Hi, I am new here and first time I am writing a fan fiction please tell how it is.
There is house. A girl is seen sleeping in her room. Her eyes are really beautiful and she is having a very pretty smile on her face. Another girl comes to the room. She is dressed in salwar suit with bindi on her head and payal in the legs. She is Ragini. Ragini : utho bhi ab kitni der tak sogi. And she removes the curtains. The girl who was sleeping tells thodi der aur Ragini bas 5 min. Ragini: nahi abhi utho varna hum tumpe pani dal denge . bhul gayi kya aaj tumhe audition Dene Jana h. The girl who was sleeping tells aacha thik h mai uth gayi . and she goes to washroom. Ragini comes down . a voice comes ‘ Ragini shona kaha h’ . she is sumi. Ragini: vo to ready ho rahi h. Sumi: par use to late ho gaya kahi uska audition na miss ho jae. Ragini is about to say something but a voice comes in between I’m ready maa . she is dressed in a purple modern dress. She is in high heels. Her lips are just petals of rose. She is swara. Swara:maa bahut late ho gaya h mai chalti hu and nasta baad me . bye maa bye Ragini. she takes out her scooty drives . Ragini says maa ab hum bhi chalte h Hume sangeet sikhne bhi to Jana h. Sumi tell thik se Jana . bye. Swara reaches the audition hall (singing audition). She is about to start but before she starts the judges tell her to go as they don’t want to take any more audition. Swara request to them but they go . tears starts rolling down her eyes. She goes outside of the hall and take out her guitar and starts playing a rocking music. People gather. Judges decide something and one of them tell her that she is selected.
Precap: swara is walking and a old man throws the banana peel. She is about fall but a guy holds her.
Sorry for the mistakes and please suggest the pairs.
Credit to: Aditi
29 Comments
Swara and sanskaar they look best
Hey Aditi it was a good one.l like swara and sanskar as a couple.
It’s very nice…. But hope not another swasan ff….
a good one i want laksh and swara as couple
Nice start aditi…. best of luck dear
Make it a swasan ff…plzzzzzz….its a request !!! ?
Is it gonna be swasan?…if yes…..den its gonna b awsme!!!!☺
Thanks for the comments
pls swasan yaar
The boy should be sanskar
Swasan look perfect with each other
Swasankar Jodi is awesome.
Dear Aditi, ur story is very much impressive.pls do continue. I would suggest you to pair up Swasan and Raglak
Swalak plz
plz write it on English fully.I m nt getting some words.
Swasan plz
Make it swasan plzzz!
swasan please
Hie aditi nice story great creativity……plz tell me hw to post fan fiction
just go to contact us
nice starting aditi
Please make it swasan,they are the best pair
sanlak and raglak was all of ur favorite so make them pair.pls writte them in English…
swasan and raglak was all of ur favorite so make them pair.pls writte them in English…
aditi plz make it swasan.plz dear.
Jus amazing dear !! Pls cntinu aditi !!
Swasan n raglak
Thanks. And I will keep updating.
Hi aditi…nice start…plz make swasan a couple….keep updating…gud luk
Thank you Angel
Yar where is ‘contact us’???plz tell I realy wanna publish a story….