Hello my beautiful friends. Finally writing the last part of this ff.
Feeling a bit sad for ending this ff but I’m happy because of all the love I got from you all. Seriously guys, you all are the best readers. Thanks for bearing my story till 30 episodes. Silent readers, thank you so much for reading but please try to comment at least today.
So lets start-
RECAP- Things back on track.
7 months later-
Maheshwari mansion was beautifully decorated. Parineeta and Adarsh were shown welcoming the guests with a huge smile on their faces. Ap and Dp were talking and laughing with the guests. Sumi and Shekhar were also shown greeting everyone happily. One huge mandap was situated at the centre where the priest was organizing things. Laksh and Sanskar were sitting at different corners of the mandap. Kartik, Manthaj and Rishi were also standing next to them, teasing them by their partner’s name. Sanskar and Laksh were eagerly looking at the entrance for Ragini and Swara respectively. Both of them were very excited, after all, this was the day they were waiting for so eagerly.
Their patience finally got over. Ragini and Swara entered with their friends next to them. Ragini was wearing a orange and blue lehnga while Swara was wearing a peach and red lehnga. All the guests appreciated their beauty.
KITNE DOOR DOOR HO
UN DONO KE RAASTE
MIL JAATE HAI JO BANE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
Sanskar and Laksh looked at their respective brides lovingly. Ragini and Swara also looked at them and blushed.
JAISE DIL HAI DHADKAN HAI
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
Sanskar and Laksh forward their hands to Ragini and Swara and make them sit next to them.
JAISE AANKH HAI DARPAN HAI
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
Priest starts chanting mantras. Ragsan and Swalak look at each other and smile.
JAISE BHARKHA SAAWAN HAI
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK SAJNI EK SAAJAN HAI
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
Sanskar fills Ragini’s maang. Laksh also repeats the same with Swara. They then make Ragini and Swara wear Mangalsutra.
USS RAB NE JAB DIL DIYE
DIL KE DO TUKDE KIYE
DONO PE EK NAAM LIKHA
EK RADHA EK SHAAM LIKA
AB YEH DIL DHADAKTE HAI
MILTE AUR BHICHADTE HAI
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
EK DUJE KE VAASTE
The four of them stand and take vows around the fire. First Ragsan complete their 7 vows and then Swalak also does. Sumi and Shekhar did their Kanya Daan. They four took blessing of their elders. Everyone praised their Jodi a lot and wished them a happy life.
Later at night in Ragsan’s room-
Ragini was sitting on the bed waiting for Sanskar. The door opens and he comes inside slowly and looked towards his lovely wife. Ragini also looks at him and shys. He comes and sits next to her and touches her hand. Ragini shuts her eyes with his touch. He looks at her and smiles.
Sanskar- Still can’t believe it Ragini, that we are finally married. I was waiting for this day from so long. I can’t even describe how happy I am right now.
Ragini- I was also waiting for this day from a long time Sanskar. I am too lucky to have you. I love you.
Sanskar smiles and kisses her on forhead.
Sanskar- I love you too.
He leans closer to kiss her when they hear a knock on their door.
Sanskar( in irritated tone)- Now who is it?
He goes and opens the door and finds little Avni standing outside holding a rose.
Sanskar- Avni, what happened?
Avni( cutely)- I wanted to give Chachi this rose. I didn’t gave her any gift na.
Ragini hears this and comes towards her smiling. Avni gives her the rose and Ragini kisses her on cheek.
Ragini- Thank you so much Avni.
Avni- You are welcome Chachi.
Sanskar- Ok now bye….go and sleep ok.
Avni- Can I ask you something?
Ragini- Ya sure ask.
Avni- Can I sleep with you both tonight?
Sanskar- NO
Avni- Please na chachi, tell chachu that I want to sleep with you tonight.
Ragini looks at Sanskar and he nods his head in no signaling her to ask Avni to go.
Ragini- Umm….Avni, actually na……
Avni- No, please don’t say no. I want to sleep with you.
She stamps her foot cutely.
Sanskar- Avni, next time ok, now go and sleep with your parents.
Avni- But they only sent me here to sleep with you.
Sanskar- What? Bhaiya and Bhabhi sent you here?
Avni nods. They then hear the laughter of Adarsh and Parineeta and they come and stand in front of them.
Pari- Avni beta, you go back. I think your Chachu is not in a mood to invite someone else.
Avni goes back and Sanskar stares angrily towards Adarsh and Parineeta. Ragini laughs.
Sanskar- what is this bhai?
Adarsh- Nothing. We just wanted to see your eagerness.
Sanskar- Very funny. Now go back.
Adarsh- Ok ok….relax. We are going, you continue.
They both laugh and leave. Sanskar closes the door and Ragini also start laughing.
Sanskar- Come on Ragini, now you also started laughing.
Ragini( Still laughing)- Ok sorry sorry.
Sanskar again comes close to her and holds her by her waist. Ragini looks down. Sanskar holds her chin and makes her look at him. They both share a romantic eyelock. Later Ragini shuts her eyes and Sanskar kisses her on her eyes and then on her cheeks. He then puts his lips on her’s and starts kissing her passionately. Ragini was also responding equally. After sometime, they departed when they both were out of breath. Sanskar picked her in his arms and released her on the bed slowly. He started romancing her neck and after sometime they…..Ahem…Ahem ( Concentrate on your studies please)
In Swalak’s room-
Swara was still waiting for Laksh and he was taking too much time to come. She starts to get angry. Later Laksh comes in and looks at her apologetically. She makes an angry face and ignores him.
Laksh- Sorry Swara, woh actually, my friends were leaving so I went to see them and got late.
Swara- I don’t care. I was waiting for so long and you only care about your friends.
Laksh- Offo sorry na. Please today no fighting.
He comes and sits next to her and holds her hand and kisses it.
Laksh- Today only romance.
Swara takes her hand away.
Swara- Now I’m not in a mood.
Laksh- Arre…that’s not fair. I was waiting for so long for this day and you are saying that you are not in mood.
Swara- Yes Mr Laksh Maheshwari, I’m not in mood.
Laksh- So Mrs. Swara Laksh Maheshwari, what should I do to make your mood.
Swara thinks while Laksh gets and idea.
Laksh- Remember what songs were coming that day when we were in the car.
Swara reminisces that moment and shys.
Laksh- I think that today also, the songs will help us, right?
He goes and switch on the radio. Song starts to play-
CHANDA MAMA SE PYARA MERA MAMA
MERI AANKHON KA TARA MERA MAMA
Swara again looks at him angrily.
Laksh- Sorry again….I…I will change it.
He changes the song-
PHULON KA TAARON KA
SABKA KEHNA HAI
EK HAZAARON MEIN
MERI BEHNA HAI
Laksh angrily switch off the radio while Swara stares at him.
Laksh- Hell with this radio. When we didn’t wanted then it played all those songs and now…..even my mood will be spoiled listening this songs.
Laksh-But you Don’t worry Swara, I am there na. I can sing myself.
He starts to sing-
TU HI MERI SHAB HAI
SUBAH HAI, TU HI DIN HAI MERA
TU HI MERA RAB HAI
DUA HAI, TU HI MERI DUNIYA
Swara smiles and Laksh comes towards her. He removes her earrings, still continuously looking at her.
TU WAQT MERE LIYE
MAIN HOON TERA LAMHA
KAISE RAHEGA BHALA
HOKE TU MUJHSE JUDA
OO……
Laksh twirls her around and she lands in his arms. They both also share a romantic eyelock.
Laksh- I love you Swara.
Swara- I love you too.
They both continue slow dancing and falls on bed. Laksh was on top of her. He gives a peck on her lips and she smiles. He then starts giving wet kisses on her neck and then again kisses her on lips. Later they also….Ahem…Ahem( I said na concentrate on studies)
5 YEARS LATER-
Sanskar was sleeping on his bed when a cute little girl around the age of 4 enters the room. You guessed it right, she is Ragsan’s daughter.
She sees Sanskar sleeping and goes near him. She tickles his feet and tries to wake him.
Sanskar murmers in sleep- Ragini, please, some more time. Let me sleep.
The girl giggles.
Girl- Papa, its me.
Sanskar opens his eyes and sees his little angel standing in front of him. He smiles seeing her and opens his arms. She runs and hugs him.
Sanskar- Aastha, you are awake so early?
Aastha- What Papa. Its more than 9’ o clock and you are still sleeping.
Sanskar gets surprised hearing this and looks at the clock.
Sanskar- Oh shit….where is your mumma?
Aastha- She is in the kitchen and she is angry with you.
Sanskar- Ok…ok thanks for telling.
He quickly rushes to the washroom and gets fresh and comes out. He goes to the kitchen and sees Ragini making the breakfast. He goes towards her and hugs her from back.
Sanskar- Happy wedding anniversary Jaan.
Ragini- Good morning Sanskar.
Sanskar- Sorry Ragini, I came home late yesterday so I was very tired and that’s why slept much.
Ragini- I wanted you to wish me first and because of that I didn’t let anyone wish me since morning, but you kept sleeping.
Sanskar kisses her cheek and smiles.
Sanskar- Sorry, but now toh I wished you na.
Ragini- Thank you so much.
She starts to leave when Sanskar pulls her back.
Sanskar- Only thank you, when will you wish me. It is my wedding anniversary as well. Now be my sweet Ragini and wish me.
She smiles hearing that.
Ragini- Happy wedding anniversary.
Sanskar also smiles and hugs her. She hugs him back.
Aastha also enters and starts eating chocolate.
Ragini- Aastha, how many chocolates will you have? You will spoil your teeth.
Sanskar- Hey, don’t say anything to my angel.
He goes and picks Aastha in his arms and she kisses him on his cheek and she gives a victory grin to Ragini.
Ragini also starts laughing seeing the father- daughter bond.
On the other side-
Swara was coming out from her room when Laksh holds her hand.
Laksh- Happy anniversary my dear wife.
Swara- Hmmm….thanks.
Laksh- Only thanks….nothing else.
Swara- You are wishing me for the tenth time, now what else should I say.
Laksh- Ok, don’t say something, just give me.
Swara- Give you what?
Laksh- A kiss.
Swara- No Laksh, I have a lot of work. I can’t.
She starts to leave but he again holds her and pulls her back.
Laksh- Your husband is asking for a kiss and you can’t even do this much.
Swara blush and nods in yes.
Laksh comes close to her and was about to kiss her when a little boy came running towards them. They both moved away seeing him.
Boy- Mummy, papa….everyone is calling you for breakfast.
Laksh- Papa ke bachche….can’t you come a little late.
Swara- Shh…Laksh. Ayan, I’m coming beta.
Ayan- Ok mummy.
Swara kisses him on his forhead and goes down with him. Laksh also follows her.
Downstairs, everyone wishes Ragsan and Swalak about their anniversary. They all thank them. Avni was playing with Aastha and Ayan.
Ragsan and Swalak looked at them and smiled. Later, the kids ask Sanskar and Laksh to sing for their wifes.
Sanskar and Laksh sings SANAM RE and dances with Ragini and Swara respectively. Adarsh and Parineeta also join them. The children also keep cheering for their parents. Ap and Dp also laugh and smile seeing them.
Screen then freezes on Ragsan, Swalak and Adarsh and Pari hugging their kids.
Thanks for reading.
When I started writing this ff, I never thought that I will be able to finish it with such a happy response. Thank you so much for your comments and all.
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58 Comments
Awesone but
My studies completed dear
What i should do
Hehehe…. Then try to concentrate on something else dear. Thanks
perfect ending, ragsan scenes are amazing
Thanks a lot lovely. You have commented on all my episodes…… Thanks for that
superb end I miss this ff ragsan scenes are superb dear
Thank you dear. Ragsan are always superb
so nice awesome happy ending…liked so much even will miss this ff..see you on other ff of your that too ragsan oh how can i forget thanx for ragsan and swalak…don’t worry i didn’t thou any naughty thong i just concentrate on the study like a good student 😉
Yes remain a good student. And no need to thank me for Swalak and Ragsan becoz they are my favourite jodi. In fact I should thank you for liking it
sure dear i’ll concentrate on studies my pyari diya. avni is so cute. i dont know y u chose aastha name for ragsan’s daughter. when i read the name aastha i was in peak dear. am really really happy. very nyz n happy ending. love u sooooooo much. take care. eat healthy foods only.
i dont know am able to read ur broken soul….. or not if i got free time then ill read that bcos it came to 9th epi na thats y…..take care……miss u a lot. if i want to talk to u then ill sent pm to u.
Thank you so much my pyaari Aastha and I put your name only for Ragsan’s daughter becoz I knew that you would like it and I am glad that you did. Also even I will continue messaging you and no problem, take your time in Reading my broken souls ff. LoveLoou
Hi didi am a silent reader . Your FF is the best one i have read. Can i Have your No.?
superb
Thanks
Yeah its good dear…..nd ha dnt worry i am concentrating on my studies:-P nd see u @broken souls
Yes…. Will be back soon at broken souls. Thanks for commenting
Mind blowing…loved it…will mis this ff so much?…a happy ending…and hahaha not forget the funny part ‘concentrate on ur studies’??
Even I will miss your comments in this ff. Thanks for all your love and support dear
Very nice ending.
Thanks Dhara
Awsm ending. I will missed it badly and you too.Tch tch,poor sanlak. Plz come back with another ff(if possible). Love you loads.
And yeah,don’t worry,I will concentrate in studies like a good girl.
Good… Concentrate on your studies. And I will surely be back with other ff
nice
Thanks
Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing Fabulous ff
Lovely ending???
Please try to come back with another ff DEAR
Thanks for this ff too
Love you a lot???
Love you too dear. I will try to come up with another ff after writing broken souls.
Wowwwww………awesome ending…….concentrate on ur studies……ha ha ha….sure….we ill concentrate dear……once again thanx for swalak and ragsan…..my fav couples…….i am really sad….i will miss this ff……but will enjoy ur writings in broken souls…..keep writing dear……take care……
No need to be sad dear. Everything have an end but I will surely be back with other ff. Until then…….. Concentrate on your studies.
it was fab dear plz try to write another ff wid swalak and ragsan
I will try my best to write another ff on them but after some time. Thanks for your precious comments
Superb di. . Amazing ending.. Wil miss the ff..but not u.. As ur gonna write broken souls ff…. Love u di.. .. And ha… Aaj astha di ki Khushi ko the end hi nahi hoga… Am I ryt astha akka???
Yes… Right. She must be on cloud nine after reading her name. Thank you so much for your continuous support. Love you too
Awesome nd so sweet update..
Loved ur ff
thanks fr beautiful ff
You are welcome dear. Thanks for reading and commenting
Wow….awesome
Epi…pls come back with another ragsan ff….
I am currently working on Two broken souls and will continue writing other ff’s too. Thanks
Awesome dear love the ending of the story, will miss you and your story. ??????
Tysm…. I am glad that you liked the end. I will miss you all too
Wonderful.loved it very much
Thank you dear. I am damn happy that you liked it
good ff
Thanks Lisa
Awesom . . lovely ending nd come back soon dear..m nd love ragsan scene
Thanks for liking the ff and the end. I am glad that you loved Ragsan scenes
Awesome Awesome yrr plzz come back wid Another swalak ff plzzzz
I will come back with another Swalak and Ragsan ff after some time
its very nice …
Thanks for liking it
Super
Thanks
thnq soooo much for understanding dear. ya i liked aastha name atmost. really love u dear. u know now am in fever so this sat n sun am not able to post my ff.
Get well soon dear and I will be waiting for your ff. Love u
Superb yaar
Thanks
So nice dc so sad that it was completed i will surely read your broken souls and you also please read my ff kaisi yeh pyaar
Thanks dear and I will surely read your ff. Pakka promise and will comment too but will be a little late as school work have to be done first
omg!!!! you’ve really written awesome stuff I like the ending….. but u know what as know what i liked the romancing thing the mostttt…. but we have the same things to study…. sooooo if u have the time to write i m always at my leisures to read them………………..
I read all episodes in one go,loved it…beautifully framed