Hello friends sinin and Sarah both are here, first i want to say that we are new writer so to give both couple equal importance is a little bit tougj but we will gradually learn.for now i want to write chapter 18 on fully swasan and chapter 19 on raglak. What do u al say ?
You talk too much! My turn i know you all have miss me a lot. Specially my yashu di and divyanshri di. And sethooty di what about your studies ?you said na you have to study a lot ….. Exams ???
Now let’s start the story
Ragini :im soo sorry
Laksh is standing numb. First he didn’t understand, then he became shocked and then angry but later….
Laksh : why did you do that ?
Ragini: sorry i didn’t mean it…. Actually i didn’t hit you….
Laksh :then why i am feeling pain ?
Ragini : no no i mean…. I wanted to kill him
Laksh : what you wanted to kill me… I known you’re good in fighting but that does not mean you can kil me by slapping…
Ragini : no i wanted to kill that fly
Laksh : what the hell
Ragini : i am extremely soory i didn’t mean it
She holds her ear and looks innocently at Laksh
Laksh : crazy girl
Ragini : so..
Laksh : so…
Ragini : then…
Laksh : then..
Ragini became irritated. She says “why are you imitating me ‘
Laksh : why are you imitating me
Ragini s jaw falls down in shock. She never thought soldier can also be funny.
Ragini :listen
Laksh : listen
Ragini : please
Laksh : please
Ragini : i forgave you
Laksh : i forgave you
Ragini smirks and Laksh became shocked
Laksh : it was cheating
Ragini runs away and while going says ” everything is fair in love and war ”
Laksh smiles and says what is it ??
Swara wakes up and saw she is sleeping in Shadow of a banyan tree . and the cowdung boy is sleeping leaning on her . she remembered last night he is a great artist there is magic on his hand . i don’t known when slept. I think now i should go Ragini might be worried. I tried to go but he was holding my chunri tightly. I tried to remove his hand but it was very tight. I didn’t feel to wake him…he was sleeping soo peacefully.
I removed my chunri and went from there. I think he needs it more than me…..
Sanskar point of view
I woke up and found myself on the sand.,..
I had sleep in the night with pari. She wanted to hear it . and maybe now she is gone.
Suddenly i realized that i was holding a chunri. She leaved this is to me.
Pari is seen talking with someone
Man : will the work will be done ?
Parineeta : of course just my money……
Man : it is ready but first do my work
Pari : whom first ?
Man :RAGINI..
Ayaz is walking and classes with kavita. Kavita looks at him with anger and ayaz admires her lovingly.
Kavita : are you mad
Ayaz : in your love
Kavita : can’t you see
Ayaz : i have lost everything
Kavita fumes in anger.
Ayazwinks and goes.
Kavita : fool! ” A dawf can never touch the moon.”
She smriks
Ragini smiles naughtily
Laksh smiles slightly
Swara looks happy
Sanskar smiles shephishly.
UNKNOWINGLY….
Precap – if all are agree then swasan otherwise as usual
Guys please say what you want.and i am sorry in advanced if i failed to reply all.
I have start a new ff please read that
Swasan – does love need perfection ? By sinin didi
Swasan – Tumhari Swara by sarah
Swaragini – Royal love by both
In advanced
Sarah loves you all
And me too
24 Comments
Awesome…….. Continue soon
Hi this is the first time I am commenting I was seriously waiting for this episode please update regular I just love this ff it’s very unique and when they will know each other identity please give little big update hope to see u soon with next episode my dear friends till than bye.
Nice…. But next time wanted a long one….. Swasan next……
Nice. Want swasan please.
Awesome episode!!! You can write swasan !! Waiting for next part!!!
nyc..swasan
Awesome 6Want swasan as a pair
Nice
Yes dear as per ur wish.. I have no prlm
OK but I love ragini character in this ff she is I want more ragini scene plzz update regularly next part soon
Nice episode… Nd about next episode u can make it Swasan… I have no problem….
no prblm with 18th epi of swasan nd 19th with raglak….its difficult to give equal imp to each couple…so u write in ur comfort zone..
cmng to chappy it ws awsm…plz post swasan love need any perfection…
no pblm dear write as u wish!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n ya i have read the intro of both ur ff’s dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! n i was missing u too sissie…………. epi was awesome. ohhooo ab pari kya krne ja rhi he……………
and EID MUBARAK DEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALLAH TUM DONNO KI HAR DUA PURI KRE…………..
LUV U SARAH N SININ…………………..
Eid Mubarak to you too yashu/yashu di
Ragini is so hilariousO:-)
Ur wish.
nyc
continue soon!
As usual ur ff is awsome…. sinin n Sarah…… I just want to read ur story I dnt care about whom u write……
N EID MUBARAK…..My dear sisters…. May Allah bless you with all the best things……. n a beautiful life ahead…. ????
nyc
Superb…..loved ragini☺☺☺☺
Wow superb yaar….Eid Mubarak…
Raglak or swasan as ur wish Dr…love both of them..and ur giving equal imp to them so no pblm..this chapter is awesome…
Love does need perfection is also good am regular reader… It s not at all good awesome… Super she ooper….
Sarah…read ur prologue.. Thumari Swara…
Super…waiting for epi…
luv this story……. but seem i can’t bear the swasan… i hate sanskar in this story he doesn’t deserve to swara…huhuhuhu, btw ty sinin and sarah