Hello sweeties….I’m Devihaa back again with the next part…sry for being late……tq for ur support and comments in my previous part…….I’m really happy that u guys r loving it……ok now enough of my idiotic talks….let me start now…
Swaragini : All are not same part 13
Laksh: surprise……
Rag: surprise….what is it….???
Lak: its……surprise…so I won’t tell…..
Ragini pouts…
Laksh…..while nearing his surprise place….
Lak: I actually used to come here when my good is off….and today ur mood is off …so I thought to bring u here…….
Saying he stops his car in front of a orphanage……and both gets out…..
Lak: I’ll introduce u to them……
But……….???? all the children come and circle around ragini………
{ guys I’ll b using various names now for the children} ..
Sonu: ragu di wht u didn’t come for so many days….???
Bitto: haan…di…u know how much we missed u..
Rag: aweee….mera bachha….now see …u r di came……..
Laksh looks at all this shockingly …
One of girl notices Laksh….
Suji: array….see Laksh bhai also came…..
Seeing him….all the children encircle him…
Mona: bhai….how r u….???..
Lak: ur bhai is super…..ok now let’s go inside…..
and all go inside……raglak goes the master of the orphanage….
Raglak: Hai…..Dada……
Dada: array…..Laksh and Ragini beta….u both together…???
Rag: haan Dada….we r partner in a project….
Dada( notices her hand): beta…what happened to ur hand…
Rag: vo…ntg Dada….
Lak: Dada…..can u give me the first aid box……
Dada nodes his head and hand over him the first aid box……laksh takes and both raglak go and sit in the veranda….. Ragini takes the cotton and tries to wipe her blood…..
Lak: let me do it…
Rag: no its ok I’ll manage…
Laksh without giving any heed to her….takes her hand and starts cleaning it….
Ragini being afraid of the pain….closes her eyes tightly and looks away…..laksh smiles at antics…and he dresses her wound….
Lak: finish…
Rag( opens her eyes): thanks…
And both goes to the children…..
Suji: so di….what competition today…???
Rag: hmm…..singing competition…
Mennu: but di….last week we had this competition….
Rag: hmmm….then dance competition…
Sonu: super di…..
Veeru: but di….today u and laksh bhai will dance and we will b the judge….
All children: haan….yes correct….
Raglak: ok……
Laksh began to dance on the song…Saree ke fall sa …from R.Rajkumar…..
He finishes the dance…..all clap hands for him…..and now it was ragini time to dance……
She gets up and goes and stands in the middle……. She was feeling uncomfortable to dance in front of laksh……. At that time…
Tring Tring…???{ no guys its not chachi…??}…laksh phone rang…..flashing “MAA”….
Laksh goes to other side to speak to ap….
Ragini sighs and she began to dance on the song cham cham cham ….from .. Bhaagi…….
Other side…..
Lak: kya ma….
Ap: beta where r u …..
Lak: ma….I was just feeling off so I came to orphanage with ragini……
Ap: oh….kk……come to home soon beta……and also bring Ragini…..
Lak: ok ma….
Ragini finishes dance….laksh comes…..
Suji: ok now its time for results….
All the children form a circle and discuss about the winner……
While raglak r standing nervously waiting for results as if it was their exam results…… Ragini was biting her nails and Laksh was standing with crossed fingers…..
Suji: we r in a big problem…..
Suki: haan both performed well….
Bitto: whom we will choose…..
Sid: hmm…..we can make both winners na…??
Meenu: hey idiot …how can they b 2 winners???
Sid: first listen to me….ok……I mean let us make it a draw…….no winners and no losers…..
Suji: Ss that’s super……
And all head towards raglak…..
Suji: so the competition has came to a end and the judgment is …………….there is no winner and no losers……
Rag: but suji……competition means winner should b there na…..
Suji: hmmm……ok then laksh bhai is the winner…..
Laksh jumps while ragini pouts….
Suki: array ragu di….Laksh bhai just won the competition …..but u won our heart….
Rag: awee……my dear…..
Saying she kisses her…..
Lak: ok Bacchus…. Ragini we r going home…..ma called ……
Ragini looks at the children they became sad hearing this …..
Rag: Laksh can I talk to aunty…
Lak: y???
Rag: I’ll tell u afterwards…
Lak: he dials the no.
Ragini takes the phone….and goes other side….
Rag: aunty I’m Ragini…
ap: haan beta tell….
Rag: actually aunty…..
The conversation is muted….
After sometimes she comes to Laksh…
Rag: laksh can u buy some chocolates …..and u come to home….
Lak: y….??
Rag: that….aunty only asked….
Lak: hmm…ok ..but what about u..??
Rag: I’ll play with the children and I’ll come directly to home….u go…
Lak: ok…
Saying he goes ……..he go to a shop and buys chocolates and goes to home….
He enters and gets shocked seeing the view in front of him…….
Ok friends done with this part….I’m sry for any typos….pls do drop ur comments….. Silent readers pls do comment…..
Ok friends bye…..
Take care…
With love,
Devihaa
Credit to : all my lovely readers…..
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