Mera Sham Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya
Kabhi Jaro’n Mai Zehar Utar Liya
Kabi Labo’n K Pechay Marliya
Is Dar Say Kay Dukh Ki Shidat Main
Kahin Nikal Na Jaye Ahh Piya
Mera Shaam Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya
Humain Jungal Jungal Bhatka Do
Humain Suli Suli Latka Do
Jo G Say Chaho Yaar Karo
Hum Parh Jo Gaye Teri Rah Piya
Mera Shaam Salona Shah Piya
Humain Maar Gayi Teri Chah Piya
Recap:raglak got fight and swasan sung a song.
Swasan at swara’s apartment:
Swara:”lets celebrate this triumph” Sanskar confused:”which triumph?”
Swara is moving here and there and her every action shows her happiness of heart.:”triumph to complete my project! You don’t understand, how am I feel!! Ufff finaly im free… Free…free” she’s jumping on the sofa like flying butterfly and sanskar is smiling to see her childish behaviour.
Sanskar:”yeah right! We’ll go for long drive first then we eat ice cream, visit beach etc etc! Full night hanging out done?” Swara hugs her:”wowww!!
Sanskar you’re so good naa!!” Sanskar:”I’m good and you also good because you’ll pay the bill every where” swara hits her and smiles:”ok! Done! For my friend!” Both smile to see each others and his eyes are replete with love, but she cant bear the heat of his love, so she downs her eyes with shyness (swara what’s wrong with you, you’re not here to play love’s hide and seek, your mission is complete, sanskar is ready to meet his parents, ill leave that house before sanskar’s arriving at Kolkata! So you should control yourself).
She composed herself and takes out the keys of car.:”ill drive tonight” Sanskar:”it means I’ll gonna die soon” he teases her but her face’s color suddenly changed:”what’s wrong with you sanskar! Please don’t say again” Sanskar smiles to see her concern for him. Swara hits him:”you’re smiling idiot! I’ll not talk to you, and this time, you’ve to charge penalty”
Sanskar smiles and hold her hand to drag her to the door:”what type of penalty my dear?” Swara:”tonight is my day, uppss my night, so you’ve to do what I’ll say to you” swara locked the door and holds his arm. They’re happily walking towards the lift. Sanskar:(in his heart)”I wish I can hold your smile in my fist and keep it in my dairy like a rose and when we’ll get old, I’ll open that diary to recall your smile, but just a minute! I’m gonna give you lots of smile in future.” Swara shakes his shoulder:”what are you thinking?” Sanskar:”Nothing Shona! Lets go” Swara takes the driving seat and as usual she’s doing rush driving while Sanskar is screaming:”you’re scarring me Shona! Slow the speed” Swara:”no way!!!! This is my night, my rules…” She hoots and switch on the music loud music. And she also singing with Akon. She stops the car next to ice cream parlor. Swara orders:”three spoon, Belgium chocolate, two spoon tooti fruity, one spoon vanilla, one spoon pineapple and two spoon chocolate chip ice cream bowl, (she turns to sanskar)what will you take?” Sanskar looks her with open mouth:”in this winter, you’re going to ice cream with 1..2..(he counts the spoon)9 spoons of ice creams and who’s eat these all flavour in one bowl?” Sanskar:”are you gonna order or not?” Sanskar raise his hand:”ok! Two spoon pistachio” waiter takes orders and leave. Sanskar:”you look so pretty!” Swara:”what do you want?” Sanskar scabies his ear with embarrassment. Waiter brings out their order and she mixes all flavor,, Sanskar:”what thing is you?” Swara:”im Shona!!” She gives her wide smile and both laugh. Sanskar:”yar please dont eat all ice cream, it already very cold and you’re eating this complete ice cream bowl, you can get flow” SwarA:”nothing will happen dear! Dont worry”, she’s eating ice cream and talking continuously while Sanskar is forget to eat his ice cream, just looking her.
Raglak at room:
Ragini gets worried about laksh. She’s trying his number many times but it still switch off. Mid of night, he comes at home. He avoids eye contact with her, she wanna ask her but doesn’t find any courage in her. Laksh takes his pillow to go outside while Ragini stops him:”why are you going outside the room?” Laksh in cold tone:”you need to work whole night for your exhibition, so my presence will disturb you” Ragini:”you sleep in your room, im going to workshop, you stay here” Laksh gives her strong look and shuts the door while ragini goes to workshop. She cant concentrate on her work because of laksh’s behaviour, because as an artist, her work is depend on her mood, she holds the brush and takes black color, and purposelessly paint on canvas. She recalls all the moments with laksh, tears are rolling down from her eyes and her canvas convey her state of heart. Shade of are gulp down light of her happiness. Black color is covering the white part of canvas but she continuously spread this color on canvas. At the end, she throws it and falls on the floor. She bend down the knees and keeps her head on her knees. And starts weeping slowly slowly, her moaning voice are resemble with the muse of iktara! Which echoes in the cliff of mountains! When first drop of rain falls on the top of cliff but coldness of peak turns this into fog. This fog is in her heart which turns into sighs. While laksh cant sleep, he takes side many times with restlessness. But he doesn’t find peace at any side of bed. He’s not crying, he just so much sad and as he recalls their moments, he observed that every time, he came to her but she gave only importance to her work and home. Laksh:”come Ragini! Please, try to understand! What I want from you? I gave you complete space, I didn’t restrict you from anything, but for this? I just want your time? Is it a big deal for you? I dont need your cooked food or fulfilled other responsibilities, I want your time” he’s rough and tough man, but ragini makes him cry.
Sweet winter breeze turns into cold shivering wind which can freeze the emotions but heat of theirs tears aren’t let them realize the cold winter between them. Their sighs are making fog in the airs which absorb their tears and give a cold ice touch to theirs heart.
Swasan at the beach:
Swara is running on the shore with sweet exclamation. Her frock is flowing with wind and her hairs are playing with fireflies of love. While Sanskar’s eyes are following her. He bent his arms and looks her like he’s sight counters her from the influence of evil eyes.
Swara comes to him and holds his hand and drags towards the waves of sea. Waves of ocean are wetting their feet and they feel the sweet coldness of winter. Suddenly it start slow raining.. And it likes that god is shower blessing upon them. Swara:”woww!! I love rain!” And she sneezes. Sanskar:”ohhh!! Finally you got flow, come lets go Shona! You’ll get ill”
Swara:”noo way… ” she runs away from him, amc sanskar follows her.:”Shona! You already eat lots of ice cream! You’re also wearing sleeveless frock, come here Shona!” Swara:”first Catch me” she makes a face to him and running continuously.
Sanskar runs behind her and holds her finally.:”finally! I catch you, now come home” Swara tries to free herself:”sanskar leave me naa! Look how beautiful this weather is!!” They’re wetting in the rain, and this rain isn’t that which falls from clouds, this rain is from the heart which irrigated their heart.
Sanskar pulls her toward him, her back is on his chest and his heartbeat is kisses to her back and she suddenly realized her position but he’s in the spell of love. He tighten her grip around her, she breathes heavily. Sanskar whispers in her ears:”Shona! I love you” She suddenly rotate and looks him with shock, spell is vanished in the airs due to his three magical words. Shona steps back but her hands are still in his hands, rain are increasing slowly slowly and now they’re complete wet but their heat of love isn’t let them realized the coldness of winter.
Shona jerks his hand but he doesn’t noticed it… She looks him with great shock.
Raglak room:
Ragini comes into room, laksh is still awakening but as he sees her to coming to room, he closes his eyes and pretend to sleep like. Ragini goes to her bed. Light is still on. She switches off the light, and the darkness of winter is scattered everywhere.
She looks laksh sadly and touch his face, a tear rolled down from her eye and absorb in his hairs. But suddenly she recalls his words and wipes her tears and give a strong look to herself. :”if you don’t understand me, then ill also not care about you” laksh who’s heart was melting because of her tears are freeze again because of her words. She leans down and closes her eyes but his words are still echoed in her ears. Both control the pain and takes place the coldness in theirs heart.
Swasan scene:
Swara looks him unbelievably… She steps back one by one.
Sanskar comes to her:”ill give you all happiness of my life Shona! Just help me to derive out from our pain! I’ll forget you all your pain, just be with me” he extends his hand to her.
Swara start clapping:”Bravo! Sanskar Maheshwari! Bravo!! Hatts off to you(she posture like salute) you come to me, friendship with me! Yeah you help me when I need someone, im grateful you for this” sanskar tries to hold her but she doesn’t allow him.
Swara continues:”you.. You’re married man sanskar! You already spoil that girl’s life! How selfish you’re! You’re proposing me!! Good!! And I’m such a fool who was thinking that you ve changed!!”
Sanskar:”Shona! try to understand! I don’t want this unwanted relationship! Dont worry naa! We’ll separate with mutual decision, ill divorce her then we’ll start new life” he comes close to her and tried to holds her hands. A deep layers of rage comes in her mind, her hand raises and touches his face hardly and slaps him.
Sanskar is shocked to see her reaction, she again slaps him and holds her collor:”for you, marriage will be joke! But not for me!!! I hate you Sanskar! I hate you! If you respect me, then never come in front of me”
Drops of rain are mingled with her tears! Precious pearls mixed with blessing of God and this mixture of bliss are bathing their face. Coldness of winter are spreading in swara’s heart while
Sanskar is freeze in his same state! His heart isn’t understand what happened to him, he’s just looking her untill she has disappeared from his eyes. Rain is still wetting him and his emotions are screaming in his heart but his tongue is freeze with her words.
Night is travelling along with winter with teary eyes to see four of them.
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Read my comment on epi 5
Hi rishi.. U have asked me about my ff (an angel is my love) in episode 10.. Do u find out the links? As after that I didn’t find ur comments so I shared my views with u here..
Hey kashish.i was trying to find the page in which i asked the links and forgot about it due to exams! Yesterday took a long break from studies .wil surely read and let you know! Sorry for disappointing you.tc
Hey rishi! I read your comment and you’re so sweet of you, you read my ff during exams! I dont know about extra sweet, but I was not sarcastic in my reply don’t worry! Yeah you also right im careless because! I’ll try my best In Shaa Allah to proofread ffs! And thanks dear to realize my mistake. I’m not taking you bad, because when you exhibit something, you’ve to face buyer criticism also! And I still say that im in learning stage, there’s lot of things I’ve to learn before to be a professional!!
pls unite swasan. ….
Next epi soon plz…can’t wait….nd plz unite swasan nd raglak soon…..plzzzzzz
Superb…sanskar should realize d value of marriage..and pain of swara not shona…u r rocking…daily I am checking this page 4 ur ff..I never forgot to do this….one more thing ur new ff is also fantastic..u have more heights to reach…all d best friend..
Hey seeba!! Your name is much similar to mine! Well thanks dear to like my both ff! Well sanskar and swara both are right in their place! And thanks dear! I’ve posted this in night, dont know why it takes so much time to upload
please unite swasan soon .. its really long when you unite them
I like ur narration more than ur story plot its outstanding
Do u mean scoop or spoon of icecream? I asked as if its spoon of icecream then its not a prob for swara.but if its scoop of icecream i would say she is the bukkad of the year hahahhaha no offence im a foodie too!
Hey rishi! Thanks again for your concern, well this is scoop and these are not so big then fill the bucket, these will make a large bowl, at least I can eat ice cream in winter too! When I make swara’s character actually I reflect myself! Like when she said I eat palak paneeer with rice (actually I eat palak ghosht with rice) so there’s many similarities! If I write then definitely I’ve experienced! And one more thing, she’ll also pay to eat this big bowl!.
I’m not mind! But you should be careful dear! And be thankful to god that im not short temper, otherwise it’ll be first case of online murder! Hahaha!!
And you should check your eyes! I was clearly write spoon!
An outstanding and wonderful episode 🙂
At starting its really cute scenes between swasan.. very tuff moment for raglak but i hope they will patch up soon..this slap i think he deserve it.. and saba pls don’t make swara leave maheswari house before sanskar’s arrival bcz now i think this is a time to sanskar to get to know that shona is swara.. i am sorry if i said anything wrong dear..
Do you use Facebook saba?
Hey lucky!! Thanks dear for being such a great supporter and friend! Yeah he’ll know this fact verrrrryyyy soon!! I’ll not tell exact episode because I don’t wanna spoil the suspense!
Well dear swara will not leave the house because she doesn’t expect his arrival
ok and now i am excited to read next one thank you dear.. Can you pls give ur facebook name (if u don’t mind) ?
Lucky! In previous episode of swasan I shared link of my fb! You can check well you can search me Saba Shiekh on fb, you’ll find same one poem(mera sham salona) on my timeline and cover photo of swasan hug photo
yeah thank you i found ur fb dear.. and i sent u a msg too pls sent a frd request as i can’t sent u..
Nice episode .
This is what I call an episode.. Splendid.. Sanskar deserves the slap.. From swara’s point of view I can understand how difficult it would be for her to resist her emotions & deny his proposal by slapping him.. Coming to Raglak part!! What can I say.. Too immature to handle the situations.. Ego, desire come in between.. Miles to go before they cherish their marriage fully..
Finally look I have commented here.. But definitely won’t comment in swasan.. Signing off…
Hey Kashis!! You’re becoming such a devil! I think you’re gonna face multi personality disorder obviously!! And your second personality is sanskar of my ff(swasan) hahaha! Because he also doesn’t spare anyone who hurts him!! Now my ff is affecting your mind! But don’t worry dear! After few years In Shaa Allah ill become psychologist to treat you! Wait until ill become your therapist!! Hahaha ?
But I will spare u for sure.. As u r my friend.. And I don’t want to hurt you anytime.. I can never be a personality like sanskar of ur character of swasan. U know why as I value relations… What ever may be the case I can’t play with anybody’s life… 2nd thing is that first clear ur objective of life. U wanna be a writer or psychologist.. Then I may think about having multi personality disorder.. As of now I won’t. As future of urs is totally uncertain… Hi!hi!hi
Oh kashis again!!! Saba pls start ur treatmen as soon as possible dear!!! Kashis(hahaha)…
Hey Kashis! Dont be serious! Sorry dear if ihurt you I was just kidding! I know you value the relationships! I was just joking! And ill carry the psychology as my profession but writing is my passion, whatever career ill choose, I always become writer dear! Because its beyond the professional thing
You made me cry… I know that you are kidding.. Am I scared you so much that u told sorry… Dear we r friends yaar.. When u will understand my humor?? Don’t tell sorry…
Dear I thought you felt bad because of me! I dont wanna hurt my friends! That’s a reason and I didn’t understand your humor but maybe ill be used to it don’t worry!!
i knew dis……..
truly speaking swara is playing wid sanksar’s emotions….
when sanskar was in pain,he was alone…bt at time of swara whole family was standing wid her….
sanskar behavior was very wrong wid swara and he has to pay for it…..
bt dis time she is playing wid his emotions….
there is no differences between swara and sanskar….she is doing same things wht sanskar did wid her….
sanskar ne jo kiya gusse me kiya par swara ne jo kiya janbuj kar kiya….sanskar ne swara ko koi ummid nahi di thi par shona ne umid jagayi…dnt leave me sanksar and alll….
agr wo sach me chahti toh k sanksar wapas ghar aaye ya iska pyar sach hota to swara shona bankar nahi swara bankar uski jindgi me aati aur usko uski galti ka ehsaas dilati…..
she played game wid sanskar….
Hey Jo!! Thanks to read my story so deeply!! But please dont spoil the suspense of my ff! Yeah this is actually what I planned to reveal in my further episode!
But us ne yeh Jan bujh kar plan kar k nahi kiya! Haan unintentionally jab usko uski feelings pata chali to woh selfish ho gai tumhari baqi Ki baton k jawab mere next episodes main aa Jae ge thanks dear
What an episode saba!!!! Very well described. Both raglak and SwaSan parts awesome. Honestly I want SwaSan to unite but as in one of your episodes you had mentioned values bhi koi cheez hai. Very well written yaar. Keep going looking forward for upcoming chapters??
It was really painfulll……
Again I don’t have words to describe how much I loved this post.
wow!!!!! grt
raglak is fighting….
pls unite them soon
n swasan also fighting…
Swasan fight was expected
i also expected swara will react like this… but she didn’t reveal her identity…
from swara point of view she was correct n he deserve her slap.. how can he think marriage as joke . …
he left her after marriage .. anyway feeling sad for sanskar he doesnot know truth…
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pls reveal truth to sanskar .. i expected u will do it today bt it not happend..
update next part soon …
When will sanskar get to know that shona is his wife? In which chap please do reply
Wow!!!! Amazing epi saba…. superb.. bt sanskaar does nt knw shona is swara na?? Y is swara scolding sanskaar…?? She is acting as shona nly na… then wt??? Bt nw i think if sanskaar comes to knw abt swara as shona dhn vil he think that she came to mumbai to manipulate his mind.. so many questions are arising in me….
Hey Daniela! First of all thanks dear to liking my ff! And secondly, I can understand sometimes, it’ll be difficult to understand the character
Yeah dear! She’s acting as Shona you’re right, but when people get hyper, it’ll difficult to control their words, same case with swara! And wait for sanskar’s reaction! I know there’s many questions in your mind, but in my further episodes, you’ll get know everything
Thnk u saba….. for ur reply….
I love your ff
No words to describe how beautiful your thoughts & storyline are….
Excitement has been increasing day by day…:-):-):-)
A vry bid twist Neva expected this
Bt Rocking Rockstar
Good episode saba… Felt sorry for sanskar… But he deserves it… Enough saba now its time to patch both… Plz saba reveal swara Indentity to sanskar soon…
Sanskar deserved that slap!! How hard it must have been for swara!!
Such a painfull update dr
Super super super………….
Fabulous saba no words to describe ur skills jani the reaction of swara is expected raglak fi8 is so sweet now I am eagerly waiting for sanky reaction after knowing swara identity ..
Whenever I read ur ff I think that k kash next part bhi upload foran ho jaye but unfortunately we have to w8 for 24 hours to read the next part how unfair are u..:-D just kidding jani concentrate on ur exams
See marriage is only holy n pious if its of mutual consent otherwise its just a stamp of society!
im a silent reader of ur ff…….ur story is so good
Make sanskar know that shona is swara.