Hi everyone this is Aditi.Ayansh with my first ever Raglak ff…so i am writing this as our dr Aadya wanted it…so it will b a 5 shot ff…
So as u all knw i am writing a ff on Ragsan Swaragini-will you cross the skies for me ?
If u like it then pls tell me through ur comments if not tell me where should i improve…
And now what r we waiting for lets get started.
A house is shown.
A woman comes ..
The woman is revealed as Mishti
Mishti: Laado …
A girl is shown she is wearing a black jeans and light blue shirt neatly inserted and a black blazer.
She ties her hair in a pony..
Girl: yh Mishtu coming..
The girl comes down holding some files.
Mishti: Laado come have breakfast.
Girl looks at her watch.
Mishti: No way Laado today no skipping breakfast.
Girl: Mishti today there is an important meeting ..i told tht to u na..so i need to be there on tym.
Mishti: but there is still tym Laado..
Girl: Mishti..pls last tym..pls pls..
Mishti: go Ragini Rathore..all the best.
The girl is revealed as Ragini
Ragini: acha ok..dont be sad..i’ll have milk..
She drinks the glass of milk..and tears a piece of Paratha..and eats it.
Ragini: Mishti paratha is good…save some for me ..i’ll have it after coming back from office..
Mishti does not respond.
Ragin comes hugs Mishti and kisses her on her cheeks.
Mishti: u knw how make me agree..
Ragini goes to the wall where some photos are hunged with flower garland on it.
Ragini prays..
Ragini: pls mumma papa..bless me help me in cracking this contract.
Mishti : all the best
Ragini goes in her car.
Mishti goes to tht wall.
She cares the photo.
Mishti: pls u both r seeing her na..i knw from last 2 yrs she is suffering she is hiding something frm me..but wat is it?…pls bring back my old Ragini..who loved to smile and who made everyone smile.
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Outside their house.
A young man comes with him an elder woman also comes.
Woman: are u sure u want to do this?
Young man: yh mom..i am here to make smiles…
Woman is revealed as AP
AP: we need to meet our neighbours ri8.
Young man: so excited
They both go to Ragini’s house.
Mishti opens the door.
AP: Namste.
Mishti: namste.
AP: we r ur new neighbours.
Mishti: oh..come come inside.
AP: I am Annapoorna Maheshwri and this is my son Laksh Maheswari
Laksh:maa..its lucky hi beautiful ur sweet name
Mishti: Sharmishta Gadodia..
Laksh: nice name…aaj se u r my girlfriend.
Mishti looks at him.
AP: Sry Sharmishta ji he is like this..
Mishti: its ok..even my daughter was like this…
Laksh: so paaka haan Mishtu..hey can i call u Mishtu.
AP: laksh stop irritating ..
Mishti: no no..its ok..Laksh i am bf u can call me tht even my daughter calls me tht.
AP: Where is ur daughter then?
Mishti: she is managing our business Rathore industries.
Laksh: what…Mishti u r Gadodia and ur daughter is managing ur family business Rathore industries..
Mishti: she is actually my younger sister’s daughter but my sister and husband died in a accident 10 yrs back..after tht its just me and her.
AP: Oh i am sry ..wats her name?
Mishti: Ragini Rathore..meri Laado..
They have small chit chat.
After some tym.
AP: Sharmista we will leave now but come to our place for dinner..
Laksh: will be waiting for u Mishtu…
Mishti: ok bf i’ll come there..
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@ Evening.
Ragini comes back.
Ragini: Mishtu….
Mishti: haan Laado..how was ur meeting?
Ragini: Mishti tym to celebrate contract humara hua….
Mishti: sachi..congrats Laado…ok now change and come.
Ragini: haan aaj dinner bahar se.
Mishti: haan bahar se
Ragini: which restaurant u want to go?
Mishti: not in any restaurant ..we have got new neighbours and they have invited us for dinner.
Ragini: Mishtu u knw na i don’t like all this..
Mishti: but Laado they r good people
Ragini: Mishtu..par..
Door bell rings..
Mishti: i’ll see.
Mishti opens the door .
Mishti: AP ji..
AP: can i come in?
Mishti: yh ofcourse come
AP: I thought i’ll make dinner and bring it here..
Mishti: oh thts good.
Laksh: Hi Mishtu…
Mishti: hi Lucky bf..
Ragini is seeing all these and standing there.
Laksh: who is this girl Mishtu ..why is she staring me?
Mishti: she is my daughter Ragini..Laado they r our new neighbours..AP and Lucky.
Lucky: hi Laado…
Ragini : hi..
AP: Ragu beta go and change and come…khana dandhaa ho jaayenga..
Ragini goes to her room.
Laksh: Mishtu gf u wanna dance with me?
Ragini in her room.
Ragini: who the hell is he?..how can he be with my Mishtu…
Ragini changes into a simple kurta and comesz down.
AP: Sharmishta j ii must say ur daughter isvery beautiful.
Laksh: so Laado is here now can we have dinner.
Precap: Ragini and Laksh….
Pls drop in ur precious comments and let me knw how was this shot