Hi everyone this is Aditi.Ayansh with my first ever Raglak ff…so i am writing this as our dr Aadya wanted it…so it will b a 5 shot ff…
So as u all knw i am writing a ff on Ragsan Swaragini-will you cross the skies for me ?
If u like it then pls tell me through ur comments if not tell me where should i improve…
And now what r we waiting for lets get started.
A house is shown.
A woman comes ..
The woman is revealed as Mishti
Mishti: Laado …
A girl is shown she is wearing a black jeans and light blue shirt neatly inserted and a black blazer.
She ties her hair in a pony..
Girl: yh Mishtu coming..
The girl comes down holding some files.
Mishti: Laado come have breakfast.
Girl looks at her watch.
Mishti: No way Laado today no skipping breakfast.
Girl: Mishti today there is an important meeting ..i told tht to u na..so i need to be there on tym.
Mishti: but there is still tym Laado..
Girl: Mishti..pls last tym..pls pls..
Mishti: go Ragini Rathore..all the best.
The girl is revealed as Ragini
Ragini: acha ok..dont be sad..i’ll have milk..
She drinks the glass of milk..and tears a piece of Paratha..and eats it.
Ragini: Mishti paratha is good…save some for me ..i’ll have it after coming back from office..
Mishti does not respond.
Ragin comes hugs Mishti and kisses her on her cheeks.
Mishti: u knw how make me agree..
Ragini goes to the wall where some photos are hunged with flower garland on it.
Ragini prays..
Ragini: pls mumma papa..bless me help me in cracking this contract.
Mishti : all the best
Ragini goes in her car.
Mishti goes to tht wall.
She cares the photo.
Mishti: pls u both r seeing her na..i knw from last 2 yrs she is suffering she is hiding something frm me..but wat is it?…pls bring back my old Ragini..who loved to smile and who made everyone smile.
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Outside their house.
A young man comes with him an elder woman also comes.
Woman: are u sure u want to do this?
Young man: yh mom..i am here to make smiles…
Woman is revealed as AP
AP: we need to meet our neighbours ri8.
Young man: so excited
They both go to Ragini’s house.
Mishti opens the door.
AP: Namste.
Mishti: namste.
AP: we r ur new neighbours.
Mishti: oh..come come inside.
AP: I am Annapoorna Maheshwri and this is my son Laksh Maheswari
Laksh:maa..its lucky hi beautiful ur sweet name
Mishti: Sharmishta Gadodia..
Laksh: nice name…aaj se u r my girlfriend.
Mishti looks at him.
AP: Sry Sharmishta ji he is like this..
Mishti: its ok..even my daughter was like this…
Laksh: so paaka haan Mishtu..hey can i call u Mishtu.
AP: laksh stop irritating ..
Mishti: no no..its ok..Laksh i am bf u can call me tht even my daughter calls me tht.
AP: Where is ur daughter then?
Mishti: she is managing our business Rathore industries.
Laksh: what…Mishti u r Gadodia and ur daughter is managing ur family business Rathore industries..
Mishti: she is actually my younger sister’s daughter but my sister and husband died in a accident 10 yrs back..after tht its just me and her.
AP: Oh i am sry ..wats her name?
Mishti: Ragini Rathore..meri Laado..
They have small chit chat.
After some tym.
AP: Sharmista we will leave now but come to our place for dinner..
Laksh: will be waiting for u Mishtu…
Mishti: ok bf i’ll come there..
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@ Evening.
Ragini comes back.
Ragini: Mishtu….
Mishti: haan Laado..how was ur meeting?
Ragini: Mishti tym to celebrate contract humara hua….
Mishti: sachi..congrats Laado…ok now change and come.
Ragini: haan aaj dinner bahar se.
Mishti: haan bahar se
Ragini: which restaurant u want to go?
Mishti: not in any restaurant ..we have got new neighbours and they have invited us for dinner.
Ragini: Mishtu u knw na i don’t like all this..
Mishti: but Laado they r good people
Ragini: Mishtu..par..
Door bell rings..
Mishti: i’ll see.
Mishti opens the door .
Mishti: AP ji..
AP: can i come in?
Mishti: yh ofcourse come
AP: I thought i’ll make dinner and bring it here..
Mishti: oh thts good.
Laksh: Hi Mishtu…
Mishti: hi Lucky bf..
Ragini is seeing all these and standing there.
Laksh: who is this girl Mishtu ..why is she staring me?
Mishti: she is my daughter Ragini..Laado they r our new neighbours..AP and Lucky.
Lucky: hi Laado…
Ragini : hi..
AP: Ragu beta go and change and come…khana dandhaa ho jaayenga..
Ragini goes to her room.
Laksh: Mishtu gf u wanna dance with me?
Ragini in her room.
Ragini: who the hell is he?..how can he be with my Mishtu…
Ragini changes into a simple kurta and comesz down.
AP: Sharmishta j ii must say ur daughter isvery beautiful.
Laksh: so Laado is here now can we have dinner.
Precap: Ragini and Laksh….
Pls drop in ur precious comments and let me knw how was this shot
79 Comments
It was lovely choti…….was really excited to read your raglak ff…it soooo amazing….next part soon
Thank u so much Jayu di..i’ll update soon di..tk cr love u 🙂
Superb adi….it was awesome..really loved it …next part update soon
Thank u so much Adreen di..will update soon tk cr di ..love u lots 🙂
Awesome
Thank u so much Folly di 🙂
Awesome
Thank u so much abi di 🙂
Thank u soooooooooo much di for this. And the episode was awesome. The first part of all your ffs have some mystery. Waiting for the next update.
U r welcome dr..i’m glad tht u loved it..will update nxt part soon..love u dr 🙂
nice
Thank u so much avika di 🙂
Awesome da nanaitu undu
nantri akka ❤️️
awesome adi dear….loved it alot…
Thank u so much Asra di 🙂
Fabulous dear
Thank u so much Hemalattha di 🙂
Awesome dear
Thank u so much Aleeza di 🙂
Superb dear. Waiting for Raglak scenes. Update next part soon dear.
Bye dear. Take care.
Thank u so much Makku di will update soon 🙂
superb dear
Thank u so much Ammy dr 🙂
awesome …..waiting for next part
Thank u so much Nymisha dr 🙂
Mishtu????
Awesome part ???
Thank u so much Bela di 🙂
Amazing
Thank u so much Megha di 🙂
Awesome yar
Thank u so much Lovely yaar 🙂
AWESOME AWESOME
Thank u so much Arjuna di 🙂
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next. Thanks for raglak
Thank u so much Malu di..and di its Aadya whom u should thank..it was she becoz of whom i am writing this ff 🙂 tk cr di
Awesome
Thank u so much Vk di 🙂
Superb
Thank u so much Monisha di 🙂
Awesome thanks for raglak
Thank u so much Sherin di..u should thank Aadya not me.. 🙂
Waiting for raglak part si
U’ll have it soon dr 🙂
Waiting for raglak part di…interesting
Thank u so much Soumya dr 🙂
Is it Kal ho naa ho………..???????nyc shot…….i dont read ur that ff …..bt now go to read that…..
Thanx di..yh its somewhat like tht.. 🙂
Amazing
Thank u so much Sam dr 🙂
Awesome episode
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Interesting awesome
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adu di it was super awesome
lucky’s funny scenes were superb
loved whole episode
waitng for the next part!!
Thank u so much IQRA dr will update soon 🙂
It’s interesting episode dear and thanks a lot for Raglak story ????. But feeling bad that it’s only 5 shots??. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes and please post next part ASAP ???
Thank u so much Ammu di..and pls dont be sad each shot will be long …and will update soon 🙂