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Swaragini – Jag Ghoomeya Thare Jaisa Na Koyi Shot 4 Part-1

Hi everyone hope ll of u r fine and also annoyed with RagLak separation well i am really sorry for tht everyone well here goes Heart attack part 2…read and snjoy everyone love u all …so till then we meet again keep smiling keep laughing and always remember for every storm a rainbow awaits…if u have problems in ur life face it…lets take some risks…and Always remember if no one believes in u trusts in u loves u then don’t feel u r alone because i am ri8 here beside u dear sisters…no matter what happens i’m and i will b always there for u ..Love u all tk cr have fun
Love
Urs

Adi 🙂
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Part 3

Recap: Luv is Laksh’s brother
Laksh comes to Luv’s room. He sees Ragini crying holding Luv’s photo frame
Laksh keeps his hand on her shoulder
Ragini pushes him
Laksh: Ragini
Ragini: stop taking my name ..and leave me alone..
Laksh: pls
Ragini: what else do u want Laksh…i though u were good..and all these tym i believed mu Luv..lied to me.
Laksh: Pls listen to me once

Ragini stands up and comes to him
Laksh: see i cant see u like this
Ragini: if i am like this its all because of u..and only u i hate u Laksh Maheshwari..u knew how much i loved Luv..but u
Laksh: pls i didnt..
Ragini shows her hand to stop him
Ragini: i don’t wan to hear anything from u i hate u…
Laksh comes out of Luv’s room
Mishti was standing there.

Laksh looks at her
Mishti: Why are u doing this with her? Kya galthi ki meri bachi ne ..jo use itni badi saza de ja rahi hain.
Laksh: woh main
Mishti: pls don’t come to her life again…i thought tum uski zindagi mein rang laaonge par tum ne toh uske zindagi ke joh bache rang bhi lekar gaya.
Mishti goes to Luv’s room angrily.
Laksh walks to his room.
AP comes there.

AP: Laksh..
Laksh is shown crying..and his eyes have become red.
AP: Laksh stop crying..
Laksh: then what should i do maa…i love her
AP: Laksh all this is happening because of u..
Laksh: then what should hv i said

AP: the truth Laksh. She deserves to knw the truth..not a cooked up story again.
Laksh: no maa i cant tell i don’t want her to break again and even if i tell her she will not believe she will think tht i am faking it to get her back in my life
AP: So u don’t want her back in ur life Laksh?
Laksh looks at AP with painfully
Laksh: no maa i don’t deserve her
AP: And Luv deserves her?…Luv is ur younger brother Laksh and i am his mother and i knw he will be the happiest person when he sees Ragini with u
Laksh: no maa ….i don’t want to hurt her anymore..it was Luv’s last wish
AP: Laksh …
Laksh: maa ..dont u remember what he told us..ask Ragini to forgive me
AP: And u again made a lie and comforted her..have u ever realised how much she will hate Luv when she gets to knw the truth?

Laksh: no she will not knw the truth..coz i am leaving to America tomorrow

AP: Laksh
Laksh: haan maa i have decided and let her stay here…with Luv’s memories
AP: Laksh what r u doing?…..do u even knw the day wen she come to knw abt all these she will die..
Laksh: thts why i am going away from her and papa is also there its been 1 yr he is managing business there..alone
AP: Laksh but Ragini…
Laksh: maa
AP: Ur Ragini
Laksh: she was never mine she is Luv’s Ragini…and will always be..and now she have forgiven Luv thts enough for me..for us ri8 maa
AP hugs Laksh..

AP; u r doing wrong with her..
Laksh jerks…
Laksh: Mishtu…
Mishti: what were u both talking abt
AP wipes her tears.
Laksh: nothing actually i am going to America away from ur Laado’s life and don’t wry she will never have to bear me anymore.
Mishti: u r lying

Laksh: no i am not
Mishti: i knw u have lied to her thts why AP ji was angry on u nw tell me or else i’ll slap u hard.
Laksh: there is nothing else going on..and u can slap me..i always consider u as my mother
Mishti: if u ever consider me as ur mother then..
Mishti keeps Laksh’s hand on her head
Mishti: tell me the truth
Laksh looks at AP helplessly
AP: Tell her Laksh.
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FB Starts
2 Yrs back
@MM
Laksh is wearing formal cloths..
Laksh: maa i am going to office.
AP: Laksh have breakfast and go na.
Laksh: no maa i am getting late
Luv: maa breakfast.
AP: Yh coming Luv.
AP comes with breakfast.
AP: Luv where is Laksh?

Luv: bhaiya went
AP: This boy will never obey me..never have breakfast
Luv: he also thinks abt work work and work.
Laksh comes back
AP: What happened?
Laksh: breakfast.

AP: achanak kyun?
Laksh: papa ne danda
AP: come have breakfast then..
Laksh: aaj kitne ladikiyon ki saath date hain.
Luv : c’mon bhaiya date toh har ladki ke saath jaatha hoon par dil mein sirf ek hi ladki hain
Laksh: ok i’ll tell maa now.
Luv: not now bhaiya…
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After some months.
@MM
Morning.
Laksh is sitting in the living room and reading newspaper.
AP and DP are cooking in the kitchen
DP: Laksh has not Luv here yet?
Laksh: papa its Sunday let him sleep for some more tym.
AP: How much more Laksh its already 10..tell him to come down.
Laksh goes upstairs and knocks Luv’s door

Laksh: Luv get up bro its 10..come on..
He knocks for 5 mins..but Luv is not opening the door.
Laksh: Luv are u ok..
Laksh hits the door harder.

Hearing the sound AP and DP comes there.
AP: What happened?
Laksh: Luv is not opening the door..and he is not responding also.
Laksh breaks the door and they see Luv lying on the bed and his wrist is bleeding and he is lying unconsciously opn the bed.
AP: Luv…
Laksh carries Luv..

DP: Ramu ..
Ramu(driver): DP Saab..
AP: Get car ready..we have to take Luv to hospital.
They all reaches hospital
DR comes out.
DP: Dr how is my son he will be alri8 na
Dr; sry Mr.Maheshwari he is very critical he does not have much tym..but miracles can happen at any tym..pray to god.
AP cries and Laksh consoles her.
Nurse: who is Laksh ..Patient wants to see him
Laksh goes inside.

Luv: Laksh bhaiya.
Laksh sits near him.
Luv: bhaiya forgive me i am sry
Laksh keeps his hand on Luv’s cheek.
Laksh: tell me why did u do this to us?
Luv: its not anything like tht Laksh bhaiya its my punishment
Lakhs: punishment?

Luv; yh punishment for loving her like this and ..doing whatever she was tellingme..
Laksh: who is she ?
Luv; bhaiya ..thts not the thing becoz her i destroyed a girl’s life.
Laksh wat.
Luv: yh …Ragini Rathore…and didnt knw anything abt her…after proposing to my girlfriend she asked me ..pointing towards to Ragini and ask me make her fall for me..and like an idiot i did all things to make Ragini love me and tht day wen she came to propose me i left her…but my girlfriend she also left me and told she was just using me for money ..and she married her long tym boyfriend..i don’t deserve to live anymore bhaiya..i loved her like tht.
Luv begins to breath heavily

Laksh: Luv don’t talk take rest..once u r alri8..we can
Luv: no bhaiya i don’t think tht will ever happen…just listen to my last wish Bhaiya
Laksh: Luv stop it u r going to be alri8 ok.
Luv: don’t lie bhaiya…i just want Ragini to forgive me
AP and DP also comes inside
Luv: pls i want Ragini to for give me..bhaiya pls..
Laksh: Luv
Luv: promise me bhaiya..
Laksh keeps his hand on Luv’s
Luv: i love u a..all
Luv dies…
FB Ends
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Laksh is sitting on a chair cover his face with his hands.
AP and Mishti are sitting opposite to him.
AP: After tht my Laksh changed ..joh humesha formals pehankar office jaya kartha thaw oh pagalon ki tarah aapki Ragini ki doondthi rahi…and at last we found u
Mishti: i didnt knw all these…i am sry
AP: Its our fate Sharmishta ji
Mishti goes to Laksh
Mishti: I am sry beta

Laksh: beta math kahiye bf kahiye.
Mishti hugs him.
Mishti: i think we should not hide it from Laado..
Laksh: no no Mishtu she should not knw all these…then she will ..no
Mishti: but wat abt u then.
Laksh: i am going to America tomorrow..then her life will be alri8.
Mishti: but
Laksh: no..
AP: Sharmishta ji kah rahi hain na.
Laksh: no .maa..and Mishtu take care of Ragini …and don’t wry where ever i am i’ll be praying for her and also loving her
Laksh goes.
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Laksh pases by Luv’s room and sees Ragini sleeping on the floor . Laksh carries her and places her on the bed.
Ragini holds Laksh’s hand (in sleep)
Ragini(in sleep): pls don’t leave me..pls…
Tears comes from Laksh’s eyes
Laksh realises his hand from her hold and goes.
Ragini(in sleep): Laksh..pls don’t leave me
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Precap: Laksh’s trip to America
And guys i’ve got new names Shaitan dimag, Queen of Suspence, Queen of Surprises….thank u all ..and i am loving these names..more names are welcomed…..i love u all……tkcr my fav squad
Nxt update will be on Saturday….

Aditi.Ayansh

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