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RECAP: swara jealous , rag’s prank on lucky , action episode ..
Laksh: u can think about mr.khanna after wards first take your medicines
Rag’s: noo
Laksh: u have to take them,
Rag’s: no lucky please
Laksh: (takes a long breath) in first place, i am angry with u n now by doing this drama ,you are testing my patience , i am telling u i will never talk to you
Rag’s: why are u emotionally blackmailing me , i will take the medicines , angry young man ( makes faces at laksh)
laksh , smiles at her n give her medicines…
Rag’s: sanskar u are really great , i don’t know how u managed with this dramebaaz since your childhood ……..UFF
Laksh: i wonder how swara tolerated u…
Sanskar: lucky shut up!!
Rag’s: what did u said?
Swara: avoid it my darling, shall we leave now
RAg’s: yes..
they leave ………..sanskar is driving ,swara is beside him , as raglak are injured they both are resting in back seats
Rag’s: swara , tell me about your love story, your first meeting , who proposed first ?
Swasanlak are lost in their thoughts, they think about everything ……..there is complete silence in car , rag’s is surprised.
Rag’s: hello everyone , where are u lost guys.?
swara takes a deep breath n says
Swara: what ever happened in past is happened for good , i am so happy now
Rag’s: swara i asked about your love story n u ar…
Laksh ( he is disturbed a bit , so he talks in a serious tone): why don’t you shut your mouth n sleep for sometime , i don’t know why u always irritate
Rag’s ( she feels bad) : what is wrong with u , i don’t know why u are behaving like this from last two days , i know that i did a mistake by ignoring u , but this is not the way u treat me , even i am a human n have feelings , it hurts me.(she is sad n see outside the window)……..
laksh is still disturbed so keeps quiet , swasan are also quiet…..
after 5 minutes
rag’s is fed up of silence
Rag’s: i am still not talking to u . moreover u are not even trying to console /apologize / cheer me . and what is wrong with both of you (swasan) if i fight with lucky u will not talk to me?
Laksh smiles….
Rag’s: u are smiling , u stupid , (she throws pillow at him ) i hate you…..swara n sanskar i even hate u ( she puts on headphones)
Sanskar: lucky why are u not apologizing to her
Laksh: bhai , i just love to see her in anger, just look at her she so cute.
after sometime rag’s falls asleep . she was about fall but, laksh catches her head from falling .then rag’s in her sleep grabs laksh hand n tightens her grip over his hand n rests her head on his shoulder n laksh caress her hair .sanskar notices this
Sanskar: offo lucky ! what is happening ha??
Laksh: stop it bhai..
swara turns back n see rag’s on laksh shoulders
Swara: at last the love birds are together . Awww! so cute
Laksh: now stop teasing me. (laksh blushes)
swasan: OMG ! Laksh is blushing out .
laksh eyes them to stop it n sighs them rag’s is sleeping.
Sanskar: okay lucky . after sometime laksh also falls asleep , he rests his head on rag’s head . swara see them n say
Swara: sanskar just look at them i just hope rag’s realize her love for laksh.
Sanskar: sometimes think about your poor hubby as he is driving all the way n is tired
Swara: really , what should i do inorder to cheer my poor hubby?
Sanskar: u need to charge him up n u know how to , charge him up
swara hits sanskar n kisses him on his cheek
Sanskar: there are 10 more levels. i am still in level one please help me
swara : no, for now this is more enough
Sanskar: it is waste to ask u ( he makes a sad face )
SWAra: don’t start your drama now ( she then kisses him) . they both catch their hands …………………….raglak are also holding their hands ……..(raabta plays in BG)
after an hour or two ……..Rag’s phone rings….laksh wakes up n yawns …….ring continues …rags takes the call (dadu on other side )
Rag’s: hmm……….. dadu guess what …..action episode , it was awesome i fought with , not only me lucky , swara n sanskar also enjoyed ……..actually i got wound on my palms n not to worry dadu …………….who the love birds , if they get time out from thier love n romance ,then they will look after me …………….dadu lucky is there to take care of me u don’t worry , but dadu he scolded me , when we will reach there u have to scold him………….byeee dadu
Rag’s tightens her grip over laksh hand (she remembers something) opens her eyes,then, she loosens the grip n raises her head to see who is it n finds laksh n smiles at him.
Rag’s: yawns……dadu will scold u…..i was upset with u , then what are u doing on my side??
Laksh: (mesmerized by her innocence) i ……..i wa…..was..
Rag’s: i am not in the mood to fight with u now , we will postpone our fight ,okay?
Laksh: okay
swasan laughs
Swara: are u alright rag’s? is the wound hurting ?
Rag’s: yeah am alright n to be honest it is hurting me pretty well.
Swara: laksh take this cream n apply on the wound
laksh removes the cloth from the palms n applies cream very carefully……….
Rag’s smiles at laksh n says ” lucky sometimes u look so innocent just like a baby”
laksh: thank u n am sorry for my behavior i was disturbed then , am sorry
Rag’s: lite dude , even u are right ,i do irritate a lot, but can’t help it yaar. manufacture defect
laksh laughs n says ” u r crazy”
they stop at a restaurant :
they order food …….swasanraglak –order of sitting..
laksh : from where would u like to start ??
Rag’s: even sanskar should feed swara then only i will eat
Sanskar: anything for u rag’s
all laugh……….
sanskar feed swara & laksh feed rag’s………they all spend their best time ….then they leave, laksh drives …….they reach home it’s very late …….they enter home n sirprised to everyone is still awake , because it’s very late they thought everyone must be sleeping ……
dadi(latha ) see them n says ” here they come”.
Rag’s: dadi ! i missed u a lot s*xy (she runs ti her n hug her)
Dadi: notanki ! how is wound now??
Rag’s: bindass
rag’s goes to dadu n hug him n then to dp n ap
SwaSanLak also come n take blessings.
DP: ragini beta i said u na khanna is not good , see now what happened , this all is because of me
Rag’s: uncle please , it’s not your mistake . u have seen what he can do n now u will see i will do….so chill!
I though missed u all a lot, i think u didn’t miss me?
AP: no beta we missed u too
Rag’s: aunty u r best (hugs her)
rag’s: wait wait now DP uncle will say ( rag’s imitates him ) okay , it’s late go n sleep , we will talk in the morning ” .all laugh . DP taps her cheek with a smile …
DP: okay
all laugh again remembering what rag’s just did.
they all leave to their rooms
swasan:
sanskar hugs swara n says my battery is dead sweetie , will u help me to charge it. swara hits him n says i will go to rag’s she must be struggling .
sanskar: lucky is there na he will take care………u take care of me now
sWAra: okay what do u want now .
SANskar: shall we dance , swara gives her hand to his they both dance romantically ………..
Rag’s room:
she is struggling to tie up her hair n irritated ……just then a knock at door .
Rag’s: come in lucky .
Laksh: how do u know that it is me ?
Rag’s: of course it will be u , to give my medicines ,right?
Laksh:yes ! rock star
he gives her medicines
Rag’s: lucky can u tie my hair up please ?
Laksh: why not?
laksh takes comb , he brushes very hard n tie a very tight pony tail
Laksh: okay?
Rag’s: yeah , thanks
Laksh: now go to sleep
Rag’s: no lucky i am not feeling sleepy , actually i wann
Laksh: not today we will go tomorrow .now go to sleep
Rag’s: then u have to tell me a story?
Laksh: story?
Rag’s: yeah ! when i wont feel like sleeping , dadi tells me stories
Laksh: rag’s u are so different , i don’t know how many more shades do u have .i will try my best to tell a bed time story okay
Rag’s: okay.
laksh narrates ,he makes many blunders soon rag’s falls asleep , even laksh falls asleep with his knowledge …….
PRECAP: dev’s entry ………………for sure
please comment ……………..hope u enjoy …………so sorry swasan fans , i will work on swasan moments ………..so sorry…………:-)
25 Comments
nice
Awwww kitna pyaara scenes hain
Very nice yarr waiting for ur next uptde
superb. both swasan n raglak rocks
Wow amazing ff
Very cute
Really nice dear
Again a great episode.. So cute scenes..
Awesome….
NICE?
Hi, i do like the story but can you make ragini less of an action package like she fought with the goons instead Of laksh and can you make ragini get her memory back now
I think hesby is right you are making ragini so important and fearless that is a good thing that she is fearless but come on you are exaggerating and yes bring her memory back
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Anyways i said that yh dont make ragini so important and fearless that even the guys cant do what she can and please bring her memory back
nice……waiting for Dev’s entry.
u are awsome.. I just love your FF
i was busy for 2days..
today i read ur past 2ff also really gud yar…
waiting for devs entry..
raglak n swasan scene is awsome..
ragini totally rocking..
Awsome
Nice…. Waiting for ur next ff….
i also want ragini memory back..
Hi dear….really excellent storyline…and plz donate some of ur mind to the writer of the serial so they can make swasan unite and show some romantic scenes of them…. plz update soon I am a silent reader but ur ff provoked me to comment
Is ther any malayali
Akshitha… U used to write 2 epis… Den y only 1 nowadays… Plzzzz yaar.. Update 22 nd epi soon.. 2 day itself… Plz, plz,plzzzzz
naina i am malyali..
my home town kozhikode..
Wow… Me too..frm ernakulam.. 🙂
Update soon yaaaaaar