Hey everyone….thank u all for ur lovely comments….thank u silent readers…I’m back with Episode 14…enjoy
Sweetie Pie- Sumi and Shekhar don’t know Swara’s name because Adi introduced her as Shona to everyone….so they all think her name is Shona… Maheshwaris and Gadodia’s don’t knw her name is Swara.
Epi starts….
@GM
Swaragini enter GM… they feel at home…they feel like they have been here before…
Sumi- come beta I will show ur room…she leads them to a big room…which had wall in between to make it look like 2 room…there was door which connected them….the rooms were pink and purple….it had a huge bed…with 2 big long windows that lead to balconies.
Swa- wow auntie ur house is beautiful….
Sumi- thank u beta…I will get some clothes for u from uttara…
She leaves the room…
Rag- Swa, I feel very strange here….this whole place feel like my own…
Swa- di me too…but how can that be…it’s the first time we came here…
Rag- hmmm ur right…ok I will come back from the bathroom ok…she goes to the bathroom….
Swara goes near the window and goes to the balcony….she looks around and sees a room with a balcony opposite her…she wonders whose room could that be from MM….
Swa- I think it’s uttara’s room… Let me call her…she pick up a small stone throws it at the window….the stone falls in the room….someone comes out shirtless and only with a towel on….it was lucky…Swalak get shocked to see each other….
Swa- aaaahhhhh she turns around… Lucky looks at her confusingly and then looks at himself…..he realises he was shirtless and only had a towel on….
Lak- aaahhhh…he quickly turns around as well…
Swa-u…u…u der hadi couldn’t u come wearing proper clothes….
Lak- junglibilli don’t u have any sharam… throwing rocks in my room…calling me out…
Swa- I thought it was Uttara’s room so I threw a rock so she comes but u came…now go and wear ur clothes or u wanna stand here like that….they both go inside their rooms…
Sumi and Ragini come back…. Sumi gives clothes to Swaragini..
And leaves the room…Swaragini get changed and go to the balcony…
They feel the fresh air and have a bit of a talk…
Rag- Swara…u know how scared I was today…
Swa- me too di…I felt like it’s the last day of our lives….but why did u say Sanskar name?
Rag- I don’t Swara…whenever I’m in trouble…I forget everything and just remember his name…
Swa- u don’t love him na?
Rag- no…we are just friends…
Swa- hmmm ok…di, I luv u…
Rag- I luv u 2…. Both hug…just then Sanskar comes to his balcony and is surprised to see Swaragini…
Sans- oh so u r staying in that room?
Swa- yes…hearing Swara’s voice Lucky also comes out…
Swalak look at each other embarrassed remembering what happened before…
Lak- u came out again…
Swa- what’s ur problem…I will go where I want…
Rag- Sanskar and lucky can u come here to this balcony…we need to tell u something….
Sans- but how? Everyone are sleeping….
Lucky winks at him…Sanskar understands…
Lak- Shona and Ragini…u both go and find something so we can come and we will also look for something….Swaragini go in and search for something so Sanlak could come…Sanlak teleport to Swaragin’s balcony…lucky creates a rope for the excuse…
Swaragini come back with nothing but are surprised to see Sanlak…
Swa- how did u come so fast?
Sans- with this rope….he shows the rope which, lucky created…
Lak- ok tell what u wanted to say…
Rag- I knw sanskar I sed we will not say thank u or sorry….but both saved our lives…Thank u so much…
Swa- yes thank u guyz…if u 2 didn’t come then we might have not been here…
Sans- ur welcome…
Lak- junglibilli u r saying thank u…wow…BTW its ok…
All 4 of them sit on the chairs with blankets talking….Ragsan in one corner of the balcony sharing blanket and Swalak are in other. corner of the balcony sharing blanket…
Rag- Sanskar how did u come there?
Sans- we were searching for u but couldn’t find u and shona we heard the growling noise and followed it…then saw u 2…
Rag-hmmm…u know Sanskar I again sed ur name…I don’t why but I feel safe with u…u r always there for me…Promise u won’t leave me….Sanskar shocked at what she sed…Ragini realises what she sed…
Rag- I mean as friend…
Sans- of course promise..I will… whenever u say my name u will always find me with u…don’t think of urself alone…
Ragini smiles at him and looks at the sky…
Rag- look sanskar the sky is looking beautiful…the stars…the moon…
Sans- u like stars?
Rag- I love them and Vampires…
Sanskar surprised to hear that….
Sans- Vampires? Really? Aren’t they dangerous? and they are not real anyways…
Rags- they are real and no I don’t find them dangerous…I find them cool…and for some reason I feel connected to them….
They both continue talking….
Swa- der hadi weren’t u scared of the werewolf?
Lak-I wasn’t….u know I’m a cool dude…
Swa- yh yh…whatever….u know I hate werewolves but I love Vampires….don’t know why but they excite me…lucky is looking at her shockingly….
Lak- u knw a lot about Vampires?
Swa- not much but they are awesome…their powers…they must be cool na..
Lak- hmmm…he looks at the sky… Swara also looks…
Swa- it’s so peaceful…
Lak-yh but u r here na for bak-bak…Swara hits him on his arm
Swa- very funny…they also continue their talk…
Sans to Rag- yh ur right…finishing of his sentence to something… he turns around and sees Ragini sleeping peacefully on his shoulder….he admires her beauty….he covers her with blanket and kisses her forehead gently without Swalak noticing… he then sleeps also leaning his head on Ragini’s head… On the other side Swara also fell asleep.
Lucky is mesmoried seeing her…
Lak- she’s a sleeping beauty. he realises what he said..laksh whatr u saying? Stop and go to sleep..
He also sleeps covering himself and Swara with blanket….all 4 of them are sleeping peacefully in the balcony….
Whilst someone is watching them behind some trees…its a young man…the same man who sent those 4 men to scare Ragini… behind him is also another young man…Man 1- how dare he kiss her? She is mine…..only mine…I won’t leave him…I will kill that Sanskar Maheshwari today…
Man 2- calm down…we are here for revenge…we can’t kill them as we need their powers….u r not allowed to fall in love with the enemy…u r a a bad Vampire…. come to ur senses… We planned this for many years don’t spoil it…u will blow our cover with ur anger…
Man 1- I know we have to finish what our parents started 18 yrs ago….but u don’t talk about cover…u were about to attack them… Now the Maheshwaris and Gadodia’s are alert…
Man 2- what could I have done? It is a full moon today…I can’t control myself..u knw that…
Man 1- next time be careful
Both of them leave from there…
Next morning…
Ragini is sleeping with her head and one arm on Sanskar’s chest… Sanskar wakes up and sees Ragini still sleeping….. He doesn’t want to wake her up but he moves his arm a little and Ragini wakes up….she quickly moves back seeing herself on him…
Rag- I’m so sorry….I didn’t knw when I slept…
Sans- it’s ok….they look at Swalak who are still sleeping… Swara’s head on Lucky’s shoulder…
Sans- lucky….wake up quick…. we need to go back to our rooms before anyone notices… Lucky wakes up…
Rag-Shona get up…. Swara gets up and sees herself on Lucky.. she jerks back…
Swa- der hadi what r u doing in our room?
Lak- wow what a beautiful room? Idiot look around we slept in the balcony…
Swa- oh sorry…I forgot…
Sans- we should go before anyone finds us missing…
Swaragini go inside the room and close the window doors…Sanlak teleport back to their rooms just in time as uttara was coming to them…bhai get ready quick we need to go college…they all get ready….and go downstairs…
Dp- Sanskar and Laksh…I am giving u the responsibility of Shona and Ragini….make sure u are with them all the time…
Sans- ok bade papa…
They both leave with Swaragini and go college…
After college…Sangeet Function…
@MM
All the guests arrives…and enjoying….Sanlak are talking with friends….Swaragini come down the grand staircase with Pari…
Sanskar feels Ragini’s presence…. He looks at the staircase…and sees Ragini….he is mesmerised seeing her…Ragini is wearing dark blue saree with black blouse and golden border (just like the one deepika wore in the song badtameez dil)…her hair were straight with a side fringe….she is wearing black heels and black earrings….
Sans to himself- she is looking gorgeous….Why Ragini why? Why am I attracted to?…I have never had interests in girls but u changed that…day by day…I’m liking u more….but I can never be with u… I am a vampire and u r a human… Lucky also sees Swara…he is mesmerised seeing her… Swara is wearing same saree as Ragini but in Hot pink colour….her hair are fully curled and she is also wearing black earrings with black heels…
Swaragini bring Pari and make her sit on a sofa with Adi…
Adi whispers to Pari- look stunning today…Pari thank u for coming my life….I luv u so much…
Pari whispers back- I knw u do…she shows her mehndi…it is very dark colour….she says I luv u too…
Uttara takes the mic….and speaks…
Utt- welcome everyone to the sangeet function….well as today is sangeet there should be dancing as well…so let’s start first dance is of my brother Sanskar and my best friends Ragini..she gives thumps to the DJ for music….Ragsan stand in the middle…DJ plays the song Mar Jayian….
Sanskar holds Ragini’s hand and they start singing along whilst dancing… Sanskar sings first…
Lamhe vele lamhe, vele pal yeh
Idhar-udhar tahel rahe
Ragini sings…
Sehme, sehme dil bhi
Keh rahe hain bina tere
Sanskar takes Ragini’s arm and holds her waist they are so close to each other. Sanskar sings again
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian
Mar Jayian, tere bin mar jayian re
Both dance beautifully and Romantically….they finish their dance and all are clapping…
Utt- well that was superb….next we have my other best friend Shona and my brother Laksh…
The song Offo start….Swalak dance funnily and teasingly with each other…Swara starts singing…
Dil ka dimaag se
Jhagda lagaaya kise
Peechhe ke darwaaze se ae..
Dabe paanv aaya kaise
Thoda sa kameena
Thoda bechara hai
Ishq bhoot sahi par yeh
Bhoot bada hi pyaara hai
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O….
Lucky pulls Swara towards him, he twirls her and sings…
Dekho leke aaya hai
Pocket mein sharaaratein
Tere jaisi hai zara aa
Iski bhi aadatein
Upar se garam hai
Andar se naram hai
Thoda shareef bhi hai thoda
Thoda sa besharam hai
hai hai…
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Uffo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O….
The song finishes and everyone are laughing….they enjoyed the Swalak’s funny dance…now SwaRagUttAna and SanLakSamKar dance on the song drama queen.
Girls starts singing first…
Haan, dekho bholi kitni
Utni par tedhi cheez hai
Baatein kare hai kadwi-kadwi
Phir bhi lazeez hai
Ittar gulaabon wali
Bottle sharabon wali
Total tabahi wala scene hai
Boys start singing…
Adaayein badi funky
Kare hai nautanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai
Ho badi-badi aankhein hain aansuon ki tanki
Ye chhori badi drama queen hai
They finish the song….all the guests give them standing ovation. ….SwaRagUttAna and SanLakSamKar go to Parish…
Adi-wat superb dancing.I luvd it
Pari- yh…I really enjoyed it…
Swa- thank u…we are glad u enjoyed it…I mean after all it’s our Adi bhaiya and Pari bhabhi’s sangeet…
Ana to pari- wow di…ur mehndi is very dark…
Rag- of course…our Adi bhaiya loves our di so much…
Utt- that is true…
Lak- arey…even our bhabhi loves Adi bhaiya…
Sam- they r made for each other..
Parish are blushing….
Kar- jodi made in heaven…
A little while later…Swaragini are talking to Sujatha, Ap and Sumi…
Sumi- beta we have decided that u will be staying here till ur aunt comes…
Rag- auntie how can we stay here…it is not right….
Ap- beta u both r alone in the house…here u have uttara and everyone else…
Swa- but….
Sujatha- no buts and no vuts…u r staying that’s it…
Swa- ok auntie….we will get our clothes tommoro morning…. college is off as well
Suj- ok…she looks at Swaragini’s mehndi…and says wow ur both mehndi came out very dark…
Ragini looks at her hand and smiles…
Sumi- of course…it will be na… they are so beautiful girls…they will get the most loving husbands
Sanskar hears this as walking past…Swaragini blush…lucky comes there…
Lak-Miss world…I agree that Ragini will get loving husband but how can this junglibilli get one..Swara opens her mouth and elbows him
Ap-Laksh…don’t say that even Shona will get a loving husband…swara pulls her tongue at lucky…Ap, Sujatha and Sumi leave from there and Swalak goes to UttAna…
Ragini stands there admiring her mehndi…she thinks about sanskar…
Ragini to herself-Sanskar am I falling in love with u? When u r around me I forget the world and have this strange feeling…Is this love?…just then Karan comes making her come back to senses and they start talking…
Sanskar from far sees this…he gets angry and jealous… He thinks to himself…
Sans- why am I feeling jealous? They are just friends…nothing more…but what if Karan loves her and she loves Karan…this shouldn’t affect u sanskar…
Sanskar breaks the glass in his hand angrily and blood starts coming out of his hand…Ragini
sees this and rushes to him…she cares for him
Rag- sanskar why did u do this? Look how much blood is coming? She unknowingly gets tears in her eyes…she couldn’t see him hurt…it hurt her to see him hurt… She felt the pain..she rips the end of her saree pallu and ties it on his hand and Sanskar looks at her lovingly but then comes to his senses…
Sans- so what? Why do u care? U just go to ur Karan…why so much concern for me?
Rag- Sanskar why r u saying like that? I care about u…
Sans- oh really….he leaves from there….Ragini also goes from there with tears in her eyes…she is crying…Sanskar sees that and gets worried…
Sans- sh*t Sanskar what have u done? U got Karan’s anger out on her…I need to apologies to her.. What’s her fault? Now she is crying and u can’t handle her tears…u r the reason for those tears…why Ragini why do u tears affect me so much?…I am a total idiot…
Rag thinks to herself- why did he talk like that with me?but he is right why did I get so concerned about him? why didn’t I like the way he talked to me? Why couldn’t I see his pain? Why am I so attracted to him? All these questions and no answers..
Sangeet is over Swara comes to Ragini and Ragini wipes her tears quickly…..
Swa- di u r here? Come na lets go…she looks at her eyes…
Swa- di what happened? have u been crying?
Rag- no Shona, something just went in my eyes…come lets to our room…they both go to their room and get changed….Swara is fast asleep…
Ragini goes to the balcony and remembers her moments with Sanskar…she has her back to Sanskar’s balcony… he also comes there but doesn’t see her as he looking at his phone….both are standing with their back to each other…Ragini feels Sanskar’s presence and turns around…she sees him…. Sanskar also feels Ragini’s presence strongly and turns around…they look at each other…
Sans calls her to apologise- Ragini….but she leaves from there and goes inside…he gets upset to see her like that….
Epi ends….
Precap-Sanskar apologises to Ragini…Swalak and Ragsan little romance in Haldi and then Parish’s marriage
Many of u asked me to make Swara 20 quick…I will reveal this now that Swara will turn 20 in Episode 20…all will be revealed in Epsiode 22 even the 2 young men and family reunion…. Epsiode 22 will be a Maha Episode…so keep reading….guyz I knw the story is going a bit slow but I have planned everything out….if I go fast then story the story won’t look good and then it will get boring…I’m so sorry…I will try to speed up though…plz bare with me…
Thank u all including silent readers for reading my ff….guyz plz do comment…becuz I’m not getting enough comments and then I feel that u r not liking my story…so plz do comment…u too silent readers…all ur comments mean a lot to me and encourage me to write….have a great day?
19 Comments
Its awesome and ragSan moments are truly magical
Nicee well make sumi sujata know that swaragini are their children their a situation arrived where tbey can’t even tell her and and can’t ignored ..tgey care that they will show will be awesome ..its just an idea can use it or not ..
AWESOME ………i just loved it ragsan n swalak scenes are superb……ragsan love is just fab n it’s not at all boring ….plz update next part asap ….if it is possible update till maha episode today itself …i am desperate to read ua ff…i love it
Yr plz upload maximum two epi in a day I am addicted ur ff its really awsome nd different from others u r a very good writer I think u can write full drama on swaragini its really awsome
Nice
Amazing from the start… but that bit was sad when sanskar gets his anger out on ragini… and now they are not talking to each other… but I hope that you will make them both talk to each other and no arguments between them
PS. the songs chosen were superb for ragsan and swalak and when they all started to dance on drama queen
awesome………i loved it…..Episode 22….i will be waiting for you…….
and dear your writting skills are juz awesome….
Superb
Ragsan was awesome
Hi di, uma is here . You nailed it di . Just mind blowing.
No problem loved ragsan
Awsm..superb..loved ragsan scenes..ur ff is really amazing nd different too..update nxt prt soon
Sooo nice dr
Superb
When u r going to update your next episode
Man……. Ur awee…. I jus lovd it……. :-*
BTW I hv a doubt s ragini 22 yrs….. Thn swara vl turn 20 soon rite…
Ragsan scenes r too good
amazing
Awesome episode loved ragsan scenes a lot. Update the next part soon di