Hey guys thank you so soo much for your support. I know many people don’t want to see raglak in negative role . I thought to make them negative forever but I don’t want to make anyone disappointed so I will make raglak negative only in two ep. You all will see ragsan and swalak friendships bonding. I don’t want to make anyone disappointed and please tell me if you don’t like the ff. I will give a small intro of swara and then I will start the ff
Swara Bose : only daughter of janki. Very intelligent girl. 17 years old. She is still studying. Love her mother a lot. And is best in writing story.
Janki Bose : mother of swara. 44 years old and cousin of ram. Love her daughter a lot. Always has a dream which will reveal in third or second ep. Her husband is no more.
Actually swara and janki are middle class people. So let’s start.
morning in a village :
We can see many big buildings and in the sky their are many birds flying like they have got freedom. Then we go to a balcony . There we can see a beautiful girl is drying some clothes. Yes she is swara. After that she goes in the kitchen and started shouting. :
Swara : maaa! !! Where are you?? I’m getting late for college. Maa!!
Then wq go in the terrace where an old lady is with one children . She is telling them a story. But after hearing swara voice she stopped and yes this lady is janki. She then said. :
Janki : yes betaa!! I’m coming. Just wait.
After telling that janki went in the kitchen where swara was waiting for her.
Swara: maaaa quickly take your breakfast and take your medicine. Doctor has said that you should take them on time.
Janki : haaah! Beta I will take it. You just go to college. Aren’t you getting late??
Swara bit her tongue : yes yes yes! Bye maa!! See you afternoon.
Taking a bread in her hand.
Scene change in a. Coffee shop:
Two people are sitting. One is a girl and another is a boy. Yes it’s ragsan.
Ragini : sanskar you remember our childhood .!!
Sanskar who is drinking coffee : yes rags! I remember all the moment we had spent together it was Soo funny.
Ragini : what!!! Which moment??
Sanskar : you remember when we both went to school for the first time. When you first enter the school you slip in mud! Haha… You was looking like a dark chocolate wow. I wish that time I had my mobile phone then I could have take a picture. Haha.. .lol
Ragini: what the hell?? Okk now let’s go to office otherwise your mom will scold us.
Scene office.
Both ragsan went towards their cabins.
In sanskar cabin:
Sanskar was working in his laptop that sujata came with some files.
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Sujata: beta!! Where were you in morning??
Sanskar : mum I was with ragini!! And what is this in your hand??
A small smile appears in sujata face : beta this is the file which contain some important information. You need to read it again and give it to your father.
Sanskar : ok mum. But where is papa I didn’t see him ??
Sujata; he is in his cabin beta. Okk bye read it once again and then give it to your father.
Scene in a big cabin:
A man is sitting with an old pictures . Yes this is ram and this is the picture of swara when she was a child and janki. Ram is thinking something while wearing swara. Suddenly we can hear a knock knock in that door.
Recap: ram and janki meeting.
Laksh entry will be later. And yes this atory will be a little different . Sorry for any grammar mistakes. I wrote this am all chappy in a hurry. Don’t worry I will give a long scene of swara in next ep. Today I was free soo I wrote it and next ep of my both ff will be on Saturday.
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Please forgive this bechari….. Solo many mistakes. …?????????
Hahaa! Chalo, maaf kiya!
Amazing epi di
Really dear thank God thank you soo much for your beautiful comments
Diii !!! why u use this BECHARI word ha ?? .. either it is in a joke manner or in serious manner .i just hatee thiss word.. don’t use this !!! huhhhhh !!! i feel like YUUUCCCKK with dis word …
sorry dii if i hurt u…. chhoorryy !!!
Haha… What to do I’m in this conditions. Haha….. I’m not hurt.
Haan di it’s so nice but y r u so tensed regarding epi?
What to do. I’m very busy in my personal problems.
Amazing Chapter Di…
Madam..aur bata..kaise ho
Thank you choti thank you soo much. ??
Thank you soo much. Love you. ???
Kya batao tension hi tension he
Don’t take tension.tension se kuch nahi hoga
Awesome…
Thank you so soo much tamanna for your beautiful comments ???
nice
Thank you so much anu and sorry for grammer mistakes in the ff. ???
Nice dear… Continue soon…
Thank you deeksha and sorry for grammer mistake in the ff. ????
No problem dear… It happens!!!!!! Even in my ff they occur……. There is no need of u being sorry!!!!!!
Awww thank you yr. Love you and your ff.
V r ok wid raglak ngtve…
Y r u chnging it plz dun change it…
Continue as u ve thought… it ur cncpt plz
Oooh dear I have just changed some plots but everything will be the same. Raglak will have to negative.
Awesome dear☺☺no need to b sorry..waitng fr nxt eagrly
Thank you soo soo much for your beautiful comments. ??
nice start..
Thank you s and it will be a little different from the serial. Sorry. ??
Superb dear❤️❤️
Thank you crazy girl love you a lot. ???
Love you too darling❤️❤️
Malikaa!!!!! huh! just continue soon….c’mon c’mon..
Thank you ssoo much mica. I will update next ep on Saturday. ??
Saturday Saturday !!! come fast …
omgg i have to wait sii long…..
love it Dii… thnk for d beautiful chappy….
Omg have patience choti. Haha….. Love you too thanks you soo much for your beautiful comments. ???
Superbbbb
Thank you so much tani. Keep supporting like that. ??
Awesome
Thank you so soo much dear. I really love your previous ff. On swasan ??
Amazing dr…
Nxt one soon..
Thank you soo soo much dear. Glad you like it. ??
Awsm one di…
Update next part asap…
I know I always says update next part asap but wat to do I seriously can’t able to wait for next part….
Haha…… You have to wait dear. Thanks you soo much. ????
Don’t change the plot which u alrdy decided.. No prlm if you make raglak negative.. And you alrdy told that in your raglak ff swasan r negative so it w’ll be tallyed .. So it w’ll be compensated.. Heee heeee .. So don’t change it dear… And waiting for next part
No dear I’m not Sure about Swasan.thank you soo soo anu. Raglak will be negative here. Keep supporting dear. ????
Thanku u so much when will u update raglak ff-
Raglak ff will be posted on Saturday. Thanks you soo much. And update your both ff soon.
Ok my badi?
Love you choti
Love u too badi
17yrs bit odd
Why. I know swara is too young but this story is like a Pakistani serial soo. That why and thank you so soo much. ???
Amazing part di and don’t say sorry and bechari as u r not bechari and about the part the introduction is good swara care for her mother and ragsan talks and ragini slipping in mud and sujata having a smile hearing rags name means she want ragini to be sanskar wife and ram want swara its going to be interesting to see what happen in next part di loved it love u di???☺☺
You are right. I will update soon. Thank you so much for your lovely and beautiful comments. Keep supporting like that.
awesome di please make swasan met eachother soon
It will be sooner.