Hi, Sarika here….with the 2[b]th and the last shot of the os….. hope you liked and enjoyed my previous shot…..
And BIG thanks to all the one who give me the strength and support through the amazing comments…..LOVE U all…….
Here is the link of previous shot;;
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Swara screams and hugs sanskar…….
Sanskar keeps his hand in the back of swara….
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Lion roars again…
Swara; san..skar…
Sanskar; ha…..
Swara; aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…………
Sanskar; what happen….
Swara points toward his back….
He turns and sees a lion roaring standing in there back…
Swara holds sanskar’s hand tightly….
The lion starts moving towards them…..
Swasan moves backwards and hits a tree….
Sanskar; swara….fastly climb the tree…
Swara nods and climbs up the tree without leaving his hand …
Swara; sanskar…u to climb..fast…
Sanskar{thinks}; no…i can’t climb…if I climb then the lion will also to….i should divert the lion from swara even though risking my life…
By thinking he slowly starts releasing swara’s hold on him….swara shockingly looks at him…
Swara; sanskar….what are u doing….climb up…..
Sanskar releases her hand from him and runs from there……
Lions run in the back of sanskar….
Swara {screams}; sa..ns….kar….
Sanskar runs…lion runs behind him….
Swara screams …… she tries to climb down the tree….but was not able too….
Swara cryingly looks….sanskar going away from her eyesight….
Sanskar stops his running just at the end of a cliff….
Sanskar worriedly looks at the down of the cliff and the at lion…
Lion jumps on to him……………
On the other side…after a lot of effort swara was not able to get off the tree…
Swara closes her eyes and jumps down the tree…..
Before she could fall down….
Two hands protect her from falling…holding safely….
Swara opens her eyes…feeling the touch…
Swara; saa…nss…kar…
Sanskar smiles….
Swara hugs him tightly…
Swara;; liooo..nn
Sanskar; vo…
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Sanskar worriedly looks at the down of the cliff and the at lion…
Lion jumps on to him……………
But sanskar moves away…..and the lion falls off the cliff….
FB ends…
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Swara starts beating him with her hands….
Sanskar; swara…what are you doing……
Swara; how dare you sanskar…how dare you……don’t u didn’t get happy after giving me this much pain……you wanted to give me more pain getting hurt yourself….
Sanskar; swara…i.
Swara; stop it sanskar….stop it….for what are you doing this….you wanted to take revenge from me again….years back I have heard you telling your friend on that day ….” that you will never love me”
Sanskar; swara…it was my childishness that I made u go away….
Swara; no sanskar….i can’t believe you…on that time you did so many dramas of saving me naa….and I believed you…and I had just got pain due to that……I don’t want more pain sanskar…..plz. go away…plz come in front of me and plz don’t make yourself hurt…plzzz….
By saying she pushes sanskar away and runs…
Sanskar{shouts}; I love you swara…
Swara just cries and locks herself in the hut….
After some time….sanskar goes inside the hut and sees swara sleeping in the ground…teary marks was on her cheeks…
Sanskar picks her up in his hand and takes her outside….and make her sleep in the car….
He brings all the thing packed from the house and keeps it in the car….
He starts driving his car….the pain clearly seen in his eyes….
After constant driving for hours…..
They reach Gadodia Mansion….
Sankar gets inside swara’s room with swara in his hands through the window…and make her sleep in her bed….and covers her with the blanket…
He goes near her table and takes a pen and paper….writes something…and leaves from there…
On morning…
Swara is peacefully sleeping under her blanket…..
The sunlight falls on her face…….
She smiles and wakes by rubbing her eyes….
She slowly wakes up from her bed.
Swara{murmurs}; Good morning sanskar…..
suddenly she notices she is her room…..She rubs her eyes continuously to confirm….
Swara jumps out of bed and walks around the room……
Swara suddenly remembers last night ……How she said sanskar to leave her….to not come in front of her…..
swara sits in her bed with a thud……..tears roll down her cheeks….
she remembers …
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Swara running inside the hut cryingly and closing the door…
swara cries holding the door….tears were continuously rolling down her cheeks….
swara; I love you too sanskar….
she cryingly smiles….
swara; I am sorry…I told all that to you now in my anger….because I don’t want to lose you again….Today u risked your life for me….I understood your true love sanskar….i love you….and you to love me truly….now only love will be between us after I confess my love to you tomorrow morning…I will ask you sorry for my words I told you sanskar…now I can’t…because now I am angry at u for risking your life for me……Congrats Sanskar…you just took 4 days to show me your love….but the way you showed me killed me …….
She falls asleep on the ground smilingly and cryingly…..
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Swara; why did sanskar bring me here?…does he leave me by hearing the words…?
By saying she starts throwing the things in her room…She looks herself in the mirror…
Swara in the mirror {shouts} at swara; what have you done swara….you told him to leave….you made your soul leave…..how will you live now swara…how will you…without that true love,….. that was the thing which made you back the old swara…you made him leave your life..now you will live that lifeless life again….
Tears roll down swara’s cheek…
Swara in the mirror ; wow….swara….you spoiled everything…by telling him to leave….years back u pleaded to him to not to leave you..now you let him leave….
swara sits down cryingly…..
Suddenly the paper from the table flys to her in the air….
swara looks at the paper cryingly…and sees sanskar written at the end…..
She hurriedly takes the paper and starts reading…
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Dear swara…oooh sry..dear madamji…..
{swara cryingly laughs }
I am leaving you in your room…because I don’t want anything to happen to you after that incident…..and you also told me to leave you….so…i….will leave you….
{swara cries painfully reading it..}
But just for today…..{swara was surprised..}…ya just for today…I will never ever leave you….wherever you go …I will be there with you…whatever happens I will hold your hand….Whatever you do….I will never leave…and never stop loving you…
{swara smiles happily cryingly}
So….i will be back in front of you soon….till then bye…
From your
SANSKAR….
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She smilingly stands up and looks angrily at that swara in mirror……and throws the flower vase near her to the mirror…breaking it into pieces……
swara smilingly hugs the letter and runs outside her room….
while running she collides with ragini…
Ragini; mam…
Swara; want to see sanskar…
By saying she was to leave…
Ragini; but he is in jail…
Swara{shocked}; what…
Ragini; ya…yesterday night your family saw him and made him get arrested for kidnapping you…..
swara; what…
Ragin; ya…
Swara cryingly runs towards her car and drives to police station….
At police station…
Swara comes running inside police station wiping her tears…
inspector; swara mam…
Hearing swara’s name sanskar looks at her sitting in jail…
swara to painfully looks at him….
inspector; mam…we will make sure he get the right punishment for what he did
swara; yes…he should get the punishment…
inspector smiles..
swara; get him out…
inspector; mam..but..
swara; I said to get him out…
inspector; ok mam…and signals policemen to get him out….
they bring him out….
swara; withdraw the case which has filled…
inspector; but…madam…
swara; do as I say…
inspector; ok…
swara; I will give him the punishment…
swara holds sanskar hands and walks out holding his hand….
sanskar looks shockingly at swara…and walks…
inspector; but what punishment…?
swara turns and then looks at sankar and says…
“in this whole life…he should….
live as ……..my husband ”
sanskar surprisingly, happily and shockingly looks at swara…
swara again holds his hands and goes out…leaving the police in shock…
outside the police station…
sanskar pushes swara towards him and hugs….
both smiles..cries…happily hugs tightly…
Gadodia and Maheshwari family come sees them together and smiles….they came to know everything from laksh,….and they just want their child’s happiness…
they smile at sanskar and swara…
sanskar; I cried a lot BECAUSE OF YOU….I smiled a lot BECAUSE OF YOU…..I believed in Love BECAUSE OF YOU…
Swara smiles at his words..
Swara; are you ready to bear my punishment…
Sanskar happily nods…
Rains starts….
They walk out of the police station…holding each other’s hands…
They get wet in rain and gets Drench in LOVE…..True love…
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THE END
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thanks for reading…hope you enjoyed reading it….
sry if any mistake….
55 Comments
Superb dear
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OH ho bichari swara uska to ro ro ke bura haal ho gaya hoga bechari ki aakhe sooj gay hogi…………..Aur punishment bhi itni acchi bhagvan bhi use ab nai bacha sakta bichara sanskaar………………aur saru dii kya likha aurn ki style me ek dum jhakaas likha hai..super se upar likha hai dii…………
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ooh…sry….*puppy face….
what can i do…before i came to know that it got posted itself you read it and commented….
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no yaar..you should never ask this..?
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you should say “hi…i am your friend ” ?
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Ik hello I am your friend>3 lol ?
haha…nice to meet you my frd .. lol ?
Same here can you read my TS Swasan that train journey two parts are post third will post soon
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