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@shergil mansion
Swara goes to her …..
Whole lights gets off …everyone went to sleep
Swara in room thinks about lucky and hero’s first meet ….
Swara cries ….
She goes to washroom …washes her face with water ……
Changes into a black sleeveless top with white over coat and white short skirt ……..
@morning ….
Rithika : so yesterday was a busy day …..
Ashvar : haan correct …
Rithika : wait ..what’s the date today
Ashvar : wait …
Rithika and Ashvar together : its shona’s birthday ….
Rithika : oh god in this engagement in forgot about it ..
Ashvar : ya mee too ..our daughter is 17 now can u imagine ..
Rithika : its like yesterday only she was born…in my hands ..wait I will go and wake her up
Ashvar : r u mad ..let her sleep how much she wants …we will first inform it to the whole family …
Rithika : good idea and we will decorate the house with pink theme ..OK ..I will go ..
@hall
Ritika informs to everyone …
Sanky : wow yaar its shona’s birthday ..and u know what’s the date today
Ragini : ya she is really lucky to be born on this day …
Sanky: OK come let’s go and buy a beautiful gift for her …
They leave in car …
Lucky in his room ……
Lucky to himself : today is the day I have been waiting …I am going to propose u …
U all must be confused right …so let’s see fb
Fb laksh POV
I intentionally delayed my meeting with Swara ….
( u remember the first 4 episodes Swara couldn’t meet lucky )
To check whether Swara loves him or not ….
But Swara u came to my room …to wake me up …I went to the garden through window so that u don’t see me ..I kept my dress on bed so u think I am shower in the bathroom…I sent Adharsh bhai to my room…
The one who said u beautiful is Adharsh bhai …which I wanted to tell u ..
I am the one who called Tania to the pub to intentionally dance with …to make sure u r in love with me …
After that I came to know about ur birthday ..so I thought to make this birthday a memorable one for u ….
I acted to be angry on u ..but I couldn’t ..so I thought to make u hate me ..I have succeeded in the plan …but I forgot myself seeing u in traditional
I talked to u …
That time my mind said what r u doing she should hate u ..so for this surprise …so to make a scene ..I intentionally pushed Sammy …
So he could fall on u …and I would be angry for the reason ..it was successful …..
The entire story was my plan … …I have one plan to be successful ..that is today’s surprise …….
I am waiting …to propose u my love …..
Laksh POV ends
Everyone comes down and the hall is beautifully decorated
Its night 7 :00
Rithika : from morning Swara didn’t come from all the guest have arrived I will go and call her …
Ashvar : OK ….his phone rings …
Rithika : who is on line
Ashvar : don’t know I am receiving it from morning …
Rithika : then u should attend it …
Ashvar : hello ……..
Ashvar drops the phone ………………….
Rithika : what happened Ashvar …….
Ashvar gets tears it fallss……………
Rithika : what happened tell me I am scared ……..
Ashvar tells her to come with him ..
They leave ….
They reach the place ….
Ashvar : come ..
Rithika : but why we came to hospital ……we have lots of work in home ….
Ashvar : come ..
He takes her holding her hands tightly ……
The nurse comes …
Ashvar ; is that the place ..
The nurse points toward s the dead body kept place …
Rithika : why r u taking me to the deadbody place ……
Ashvar : just come …
They go in ..rithika covers her nose with shawl ..
There were many drawers -..—-
Police was there ….
Police : sir ur …
Rithika : I am not feeling good Ashvar …tell me what happened ..she cries ..
Ashvar breaks down and sits on the floor
Ashvar : our daughter is no more rithika …….he cries loudly ..
Rithika crying : no u r telling lie ..my daughter is at home …..
Ashvar : I am not telling lie …..he cries ……..
Rithika : SWARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA she cries really loudly the mothers pain …..
Ashvar : shonaa……
The police : sir we are very sorry for ur family ….but only this was there …
The assistant opens the drawer…
A hand was there with a pink ring ……its clearly swara’s hand ….
Rithika sees this and cries …..: swaraaa…………
Ashvar : shona ..u left ur dad ur friend ….swaraaaaaaaaa……
Police : the dead body is covered we will send it to ur home now …plzzz go home …sir and mam …….
Rithika : my only daughter left me ……she cries ………
Ashvar takes her and goes home with ambulance following them …..
They come home …
@ hall
Sujatha : where did u go ..we have arranged everything ….why ambulance is there …
Rithika and hugs her and cries …….loudly ….my swaraaaaaaaa is no more …..
Everyone is shocked ……
Vikram : Ashvar
Ashvar hugs him and cries ….my shona left me ……..cries …..
Ragini cries holding sanky ……..
Sanky also cries ………………………….
Lucky gets shattered …..he breaks down ….
Rithika : my life left me …..
Ap also cries vigorously …..
Ashvar : my heart gone ….swaraaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!come back ……
The ambulance staff comes and keeps the body covered in bandaid roll …in the middle of the house ….
Everyone stares the body …..
Lucky : no cutie u didn’t die ..this fake no u din’t do ……he cries ….
Sanky crying consoles him …………….
Ragini hugs sanky ….
Ragini : sanky Swara left us …..she has gone ……..
@ morning ….
Everyone is wearing white chudi and Saree …
Men’s whit Kurta …
Swara big photo frame is in middle with garland ….
Men’s and women’s one side ….
Seeing her photo ….
Rithika says to ap
Rithika : yesterday she was there ..but today where is she ….she cries …
Ap : I can understand …she also cries .
Rithika : yesterday I made her favorite ,,…,.,.,she herself asked me ..the last dish and last kiss ………..went ……she cries …
………
Ragini and sanky r standing in a corner …
Ragini crying : she went ……the last gift she gave me is this bracelet ….she even asked me to promise that I should come here for all holidays and take care for her parents …she was continuously saying that line …but she never said she would not be there
Sanky gets shocked hearing this …because Swara was also saying this to him ..
Sanky : this is not an accident ….its an suicide
Ragini : whatt…..
Sanky : Swara did it herself …come let’s go to her room …
They go …when they open both gets teary eyed …
Lucky comes ..
Sanky explains him everything
Lucky was shocked …
They search her room was some clue …..
Lucky sees the photo of them and starts crying ……
He takes it in his hands ‘..’.’.’.’
That time a paper falls …
Ragsan see it ..
Sanky takes and reads it …
What is written in the paper ..
Swara POV
Hey lucky sanky and rags ..I know u will find this letter somewhat …..because u all r my friends ..so u all r smarty….
But when u get this I won’t be there ,..,.,.,..this one month changed me a lot …u all changed …ragini first I thought u r bore type ..but u were my best friend ,..,.,I know u were the one who embaressed me in front of the family during swimming party …first I was angry ..later on I realized ..that I am snatching ur love …sorry yaar …I left the matter and became close to u …sanky sorry Mr attitude …I know now u will be happy as I won’t drive u crazy from now …ha ha ha ..last smile ..u were one of a kind ..not a ordinary person…who gave me miss attitude title and the first one to slap ….ha ha ha don’t take it serious ..OK ….lucky what to say …my life ..u have hurted me so much …but I don’t want to lose u …u entered my life …I have changed ..u were like my heart ..my body ….my brain everything …but the word which u said ..I couldn’t tolerate ..FAKE TEARS …I know I am spoiled and all ..but I am a human too …I want slap u but I won’t be there ,,.,.so u can be free ..OK ..I know my parents would have totally broke …
They were like my bffs they never said no to anything which I ask ..I even told about u lucky to my parents ..they were happy ….u know what I am the luckiest to get a family like them and friends like u all and partner like lucky …but I couldn’t control …I know I am suffering from coronary artery problem ..I heard ur trio conversation …that is also a main reason for this decision …I don’t want to be a burden to my parents and u don’t need to act very good to me ..believe me I am happy now really ….sanky u wanted to know …from when I have been suffering this problem ..
Its the day u saved me from the goons …remember pub…..actually I drank black wine too much that’s it ….no worries …now …
U three plz take good care of my parents ….its order from Swara shergil …..sanky lucky last time call my name …..cutie and miss attitude ….and ragini bff ….good bye guys ..love u all ….i wanted to have a life full of love ..which i got in one month only ….with love Swara laksh maheshwari (my dream ) ……
All the three gets teary eyed ……..
Sanky : we need to find bow she suicides ….
They three goes down ..sanky : police officer how this accident has happened ..
Fb
Swara took the car and went a long drive ….
She was driving rashly ….
She saw a big truck ….
She fastly goes towards …………….and thud !!!!! Over ….
Fb ends
Sanky ragini and lucky gets teary eyed …..
Swara soul gets pleased and leaves ……………………..
Laksh : swara come back ………….I want to u to be with me …to have a life full of love
Ragsan : love gives life but it took a life …(Swara birth date 14th Feb )
A LIFE FULL OF LOVE
Sad ending !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So guys this is my last part …..I will soon start writing another if u all wish so…..let me know it through comments ….bye guys …if yes I will start writing from 18th March stay tuned ………byeeeeeeeeeee guys ……keep supporting
13 Comments
You literally made me cry… . Very emotional.. I never expected this kind of ending in your story… . I hate laksh.. His small pranks had taken her life. I hate laksh only in your ff
so emotional and abrupt end !!! such a
good ff !!
Butbyhis time u plz write swasan ff
its really sad
so saad… i feel to cry.love u swara….
U made me cry….but nice one…
I cried reading this. Was emotional. Mind blowing epi
I hate sad endings plzz do something in season 2.anyways it was very emotional
oh my god you made me cry please carry on pls
too emotion ..
when i read ur ff i cry ..
to emotion …
As u r already writing a swasan ff…..eagerly waiting for next swalak….
u r awesome dolly
First time did not like laksh his intention was not to kill swara but still swara was hurt by laksh
Y sad ending yar …. Unexpected ending ..