HII GUYS!! THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS! SO HERE IS THE ELEVENTH PART OF MY STORY!! AND ARE YOU GUYS ENJOYING IT??? PLEASE DO COMMENT!! SO HERE WE GO!!!! IWANT TO CONVEY MY MESSAGE TO EVRYONE THAT I AM GOING TO CHANGE SANSKAR SOON AS PER YOUR REQUEST! ANOTHER THING I AM THINKING TO END THIS FF AFTER CHAP15! BECAUSE I DO NOT WANT TO DRAGIT MUCH. IT STARTED WITH REVENGE AND WILL END IN LOVE SOON! HOPE YOU ALL ARE OKAY WITH MY DECISION!
Swara: Sanskar.
Sanskar rushes to her and holds her hand.
Swara:I know Sanskar you are lying. You love me. I can see that in your eyes. You can be fake. Your love can be fake. Your care can be fake. But your eyes can never be fake. Why you came running to me when I called you if you don’t love me??? Why tears are there in your eyes to see me in this state?? You don’t love me right?? Mr Sanskar Maheswari this is love. You love me but your ego is not letting you admit it. I will not sign those papers and stay here and bear your every torture. I promise I will bring out that Sanskar within you whom I love. The real Sanskar.
Sanskar frees her hand and goes away. He stops at the door when he hears her telling something.
Swara: Please don’t tell this to the family. They won’t be able to bear these.
I wore your promise on my finger for one year
I’ll wear your name on my heart til I die
Because you were my boy, you were my only boy forever
Sanskar goes to a room and closes the door. He takes out his phone and again glares at Swara’s pic and say yes!!! I wanted revenge but not at the cost of losing your life. I owe you. I want to make you realize this every day. Every single moment. Your pain has just started .
He again goes back to his room and sees Swara standing infront of the mirror. He goes to her, put his hands around her waist,turns her and pins her to the wall and says you have two ways Divorce me and go live your life. Or else Stay here and bear my torture lifetime.
Swara: I chose the second option. I will stay here and bear your every torture without uttering a single word. I will see hoe extend will you go for your revenge.
Sanskar releases his grip and goes to sleep. Swara hurted by his strong and powerful grip cry slowly . she goes to the other side of the bed and sleeps. she forget to lock the door.
Maybe I was destined to forever fall in love with people I couldn’t have. Maybe there’s a whole assortment of impossible people waiting for me to find them. Waiting to make me feel the same impossibility over and over again.
MORNING:
Ragini is about to knock the door when she notices it is open. She opens it and sees Swara lying in Sanskar’s arms. She feels good and without disturbing them she goes away.
Sanskar gets up first and sees Swara in his arms. He lifts her head and make her sleep comfortably. Swara gets up.
Swara: What are you doing??? Are you taking the advantage of my sleep??
Sanskar: Have you lost it? You are not supposed to open your mouth infront of me.
Swara nodes like a obedient wife and goes.She comes down wearing a peach coloured saree.
Ragini: What is the matter Swara? Today there is a special glow on your face?
Swara: Nothing Ragini.
Ragini: Don’t conceal anything from me. Actually I saw you sleeping in Sanskar’s arms. You both wre looking very cute together. Swara blushes.
Parineeta: Swara and Ragini, there is a good news!!
Ragini: What bhabi?
Parineeta: Today one boy is coming to see our Uttara.
Swara: Which means it is our turn to tease her!!
Sujata: Enough of your celebrations. Now lets do some preparations.
NIGHT TIME!
Swara is waiting for Sanskar near the dinning table.
AP: Swara yo please do your dinner. We have no idea when will Sanskar return. You don’t starve yourself for him.
Swara: Its okay badi maaa!! I will wait for him. you go and sleep.
Ap pat swara’s head and goes.
Sanskar comes! Swara make him sit on the dinning table and feed him with her hands!
What do you do when the one person you want comfort from the most is the one who caused your pain? How can I want so desperately for him to wrap me up in his arms but also want so much for him to leave me alone
Suddenly Sanskar comes and hold swara by her waist. He kisses her bare back. Swara is unable to understand wheatear to protest or not. She keeps silent! Sanskar cups her face and kisses her forhead. He says- SWARA I AM SORRY! Swara is overwhelmed to hear this! She hugs him. Just as she hugs him, she smells alcohol. Now she is clear that he is not in sense. His alopolgy was not true. A tear rolls down her face. She makes Sanskar sleep on the bed comfortably. She covers him with a blanket . Swara cares his hair and says Sanskar, you are not that bad which you are claiming to be. I will bring out that love which you had named into revenge.
76 Comments
Awesome girl
thank you so much!
i am ok with your decision if you start a new ff… is that okay??? nice update…
yes dear!! I will start a new ff for sure!
super dear
thanks riya!
Nice yaar
Thank you for your valuable support
I realy like this story
Thanks nidhi
nice dr
thank you so much! 🙂
Yaar pls….. Continue its superb next epi plsssss
i cant drag it much!
Please don’t end dear. I just love your fiction please don’t end
sorry! but I will be back soon with a new ff!
Loveee it ?
thank ew so much! 😉
Superb dear I really love it.
thanks a lot!
nice twist yaar… i m impressed…keep rocking
thanks! 😉
Pls write d next one soon(vry nice!!)
sure dear! 🙂
Wow shona u r awesome
Thank you Hayathi to shower your love!!
Awsm sanskar is fllng for swara …plz dnt end so soon…give some mmts some quality tym of swasan n raglak..plz..?
i will try my best to stand up your expectations
nice
ty akku
pls pls don’t end dear
i have to end it!
Very good episode yaar
thank you Tania
swara was great….
dont end it too fast as sanskar cant change so soon
okay! As you wish
Amazing jyoti its fab i wish u were d writer of swaragini script
thank you so much Shreya! 🙂
Just loved it…..
thanx
Hey nice…
Pls don’t end d ff…
Give them some quality time to them…
U r a good writer dea… while reading we feels it’s real story…not ff..
I have to end it! I can’t drag it much or else it will loose its originality
Yeah…I agree with you
Pls come back with bang…with nayi soch nayi kahani…:-)
Fab????
thank you so much dear!
Jyotti u r awesome?
I feel u story is way better than the original one…
Keep up ur good work… ur writing skills r too good…
thanx sania to shower your love and affection
Superb episode yaar
thanx surbhi 🙂
very nice episode….plz update nxt episode very soon
nxt part is coming soon
Awesomeeeee.
If u want to finish this ff then u can but please comeback with ur new ff
Yes dear i will be back with a new ff
Hey jyoti! Thanks dear for next update and please dear make it long! I eagerly waiting for next and dont end it so soon dear! And I read 40 episodes of im yours it means im dragging my story? ?
Nooo nooo!! you are not
dragging your story!! it looks like it has
just started!! coming back to my story
when i had started it i had planned that
it will be of 15 episodes!!
Thanks dear and please continuous your ff! Because its really good
hey..plz Dont end soon yar I like to read ur ff very much dear.. today swara just rocked..one request jyoti u kn wt I used to make my bf jealous by showing my crazy love for SHAHID..??. plz jyoti if u read my this comment plz put small seen in which swara will also show her love for shahid and sanky will get jealous..plz
sure!! intact I was also thinking that!!
Nooo nooo!! you are not dragging your story!! it looks like it has just started!! coming back to my story when i had started it i had planned that it will be of 15 episodes!!
i feel like you copied from iss pyaar ko kya naam dhoon part 2 which shows the story like u r narrating.if i’m wrong sorry dear ….it’s just my thought
sorry but i never watched that serial!! i dont have any idea abt that story plot