warm hand on her shoulder
she smiles and turns with proud smile “so when i sould come to ur office about this add deal” and blink on him
lucky- make faces “i did not told you to do add in my office”
ragini comes near him and moves her hand on his face relies so why you did not allowed me to go, don’t become clever to me
lucky smiles you are very clever
ragini- i am so what
luck- ok deal fixed
ragini- yes
lucky forwards his hand and ask can we have dance
ragini- yes ofcourse mr. maheshwari
club lady who was seeing them ask dj person to start song
pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
hoti kya hai jawaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
woh bhi ek daur tha
waqt hi aur tha
jab woh the ajnabi
dono tanaha se the
par woh kehte kise
baat jo dil mein thi) – 2
pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
hoti kya hai jawaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
[LUCKY TAKES HER IN CENTER, HE TWIRLS HER FASTLY,]
gumsum gumsum rehte the dono
phir bhi dil mein kehte the dono
koyi sapana hum bhi to paayein
ek din tute ghum ke woh ghere
jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere
mausam badala jaagi fizaayein
woh mil gaye, woh khil gaye
aur pyaar ho hi gaya
jo maanga tha, woh paaya to
hosh kho hi gaya
pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
hoti kya hai jawaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
[LUCKY AND RAGINI BOTH CUP EACH OTHER FACE, MOVE BACK AND FORTH BY SEEING EACH OTHER WITH INTENSE EYES, THEY WERE TOO CLOSE THERE HOT BREATH WERE TOUCHING TO EACH
OTHER FACE]
haule haule abb woh deewaane
gun gun gaaye dil ke taraane
sun sun jhumein saari hawaanyein
dhadkan dhadkan hai behaki behaki
mann mann, mann mann, chaahat hai mehaki
sapane apane jaadu jagaayein
phir dekhoge, toh jaanoge
kya hai nasha pyaar ka
yahi sochoge, yahi chaahoge
sun rahi ye sada
[BOTH REMOVES THERE HAND FROM EACH OTHER FACE, NOW BOTH PLACE THERE PALM ON EACH OTHER PALM MOVES LEFT AND RIGHT, BOTH HEAD WERE TOUCHING THERE EYES WERE LOOKING TO
EACH OTHER WITH FULL INTENSE, THEY CAN FEEL THE URGE FEELING OF s*x XOMMING IN THERE MIND]
pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
hoti kya hai jawaani suno
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi
woh bhi ek daur tha
waqt hi aur tha
jab woh the ajnabi
dono tanaha se the
par woh kehte kise
baat jo dil mein thi
[NOW LUCKY PUTS HIS HAND ON HER WAIST AND LIFETS HER IN AIR, RAGINI COULD FEEL SHIVER IN HER BODY BY LUCKY TOUCH, AND LUCKY ALSO FELT LIKE CURRENT PASS ON HIS BODY]
SONG ENDS
everyone clap for there amazing dance
ragini by composing herself says in impressive voice you dance very well
lucky comes closer to her, his closeness was making ragini restless, she closes her eyes due to sudden feeling in her heart lucky ccomes to her ear whisper, you look
too hot and s*xy, i can’t take of my eyes from you
ragini shies
lucky sees her blushing smiles at her and goes to outside by naughtily smiling at her, ragini smiles on his antiques
lucky again turn back moves back step “we will meet tomorrow at maheshwari office dont forget ” with smile on her
ragini while blushing nods yes
lucky sees her smile back and went
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on the other side swara was hell shocked to see other person in front of her
swara removes her chhani and shockingly ask who are you
sanky moves closer to her gives hanky and says your hanky was fallen down, you need it
swara sees her hanky clams down ok i am sorry
sanky- ok no problem mrs. maheshwari
swara- ya
sanky- first eat something you did not eat it or drink water
swara again sees the main gate a hope if he will come but no
sanky also sees her replies mrs. maheshwari nothing will happen by watching on door it is better to drink water from yourself
swara- hesitately ok and drinks water
while other people ask in taunting way ohh ur husband did not come
why he is too much busy in his work
some women talk in low voice to each other (because they afraid of swara because she is most rich women of mumbai)see i think mrs maheshwari can not birth child that’s
why she did not have any children in 3 years of marriage
other women ya i also think like this she may be infertile she must have infertility problem that’s why her husband did not come to break her fast because what is the
need of comming she is infertile, so can not do s*x with her
other women ya we never saw them togather they never look like husband wife
these was all heard by swara but these all things and these all taunts were normal for her, she did not bother about them, with pain in her heart she smiles to all
guest and all eat food
sanky also hears it comes near her and ask so mrs. maheshwari you did not told them anything
swara smiles i don’t want to spoil my mouth to talk to them
sanky was impressed by her reply you are great that’s why you are number 1 in mumbai said with impressive tone
swara smiles innoscently thanks
something strikes in her mind she ask with questioning face sanky understand what she want to ask “i never seen you anywhere who are you”
sanky with low voice voh sanskar kapoor
swara give light smile on him sanky did not understand,, but unexpected thinkg happened that swara forward her hand
sanky- could not understand says what
swara- i heard about you and starts going towards other guest as they were calling her
sanky comes back her and says how you know about me i am very small businessmen
swara moves her gaze on his hazel eyes smile slightly “small business men becomes very big business men in future and that i saw inside you by moving her gaze on other
guest”
again she walks towards other guest
sanky again follow her mrs. maheshwari i am very glad that you heard my name and you realy deserve to be in top
swara again turns and smiles proudly that’s why i am in top
sanky gives her assuring smile
swara- smiles and says ok bye i have to see other gues but dont go without eating food
sanky- sure
swara moves to other guest
sanky monologue swara you are very different, kind hearted as well as clever, oh she is again making me crazy, sanky don’t think much about swara do ur work for which
you came
he somehow manages to go to gate of entrance of maheshwari mension (guys all are in garden and whole program is mantained in garden only) he sees gate but finds that
it has security system in which those who enter have to show there face infront of camera than only the can enter
sanky- damm it how much security is there in maheshwari mension
sanky thinks something you have to do you can’t back but what to do i should show me my face than afterwards only it will hapen he gets idea and thinks i will destroey
its security sistem after entering inside mm, he enters inside maheshwari mension, now his main work to find important files
he went in office room connected to swara room, he sees many files he did not know it became too night, after 3 hours (till this time all guest went) he finds swara
lying on bed, he hides it but can’t take of my eys because her nighty was above the knees and off shoulder, he could see her body clearly, her curves her beautifull
chest, her s*xy thighs sanky could not take of his eyes on her but his mind diverted by hearing crying sound of swara he hears it
swara while lying on bed says why god why it happens to me why i can’t get love in my life, i don’t know when lucky will understand my problem, please god please frame
his mind that he go to s*xologist for solve his s*xual problem, i really need his love sanky was hell shocked to know that lucky have s*xual problem, swara continues i
don’t know when he will care about my feeling today all ladies cursed me for not having child and husband did not come for karwachod, she seats on bed sanky hides
more, he sees her taking high amount of sleeping piles and she closes her eyes, sanky sees her feel very bad for her and thinks swara i have to do this i don’t know
whether you will get hurt or not
he cunningly reads name of tablate and takes pics of some files and went outside
he goes to maheshwari mension security room and hackes it and delete whole part in which he was there, he comes out from window and runs out of menssion by making fool
to security people,
he stands out side maheshwari mension and says ohh god atlast i got escaped
but he hears one sound YOU DID NOT ESCAPED YOU ARE TRAPPED MISTER, NOW ITS TIME FOR PLAYBACK………………………
episode ends on shocking face of sanky and rocking face of unknown person
precap- raglak romance, sanky new plan to meet swara, ragini and sanky new plan against lucky
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think guys who saw sanky on gate
which file sanky was looking
did you like raglak dance
GUYS I WANT SUGGESTION FROM YOU I WANTED TO ASK WHICH TYPE OF ROMANCE YOU WANT, GUYS ROMANCE OF TWO TYPES s*x ONE AND NORMAL ROMANCE SO I WILL GIVE YOU OPTION
FOR s*x ROMANCE OPTION ARE
1) least
2) ok
3) more
4) intense or maximum
GUYS WHICH TYPE OF NORMAL ROMANCE (means kiss, danse, date and all)YOU WANT
1) Ok type
2) more
3) intense
MY VOTE WILL GO INTENSE ROMANCE THAT IS OPTION 3 FOR NORMAL ROMANCE AND OPTION 2 AND 3 FOR s*x ROMANCE
guys feel free to suggest don’t shy ok you are reader you have right to give suggestion ok guys got it
i like intense romance for normal type
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guys many wished me to write this ff on facebook so who can update this story on facebook they can update with there own name i will not bother about it i will send
all episode with email adress, because i dont know where to uoload on facebok page last story my sister had uodated but she descontinued in between only and i did not
ask her where she uodates so if anyone have time than they can say me i will email you episode and you can update this story with ur own name or u may change also it
will be urs only i will not interfare, dont take tention i will update here also
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dont forget to suggest in romance if you feel so
84 Comments
i don’t think that Person might be swara because she took sleeping Pills and Slept how can she get up from sleep after taking sleeping pills.I think the Person might be Ragini or someone else i like ur ff a lot :).I read ur ff from starting episode but i never commented because firstly i used to hate ur ff but now i like ur ff,Even swara should get justice in her life because lakshya is betraying her.i like the way ur are giving reply to every comment.waiting for ur next part.Please upload soon.Keep smilimg 🙂
Thanks for loving my ff and keep commenting and liking story and she will get justice in her life no need to take tension thanks for liking my nature also I liked the way you commented
Amazing I love it I will vote for Option 3
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story
Hi..ur fiction really good.. Worthy reading…how beautifully you portrayed swara’s emotions…. Loved it
Oky u r interested in uploading fb…i will ask swaragini ff page admin…they will upload ur fiction on ur name….
Dont give credits to anyone its ur amanath…
Sorry being late comments…lil bcy with my studies
Did u read any fan fictions on other writers..?
No I never read fan friction of any writer and sorry for that and I am not interested there but many people were demanding so I had to ask to you guys so that if anyone is free they can do and I am really happy that you are taking too much stress for posting it on facebook and I will send all episode on ur email address
I don’t get time to rea ff here and i also don’t know where all ff are updates but I also don’t want to know but I am happy u are regularly supporting me keep smiling always
Ur both ff are amazing.u r really an amazing writer.andvl this part was superr.and about options are the same which u selected
Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and liking story