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I have replied to everyone plz check it once…..and Sorry …I couldn’t upload early bcz of some personal problems… So I wrote a MAHA EPISODE…
And plz comment guys…I hope my dear silent readers will break their silence…
Here is the next epi-
Epi- 16
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Night at mm
Ragini was still sitting there with teary eyes .. Someone patted on her shoulder. She suddenly wiped her tears and turn to the person… It was “My swayam… (Don’t look at me like that…he is mine only… I saw so many of u r behind him?..but trust me….if I see it again na…for sure next episode I will make u guys his rakhi sisters…be aware???)
She smiled at him…
Swayam-so wts up my lady???
Ragini-nothing my James Bond.. Just feeling bored…
Swayam- then..its play time…wt say???
Ragini- OK cool…. But wt???
Swayam- hide and seek…
Ragini- wt..such a childish game???
Swayam- it is not childish… It will be fun…plz na…
He pouted cutely… Ragini couldn’t resist… She agreed…
Ragini- but Hw can we play it…we r just two na…
But suddenly a voice interrupted them…
Even we r here…
She smiled deeply… Everyone were present there including sanky…except dp (dont look at me angrily for not including dp… of course… If sanky is bunking his office just to get a glimpse of his lady love,his father have to work in office na…???…jokes apart guys…dp is in meeting ….and sanky came home after finishing his work…ha but we can’t neglect ,he usually came with his dad but now a days He did his work so fast only because of Ragini?)
Ragini- OK great… But now who is going to count??
Everyone evily smiled at swayam who was pointing his finger at sanky…
Swayam- Hw mean….u guys want me to count???…and maa u too???
Ap- beta…u r our James Bond na…
Swayam took a sigh and said fine…
Swayam- so get ready… I am going to count…
He started to count…everyone ran from there to hide….
Ragini was confused
Ragini- oh god…where will I hide???swayam is definitely going to find me first… No I can’t loose…Ragini never looses…wt to do…yes…duggu uncles room…he won’t come there bcz of fear…ya..it will be perfect…
She ran to dp’s room…she saw a cupboard and thought to hide there she entered and closed its door without looking anything… She dashed into a hard chest… Then only the truth struck her…she landed her self on Sanskar’s chest…and Sanskar’s eyes were like…going to drop from his eye socket anytime…. That much wide….??
She stammered to talk…
Ragini- wo actually…I didn’t see u…
Sanky- ya…it …its OK…(ha ha?…both r stammering… Can u guys plz speak fast so that i can move my ff ?)
Ragini- hmm..I will hide somewhere else…
Sanky- no…I mean…u hide hear…I will go…
Ragini- no sanky… I will go…u came here first na…
Sanky- so wt??? U don’t know much hide out places here na…I will go…u don’t worry…
Ragini at last agreed to him with a cute smile… Sanky opened cupboard doors slowly and turn to her to say bye…but suddenly she pulled him in and closed the door….he dashed to her…his hands where on both side of cupboards wall…she was standing in between his hands…they were just few mm apart….they could feel their increased breath rate…
They didn’t blink their eyes for once…
Background music plays….
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
Ooo ooo oo..
Naino ki chaal hai, makhmali haal hai
Neechi palkon se badle samaa
Naina sharamaye jo, ya anake bar aaye jo
Tham ke ruk jaaye dono jahaan
Rab ki neemat hai teri nigaahein
Jisme basti hai uski duayein
Aise naino ki baaton mein koi kyun na aaye
Hoo Tere naina, tere naina, tere naina re
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
Hoo Aise naino ki baaton mein koi kyun na aaye
Hoo Tere naina, tere naina, tere naina re
Tere naina tere naina tere naina re
They came to their sense hearing swayam’s screaming…
“Maaa….ammu…I got u guys…SAAAT…….”
Ragsan smiled together… Then only they noticed they were too close….sanky suddenly removed his hands from her side…she stammered again…
Ragini-wo…so…swayam was just behind that door…that’s why I pulled u….
Sanskar- ya…I got it…just relax…its OK..
But suddenly ragini’s eyes got wide she was going to scream…reading her facial expressions sanky closed her mouth fast…
Sanky- wt….
She pointed Her finger to a corner….
“There was he…..every girl’s nightmare…? The dangerous khilladi…the devil….?
“COCKROACH”…..
(Wt…cockroach…. Nooo….u came here too….u know wt friends…I just hate them…bcz they every time show their head in front of me…and when it come to my practical in zoology… It will disappear just like they don’t exist …thank god this syllabus changed before starting that practical section… I just can’t even imagine picking a cockroach in my hand…?ahhh…
But today I am Lil bit generous… Bcz u r going to play a cupid in their love story na…so thank to me ….I won’t shower u with LAAL HIT…!!!!!)
Sanky smiled..
Sanky- it just a cockroach girl…
(Ha ha…that was a wrong move boy…no girl will like who wont understand the devilish mind of a cockroach….?)
Ragini punched him on his stomach…
Auwch…..sanky put his hands suddenly in his stomach….
She smirked… But it didn’t go well…cockroach flied to other side of the wall
(why…why god…why did u gave them wings…?without using wings also they r more terrifying than any devil…when I got know cockroaches can even fly but not much distance.. I was like hell froze….?)
…in the fear she suddenly hugged sanky with closed eyes…he froze again…he unknowingly thanked that cockroach.
The background music continued…
Same time
In a Dark room….
A man is crying like hell seeing a beautiful big pic of Ragini which is laminated in the wall…
Someone patted on his shoulder
Girl-lucky….it is time for the concert….come na….
Yes guys…u guessed right… Its our lucky…
Lucky turn to her…
Laksh- I can’t shona…I can’t…without her….I even can’t breath… I have to find her….
Yes guys she is swara….a tear skipped from her eyes…
Swara-why can’t u understand lucky… Ragini is no more…
That’s it…next second she was pinned to the wall..he screamed out…
Laksh- she is still alive…my heart beat still….that …that means she is alive…it is just that she is angry with me…ya I did a mistake.. But it happened unknowingly.. She can punish me…but not like this…I will find her…I will find my Laado….and will take her to my embrace… Even won’t allow her to breath…
His nails entered into her flesh…their eyes were teary…he loosed his grip in a sudden seeing the engagement ring which Ragini put on him..it was the only reason he never changed to a wild animal whenever he went through a emotional turmoil…he came near the photo of Ragini ,with teary eyes he kissed it.. and took his guitar from the side of a wall in which RAGLAK were written.. And went out slamming the door…
He reached the concert….
There were a huge crowd.. Cheering his name lucky…..
Yes he was the one of best singer India had…the most famous person for whom every girl were mad…but he…he was mad for his lady love …his childhood friend… His Laado….
He entered into the stage… And sat on a chair which was placed near mike..
His eyes got teary…he missed her…some flash back shown…Ragini cheering up screaming Lucky’s name with ear to ear smile…he closed his eyes and started to sing….
Woh mere aane pe khil jaana tera
Woh mere jaane pe chidd jaana tera
Woh mere chhune pe chhil jaana tera
Yaad hai na
❤(Fb shown..
Laksh putting his hands on her eyes asking guess him..she pulled him and hugged him calling lucky)❤
Woh paas aane pe pighal jaana tera
Boond boond mujhpe baras jaana tera
Til til mujhko woh tarsana tera
Yaad hai na.. yaad hai na.. yaad hai na
❤(she gifting him same guitar… And he writing RAGLAK in it…and side hugging her)❤
Honthon se palkon ko kholna
Palkon pe dardon ko tolna
Dardon ko chadar mein chodna
Jo tere takiye pe neendein thi padi
Jo teri neendon mein raatein thi dhali
Yaad hai na
Jo teri raaton mein sansein thi chali
Yaad hai na.. yaad hai na.. yaad hai na
❤(laksh entering into her room at mid night… And screaming happy birthday… She jumping on the bed and giving a friendly kiss to him….)❤
Aaja na phir se chand talle
Main aur tu ek sath jale
Main aur tu ek sath bujhe
Woh mere aane pe khil jaana tera
Woh mere jaane pe chidd jaana tera
Woh mere chhune pe chhil jaana tera
Yaad hai na
❤(they eating ice cream… Laksh putting some ice cream on her tip of her nose…she making cute angry pout face…their small fights… )❤
Woh paas aane pe pighal jaana tera
Boond boond mujhpe baras jaana tera
Til til mujhko tarsana tera
Yaad hai na.. yaad hai na.. yaad hai na
❤(at last…he sliding the ring in her finger with wide smile in their engagement and she too smiling at him)…❤
laksh finished his song braking a string of the guitar his hand got a cut..blood oozed out..people were madly clapping… A tear escaped from his eyes…he moved his hand on his guitar and murmured…
“Ragini… U r just mine…I will find u…I know u r alive…I won’t let anything come between us…even anyone…”
Same time Ragsan were lost in each other…they came to sense when the cupboard door got opened by swayam…they separated from each other…swayam giggled and ran from there by screaming “got u two…..”
They were embarrassed…. She wanted to run from there…
in a sudden try to run, her engagement ring’s pointed part hited on sanky really hard leaving a scar…
Sanskar winced in small pain..
Blood oozed out….Ragini got shocked…she looked at the ring and sanky..laksh’s word echoed in her ear
“u r just mine…I won’t let anyone come near u..this is not just an engagement ring…it have my soul…it wont alow anyone to come near u…it will scream out u r just mine…i love u ragini…i love u…”
her eyes got teary…
Ragini immediately took sanky’s hand and sucked the blood with her lips…he felt goosebumps…he felt her lips on his hand…he stood there like a statue….the same time ragini’s mind had a clear cut view…her thoughts were strong…
“Laksh I won’t let u hurt anyone in ur obsessive love for me…I will stand in between u and sanky… Ya…I have started to feel for him… even after knowing I can’t be his…but trust me laksh…I will stand like a wall in front my love and will break on u one day taking ur life with me leaving my heart with my sanky…
Her heart screamed out her emotions through her tears….!!!
The pure soul sanskar smiled at her care without knowing… even after marking his name in her heart …his lady love was moving away from him..❤❤❤
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Ah….finished the maha episode…Hw was it guys…plz tell me…it took so much time to type in my mobile…. I hope u guys won’t disappoint me…and this ff will have total just 25 episodes..I hope u guys enjoyed reading.. Waiting for ur comments…
Love u all ….have a good day
21 Comments
Awesome update dear…mindblowing..pls dnt separate our ragsan
awesome dear.. loved it.. especially those lines u write in middle were really awesome..I should say you can be a great commenter…
Omg nice confession with a twist ohh lucky too its cool
love ur ff
but plz continue ur ff swaragini a frend request love ur both ff
They were playing hide and seek and love it too. i love that cockroach so much, entered on right time. sometime i feel laksh is only obsessed but sometimes i feel he truly loves her. not only laksh but his engagement ring is also so evil. it just hurt sanky. what did she mean, i will taking your life with mine ( to lucky)???? and yeah dont worry swayam is all yours and you can make me his rakhi sister.
loved it so much 😀
Amazing,,, love the way you show your own opinions in the episodes ,,, it was fab update soon.xx
awesome
Suprbbbbb. Lovd ittt desr ???
nice…
what to say dea it’s fab n missed ua ff but ua maha epi made it up ….it’s superb ….i think swara feels for laksh …..am so eager to know the next track …..raglak face off omg waiting for that n ragsan love n ammu grey shade …..oh god i am so eager ….i wonder how can u manage with all these things(above mentioned)……….oh i forgot “YOUR” swayam’s naughtiness & arjun n ammu love ……ohhhhh soooo excited…….don’t worry dea everything will be alright….don’t neglect ua academics….TC…:-)
heheheh i liked ur special comments on the ff but i m afraid of lizards i just hate them and u said just 25 episodes noo yaar write more and loved the cupboard scene
Laksh entry was awsome your storyline is too good and way of writing story is awsone keep it up
Will u plz tell me who’s playing sammy’s character…? U can make me his rakhi sis.. I dnt mind…. ????
Will u plz tell me who’s playing sammy’s character…? U can make me his rakhi sis.. I dnt mind…. ????.. Btw ur story is too gud.. I m new reader
Its awesome when will u update swaragini a friend request
Nice episode but plz post ur Swaragini – A friend request soon iam waiting for it
Superb….plz don’t separate Ragsan
awesome one pls upload next part soon…plzzz don’t separate ragsan
fantastic
Oh my my….rags also love sanky superb amazing….
And really sorry yaar i will not eye your Swayam….as i dont want to be his sister?
superb