Hello….Frendzzz…….
I’m Devihaa here with an os……
“Love u forever”… Frendzzz this is not a romantic os….so pehle hi sorry bol dethi hoon…..but yet this is a love story of……..
Let’s see who is it……
CHARACTERS…
Swara gadodia: the elder daughter of sumi and shekar….doing mbbs 3rd year. ….and staying in hostel…….soft, innocent…,
Ragini gadodia: the younger daughter is sumi and shekar….studying 10th std in CBSE scl…..prankster, naughty….
Sumi: mother of swaragini….and housewife….
Shekar: a caring husband and loving father….working as a manager in xyz company…..
Gadodia family is a middle class one…..
Story…..
A girl is seen standing in front a garlanded photo of……???
Her eyes r red….and were in verge of crying….and she reveals to our ragini…..
Ragini : I still remember that crucial day……
Fb starts….
A girl is seen riding the cycle fastly……she reveals to b ragini….another girl is Seen riding cycle behind her….
Ragini: today I’m only first Sandhiya…..
Sandhiya: let’s see….
Both ride and both stop at a junction….
Sandhiya: again u won….
Ragini: I knew that……okk wht home work tuition aunty gave today……
Sandhiya: hmm…..she told to read and come 2nd lesson fully….cozz only one week is their for our board xam right….
Ragini: hmmm ok bye….
After that she goes to her home…
At home…
Ragini goes and knocks the door….a girl of around 22yrs comes and opens the door…
Ragini: hi di……( entering inside the house)….. When ur leaving….and when is practicals…
Swara: now only…. And practical is ….on 3rd….I mean one day after ur xam starts….
Saying swara goes and keeps books inside her bag……
Ragini sits in the sofa and watches TV…..
Sumi is seen cooking in kitchen…..
Sumi: shona call ur papa and see….its already late…..
Swara: haan ma…..I’m trying …..but its busy…..
Sumi : okk….call another no. And see…..
(Note: he is having 2mobile)
After trying that no…
Swara: that also busy ma…..
Sumi: how is this possible…. Will he talk in both mobile ah…???
Swara: how do I know ma..
Ragini: y what happened…..
Swara: ntg u go eat ……gulab jamuns…
Ragini( excitedly): gulab jamun …..really……where where….
Swara: its in my stomach I ate fully….
Saying this she laughs…..
Ragini: u na……….
Saying she started run behind her…
Sumi is seen cooking with a worried face…..
At that time a neighborhood girl comes in…
Girl: aunty someone have called u from uncle’s office….
Sumi: who…
Girl: I don’t know aunty….u come na…
Sumi : ragu shona…b safe …I’m going out…
Sr:: okk ma…
Sumi goes to the girls house and and speaks to the person of shekars office who is still in line…
Sumi: hello…
Os: haan ji….vo….ur husband fainted ….while returning to home…
Tears made their ways from her eyes….
Sumi: ji….what did u say……
Os: ji….ntg serious ….can u come to ABC hospital…..
Sumi ran up and told everything to sr…….
All were crying like hell…..
They all caught a cab and were going to ABC hospital
Ragini: ma don’t cry ma…..ntg will happen to pa….
Swara: yes ma….papa just fainted na…ntg ma u don’t cry….
Sumi: no shona…..ur papa won’t faint at all……something happened…..thy r not telling us….
All of their eyes were raining…..
They reached ABC hospital….
A friend of shekar comes there and takes them to mortuary…..
Ragini sees her papas legs…
She burst into tears…..
Ragini: ma ….papa…..vo……( pointing towards shekar)….
Tears made their own way …..
They all ran towards him….
His one side face was pressed …..his pants was drenched in blood…..his right hand was fractured……
Ragini: papa….wake up pa….see pa ma di …r here…wake up pa…..
Swara: pa. ….get up pa……u can’t leave us alone pa…..
Sumi: how can u do this ji….???? U can’t leave us….plss wake up….
But could he…..he can’t change the nature……..
His body was taken home…..
And his last rites were done….
Fb ends…..
Ragini eyes was fully filled with tears….
Her POV:
U know …..when u left us ……there was only one week for my board xams and one week for di practical……I was not able to concentrate at all pa….my tuition aunty only took me to scl for writing xams……and while writhing the columns…..of FATHER’S NAME….. I used to stop for a minute thinking about that crucial day…..but the next second ….I used remember ur words pa…..u always wanted me to take 10 points …na pa……I used to remember it and write my xams pa…..whenever ma and di used to talk about u in nights without sleeping….I used to say ” ma sleep ma….mrng u can talk” …..just to make them normal and sleep….. And I used to cry all the night thinking about u…… Today is my results pa……and u know what…..I fulfilled ur dream…….I got 10 points pa……why did u leave me pa…..why…???? But I always love u forever pa……
End of POV…..
And some where in heaven…. A man is seen wearing a white shirt and white pant standing in between clouds……he is revealed to shekar…….his eye r red in tears…..
Shekar: I’m always with u beta…..
The end….
Okk friend …..I’m done with it…I’m sorry for any typos……I hope u all will love this ” love u forever ” ….I dedicate this to all fathers ……
Plss drop ur valuable comments friends…..whether it is positive or negative….
Okk then bye….
Love u all…..
Take care….of urself and ur family…..
Drive slowly…..
And merry Christmas and happy new year in advance…..
With love,
Devihaa..
Credit to : all my lovely readers