Hey guys! So I am here with the first chapter of this fiction! đ I will be waiting for your feedback! Please do give your feedback after reading the chapter! You know I am continuing writing after almost 5 months so I feel ki my writing have detoriated a lot. But please adjust with it.. I promise I will soon be back in form đ
CHAPTER 01 đ
A beautiful girl in her late 20âs was playing with the kids outside a badi. All the kids were enjoying her company. She had a charm that attracted everyone towards her. She was real beauty-fair and flawless skin. Her most beautiful feature was her eyes which can make anyone fall for her. Her eyes were sparkling. Her smile can bring the world to a standstill and was enough to lighten up the whole Kolkata. She was extremely beautiful, so much that no one could ever get tired looking at her. She was an extreme feminist who believed that all men are equal. She always prepared to stay inside the house for reasons better known to her. Her father and her sister were her strength. Even she was always taunted by her step mother but she respected her a lot. She was a girl building a firm of foundation with the bricks thrown at her. Dreams meant world to her.
âSwara didiâŚ. Maa is calling youâŚ..â Raginiâs word remained incomplete as she took pause to breathe.
âShit! Maar gayi!â, Swara hit her hand on her forehead.
They both ran to their house.
âJii maa,aap bula rahe the mujhe?â Swara asked.
âWhere were you? who will wash the dishes and cut the evegetables?â said Sharmistha angrily.
âI will do itâ, Swara said in a low voice.
âAfter doing that sweep the houseâ,her mother instructed.
âMaa,I will sweep the house. Why will didi do so much work?â Ragini asked.
âShut Up! You go and study. Let her do work. She is an orphan not youâ,Sharmistha said.
âMaa baba is her real father.. Didi is not orphanâ, Ragini said sternly.
As Ragini was again going to say anything Swara held her hand signaling her not to speak anymore.
Tough Swara and Ragini were step sisters but they shared a bond like real sisters.
Swara silently did all the works which her mother had asked to do.
After dinner, she picked up everyoneâs plates and placed it in the sink to the wash.
âDidi, why do you always work so much?â Ragini asked sitting on the slap near the sink.
âRagu, this is also my house. I donât need any reason to work in my houseâ, Swara said happily.
âYou are great didi. I will also work. Tell me how can I help you?â Ragini said tucking her hairs back her ears.
âNo need. You go and sleepâ, Swara replied.
âDonât make me feel like I am adopted. I am also the daughter of this house like youâŚ.â, Ragini said sadly.
âRagini what are you doing here?â her mother asked.
âMaa! I was just helping didiâ, Ragini replied.
âHow many times do I need to tell you that you should not work? Swara is there to work nahâ, Sharmistha said.
âMaa why do you always treat dii like a mere servant? Wo bhi iss ghar ki beti hai like me. Why donât you love her?â Ragini asked.
âShe is not my daughter. She is not your real sister. She is just a burden on us. May God remove this burden soonâ, Sharmistha said and went.
Tears rolled down Swaraâs eyes. She silently completed her work crying. Shekhar who was watching all these standing near the door felt very bad for her daughter. He felt helpless/
âKya ban gayi hai meri beti⌠That girl who used to be very strong is now so weak. Why Go? That incident have affected her very much. I hope to see my old Swara back â, Shekhar prayed to God.
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âRagini,can you please give me your laptopâ, Swara asked.
âHaan didi, take it. Itâs yours also. You donât need my permission,â Ragini said.
âThank youâ, Swara said passing a smile.
âWese what are you doing?â Ragini asked.
âI am searching for jobâ, Swara replied slowly.
âJob? But you donât like to go out nah?â, Ragini asked.
âI have to. I donât want to be a burden on anyoneâ, Swara replied sadly.
âDidi you are not a burden on usâ, Ragini said consoling her.
âBut for maa, I am a burden. I just want to help herâ, Swara said.
âMaa is so unlucky to ignore a daughter like youâ, Ragini said hugging Swara.
âBass ho gaya.. Ragu! Help me nahâ, Swara said.
âBoloâ
âThere are two companies which matches my criterias,which should I opt for?â Maheswari and Sons or SMT InfoTech?â Swara asked.
âUmmmm⌠go for Maheswari and Sons. I have heard that their boss is so hotâ, Ragini teased Swara.
âShut up! Shameless! Then I will definitely apply for SMTâ, Swara said.
âNo didi suno jokes apart go for Maheswari and sons. they have better scope and facilities than SMTâ, Ragini said.
âAre you sure? Swara asked to confirm.
âYesâ, Ragini nodded her head.
âApplied. I just wish to get a confirmation call soonâ, Swara prayed.
âDonât worry. You will get it. after all you M.Com gold medalist in your universityâ, Ragini hugged Swara.
âOkay now sleep. Itâs very late. Good nightâ, Swara said.
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âRagini are you sure I will get the call nah?â Swara asked.
âYes didiâ, Ragini said.
âBut I am feeling very strangeâ, Swara said.
âChiillll diiâ, Ragini assured her.
Swara passed a smile.
Just then Swaraâs phone ringed.
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âYes! I am Swara Gadodiaâ
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âHaannâ
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âSeriously? I made it?â
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âThanks I will be on timeâ
Swara kept her phone down and looked at Ragini. Ragini hugged her and congratulated her.
âWhen is your interview? Ragini asked.
âThey have sent a mail regarding all the informationâ, Swara said.
âLetâs go and checkâ, Ragini said rushing for the laptop.
:Dii interview is at 4pmâ, Ragini said.
âOkay let me cook the lunchâ, Swara said.
âDidi you go and prepare for your interview, I will cook the lunchâ, Ragini said.
âNahi! maa ko pata chalega toh she will scold meâ, Swara said.
âDii chill yaaar! Kuch nahi hoga. Your Ragu will manage everythingâ, Ragini said assuring her.
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âDii get ready itâs already 2:30pmâ, Ragini said dragging Swara to their room.
âarey itni jaldi kya haiâ, Said Swara.
âssshh! Let me select a dress for youâ, Ragini said.
âummm⌠Haann take this pink kurti and this black jeanâ, Ragini added.
Swara went to the bathroom to change her dress and came out wearing that dress.
âare you sure I should wear this?â Swara asked.
Ragini nodded her head.
Swara combed her hairs and left they open. She did minimal makeup. She wore the ear ring which Ragini had selected for her.
âWoo diii you are looking beautifulâ, Ragini said.
âI guess I am going for an interview ladka dekhne nahiâ, Swara said and hit Raginiâs forehead.
âuff didi you can never change. You will always be dumb as usualâ, Ragini said shaking her head.
Swara touched Shekharâs feet for blessings.
âI just hope this job brings back happiness in your lifeâ, Shekhar said blessing her.
Swara smiled and took her files and went out.
She sat in the auto and bid bye to Ragini and her father.
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The auto stopped in front of the building of Maheswari and sons. She stepped out of the auto and saw the building with many dreams in her eyes!
So done with the first chapter. How is it? Please do give me your feedback! I will be waiting for it! :
#Love_you_all_forever! đ
30 Comments
Loved it…
JoJo yoyo mojoooo….It’s superbb……Post next part soon na…. Waiting 4 swasan meet
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R u dat jyoti who wrote expecting baby? If yes then wlcm back. God i was remembering u today. If u thinking m joking wid u den god swear m serious n see i read ur ff. God kash kuch aur v mang leti ha ha ha. Vry nyc. N sry 4 nt cmntd in s1. Bt i have read s1. Update sn next part.
nice..continue soon..tc..
onething i read ur previous story plz dont show him that even meeting her he is spending time with another girl . bcoz in ur previous story i dont think he was playing gilli danda with shaina on the wedding night of swasan u know what i mean . if he is cheating her after wedding it is not jealousy it is the right would u like any husband to do that i know it is fiction but trying to keep him a little limit will help to get u back and repentance will be easy and ppl will applaud u more . hope u understand my pov
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