Hello everyone.. I thought that noone would comment but is surprised to see 30 comments. I know that I have behaved very foolishy yesterday. Being a sensitive girl I got hurted but now I made my mind to write at any cost. As the story is out so I would like to add cute scenes and fights that I planned. And one more thing I am not any comment concious anymore. As this my passion I am writing…sorry guys for hurting you all?? thank-you for love and support as I got to know that my fiction has many silent readers.
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SCENE-1: SWARAS ROOM
Swara: this sanskar has no feelings at all. How can I make you love me sanskar? But I think that you have a bitter past literally a bitter one which is making you to behave like this. I promise you sanskar that I will become your strength.
She falls asleep
SCENE-2: BAADI
Ragini: maa did you lock the door?
Sumi: I forgot beta. Please do it
Ragini:(smiles) I think she has became an amnesia patient. I should take care of her
She goes to lock the door and observes piyush seeing her. She smiles in a friendly manner while piyush cones to her.
Piyush: good night ragini
Ragini: good night piyush ji
Piyush:(in a irritated voice) stop it ragini. I am just an year old to you. Please don’t add ji.
Ragini: but I cannot call you with name..
Piyush: you can and I feel better
Ragini:(hesitatingly) sorry but (thinks for sometime) yes I can call you piyush bhayya.
Piyush is shocked while ragini’s locks the door.
SCENE-3: BANGLORE
Swara: sanskar ji has asked me to come early but no one is here!! I think he is in cabin
She walks towards cabin but sanskar who was unaware of her arrival pushed the door which resulted him falling on her.
Swara:(to herself) how cute he is..uff these eyes are making me to think dirty.
Sanskar: (hesitatily) sorry
But he misses his grip and they both start rolling on one another. Swara screamed in pain
Swara: ouch!! My spine
She opens her eyes and finds herself in hostel room
Swara: what !! I mean why am I here?? It means that I was dreaming.(smiles with shy) swara.. You have became a mad girl in his love but the moments were really awesome. I wish that this would happen real.
Sanskar: it will dear
Swara turns and is surprised to see him.( she is imagining him)
Swara: I wish sanskoo
Sanskar: it is already 7:30 dear. Please get ready otherwise you will be late to office.
Swara gets fresh and is standing in front of wardrobe
Swara: what should I wear??
Sanskar points to a pink suit and swara wears it. Sanskar gestures her she was looking cute.
SCENE-4: BAADI
Piyush: dadi will you give me some sugar .actually..
Dadi: no need of any explanations piyush. It is just a matter of bowl of sugar.
Dadi goes to get sugar while ragini comes and sees piyush
Piyush: good morning angel
Ragini:(surprised) angel!! I am ragini your sister.
Dadi:( gives him the bowl) when did you both become brother and sister?
Piyush: yesterday night you know dadi ragini was the first girl who called me brother and now I will try my level best to be her brother
Ragini( smiles): thank-you bhayya. Actually I don’t have any brother but you …
Piyush: its okay..are you going to academy?
Ragini nodes
Piyush: then I will drop you
Ragini looks at dadi while she agrees.
Piyush: I will come in a minute
He leaves the place while ragini is so happy.
SCENE-5: SWARAS OFFICE
Swara: may I come in sir
Sanskar: yes swara actually you have a lot of work to do today.
Swara: sir…I need to ask you something
Sanskar:(looks at her) leave about yesterday’s incident
Swara: let me speak
Sanskar is shocked by her reaction
Swara: actually you helped me yesterday sir so I thought to give you a treat
Sanskar:(carelessly) I am not interested
Swara becomes sad
Swara: sir I know that you don’t like these kind you things but you don’t know about me and I won’t leave anyone who helped me
Sanskar: but..
Swara: please sir..she said in such a way that sanskar heart has melted like ice and it made him to remember something
Sanku..a girl’s voice echoed in his hear.
Girl: please sanku..come with me
Sanskar: oh my darling how can any lover reject if someone asks like you
Girl: don’t be romantic
Both giggled
Sanskar came to his senses by swara asking please.
Sanskar: (smiles) okay but only for this time
Swara is happy to listen to this
Sanskar: but at 4 pm
Swara nods and reaches her cabin
Swara: ( to herself) I never thought that you would accept this soon baby but..I can’t wait anymore now as I can spend time with you maybe for an hour but you would never know that how much it means to me.
Swara is desperately waiting for the clock to strike 4 . previously every hour was like a minute now every minute was like hell. She is getting irrated as time was not passing but is still happy thinking about evening
EVENING
Sanskar comes out of his cabin
Sanskar: shall we?
Swara: yes sir.but where?
Sanskar: it is your wish as this treat is yours
Swara: shall we go to cafeteria
Sanskar nods and they reach cafeteria in SANSKAR’S car
Screen freezes at swara
PRECAP: sanskar denines to take cappuccino. Ragini’s reaches academy along with piyush. Laksh is shocked
34 Comments
Thank God you are back! U can’t imagine the joy I got when I saw your fanfiction’s title. I am so glad that u are back! Promise me, that you would never (ever) lose hope again. Don’t get sad if you don’t receive enough comments, it doesn’t mean that we don’t read your fanfic, we do! We do read your fanfic, but it’s hard to comment because of my school and homework (☹️). Anyways, continue your story and remember that there are many silent readers like me who love your fanfiction. ??
welcome back yaar… it was really nice..
Thank-you everyone especially Sonia. I promise you that I won’t stop writing this. Love you all
Superb dr..