Hello everyone..this is simran…sorry for late update…i had to reset my phone due to some issues and I had lost all the episodes I had written…am giving a short update today..next will be a long one…
lets start with the story.
Recap: Ragsan moments. Ragini reached Mumbai.
Ragini reached gadodia house..everyone greeted her and welcomed her..
Ragini: Dadi, how are you. I missed you all very much.
Dadi: Iam fine.we missed you too…now you are here..i will fulfil all my wishes. Afterall now grandma of maa…hainaaa guddia…she took misti ( baby) in her arms and cuddled her..
Sharmistha: Ragini you go and get fresh..swara will take care of misti.
Ragini nods and went inside..
She calls sanskaar.
Ragini: Hello.
Sanskaar: Hello Ragini.. Had you reached..
Ragini: Yes sanskaar I had reached home…and we didn’t faced any problem..you don’t worry..
Sanskaar: I worry about my life..
Ragini smiles..: So what are you doing.
Sanskaar: Till now I was waiting fir your phone call, now I will go to office..you tell how is everyone at home.
Ragini: Everyone is fine..
Sanskaar: How is misti. Say her papa is missing her very much..
Ragini: Misti is fine…misti is saying me and mumma is missing papa very much..
Sanskaar smiles: So y mumma went home leaving papa alone?
Just then sumi enters, Ragini come fast. Have snacks..
Ragini: Ji maa…sanskaar I will talk to you later..okaayy…bbiee…
Sanskaar: Okay.. Byee.. I love you.
Ragini: I love you too ?
Ragini had a quality family time spent.
At night, in swaragini’s room,
Ragini was cuddling misti.
Swara: Dii, you want to drink coffee?
Ragini smiles and says no..
Swara: Okay..want to eat cake?
Ragini: No.
Swara sadly: Okay di. Aaaaaaa…….dii tomorrow we will go for shopping..okay..
Ragini: Swaraaa calm down..what happened..what you want to say to me..
Swara smiles: Diii, actually i,met laksh. And he asked me about our marriage.
Ragini: Okayy…so you want me to talk to papa.
Swara: Haan di.. Am afraid..i cannot talk to him..you have to talk..
Ragini: Okayy swara..i will talk to him..
Swara excitingly hugs her: I loved youuu dii..you are the best…..
Ragini: I love you too..and misti loves you too…
Swara: Ohhh my baby…maasi,loves you too….
Then they both played with misti….
No precap.
AN IMPORTANT MESSAGE
i want to convey an important message to ragsan as well as swasan fans..please read with patience..
Firstly, this ff is a combination of many movies as I had told you earlier many times…but I had only taken the concepts from different movies..my way of presenting will be different…so tell me till now though my story is common, nothing new in it..don’t you enjoy it? Is my way of presenting till now is not different from those movies..plzz do reply me..i need to know so that I may not disappoint you all in future….
Secondly, for all swasan fans, in my ff swasan phase is starting now..so plzz comment and tell me is there anyone who is reading this story and is a swasan fan….
Third., from starting only I said that first it will be ragsan and then swasan..and many of my readers had guessed the story… But now I had read comments my readers don’t want me to kill Ragini…and even I don’t want to disappoint anyone..i understand…but this was my plot…if I don’t kill Ragini, then my story will be a boring one…and I have no other way to make it swasan….i had thought a lot upon it…i didn’t find other way…..
Now I had got two options and you can choose what you want among the two..
First: I will kill Ragini in this ff. But only her character will end..her role will not end..she will play a major role in uniting swasan…
Second: I will end her role temporarily and then she will return…but after returning, her character may turn into negative if my story needs so..
I pefer first one…..but my preference is of no use..your prefernces matters..,now you have to decide what you want..my final decision will be on your choices……because am going to end ragsan part, my last episode was full of ragsan scenes if u guys had noticed…I tried my best and will try to Improve further.
So now my story will shape according to your choice..if you guys want, I will end this ff incase you don’t like my ff.
Guys am writing this ff for you..so that you can read..you can enjoy..i don’t want to disappoint anyone…
Plzz everyone reading this comment and let me know your choices….silent readers plzzz do comment and tell me what you want……
I will wait for everyone’s comment till ..and then will upload my next episode…because for me your preferences matters.
65 Comments
Its nice yaar…i think u should go with the story as u planned…ur ff is nice…
1st one is good
I am a SwaSan fan and reading it from start… Its jst amazing… Continue with ur plot.. Loving it a lot…
I dont think it ll be good to turn Ragini negative so i too prefer first option…
Nice do what u wnt nd present the plot in your style as a ragsan plot i will miss the pair
hey i prefer d first one
1st option is better
no no pZ dont end it da track of story is impressive & coz i am a big fan of swasan so im eagerly waiting fr dat part let dat part be big . waiting fr da twist in tale im sure it will be v interesting
I am sry to say this i dont choose none from your option
Wat will happen to laksh then
Dont change pairs as your wiah
Lossing love is worst face in any one life.
Swara wants to take care of rags baby then no need to marry sanskar.
She can marry to laksh and can look after her also..
If u want to kill .kill her and laksh also.
Then make them swasan marry
Ya am ok with aliya option here both the pair’s r in deep love if u want to kill ragini wat abt laksh & if it’s abt misti let’s swalak tc of her r with any twist pair the raglak with swasan I know it’s really bad option..
But it is a bad option. Am reading it from 3rd episode n i not find any relation between raglak.
Sry yar i dont like any option
Its your story ur wish
And u already decided to kill rags ..
This ff is very sweet but ur 2option also I didn’t liked. really on going track was well fine to carry on but I remember starting itself u mentioned that this is sanswa but it’s not fair ya after showing this much of ragsan now u want to separate r kill ragini it’s not looking fair.. I dnt like 2option also & I had no any other option also if I get it I suggestion by next comment..
if u want to kill her means it’s not required of this love u want to show here.. by showing this much love now if u kill means not ready to accept it ya..
1st is better from two options but here ragsan and swalak true love so its bad to to sperate them if u kill rag then what about laksh if swara marrys sanskar
SORRY IF I HAD HURTED U AS U LIKE COZ IT IS UR STORY THIS IS JUST MY OPTION
Hey simran. Am a silent reader of your story. I don’t want Ragini to be killed. But on the other side if u had thought something, that is also right. You are right, u have to shape your story. And in movies also directors kill heroine and we had no option. So its your choice u can do whatever u want. We are readers and we have no right to create boundaries for your thinking. Am with you. Do whatever u want. I love your story.
I agree wid u Elena. Simran tumhe jaisa theek lge waise kro.. I like your story..pllzz don’t end it. We have no right Ki hum tumhe story change krne ko bole. 1st option is better.
U just replied to ur own message? u and elena are the same person
sory but ur options r not good if u kill ragini and swasan ger married then what about laksh. Plslz let it be ragsan and swalak don’t want swasan their r already so many swasan ffs go with some different idea where swalak and ragsan be together like kill ragini but bring her back and laksh can have some connections with maheswaris so he can enter MM and swalak can unite and u kill ragini also if laksh is in mm swalak can unite and swara can take care of mishiti ….. Sory if i hurted u i just kept my opion love ur ff ……………..
i hate it i hate both the options bye to ur ff
no yaar it is not nice i actually want ragsan i am swasan fan only but this story i want ragsan plz try to understand
ur both option is hurting me i don’t want . u can continue but i will not read it
i should stop reading ur ff
I HATE YOU.
I hate your name..your story …not because am a ragsan or a swasan fan, I hadn’t read any,of your episodes and I will never read it…
So better you stop writing it….who gave you an idea of writing a fan fiction. Don’t you have brain,.? I don’t know why everyone else is reading your fan fiction…….i don’t care anyway. Just a plead DONT WRITE AGAIN. loser….n noone need to say anything to me, am right..she should not write..a loser writer.
Dear pooja, if you don’t like her story den don’t read it..go away.. Noone is forcing you to read it. And who are you to ask her not to write again. It is her choice. Don’t you have manners..you don’t know her then how can you say this much to her. Ms.pooja infact if this is your behaviour then noone will read your fan fiction If you write it ever..so dear carry your hatredness with yourself..and go.. Noone will listen to you.
U just stop now…u r the same person using different names and replying to ur own comments
Lila…i guess there is a prob in replying to any of her comments…as all r giving same logo but totally different views……they r opposing and bashing eachother…how come they r one person?
I will chose 2nd option nd dear dont end for some readers in starting only u said na that it will be swasan so dont need to end be ause now we want swasan
its ok Simran u carry on with ur story……i am a Ragsan Fan….but its ok u have already decided ur story…….yeah but both options are hurting….neither we dont ragini to be killed nor we want her to be in Negative role…..i dont knw wat to say…….i knw that Ragini will die but plzzz give some imp role to laksh …its my request ……
ur story is awesome
Simran didi, am a silent reader of your fan fiction. And plzz don’t end it. Write your story as you had planned. I feel sad for ragini and laksh but its okay…you are always right. Not all love stories are completed.
Ur not a silent reader….u were being rude before saying u hate her in the name of pooja and preeti
areh….app kitni buddhu ho…..y r u commenting with different names? And that too so many views? Koi bhi ek dusre seh nehi milta hai…ek meh bash karrahi ho aur dusre meh useh oppose kar rahi ho…seriously……
that is her story who are u to say pooja just be in limits dont cross
simran dont feel bad for her stupid comments u carry on with ur story
u carry on with ur story i will not read ur ff
both ur opition is not nice ia very good bye to ur ff
good bye simran and to your ff also
your option gave me a big shock i thought u will plan something to make swasan untie but not these things from first itself u should have done it i mean before their marriage see u r hurting many fans including me i like swasan but not by killing or negative ragini . then wat about laksh yaar . its not fair yaar srry to hurt u
its nice yaar.. don’t think anything and go along with ur plot yaar…
Ya she should not lisen to any one except swasan fans remaining all are idiots and stupid …right
To bring swa and san
U can kill ragini and just desappear laksh
Swasan fans all were right .
Rags should die so that u can get peace by seeing swasan together.
I had no issues with swara but u people make people like us to hate her .
Wat ever it is enjoy swasan ff.
I hope when u face same situation of loosing love then u will understand….
Ha ha ha u r right abhi
Sorry uday
Good one sindhu.
well said
God have been waiting for Swasan finally
Hey simran… Don’t worry about comments…. B’coz doz who bash u, r ragsan nd ragini fans… Everyone have dear on choice… So dey can’t accept it….u alrdy told dt first it w’ll be ragsan den swasan… So u carry on with ur plot.. Many of us with you.. Actually I’m silent reader.. I know many ragsan nd swalak fans w’ll not read swasan nd raglak ffs nd vice versa….. They choose their choice so don’t worry abt it…
Hey simran…. Many of them saying dt , if u change de couple… Dey w’ll stop reading .. Bt from de beginning itself u said dt first ragsan den swasan forever…. So don’t mind about dem… Write as u plan…. U can’t satisfy everyone…. I can also say dt .. If u not change de couple every ragsan and swalak fan support u nd swasan fan bash u.. Its normal so don’t worry abt it… Actually it is a diffrnt story line…. Carry on as u said….