Hello everyone .. I am not new here..i never thought I would write from here..please read my A/N at the end..this ff starts from the point where ragini’s truth is out infront of laksh ..but swara and sanskar are not married for real they reveal it with the help of laksh…so here goes…
Laksh drags ragini to maheshwari family .Ragini is numb..as soon as she enter maheshwari family she stumbles feeling dizzy ..and is about to fall but swara and sanskar hold her..
Swara: laksh she is not well..
Laksh: this another of her trick swara…I wont fall for this one..
Sanskar : lucky look at her she seems ill..
Laksh: I don’t care bhai..
He drags her inside and pushes her . and he plays the video…
Ragini stands up shocked…she felt as if her world is crashing in front of her…
Everyone is shocked to see her true colours..
ragini comes to dadi..
ragini: dadi I didn’t do this trust me…da
a burning sensation is felt across her cheek..ragini holds her cheek in pain..
ragini: dadima..u believe this..this is all a
swara: conspiracy..
ragini goes to swara…
ragini : haa swara..
swara: u will say this only na that this is all planned by me…
AP: I never expected this from u ragini u spoiled three lives..because of swara and sanskar had to marry ..because of u swalak had to separate.. I feel so ashamed of u..
Ragini: vo…
Laksh: stop ur dramas ragini..we believed u once now it will not happen…
Ragini : why don’t u trust me..i didn’t do this…
She falls on her knees..
Sanskar: I want to trust u ragini…but I am the witness to ur deeds…
Swara: we were half sisters but I always thought of u as my soul sister..but u ..u snatched my love from me..u didn’t care about ma baba..today I hate u ragini…
tears were continuously falling from ragini’s eyes
DP: I don’t want this girl in my house any more..
Sumi: ragini atleast change now…come lets go from here..
Shekar: sumi she cant come with us…I am ashamed to say that she is my daughter…she wont step in my house…
Swara: baba..how can we leave her…she didn’t respect relations…but we have to ..please baba…
Shekar: okay for u I will allow her but she has to sign divorce papers..
He goes to laksh
Shekar: laksh beta this is the only way we could say sorry to u..
A broad smile comes on laksh’s face …while swara, sanskar and sumi r shocked..ragini is standing still..fighting an unknown battle..finally she moves forward and signs on divorce papers..
Laskh mocks her..
Laksh: this is u r love..for mere shelter u signed on divorce papers…
Ragini looks at him with painful look and snorts..
She leaves mm alone like a dead body..
Gadodias also decide to leave…
Laksh: one minute papa..
Gadodias wait…
Laksh comes to swara and bends on knees…
Laksh: swara I was wrong to u..I loved u but trusted ragini …please accept my sorry as well as my love for u…
Sanskar looks broken while swara is taken back…
Swara: sorry laksh..u r my sister’s husband…
AP: haan laksh also swara is married to sanskar..
Swara: no badi maa..we r not married..it was our plan to bring out ragini’s truth…but now I cant accept laksh..ragini snatched my love but I cant snatch her love..besids I love sanskar..
Sanskar was even more shocked now…
Sanskar: swara what r u saying..i don’t love u…I LOVE RAGINI…
SO THAT’S IT GUYS…it’s a ragsan and swalak ff
Precap: ragini’s POV is she guilty
So yeah many of u may not like this..if i should say sorry to anyone its raglak fans i am so sorry guys..
This is a dedication to all ragsan fans…there was a controversy guys..and ragsan being bro sis is coming again and again..so for them…if ragsan r bro and sis then please do tell me ragini’s elder sister swara ,doesn’t she get the first right of being sister to sanskar..
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I loved it! Mujhe aaya Mazza. Therefore, I am on Team Shrilatha???
Well, even if I hadn’t liked it, even then I would have been on your side. It is a matter of your literary liberty. I love Ragsan as a pair and you are writing on it. Good luck ?
And don’t worry, we are with you???
And this has been added to my favourite comments. ??????? straight no Jalebis thank god.
Some comments caused me to open my refrigerator, take out the bottle with the coldest water, and drink the entire bottle of water!!!!
Aisi aisi baatein aur aisi aisi justifications ??????
I am a debater, you an imagine my state ????
Sus Jii. She hasn’t made fun of anything here. She just put her point forward. And we don’t do either go n check our works then speak.
? Same here. A debater. ?????? and they don’t understand the sarcasm and revert that is like bury your head inside the water
And u r m
Sorry I meant ur my inspiration all along
we are not like u sally jiiii, shri ji or bela jii
who make fun of scared things. These are part of our lives
Make fun of scared things? Ab ye kya naya point hai????
I’m always in team Shri????
Hello dr writer I am not here to bash u as ur storyline is good n I like it too ur showing a different angle in story n in starting I alos thought that it will be a RagSan pair cz I like them together but aftet watching SwaSan n RagLak cemestry I started to prefer the pairs as SwaSan n RagLak more n I believe every writer has write to potray the character as they want. Its ur ff ur concept u can show tgem how u want. I love all SwaSan, RagSan, RagLak n SwaLak but ya I prepfer SwaSan n RagLak more. But my preference n I am not going to bother u with this. I like ur story but I just want to clear a single point u said if Rag_San r bro sis then Swa_San also shout be bro sis automatically but dr in India will call our jethji means brother in law does that make our husband also our brother n we call Saali means sis in law so is that our wife is alos our sis. No ri8. So I think we should to mix up the equation of realtion like this. I think I made my pov clear n again I am not here to bash u as I am like RagSan also.
If u want to show SwaSan as bro sis then show it but for that u have to make them bro sis directly not throw Ragini cz then on ur ff both Swaragini will becm Sanskar’s sis n then u have to bring another female lead fir him n then it won’t be a Ragsan ff anymore……
you love ragsan
we get that
you think swasan are siblings, we get that too
its ur wish
but the fact that u told u wont mention it as ragsan because u want the swasan fans to read it and be hurt by what ur telling that’s downright mean
we may call them as rag—san or whatever, but we also mention swasan in the ff name so that people who don’t like the couple don’t have to read
this was a petty trick and that too for an author to do. an author is supposed to be fond of her story and love all characters. focus on ur main couple but dont vilify the rest after the chapter’s done
as a reader, this was disappointing. as a writer, this was hurtful
pls continue ur ff, ur plot, ur pairs. that’s not the problem
but also mention that it is ragsan because hurting ppl is not the way to feel happy about ur story
hello dear…firstly…coming to ur author note…it made me rofl???and got to know how much u value relationships..i think u watched swaragini serial…obvio u will..as u r ragini fan…so in that serial…durga prasad is there…i hope you remember him…sujatha is also there…sujatha always mentioned dp as bhaisaa or something like that i think..that makes dp and ap bro-sis or what…?pls tell me…i’m so confused??lol…god knows u n ur logics…that to special mentions to swasan fans…well..well..i know…u guys want our attention…i hope you r getting it?but so sad that your non-existing couple is never ever existed also?be in your shell…give us attention and make yourself fun??feeling pity on some fans…bcs of ur attention seeking,all couple fans are laughing and horrified that u will make them as pair with ur fav. anyways concentrate on ur ffs than us..all the best to ur all ffs
Thank u Kat for u best wishes…and about sujatha and dp…u want to know my logic…in south India…sisters husband is called bava…and also would be is called bava…some girls even call their husband as bava…so now do u get my logic…u bring the book of values and logic..u even bring ragsan and make ragini tie the Rakhi It won’t affect me…and about attention seeking…I am sure my title was not swaragini please read me…it was swaragini. My side story ..involving swara there is swalak track…my a/ n made u laugh people say its good to make someone laugh no need to thank me…
i’m telugu girl…so i know that…but if our jiju consider us as sister means..wife and husband relationship will not change…so i hope u understand…
Kat considering is different and nagging to consider is different…we love ragsan that is Clearly our choice..why u guys bring this again and again…
what we nagged…in our stories we are making them as bro sis bcs in serial they considered…i got ur point…but if u guys make swasan like that…we will point out…bcs who on the earth can see fictionally real couple as bro-sis…i got ur feelings also…but if ppl are making fun of our pair then how we suppose to sit quiet…sorry to hurt u…ragini n sanskar are not n never pair in serial…so if u like them its ok…and for us they are bro-sis bcs we are considering like serial…its ur ff ur wish…but i just want to say…dont give these type of author notes…that is so pointless…and hurted us to the core…best of luck for your this ff..good night…
Awesome dear…intersting..don’t mind the bashers.. Nice one.. Waiting for next update
Ragini fans just treat ragini as like a pr*stitute..they join nagini with any famous character they want even if itz sanskar, ranveer,manik anyone..ragini fans are just behind them..they just cant satisfy them selves ragini wuth laksh..dey want many many perdons behind ragini..eventhough that third rated ragini havnt any class to satnd with them..but ragini fans though wahh wahh..and they will givr explanation that itz their freedom to chose to imagine qny couple..but dnt u guys have any shame while stole others husband..nahiii..u guys are shqmeless creatures..atleast sometimes cinsider laksh also..bechara laksh..kya karum his wifes fans just behind of other mens..bichy ppls
Don’t u dare it’s neither ragini nor swara…and if u use this kind of language.the even I can and don’t forget in our ff swara is associated with someone else…so do u think even she is like that..and ragini is better than swara so if ragini us third grade and swara is not even third grade…don’t make me open my mouth about how swara became Mahan Swara..and if I talk I don’t commit my self to onscreen I’ll even talk about off screen…and u can imagine what is coming
And one more thing……..please talk in a respectful language…….its shri’s story and I don’t think that u have any right to comment on it….if you don’t want to read it no one is requesting you but don’t say thing…….I love all the pairs of the serial…but u know one thing is there that ragsan and raglak fans don’t comment trash in swasan ffs……..so u please concentrate on swasan ffs and don’t spread negativity over here…….and since u have rated ragini as third grade I would like to say that it won’t affect neither tejaswi ma’am nor her fans but it shows what kind of a person u are…… And ragini is paired with other actors u are saying naa…it shows creativity …which some people lack
p.s. sorry shri dear but she got personal and I can’t let any writer be insulted
Nice comment. Really nice comment. I mean, wow!
Swasan fans lecturing people on “Sanctity of marriage”, “EMOTIONS(oh bhai, please chup ho jao!) and now you(I will assume you are a girl since I know a girl named Pavani) is verbally abusing a FICTIONAL character to prove your point. Double standards much, baby?????
Ya right, baby. Cause rational adults don’t jump on people and start ranting. So many people here have respectfully put their point forward, right or wrong. That is the way we roll in this world. If you want to express your opinions, fine, please spare us from your filthy mouth. ???
As a Ragini fan, I am pissed off. As a woman, I am outraged. Kindly do see what you type. You are clearly escalating matters here. And you called me shameless. Don’t. I personally always keep Swara and Sanskaar positive in all Swaragini related or continued stories of mine. I know shame. I don’t need your certificate for this.
So yes. My rant was because your comment really triggered in me my Angry Young Woman Avatar. Ragini is a fictional character and she is being paired with other fictional characters because hey, the woman portraying her was so classy and beautiful that all the handsome hunks out there would look good with her. My point. With this, I rest my case?
You don’t have any rights to insult anyone, if you do then I will complain to TU
Miss Pavani?
Wow let me keep my doubts about your sanity aside coz Im not your shadow.
Give me one link of an ff where the following things are done by ragini fans.
Ragini is paired with other actor without her proper divorce. Or she is cheating on her husband. Get me one ff written by a ” ragini fan ”
Then talk about someone’s character.
i never expected this…just to make our swasan fans hurt u guys are doing this…great…and very good writers like bela are supporting…sorry to mention ur name bela dear…from now got a lesson that we should not read even swaragini ffs…its ur ff dear…but the way u r behaving is so immature…it will be good to you if u change ur attitude..and coming to ur author not..sorry to say this…it is not at all good to use this…but just want to make u understand…if ur father consider ur maasi as sister…then by your logic…your mother and father are also bro-sis…sorry for hurting u by saying this…i just applied your logic to your question and hope u got ur answer…and mention couples in your couple..
p.s-once again sorry for bringing ur family…but just want to make u understand…
I only know how to play the game of Blood Relations, cause that comes into use while I am giving my competitions????. So no comments on her AN.
I don’t mind my name being brought up, as I said to Pavani, I always maintain Swara and Sanskaar Maheshwari in all my SR continued stories as positive and strong. We are a SERIOUSLY divided fandom which achieved the feat of pissing off even the actors who played our favourite roles. We don’t need to add more fuel to the fire. SR ended long back and the serial which took its place has even managed to come in the Top 10, itna time ho Gaya hai.
Let us all RATIONAL people start this trend.
#UnitedWeStand. No hate. Whichever pair we like, we write on it. I am writing on Raglak, a story with Ragsan is on the way, IB OS on the way and Twinj OS just completed. ?.
Anybody who wants to ask me how I am managing should not ask. Idk myself?????
Sorry ritu I can understand but I will never change my attitude…changing for someone is not me….and about my dad and massi…considering her as a sister is his wish completely but my neighbours don’t always nag them no saying they r bro sis…if it is Swasan problem let them come to me..why ru so concerned about ragsan…we like them we love them then why do u want to interfere….once I said Swasan r bro and sis u just couldn’t tolerate then what u think we r emotionless people…
in serial ragini mentioned him as bhai in one scene..and ragini and sanskar are not even pair…from starting it is raglak vs swa___lak…and after that swasan…i’m not concerned of ragini…but for sanskar…ofcourse i will be..bcs i’m swasan n sanskar big fan..and tbh,i dont involve in debates and fights…i clarified ur doubt…which is asked by u…i never said u r emotional less or something…and swasan are not bro-sis…they are wife and husband…atleast fictionally real couple…still u r mentioning swasan as that…so it will hurt us…and some r saying they r hurt bcs we are saying ragini n sanskar as bro-sis…well,it is ragini who mentioned sanskar as brother…if u didnt watch that episode…its ur prblm…anyways…all the best to ur ff…end of discussion..gud nyt…
Shri I would like to clear one thing here. You know there was a serial Kumkum in that the girl got married to her husband’s brother and it was a super hit serial and the explanation they gave while the marriage was like Dewar can also mean dwitiya var. For this story if ragini marries sanskar who is her Jeth doesn’t matter because here she hasn’t called him a bro. And leave all the serials I give you best example Ramayana sugreeva and vali incident. Your move is justified. And yes we call our sister’s husband bhava in south India and also we call the person to who we are going to get married also as bhava if they are our relative like our bua’s son or mama’s son. And there are so many stories and real incidents when a girl is married to her sister’s husband. So where are you making fun of relation. I think I put it straight and in most understanding way.
Yeah akka
here dear sally, you give example of Ramayan
i really hope you see in tv or read it
your these words only justify if husband dies and then she maary his brother. Atleast see something good and genuine and get real msg from that.
again giving wrong example and wrong things
Definatly a girl marry to her would be husband dever, that happens before marriage.
No doubt by supporting these types of things you are showing what exactly taught to you and what you guys like to do.
ohh sally dear i saw that serial kumkum Juhi parmer and what his dever name is yaa Sumit in that and Husband name was Jatin. You know i liked that serial very much.
But you really know why sumit married to his bhabhi
okay let me clear in in bold letters
BECOZ SUMIT BROTHER DIED
i hope you what is died means yaa wo mar gaya tha
THEN HE MARRIED TO HIS BHABHI WHILE SHE WAS PREGENT AT THAT TIME
and this concept is follwed now a days also
You read the full comment dear half reading is injurious to mind and I said it to Shri as she is the author. And consider the circumstances here sanskar loves ragini and she is divorced and his marriage with swara was fake. So what’s wrong still the explanation applies
And here ragini is divorced so sanskar is no more her Jeth. So keep your explanation aside.
Awesome shri diii!!!! !!! I loved the prologue!! ? n sanskaar’s dialogue ?? when I started reading I thought it’ll be again raglak n swasan but I’m so happy it is other way round……. Thank u so much for ragsan!!!!!! ? ? ? ? I would be waiting for the next update… Take care n keep smiling dear ‘!!!!!?????
OK guys stop this ..thanks for everyone who supported me..Sally akka Bela di asra…jayanti…and others who said I was wrong sorry but Iam like this manufacturing defect won’t change for anyone….so continue doing this forever I won’t stop my work
??????? you are my sachin tendulkar. Sachin sachin
Oops
Shrilatha shrilatha
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such a defensive reply
i see you managed to answer everyone’s comment but you couldn’t answer my disappointed comment
why is that?
calling urself immature or a manufacturing defect doesn’t mean anything
it’s ur story. i mean what i said.
write whatever u want
swasan as bro sis anything
but don’t give comments in author’s note degrading the characters
in the story, anything is possible depending on each person’s moral compass
but pls do show the same respect outside of the chapter as well
Akriti I don’t know where I missed u…okay my a/ n Iam so sorry I really can’t see where have I degraded the character…I put forth my question the question which was haunting me for long…clearing my doubt is it wrong
Swasan fans let’s not give attention which the author wants….we saw the cheap mentality…we can never steep that low to match their level…the author proved herself …no more to say. Jitna BHI edits banaye or jitney bhi FF baney….it won’t change the fact that swasan is the pair and we have loads of real moments which we watched on screen….unlike some non existing pairs….so chill guys… And ignore it.
It’s just a suggestion to my fellow swasanians
Oh hello you have a cheap mentality, you brought out my angry avatar now no one can save you from me??
Hai again u real moments ended six months back.u go n enjoy but before going a small correction u don’t have to stoop u need to jump to reach our level…otherwise u will blame us later on why r u so high
well we can see how u people are ignoring the so called “ATTENTION” u think shri wants….and give your suggestion to them some where else not here….don’t spread negativity swastika and u can’t match writers level…because its much much much much more higher than yours……this comment of yours is actually showing someone’s cheap mentality
good luck to you..
Please jayanti. Unless your name is Google, stop behaving like you know everything.
You are blindly supporting Shrilatha, np but then dont blame someone else when u r urselves wrong.
In more thing- go round, a round, a round and f**k off!
Thank you thank you very very much at first I thought it was raglak but feeling much more happy that its ragsan looking forward for this ff to start . If possible update first episode soon .
Awesome..!! Awesome..!! Awesome..!! Shriiuii, loved it sooo much dear..!! Good to see a bhai behen lover writing on our EVER HEAVENLY COUPLE SWASAN.!
Coming to ur episode, Superb start dear, “Sanskar: Ragini what r u saying..i don’t love u…I LOVE ONLY MY SWARA” <<—– I loved when Sanskar said this.! It made smile Wide and so damn proud as well.! It was sooo beautiful..!!
M eagerly waiting for next part..!! More than you m excited here..!! Continue soon dear..!! Thnk u.. ;-*
Wow dear what a reply, a world wide recognise HEAVENLY COUPLE
LOVE U swasan, what you guys taught us great things, love u guyss alot
and special Thanks to all ragini lovers who are giving HEAVENLY COUPLES SO MUCH ATTENTION THAT NEEDED THEM FOR OTHERS ALSO.
Ohh very Good … why nit afterall everybody want SWARA SANSKAR, THEY ARE SO IN LOVE COUPLE.
Now i get it SWARA SANSKAR are for each other na, how can others leave in peace. They want them .. ohh now
Go on Kakali
..u saw that great…and yeah I am creative…thanks for loving it…
Best wishes for ur this ff…..being a writer is a tough job. But dont u think dat u are promoting fights instead…..adding the couple name in d title is a simple request to avoid issues and misunderstandings……those who are fans of dat couple will read it and those who dislike dem will not read it….
Its too simple dear…..just keep aside ur ego…..show some maturity.
You are some couple’s fan dat never existed and its not ur fault dat u like dem but it certainly doesnt make sense dat how can u like someone dat never existed…..whether its swasan or raglak fans all are too emotionally attached to them and so they dont like swaps in couples….ok fine leave dis matter….u r free to post on whichever couple u like….but d simple request is to mention d couple itself in title…..and moreover u know how much fights are there among diff groups of SR…. so why are u promoting d fights?? The serial has been off air for nearly 6 months now and people are hell bent upon degrading the glory of SR….
See writing is passion….being author is a tough job……author holds many responsibilities regarding his her creations….try to respect an author’s job……writing is not easy…..
I dont know how u take it on writing fictions but for authors they ake writing as worship…dey respect reader’s opinions too…….
Dont try to show ur immaturity…..respect writers and this profession…..
I am not discouraging u…. u r doing a fab job…all i want is just post rag____san in d title as well……
And one thing u must remember…since d couple u chose was never to be….therefore its natural for d fans of original couples to be upset with you….but they certainly dont have d right to bash u……
ooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggggggg useless concepttt with uselesss writersss and her uselesss army… betaaa kindlyy use some brain before writing anything crap..muu chukk krrr muu uthaa krr kucchh naa likh diyaa karo… and what stupid logicss u r saying??? and tell mee firstt how will u slap rosey?? will u parcel a slap?? by cutting your hand??? or imaginary slap??? kindly mind yourr stupid tonguee.. andd what u want to sorry to only raglak fans?? we swasan fanss dontt need your blo*dy sorryy.. barii aii apnay aap ko mahaan samjhnay wali.. kindly goo and get someee wisdom in your pea size head and then talk with readers.. dont know the why of how to talk with readers andd thinking yourselff as a queen of someee big empire.. huhhh i only want to say sorry to raglak fanss huhhh.. for swasan fanss u havee too touch their feet for forgiveness.. andd yourr thiss storyy will surelyy flopp :).. thankuu too muchh sweet talkss i did naa noo problemm will surellyy say something moree… till then byeeeeee
andd yeahh kindly ignoree gramatical mistakess because the writer likee u i dontt want to waste my time in editing.. 🙂 thankuuu
I just have one question..
are you writing this story because you love ragsan? or because you wanted to show that swasan are brother and sister?
it’s the same qn.. just has 2 parts.. 😛
Not fair Anjali ?
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You didn’t tell me you started new stories, I’m still halfway between Mr Maheshwari and I, damnnn, got loads to catch up on, yaar, meri train bahot slow jaa rahi hai ?
Aaj achcha hua that I saw you here and decided to check for new updates, or else my train wouldn’t have moved, it would’ve stayed there ?
This was the small complaint I had ? Other than that, hiiiiii, how are you? Long time no talkkkk ?
Nice shri.i am also from south India especially from AP.but don’t the stop the ff for the negative comments.RAGSAN fans will stand for u.waiting for next part.????
One thing is making me confuse?? Why u post this post?? To get many comments?? Butt awwwww imm sooooo sorrrrryyyyy u put your foot on axe by yourself becoz by creating this mess in next epi u will not going to get these many comments.. what u thought if u will say sorry to raglak fanss then they will comment?? Nopessss andd u naa i think only ragini fan who knowss u can even put her as a couple with dp,rp alsoo.. because raglak fans i saw many times very much loyal towards the couple but those u only wantss ragini paired her with manyyyy then whats wrong in pairing her with dp and rp??? U naa surely thinking about this also.. it will help u in next concept of your story..
Who* and think*…… andd yeah plzzz stop replying like an idiot to the readers.. being a writer first rule is too talk politely.. soo u have to learn this first and i think your frnds also need this…..marriage is not jokee once before writing put yourself in that girl’s place.. if u want fiction doesnt mean that u start writing too much fantasies…
Don’t need to apologise, even I got mistakened it to be RagLak and SwaSan, what to do, love them two ?
I haven’t got anything nice to say so I’m sorry, I should keep my mouth shut and zipped because it’s your story, your opinion, your forum page and your mindset, nothing of mine is here. . . ?
Good luck for all your stories and what you’re showing, hoping a RagLak story from you, if it’s okay with you, I don’t want to force my opinions on you. If I miss to see it then could you please kindly message me ? If possible then on SwaSan too but it’s okay if you don’t wish to. . .
And in my opinion, no ones brother-sister on that show, nor Rag Lak and neither Swa San, Rag San and Swa Lak . . . ?
Have a good day and take care Shrilatha. . . ✨
Hey Shrilatha!
Good morning dear! I have a looong comment coming ahead. But I have a big day today so I don’t have much time for you 2 Kodi people! So will comment later, wait for it!