Hey guyz.. I thought to write mono episode story. After yesterday’s episode I am damn angry on swara. I want to burst it out. I know this won’t happen n d serial that’s y.
After – swara caught uttara’s ear ring at the place where ragini was kept. She confronts her and uttara acpts.
Swara is sure ter must be nail marks in right wrist. Laksh wantedly make sanskar get scratch marks in his wrist sumhow. Swara by seeing this concludes sanskar and uttara kidnapped ragini and thinks Sanskar burnt d red shawl to save his sister. She scolds him, didn’t allow sanskar to speak and brks her relationship with him. When she was about to leave she see laksh removing his fake skin in his remove to apply ointment. Laksh though first deny and later acpt tat did this to separate them and get her back. She slaps him and leaves to her room.
Sanskar sitting in his couch with tears in eyes. He is hurt completely as the one whom he loved the most , been with him, changed his bitter past to fruitful life, whom he thought as his blood, breath and life, didn’t trust him. He wanna shout out and cry. It is paining him nd pinching him. He is throwing pillows out of frustration and pain.
Swara is guilt and enters the room and finds shocked seeing sanskar’s actions. She stops him and turns him to face her. Sanskar is angry (hurt actually). So he doesn’t face her but looks down. Swara explains everything. No reaction from sanskar.
Swara : I’m saying it to you only sanskar
Sanskar : ok
Swara : what ok ? I’m saying you such a big thing
Sanskar : so ??
Swara : Aren’t you shocked ?
Sanskar : No
Swara : why are you replying in one word?
Sanskar: what shud I do now swara ?
Swara: Sorry sanskar. I have mistaken you. I just blvd proofs. I am really sorry sanskar.
Sanskar doesn’t rly.
Swara: Sanskar I’m apologising to you only. Why r u standing like statue?
Sanskar: Haan swara. I’m a statue and I don’t have any feelings
Swara with tears (not flowing) : I’m sorry for hurting you.
Sanskar : What ???? Sorry ? He laughs.. sorry ?? Hmm sorry ?? Sorry.. he is just repeating.
Swara place her hand on his shoulder and says : won’t you forgive your friend ??
Sanskar: friend …?? hmmm
Swara: plz say something sanskar
Sanskar : what to say swara ?? I’m hurt swara.. I’m really hurt.. he kneels down and looking the floor he burst out crying. He cries loudly.
Swara’s tears fall down and she holds sanskar to help him to stand. He slowly pushes her hand and get up after crying for long time.
Sanskar : what mistake did I do swara?? What mistake ?? ? yeah i had. I loved a girl truly and bcoz of loving me she lost her life. I thought d reason is my family. I couldn’t forget her, lived the life like hell for 5 yrs and came her for revenge. I thought I lost my love coz of laksh and I came here to stop him from getting his love. But each time when I was hurting u, it hurted me more even at that time.(wen he cudnt c her dancing without senses and saved her wen mohini tried to stab her with knife). On the day when you made realise my mistakes, I regretted my actions and felt guilty and pray god to give even my happiness also to you. But fate brought us together. Yes swara I fell in love with you as days passed but didn’t force me on you. We have been together for only few months bt understood you more than I understand abt myself. I took an oath to be with you in all circumstances. I wished to be with you always atleast as a friend not even best friend. Now I couldn’t take it that u didn’t even considered me as a room mate. It’s hurting me like anything swara.. he cries out
Swara : sanskar u r ma best friend
Sanskar : but u never trusted me without proofs
Swara : Sanskar I stood with you wen ragini said u tried to molest her.
Sanskar : coz u know at that time ragini will do anything to get us out from this house.
Swara : but without proofs i blvd u
Sanskar : bt wat abt now ?
Swara : sanskar u urself buried red shawl and I saw it with my eyes.
Sanskar: even when many proofs wer against u I blvd u swara
Swara : but sanskar. . .
Sanskar : what swara ?? After a long I got my family. U only made me to realise their love. I know coz of our fake marg drama I won’t get their luv. But I stood with you swara coz coz of u I got them. When you said about adharsh bhai’s gf at d vry first time, I blvd u tat u can’t misunderstand. When we went to the lodge room, evry1 said u r wrong. But I was sure something is wrong and u r right. When I proposed you, again nd again u insulted me nd ma luv eventhough I didn’t force you to acpt me. Aftr I made myself clear u blvd me. On d next day of Ragini’s truth revelation laksh said me he wants to apologise to u. But without listening to me u fought wid me and said no frdshp btwn us. Throughout Ragini’s kidnapping case, all the proofs, each nd evry proof were against you swara. But I trusted you completely blindly that surely u didn’t do and thought u can’t do. You forgave ragini who tried to kill you, snatched your love and even after revelation who made you look characterless infront of all. U said adharsh bhai is having affair. I blvd. I said ragini is faking memory loss but u didn’t blv me and said u see truth in her eyes. But what abt tat nw ?? Ok lve tat. U didn’t c truth in my eyes right ?? ( tears rolled down from his eyes). I didn’t blv bade ma and mom wen tey showd and said many proofs against u. But u blvd laksh wo asked u to answer to their questions. U blvd laksh wen tat video of ur kiss is made and evn aftr he didn’t trust u and married ragini, u blvd his words against me. But u didn’t blv me.
Swara : i saw u burying the…….
Sanskar : haan swara i buried not to save anyone. I thought aftr buring it kidnapper may cum with another plan and he ll somehow get caught. Kidnapper is roaming around in night. So i was awake late in night to catch. After many incidents I found that he/she is trying to trap u. They must be following u and ll b surely behind u. He ll be hearing ur conversations. Thats y i didn’t say anything and kept silent. But u tuk me wrong.
Swara is ashamed very much.
Sanskar : i am not shocked that laksh did kidnapping but I’m very pained that u didn’t blv me. Do you think evn aftr knowing d truth that I ll allow people to point their fingers at u ??? What swara ??. He makes fed up face and show what by raising his hand.
Swara : Sanskar….
Sanskar : even dog is faithful swara. U didn’t even consider me like tat.. he turns his face and ctrl his tears.
Sanskar : u always say trust in most important. That is not in our friendship. Sry don’t knw wat s d name of tis relationship. He turns and asks her
Sanskar in low voice : I am also a human swara. I am also having feelings. Don’t i have right to have happiness in my life ?? Am I a that much sinner ?? Why swara ??? Whyyyyy ??
Swara cries : sorry sanskar I am feeling very guilty. I am so sorry. I assure u this will not happen again. V ll b frds like b4
Sanskar. Sorry swara. Trust shud be gained by actions not by wrds. I didn’t say all tis to gain ur trust. May b I’m not that mucj trustworthy to you.. its ok. Sorry if i have hurted u. I didn’t mean anything. I said without thinking. Sry.
Swara : sans…
Sanskar : let it be swara like u said our relationship broken. But i assure u even now and ever… I will be with you always. Any bad thing should touch me before it comes to you. I ll never let anything bad happen to you. I ll trust u blindly even if the whole world is against u. Feel free to share prbms wid me and I ll hold you before u fall. I want to be alone swara.. take care bye..
Swara cries and leaves to badi. She comes to her room and remember all her memories with sanskar – how he saved her frm mohini, how he helped her to reveal ragini and unite her parents without being selfish, how he blvd her wen all proofs wer against her and how she doubted him without thinking. She cries very hard and his rejection of frdshp. .
Very sorry swara fans.. evn I am also her fan. But for d 1st time i hate her yest. She didn’t blv sanskar evn aftr ragini said. She doubted him immediately d scene she saw hm burning without rethinking. I hated her in yest epi. Thats y. I knw tis scene won’t happen in serial as sanskar will forgive her quickly hiding his feelings. So i thot to write. Sorry if I had hurt any of ur feelings..
Thank you ?
43 Comments
Thank you so much tara for this mono episode. Feeling very good now. As I was very irritated after watching the serial.
Thank you so much. 😉
Was an awesome episode yaar! Totally awesome!I guess the same wud happenN each and every word by sans is true! Swara should feel ashamed of it! Even I felt like crying seeing sans word!
Thank you for the best update today bcoz it was tooooo good to read …….
From yesterday even I started hating swara bcoz she doubted on sanskar without knowing the truth who is behind it. I am big fon of swasan……
But you’re update was ausome
Actually what you’re studying Tara?
Thank you so much fransi, Joya, trishika, mridula, kashis, leku, tani, divya, asha?? thanksssssss a lotttt☺☺☺☺ mridula sryy yaar It’s just only one epi dear. I just wished sanskar to show anger on swara nd swara cries for sanskar. Right kashis ?? pity sanskar. Hahaa tani, I also had d same feeling watching yest epi. While writing i too felt d same feeling divya ? hw wil t b like wen d person v consider evrythn nd trust blindly not trusting us ??. Yeah asha I was tolerating swara’s mahan acting towards ragini evrytm bt ok it’s out of over luv, she overlook her mistakes. But wen t cums 2 sanskar she doubts him in ???? I completed b.tech asha. Tis yr passed out. Doing extra – qualification course.
Thank you so so sooo much. I’m overwhelmed seeing ur cmnts. I didn’t expect this much appreciation. Thanksss a lotttttttt ??☺☺??
Tara make one more episode…plz …if possible……………..
Like sanskar showing anger on her ?? Now i just wish sanskar shud nt talk 2 her nd she should suffer frm her guilt ?
Dnt feel fr tat it’s nice to show sanskar feelings also with this swara can knw wat feelings fr sanskar
Thank you borra. I was thinking for long time wthr 2 post r nt coz t may hurt readers feelings. Bt i cudn’t ctrl ma anger. Thanks for supporting
awesome tara …..u made me cry
??? thank you soo much dear
hi…..
very very very very good…..
in ur ff swara says i stood wid u when ragini said u tried to molest her….i believed u widout any proofs but dear dt time swara was living in SANSKAR’S room….
she knew dt sanskar is innocent….
so it’s wrong that she is saying i believed u widout any proofs….
sorry i dnt want to hurt u………
Ya yaaa u r ryt.. nothing u said tat hurt me. I am also saying tat nly.. she knew he was slpng n his room tat’s y she blvd him. I am also saying swara is wrng
Kash aisa real serial me hota!!!
very good ep.