Heyy guyss samaira here back with the second shot thanks a lot for ur comments nd iam really very sorry as it was too short ..
so ..
Lets start:-
Swara after talking with the boy goes to shemish room and wakes them up…
they all go down and decorate the hall very beautifully..
Just then swara goes to her dida s room and wakes her up.. she ties a cloth on her eyes and brings her down..
Just as they remove they fold dida gets very much happy… and shemish and swara shouts..
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAA/ DIDA
Dida- thanku so much this is amazing..
shekhar- this is all done by ur poti..(grand daughter)
swara just smiles..
Dida- love u mera baccha..
Swara- love u too dida ( nd she hugs her)
after breaking the hug..
Swara- now comes ur surprise..
Dida- (confused) surprise wht surprise..
Swara(calls out) nani..
just then frm the entrance nani and sanskar enters..
Dida and Nani gets teary eyed seeing each other..
while our swasan just smiles happily…
Nani- shoru
Dida- nonu
And they both hug each other while few drops fell from their eyes..
Nani- u know shoru ur grandaughter called us from pakistan for ur birthday..
Dida- this is the best gift u gave me swara..
Swara( side hugs) i know dida u always remember nani on urbirthdays.. nd always talk abt her thts y i found abt her and contacted with sanskar this was not possible without sanskar..
Dida- thanku sanskar..
Sanskar smilingly comes towards her …
Sanskar- dida dont say like his infact never a day went when my nani never missed u..
he greets shemish and dida while they just give the blessings…
Swara- ok so no more emotional talks lets cut the cake..
Sanskar- haan haan..
Dida and nani both cut the cake and they feed each other happily..
Nani- u know swara sanskar before the partition of india pakistan we used to always play and stay with each other..
Dida- yess but because of partiton nono s family shifted to pakistan and our family decided to live in india only..
Nani- hmm
Sumi- so after tht u both were not in contact i guess right..
Dida- no no sumi after nonu went to pakistan we still were in contact..
Nani- we used to write letters to each other..
Dida- yeah but then after sometime we lost our contact..
Swasan- hmm
After chitchatting for sometime they go and sleep in their respective rooms….
( nani and sanskar in guest room)
# guys i was just thinking abt the plot u know i think i created 2 very big differences between our swasan first toh hindu- muslim and secondly india – pakistan so thought to make a change just think tht swara and her family r also muslims.. iam really sorry if anyone is hurt.. but still shekhar will be having problem with the PAKISTANIS…
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Lets continue;-
Next morning was something very new as our HEAVENLY couple r going to get
close..
After freshing up an having their breakfast swasan and shoru nonu were in kitchen preparing sweets as dida love it very much..
sumi is still doing her bf. shekhar isnt awake till now.
Kitchen:-
dida and nani r preparing the sweet dish while our swasan r just cracking the jokes..
Shekhar comes for bf and gets angry seeing the scene ..
he silently sits while sumi passes the dish..
shekhar- how can we let the pakistanis be in our house we have no relation with them wht was the need of swara to cal them.. she could just let her talk with maa..
sumi dosent say anything..
Kichen-
our swasan r busy admiring each other .. swara s smile sanskar s jokes and everything…
# guyss dont forgot tht today its still dida s bdh u guys might get confuse so just reminding u all…
After tht all get busy in their respective works..
Evening;
sanskar was sitting in the garden in their lawn while swara comes and brings the coffee..
Swara takes the chair and passes the coffee to him..
Swara- sanskar coffee
Sanskar- oh thanku..
they were just enjoying the cool breeze..
Swara was noticing sanskar as he was noticing al around..
Swara- hmm waise thanks sanskar
Sanskar(confused) for what but??
Swara- for convincing andbringing ur nani here..
Sanskar just smiles.
Sanskar- u know swara i was just noticing the place u know india is also like pakistan only..
Swara-( excitedly and pouts) accha i never knew this u r lucky u visited india i also want to visit pakistan but it never happend…
Swara- say me more abt pakistan na plzz
Sanskar- hmm we dont have much difference swara the style of eating music and everything is samee..
Swara- hmmm
Sanskar- we have like so much in common but still we r so different..
To this swarajust nods sadly..
Sanskar- but i do miss ur bollywood movies and meeting to bollywood actors..
Swara- u like bollywood wow thts gr8 even iam a very big wala fan of it!!
Sanskar- and u know we have one more thing very much common between us..
Swara(curiously) kya??
Sanskar- cricket! like u people have the craze of it we also have..
Swara just laughs..
Swara-(proudly) waise we r toh advance and more better than u in cricket..
Sanskar- accha ji its nuthing like tht our cricket team r also gud they have a gud speed style and everything..
Swara- but they r not handsome as our cricket players like virat kohli..( she says dreamingly)
Sanskar just shakes his head and raises his eyebrow..
Sanskar- i think u never saw shahid afridi..
AND THIS GOES ON…
Next morning:
As usual after getting ready nd having bf .. sumi goes at her mother s place for some work and shekhar on his job.. swara took some days leave..
swasan dida and nani r sitting in hall and chitchatting….
# guys i will post it tommorow and yjhd will also be posted soon…
14 Comments
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Haww sam our cricketers are also very handsome and good in playing . Just kidding . By the way I enjoyed it
thanks first a fall for ur comment im really sorry if ur hurted.. i was just writing itin my way infact i do love ur crickters.. pls dont take it in wrong way..
Nice
Is this story from any TV show, as I know this story… I don’t remembering in which show I saw it may be in ye hai Ashiqui or pyar tune Kiya kya…. But yes I am sure I saw it….. Well I don’t know you said readers that you took concept from TV show or not… But if you not said then you should mention… Well if you said then no problem…. And yes if you taking any concept from show explain in your own way not totally same scenes… Don’t take me wrong just I advised you…..
hey thanks yeah i aldready mentioned tht its from a tv show thanks for telling the show name as i was not able to remember it!! u can check on the 1st shot no no for the prolouge part i mentioned u can check if u want!!
No need to check,… It’s from ye hai Aashiqui I asked my friend….
Well sorry if you felt bad… I just thought to ask you…
Well your presentation is amazing.. if you’re writing other stories on swasan then tell me I’ll love to read… By the way I am anniya, currently I am not log in as usual I forget my password….
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Awesome dear
yjhd I want to read it please
Nice dear
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