GUYS I WILL ASK SUGGESTION FROM YOU FOR STARTING NEW FF IN THE END IT MAY START AFTER 15 DAYS SO THOUGHT TO ASK FROM YOU GUYS ABOUT SUGGESTION,
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episode starts with swasanlak were going towards the place where lucky left ragini but as they reached they did not found anything
all tried to search everywhere but every thing was in vain
than lucky asked to one shopekeeper by showing rags pic
lucky- did you saw this girl
shopkeepr- yes i saw her she was badly injured due to accident, as he hear this words he could not believe that he heard correct or not, he got freezed at that moment,
automatically phone falls from his hand, his eyes automatically becomes wet, he was cursing himself for his deads
he comes in his senses by swara voice,
swara while crying- bhya please tell the name of hospital
shopkeeper- i think that ambulance was of govt. hospital
swara- ok she was about to go but sees lucky who was only freezed at that moment
swara sees him in shock state and ask lucky please stop crying come
lucky hits his hand on wall to decrease his inner pain
swara- please lucky control yourself we have to go to hospital to see her
lucky still crying no swara i will not be see her please you go
swara- please lucky come don’t give yourself pain
lucky- sees temple he says i will pray for her please let me here only
swara- but
sanky- swara let him here only please
swara understand and both goes
while luck sees diya and burns them and place on his both hands
he get pain but he do not care about this pain
his palms were burning but he did not cared to see them, he was going towards temple through stairs
other side swara reaches to hospital and ask about ragini by showing pics
hospital person tells to go to room 4
in room
swara eyes were moist, she was holding sanky hand to not to become weak
they see ragini on the bed
doctor ask are you her relative
swara just nods
docotr- no need of taking tention she is now normal and you can talk to her, she was badly injured but she is fine and doctor left place
as swara comes near ragini, ragini whisper swara i am your kavya
swara got shocked by her words
but she was immence happy to see her alive, she hugs her tightly to not let her go away
ragini also recprocate hug and says i am your di, i got my memory back
swara breaks the hug and becomes happy to know that she got her memory’
swara- you got memory
ragini nods in agreement
ragini ask where is lucky and what all happened why he was behaving like that i hate this lucky
swara understand her words before she can ask more doubts swara tells her whole story after kavya death
ragini got teary eyes to know about swara bad condition, she hugs to swara again
ragini ask where is lucky
swara- she is guilt he said that he will go to temple to pray for you
swara calls lucky car drivar and ask what laksh sir is doing, he says i will whatapp you the video
swaragini and sanky sees video and gets teary eys to see his repentence
swara says di please forgive him for it. he is not bad and now he is repenting
ragini says i will think about it
swara just nods
2 days has passed ragini was in hospital her family member got happy by seeing there daughter came and all were taking care of her and in these two days lucky did not
come to see her because both 2 days he was in temple to pray for her and to ask forgiveness
now lucky comes to meet her
as lucky and ragini sees each other in hospital both becomes teary eyes
both have flashback of there happy and bad days, there emotions were in peak level
lucky manages to go towards ragini, as he comes near her ragini sees other direction
lucky can sense dissaopintment
lucky gently seats near ragini and ask how are you
ragini- if we are leaving person on road to die that how that person will be
again a layer of guilt came
he knows what he did is unforgetable
lucky again whiper i am sorry ragini
ragini- for what purpose i will say sorry, for small thing you made my sister life to hell
lucky- i am guilt, i know i was in blind in this revenge matter and everything messed up, ragini i became mad after knowing about your death and this is reason i gave
pain to swara
ragini can see the guilt she knows he is guilt but she was adamed at her point she only tells go away from here
lucky do too much things to convince her but she did not cared because she can not forget the pain which he gave to swara
in there life 10 days has passed like this ragini came to her house but till now swasan were too busy in raglak patch up that they did not cared about each other while
lucky was doing his work to convince ragini but ragini was too adamed of this thing
but one day he realy got annoyed and cuts his wrist in front of ragini to make her understand
ragini was too shocked by his act all took him to hospital where he got cured
HOSPITAL ROOM
ONly raglak were there
ragini cryingly what you did with your hand lucky
lucky for making you convince
ragini does any one do this type of things to make convince
lucky says i do not know other but i know about me, i can do please ragini i am sorry
ragini hugs him tightly and says i forgave you but from next time please do not go for this revenge
lucky smiles and nods both hug each other and lucky whisper so get ready to bear my torture
ragini smiles and says i am ready from before only but waiting for it when you will convince me
lucky- oh so you were too much excited to bear my tortures
ragini just smiles
lucky today i want to promise you ragini, i will never do this mistake in my life and i really want to live with you forever for my life
ragini nods and says you have to bear me forever
lucky smile………………………………………………………………………………………..
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swasan part
swara gets happy by seeing her sister happy, she also see sanky standing beside her
she goes towards him and say i want to ask forgiveness from you for what i did
sanky closes her mouth wth his finger and says i know everything swara i had firm belife on you that you will mever do any mistake, i am glad to see your love for me
swara
i am very lucky
swara says no i am also lucky to have a person like you who loves me unconditionally
sanky- but i want one promise from your side
swara- nods
sanky from now you will never hide anything from
swara says never
sanky smiles but ask will you be able to live in slums swara
swara- where you are i will be there with you sanky i can live on footpath also with you
sanky smiles and both hugs each other after there messed up life
swara while hugging i love you sanky
sanky i love you too
they broke the hug by voice of person that is ragini
swasan gets embrassed but before they could speak ragini says i am proud of your choise swara, he is very good person
swara ask how do you know
ragini tells everything about ragsan meeting and all, swara becomes teary eyes to see sanky goodness
ragini- he was the person who helped me when i needed shoulder and i really want sanky to become your sholder for life time
swara smiles
ragini takes the hand of sanky and swara and tells both promise me that you both will never leave each other and will always care to each other in every situation
swasan nods
ragini so today i will be giving my sister to you sanky forever
by her words swara got teary eyes and both sister hugs each other with full of love……………………………………….
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now both the couples united by marriage relation, swara father also did not have problem with lucky because they saw love of sanky towards swara but he gave good job
in his company which sanky easily accepted now sanky with work also started his studies of college
swara helpes him to study to do work in office she usuallly do his office work at there house, after complteting his college study and by seeing his good work, swara
father made him manager of there whole gadodia industry,
life style of swasan became good and they lived happily ever after
while ragini joined office with lucky now both used to go to office to work where both had romance pranks and everything
they had many up and downs in there life but still both couples work togather and always respected each other and they all lived happily ever
after…………………
THE END
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DONE WITH SLUMS STORY I AM OVERWHELMED TO SEE YOUR IMMENSE SUPPORT AND LOVE TOWARDS ME
GUYS I HAD 12 STORY IN MY MIND BUT I ASKED TO TAMANNA AAPI SHE GAVE ME TWO STORY SUGGESTIO AND 1 I WILL ADD FROM MY OWN
1) STORY NAME- LOVE IN THE VALLEY OF KASHMIR- from name you understood that it is on kashmir, story will focus on life of kashmirian and there problem as well as life
of army people working on the borders where heroin will enter hero house while running from terrorist, in starting he may think that she is terrorist but it will be
cute love story with nok jhok
2) STORY NAME- SOME ANTIQUES OF SCHOOL LIFE- PAIRS WILL BE SWASAN AND RAGLAK GOOD FREINDSHIP OF ALL SWASAN RAGSAN SWALAK SANLAK SWARAGINI- this story is full of fun,
no separation, no negative character only 4 lovely pairs, this story will start from life of 4 students studying in 10th class, while ragsan father will be family
freind and both ragsan are prank star of class and shared good bond, than in 10th class entry of swalak, where lucky will come from south to study here and his father
will also be business men, and they transfered to in ragsan city and his weak point is hindi he can’t speak well he will be handsom but in character he will be
innoscent and funny and ragsan will take advantage that lucky do not know hindi, swara entry in ragsan school will be same time, SHE will be studius girl but little
strict, she do not have mother, she lives with single father, and both swalak will be monitor of class, how swalak and ragsan will become freind how love will blossom
between swasan and raglak will be interesting, but most most important thing this story will show real life incidense which happens with us and the pranks which we do
and all mistakes also will be taken which usually schhol life students do and all your secret funny thinks we do personally and some crushes also be shown
means totally real life IT WILL REFRESH SCHOOL MEMORIS AND WILL ALSO REMIND YOU YOUR ANTIQUES YOU DO IN SCHOOL but ideas will be given from you all side
so writer of this story will be every reader also
3)STORY NAME- DOES I LOVE BOY OR GIRL- this story is funny in this story heroin will work to boy company by becoming boy, she will wear punjabi suits, she will become
good freind of hero, many times she will be in verge of expose also, it will also be shown the problem she is facing when she became boy, it will be too funny that how
a girl will experience boys life, in this story boy will see her in girl avtar also will tell her when she is in boy form that he likes her, he will tell many secrets
to heroin also which usually boys tell to boys she will feel to embrassed, but hero will be little irritated type person in girls he do not like many thing so he will
usualy say to girl in boy form which will also show some fight between them on girl boy topic but biggest thing is that what will happen when hero will get to know
that she is girl not boy and same girl to whome he likes it will be too funny experience, i think heroin will love him from before that is not decided till now
AND IF YOU HAVE IDEO ON YOUR OWN OR YOU HAVE GOOD PLOT IN YOUR MIND SO YOU CAN TELL ME I WILL THINK ABOUT IT AND ALSO YOU CAN TELL YOUR SUGGSTION IF YOU WANT SOME CHANGES IN ABOVE SHOWING STORIES ALSO
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these are suggestion please tell me and sorry for ending story soon
i am overwhelmed to see your response and please keep in mind the morals which i gave in this story and keep loving mE as a GOOD AND LOVELY BROTHER
SORRY AGAIN TO END THIS FF SOON
AND if you have any doubts i will reply to each and every commentor so comment it and you can critices also
GUYS MY OTHER STORY IS RUNNING OF TELLYUPDAYS YOU CAN READ THAT ALSO AND WHOSE NAME IS SWARAGINI FIXING BROKEN RELATION IS IT PURE OR IMPURE BY IRFAN PATHAN SO YOU CAN
READ THAT
BYE GUYS HAVE A NICE LIFE AHEAD AND DO NOT FORGET ME…………….