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Chapter 1:
Ragini parted her lips and started to bite her nails in tension… Rag: Why the called us in all of sudden, is everything is ok na… she bcm more tensed, sanskar holds her hand and assures her… she nods nervously…
Sans: Cutie you knw it’s not at all suits ur face… If at all ur shona… he stops in between… Word shona make his face pale… he knw she isn’t fault at her place but…
Ragini place her hand on his shoulder… he gives her “I’m ok” smile…
“Sorry for late Mr and Mrs.Maheshwari…” Principal enters his cabin…Rag-san stands and give him a warm smile: it’s ok Mr.Verma…
They start thr meeting…
Principle: Mr and Mrs.Maheshwari… Rags (Interrupt): Mrs.Lakshaya Maheswari… it was hard to hear Mrs.Maheswari when she was sitting with her jiju as he also a Maheswari…
Principle smiles and nods (to rag-san): why don’t u both attend PTA at morning…
Ragsan: PTA..? they both looks each other as they don’t knew about this before…
Principle: u both dnt knw about this… huh I thought… (He forwards thr progress reports…) I never ever had seen such an irresponsible parents in my life… (he called peon and asked him to call thr kids..) kids are same as thr parents … your kids are just spoiling other students…
As usual swayam first in his academics, Iniya and Sanskrit was scored good marks but have to improve in maths and science… they sighed relieve but doesn’t understand why principle was complaining them
Princi: look they came… Rag-San turn and shocked to see 5 Kids…Nope Swalak with kids…?
Princi: first time in my life no first time in world history, we called parents to complain about their partners… he starts to complaint about thr kids… he gives them one letter… after reading that Ragini eye popped out, within no time she shouts Sanskrit…
Princi: it’s not Sanskrit, its swayam who gv letter to his maths teacher…Ragsan: what..?
Rags: swayam beta really u gv this… swayam nods looking down…
Swayam: Miss only asked whom u love most… he pouts…
Swara angrily: look it’s ur teacher who asked but u blaming my innocent son… first fir… her Word left incomplete after receiving death glare from sanskar… swara bow down like kid…
Sanskar(politely): Sorry sir he is kid, he dont have any idea about this…
Sanskrit(mind voice): huh if at all its me thy all ready to burst out but look huh?
Princi: Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari I understand that, actually now I show this letter not to complaint about swayam but,.
Ragsan:but… Princi looks laksh, Laksh closed his eye tight…
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Principle shows swayam letter to swalak, both swalak is shocked to read “I Love You Miss…” with smiley…?
Lak (angrily): Sanskrit what is this…
Princi: Mr.Maheshwari its not sanskrit, swayam oly gv this letter…
Swalak: whatttttt..???
Sanskrit glares lucky, laksh shows his tooth…
Swa: champ did u gv this letter…
Swayam: haan mmy miss ji only asked. Whom I love.. she is my guru ji na…
Lak: Huh but why u gv dis to ur maths teacher…
Princi: Mr.Maheshwari pls dnt be angry, thy are kids…
Lak: no sir look science teacher, how beautiful she is…? he said looking at his science teacher who is standing next to princi and brushes his hair…
swara and swayam rolled thr eyes hearing him… While princi is lyk??
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Ragsan glares him laksh gv him what look…
Princi: Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheswari is about to hit me using paper weight bz i complained about ur children’s… thank god Mr.Laksh Maheshwari stopped her… Huh…
Princi wipes his sweat remembering that horrible incident…
Ragsan sighs “They really doesn’t have idea what should do with thr partner and sibling…”
He started to complaint about thr kids… Ragini anger roses in peek, sanskar held her hand to control her…
Princi: ur son Sanskrit you knw he wasn’t sitting in boys row… always sitting in centre of girls only… Iniya if at all any kids said something about brothers, she is ready to blast them… she is just a question bank if at all teachers ask her question instead of answering her question she is asking teacher more than 10 question…
Swa: If at all they have doubts it’s ur responsible to clear that instead of complaining us… Huh…
Princi: look like these only ur wife was debating with us…laksh stops swara sensing sanskar angry mode…
Princi gv long complaint list.. princi: pls next tym u bth attend pta dnt send them… Princi sighs…
Sans: we are really Sorry sir it won’t repeat again… Sanskar assures him…
after meeting Swasan , Raglak and kids comes out of room…
Science teachers passes thr lucky gv her flirty smile… she blushes… which sends fit of jealous to Ragini…
Rags (to Sans): jiju did she is really beautiful…
Sans Smiles at possessive Ragini, Sans: haan she is.. you knw she is just looking like lucky twin sister… Ragini grinned wide hearing him….
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Swalak and kids waiting for Ragsan in car parking lot… after seeing them… swara shows her tooth to sanskar but he turns his face… she thought he will talk with her atleast to burstout but he totally avoided her… laksh behaves like Ragini not at all present there… Both swaragini felt bad bz of avoidance of thr husband…
Swa: wo Cutie… Rags (cuts her) : its ok jeethani jiii I dnt have any complaints… she stressed… swara face hung… she knw she was the reason for this… she controlled her tears and nods… Rags feels heavy in her heart as she knw she doesn’t gv any option to her shona…
Sanskar raised his eye brow looking at kids… kids bow down thr heads as they hide PTA from him… he
smiles and extended his arms… soon swayam Iniyaa sanskrit runs towards him with a big grin… he lift swayam and iniya in his left and Right hand and looks sanskrit… Sanskrit crossed his hand around his chest and turns his face aside…
Sanskrit: I knew u forgot me… god here none loves me… he said dramatically and wipes his fake tears…
Sanskar chuckles: Oye dramabaz u r just lyk ur papu… enough of ur drama, look… he bend little…
Soon sanskrit jumped and encircled his arms around sanskar neck… sanskar balancing 3… 3 showers his face with thr kisses… Swaraglak smiles looking at their bond… he make them sit in car with the help of Ragini…
Lak(to swara): come let’s move… swara sighs…
Sans: Lucky I don’t want any kind of drama in front of kids… it’s better… he opened car front door to lucky…
Lak: but… Sans: dont wry will call driver and ask him to take that car…
Laksh nods and silently sits and gv one look to Ragini who was sitting with kids in back seat… sanskar goes and sits in driver seat… swara stands still, she looks sanskar, expecting him to call her but without bothering anything he ignite engine and waits for her to sit… Swara angrily stamps her foot and leaves to another car in which swalak came…
He only asked to not do any drama but what was he doing… Laksh nods his head in disbelief and runs behind swara…
@ Swalak,
Swara caresses her tummy… Swa: u bcm unlucky being with me… I’m sorry beta I can’t gv u, ur papa love… he doesn’t love u bz of ur mumma… tears fell on her cheeks…
Lak: Oye liar, stop lying…( laksh wipes her tears and leans to her tummy…) champ do u hearing me, huh ur mumma is such an liar, look ur laksh papa here na… he will shower all kinds of love to you.. I love you lot…
“And Ur bhai also love u soooo much chotu” little voice heard from back seat…
“Swayam” both swalak said turning thr head surprisingly… he peek his head to front seat and kissed swara tummy…
Swayam: Ur bhai loves you so much chotu… he shows extending his hands… laksh takes him in his lap…
Swa: even ur chotu loves u sooooooooo much…. Swara said caressing his hair…
Swayam: only chotu 🙁 but I love you, chotu papu ji…
Swa: thn wat abt ur maths miss… swayam rolled his eyes… swalak chuckles… swayam pouts…
Swalak: aww mera baccha We 3 also loves u lot… both kissed his cheeks and shows thr cheeks to him… he wonders whom to kiss first… finally he leaned and kissed swara tummy… swara laughs looking at his antics and takes him in her lap…
Lak: that’s like my school girl…
Swa: Huh… I’m not school girl… Idiot lucky…
Lak: just now I saw… he chuckles… She gv him her signature angry look…
Laksh and swayam laughs looking at her… swara pouts…
On the other side,
Sanskar is already upset with swara… now even after he told, both swalak doesn’t listen him… “dnt they knw, it will affect kids” his angered rosed in peek which is clearly shown in his face…
Iniyaa hoped from back seat and kissed sanskar cheeks tight… soon his angered vanished and a huge smile adored his lips… just lyk someone did magic on him… after swara She is the only one who can control his anger and she knw that magic very well…
Iniya: love you angry bird papa… she encircled her arm around his neck…
“I love you more” sanskrit shouts possessively… Rag-san chuckles at his act… he is just carbon copy of laksh over possessive with his loved one.. they nods thr head…
Sans: Love you both… he starts car…
Ragini takes both of them in her embrace and kissed them…
She turns her head to window watching outside thinking about Laksh and her moment… how much he pamper her but now he doesn’t ready to look her… did he changed or her view changed… what she did..? can’t he forgive her..? tears drop fell from her eyes… Sanskrit wipes her tears with his little hand…
Sanskrit: Ragu ma, pls dnt cry… Iniya: plomise we’ll be good… hain na sansu bhai… he nods, both pinches thr throat in order to promise her…
Rag overwhelemed hearing them… she may have some misunderstanding with laksh and swara…
Rags: aww ur ragu ma isn’t crying its just dust weny to her eyes…
“Sacchi” sanskrit and iniya asked innocently…
She wipes her tears and nods… Both Kissed her cheeks… she kisses them back…
Sanskar witness this from front mirror and smiles…
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If at all u guys doesn’t read season 1 that’s ok… it will be new to u all.. suppose if I show any scenes from season 1 will add in fb…. shreeyu now ok na dear ☺☺
Iniya- swasan daughter…
Sanskrit and swayam- Raglak twin sons…
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Finally posted first epi… how many of u angry on me…?I knw I’m late and that too with boring chappy, sorry…. I’m pity girl, forgive me… 😀 😀
Nd thala big sorry to you, I show so much of tantrum to post this… sorry?
Thank you all☺☺
# Nive…
46 Comments
nice..
Really awesome
Nice
Nice
Hai nive/navi akka i am confused i dont know which is your correct name.how are you….finally you posted your first part is was soo super…I hope you remember me if then I am asha last you will help me in maths last time ……because I am too week in it will you help me ……?????for this epi
Welcome back nive..missing ur ffs so much..awesome chapter waiting for swasan story…if u can pls upload love beyond ages ff also
Awesome dear
Awesome
Oo dear Sat hpnd btwn swasan nd raglak….pls unite dem dear sooonnnn…
Really nice ….can u give me the link of season 1???
Omgggggggg such a sweeeeeeet storyyy yaaar….awww!!!!!damnnn fabulous…Raglak r having some misunderstanding ..hmm!!..d kids r reallly cute hehe.. Iniya is cho chuweet + shez a girl,so I love her d mostesttt heheheh? swayammm hahahahahha u r sooo good yaar,such a smart boy???…N Sanskrit ahh!!baby I jst love u..hehehe u r jst like ur lucky daddy???….sanky’s bonding wid d kids n rags is sooo adorable…swalak bonding is damnnn cute…N m realllly curious to know dat wt misunderstanding is dere btween raglak n swaragini????….rags charecter is superbbb???u potrayed her really well!!!….
Sry bt I haven’t read season 1 n now m really regretting for it…
Bt for sure I”ll read dis season????
Ur writing style is sooooo interesting dr.
U r a total package of entertainment???
Reallly loved d uodate soooo muchh..
Plz post nxt part soon..N dr may b I can’t able to comment regularly as my xamz r near..so advance sry for dat.
Keep rockng n stay blessed sweety???thnx a lotz for such entertaing story..?
Welcome back Nive..Nice update!!
Waiting for next part…
Love it
Read season one recently in wattpad and here and loved it a lot
Awesome…
Super I lovedthis chapter and I loved the way you are season 1 part also iam waiting for the next part please update soon
Finally u posted
Lovely chappy
Ok so something happened between the love birds
Plz post love beyond ages also
Oye nive you are so great yaar.Ennama epidural.The episode was marvellous ?????????.A few months back I read the ff the way you are season 1 in 2days.It was beyond words.Actually before and all I don’t read you ff especially I don’t know you.That’s why I kept my name “nive”.One day navi messaged me thinking it’s you.From there I got know about you especially I got Thala that is our scooby as a friend.Directly thank you for giving us a beautiful ff.Indirectly thank you for making me know about scooby.I love you so much ???????100 kiss from your sisy on cheek ??? I love the way of your writing I love the way you are writing the way you are are The title is exactly matches to you too??
Nice I loved it
It’s absolutely oky Nive… It was awesome dear…. Really curious to know the mystery behind their behavior… And yes u r late… U shud get punishment for that na… Oky then if u would be late again I’ll snatch all your chocolates… Post soooooooon… Loved it!!..!!!??
Amazing…. Plz post soon..
Could u plz give summary or link of season 1…
Awesome dear loved it……I waited for this ff so long….finally u posted…..update next part soon dear……
waaaaa… i missed the promo one
*waiting navi to give her big pinch
Niveeee… huaaaaaa.. you made them separated *fainting
Why r u waiting to pinch me micu????
you asked me on Nive’s promo huh!
tooo bad i didn’t know it before..aaaarrrgghhhh unlucky me !!!
Ouch its paining micu???? jokes apart ??
Thank u for posting this chapie and sorry is not accepted..
Amazing loved swalak too core??????? swara cried??? punch on sanskar face???? laksh flirting with science teacher?? swayam gave letter omg ?? fabulous chapie ??
If u cn bring my frnd here aftr few epis “ani” missing him….
Thnk u for posting it ?
R uh my granny??? Navi grannyyyy???
Hi nanny ????
It me nly….
Granny but ur username was navi na?? How come this?? Second id??
Nd granny uh r nive di friend na..then plz says her na to love beyond ages nd part 1 of this ff please granny do it!!! Beat her nd make her write otherwise i will nt talk to uh ????????
Semma epi ??????
Sirichu sirichu vaayiru vazhikkuthu??????sanky rmba pannuran???????…swara rmba alavakiran….nxt one soon?????
Omg!!!! Sema epu Nivi…. Kalakita po…. Swasan and raglak thani thaniya irukangala?? Ayayo…. Sekiram post panu nivi….. Love after ages um post panu…. Waiting
Awesome
Loved it dear
Loved it…
Plz clear misunderstandings between Swasan n raglak
AWESOME