Hello people…I am writing my second one shot…..guys…to know…who is the couple…u have to read it till the end.and yes…if u don’t find it your fav couple….then that’s not my fault…please do read it.no need to comment…cause people think that I do everything for comments….hehehe…so now lets go to the story….
This is a story of two step sisters Swaragini and two brothers Sanlak…Saskar is staying in US….His childhood best friend is Ragini…and Laksh stays in India. Laksh is elder to Sanskar and Ragini is elder to Swara…His childhood bestfriend is Swara…..Ragini hates Swara..alot….she thinks Swara is a behenji….a nerd..everyone like her more according to her.she is jealous of her.most importantly..she is Laksh’s bestfriend…who is Ragini boyfriend…yes Laksh and Ragini r in a relationship….Sanskar has seen only Ragini in video chats and not Swara….
It’s the first day of college…Swara and Laksh as always r together..an Ragini gets irked seeing that….Laksh informs Ragini that Sanskar is coming back and he is joining their college…Ragini is super happy..but Swara doesn’t care….
The next day…Ragini is waiting for Sanskar..Sanskar comes with Laksh…everyone is talking about him..cause he is looking really hot and handsome…but our dear Swara….she doesn’t give an eye on him..Ragini goes and hugs him….Laksh goes to Swara…Rags gets upset…Sanskar sees this and ask her that what happened? Ragini shares her hatred thingi with Sanskar……
Its another bright day….Sanskar is kinda shocked..as every girl in the college noticed him and Swara didn’t even look at him..for once…..
This hurts Sanskar’s ego…..Ragini,Kavya and Kavita come there and sees this…..they tease him saying that he doesn’t have the charm to lure this behenji….Sanskar gets angry and tells them that he has the charm to lure any girl…..even Swara….Kavita goes and challenges him…Kavita says..’Fine mister….if u r so charming then use your charm and make her fall for u..can u do that?’ Ragin again see Swara with Laksh and gets angry…and says ‘Sanskar can do that easily…’Sanskar smiles listening to this..
Ragini speaks again..’Sanskar can make her fall for her….but u see she won’t let u touch her…if u r really daring then……………….get intimate with her and then leave her simple…can u do that?’Sanskar is hell shocked listening to this….those three Kavya,Kavita and Ragini starts laughing..and says..that he can’t do that….Sanskar’s ego is hurt..so he says yes to the bet……Laksh is with Swara and walking on the road near to college..they r talking when Ragini comes and grabs his hand and takes him along saying that she has some work with him….Swara is walking alone…..some goons start following her…She gets scared..and starts walking faster…the goons block her way…she pleads to live her …but they start coming near to her….Swara closes her eyes…after sometime she opens it and sees someone standing before him facing the goons…he starts beating them….They run away..Swara sits crying..Sanskar feels bad and goes near her.and she hugs him tightly and starts crying..Sanskar smiles at those goons….After sometime both reach home..and tell everything to Raglak..
Ragini is least interested in this..but Laksh goes and hugs Swara…Ragini gets irked…Swara..who used to talk to Laksh only started talking to Sanskar…they became friends..and slowly best friends….All of them walking oneday……Ragini demands for icecream….Swara stays at her place(In the road) whereas the other three go to bring icecream…she doesn’t notice that she is standing in the middle of the road….a car is coming in high speed…but Swara is watching those three…when they three turn and see the car..they sign Swara to move that she doesn’t understand it…..Sanskar goes and pushes her….but in this he hurts himself….Rags was shocked to see this..as Sanskar saved her life without thinking about his own life….They reach home and Swara gives him medicines..and bandages….While doing this Swara is continuously asking him if it is paining..but Sanskar is just staring at her……Swara goes…Ragini comes and asks Sanskar whether he has really fallen in love with Swara…Sanskar replies ‘no ways..she is not my type u see’
Days go on..and Swara has fallen in love with Sanskar…she tells this to Laksh….Ragini asks Sanskar to propose Swara….as she knows that Swara has fallen for him……Sanskar hesitates but remembers his bet…..He proposes Swara in front of everyone…..Swara is in the 7th heaven….she is very happy and noded yes…..Sanskar and Swara hug eachother..Sanskar totally forgot that it was a bet…
Its was the last year’s last week…everything was going on perfectly…Swara was deeply in love with Sanskar….but Sanskar always assured himself and Ragini that he doesn’t really love Swara…
One of their friend hosted a couples party….Ragini was going with Laksh whereas Swara was going with Sanskar…Swara wore a read gown…whereas Ragini wore a black top and a white short skirt…..and Sanskar and Laksh were in black shirts and pants…..They were enjoying the party and just then…..a girl..named Ritika….came there and hugged Sanskar…..Sanskar even hugged her…..Sanskar introduced Ritika as his friend from US.who is also the friend of the host of the party,,,,Sanskar was just talking to her..Swara was definitely feeling jealous…..but Ritika..she was just too much..she went on and kissed her Sanskar’s cheek….Swara was angry…very very angry…she left the party…Sanskar saw this and went after her….It was a whole night party..Swara went to a room on that party centre..she was crying cause she was unable to see Ritika with Sanskar…Sanskar came there and tapped on her shoulder…Swara saw him and went away to another corner of the room…..showing that she is very angry on him…..Sanskar understood this and gave a lot of explanations..but Swara ignored all of it…..
Swara:How can she kiss u? I mean couldn’t u tell her that u have a girlfriend?Or am I like a tissue paper to u whom u want to use only?
Sanskar:How can u think like that Swara?Ritika came from US..and this is common between friends…..
Swara keeps on crying…..
Sanskar;Do u really think that I’ll leave u?
Swara nods no…Sanskar asks her that why is she still crying?
Sanskar gives a peck on her check…this is the first time someone…a guy has kissed her…..Sanskar kisses her eyes filled with tears…..Swara steps backwards and Sanskar steps forward…Swara while moving backward reaches the wall…Sanskar is now very near to Swara…They could feel eachother’s breath….Sanskar was going nearer…Swara closed her eyes…..sighing yes to him…Sanskar kisses her neck…and Swara holds him tightly…finally Sanskar kisses her on her lips…it was a passionate kiss…Sanskar then carried Swara to the bed…Sanskar was over Swara..he kissed her forehead…..and pulled the blanket over them…lights off…they got intimate……
Its morning…..Swara is sleeping peacefully in Sanskar’s arms…..Sanskar wakes up and sees Swara sleeping….he wears his shirt…he gets thinking…
Sanskar’s point o view…..
Did I really do it for the bet? But I just forgot about the bet yesterday…..what happened yesterday was not a bet for me…it was love…and for Swara..it was true and pure love….i don’t know whats happening…..Swara wakes up and sees Sanskar and blushes remembering last night..Sanskar goes from there without even uttering a word….Swara felt bad…..
It’s the next day….Sanskar was ignoring Swara….it was because he was guilty….It had been three day since Sanskar hasn’t talked to Swara…it is the last day of their college….Ragini comes and asks Sanskar about the bet….Ragini doesn’t know about Swara and Sanskar’s intimation…Sanskar doesn’t even tell Ragini about this as he is really guilty….Ragini clearly tells him that he has lost the bet…..
Swara and Laksh were passing by..they heard everything…
Swara came in front and gave a tight slap to Sanskar….
Swara:How could u do this Sanskar? How? U got intimate with me for a ………….a bet?
Sanskar;No Swara…wohh….
Swara left from that place….
Ragini:Wohh Sanskar..u r champion yar…i mean…u won the bet…
Sanskar slaps Ragini…
Laksh:Why did u both do this to her?
Rags:Everyone liked her more than me…even u..Laksh..u always chose Swara leaving me…..
Laksh leaves from there angrily…
Maheshwaris and Gadodias know about Ragini and Laksh…so the Maheshwaris came to meet Gadodias…..to talk about their alliance…the shameless Ragini was extremely happy…….then just entered Laksh holding Swara’s hand…..Everyone stood up..they were shocked….both were wearing garlands and Swara had sindoor in her hairline and mangalsutra in her neck……Ragini and Sanskar ran to them….Ragini asked Laksh cupping his face..
Ragini;Laksh..what is this?U both r joking right?
Swara removes Ragini’s hand from Laksh’s face…
Swara:Ragini….he is your jiju and my husband….okay?.Why will we joke about our marriage?
Sanskar holds Swara’s arms…Laksh removes his hands…
Laksh:Bhai..bhabi hai yeh teri…dur seh..baat kar….
Ragini:How could u do this to me?
Laksh:U did this to my bestfriend….uske samne toh yeh kuch bhi nehi hai…..
Ragini:But u love me na?
Laksh:I hate people like u who play with other’s feelings…and same goes for u bhai…
Sanskar:Swara…I’m sorry..
Swara:Swara nehi…Swara bhabi
The story ended on everyone’s shocked face…
So guys wasn’t this a punishment for all four? Ragini didn’t get her love cause she tried to destroy her sister..Sanskar agreed to the bet forgetting about a girl’s dignity…he..who started loving Swara….now had to accept her as his bhabi….Laksh and Swara..though they married eachother being angry on their love…they atleast had eachother…kehete hai na….best friend meh life partner dhundna…aur bhi asan hai…
25 Comments
Nce but is this one shot
they deserve it…especially that ragini
So swalak and ragsan …
Yaar its too good and is it a 1 day episode?????
oh eva ur awesome .nyc story
you are just awesome eva……super cool!!!!!!!! i am a great fan of u ……i just love ur writings
hats off to u eva
actually I m a swasan fan but still I liked this very much ….plz ese hi is swasan pe b likhiye na plZ
it was really a nice os…. although i am a swasan fan but it i liked the way laksh stood up with swara for her support and in the name of their friendship…… leaving rag-san in their own lifetime guilt….
awesome story… but contuine these story yaar
People…its 1 shot…my bad…it got posted as episode 1…sorry…
Yaar it was awesome even I’m a fan of swasan but i just loved it
Nice stry…..bt u made theju evil…..?….
nice,,, is this one shot or you are continuing this please tel me….. now sanskar forget swara and move on in his life… replay me story is nice…
salute u yaar . is really a 1 day episode???????????
Good story yaar.if it is a full ff then its more better.
Nice
plZ Yaar app hamesha swasan fans ka dil thod deti hai……..
swasan ko aap hamesha dur kar deti hai…..
I agree with you Apurva, Eva why do you always seperate swasan?? If you want to have swalak have it from the beginning na…. why hurt swasan fans by giving them false hope???
for the frst time I felt happy reading swalak os.. actually I am die hard swasan fan.. but as I already said I felt immense pleasure after reading this os.. thank u for this.. and ragsan got what they deserve even worst than that..
Omg eva…. Its good
Really nice! But was it a OS? Please I’m a die hard fan of swasan don’t separate them!!!!! 🙂
Wow yr i m commenting first time in your ff because mainly you write aboute about ragsan or ragini nd i dont like ragsan at all but i dont have problem because u love them may be but its first time i have read it nd i really i m having tears in my eyes i really really love it a lot wow yr u r the best dear plz if you will be free after completing your currently ff then plz its a request to write a ff on swasan plz in which sanskar first love should be swara only plz
u know i hav always been a silent reader of ff…
though i m swasan fan i love read ur ff….
through ur ff i have started liking ragsan…