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“Shona” a familiar male voice called her name out. The little girl opened her eyes to see her father and mother infront of her.
” happy birthday shona” her mother wished, kissing the girl on side of her head. Her dad carresed her hair and they both went downstairs.
” close your eyes” he ordered and the girl closed the eyes and opened when she is asked to.
” thank-you mama and papa..love you” she hugged them after watching a cycle infront of her
” we love you too dear” they kissed on her cheeks.
Swara opened her eyes only to realise that it is her dream. That was the last birthday of hers with her parents and they died after two months. Her heart became heavy. It is almost midnight and the entire room is dark.
” it’s raining again” she murmurmed completely annoyed by untimely rains. she drank water and turned to her left casually. The lightening brightened the room and she saw a shadow standing near the window
“who is that?” She asked scared. There is no answer. She turned on the main lights and shocked seeing no one in the room. Her palms started become sweaty. She composed herself and wiped the sweat away from her forehead before turning off the lights.
” who is that?” She asked again when she heard someone whispering. She is so scared now and stated chanting hanuman chalisa..she closed her eyes tight.
” happy birthday ” three familiar voices greeted her. She opened her eyes to see sanskar, ragini and laksh standing infront of her with cake in laksh’s hand and the room is brightened with lights.
She closed her mouth with her left hand , tears flowing down her eyes. It is her first birthday after her parents demise.
“Than..thank you” she said between her sobs. Ragini sat beside her, caressing her hairs.
” happy birthday sister” swara hugged her tightly. It is like she really got a family now.
Sanskar and laksh smiled looking at each other.
” will you stop emotional drama and cut the cake?” Laksh said them in a irritated voice which he really didn’t mean to.
“I am famished” sanskar completed him placing his hands on stomach.
Swara smiled at them And she blew the candles. She lifted her head in confusion with a piece of cake in her hand. She strongly wanted to feed sanskar but also laksh and can’t even ignore her new sister.
“eat yourself” sanskar suggested her seeing her face. She smiled and stood up from her place, determined.
She went downstairs followed by the other three
” ramu kaka” she called his name and he appeared infront of her within few seconds
” today is my birthday kaka. Bless me” she informed him and made him eat the cake. His eyes gleamed with happiness and tears came through its way as swara’s.
“Open this” laksh gave her a gift box once they all ate the whole cake. She stared at him with confusion before taking it from his hand. He smiled, genuinely.
She opened the wrapper and found a box. She is really impatient sometime. Without wasting a second, she ripped the box but he blood boiled seeing another box in it. Laksh chuckling increased her temper. She opened the boxes until the number is seven.
” how many more” she shouted at him to which he shrugged, simply.
” by the way, you are such a coward swara. I never expected” he teased. She ignored him ofcpuse she knew that he will pay for that later. Swara’s face became free of creases of irritation when she opened the final box. Her lower lip trembled out of happiness.
” I love you laksh” she whispered, taking her lower lip into her mouth.
“and I love you too” he smiled ” lplease wipe those tears my dear friend”
Swara took out a friend ship band from the box and carressed it.
” then what about me?” Ragini asked srucnching her nose. Laksh totally forget her presence at the moment.
” oh baby, I love only you..I just hate her” laksh tried to console her but she turned to the other side.
” let’s sleep” she said to sanskar wrapping her arm to his and then left. Laksh burned with jealousy.
Swara kneeled down infront of her parents grave seeking blessings from them. The four started their journey early in the morning in car. Swara kept asking all the way about the destination but no one answered. Tears came to her eyes when they reached grave yard. Seriously, she is lucky to have those three in her life.
” don’t lose your strength ” ragini sat beside her. Swara nodded and they went to the car.
” have a nice day dear” ragini said to swara. Seeing her puzzled face, she continued “work, sorry”
Swara nodded unwillingly and three of them reached Manison.
” so, do you have any wishes?” Laksh asked swara. She nodded no but suddenly, something came to her mind.
” laksh ”
“Hmm”
” why did you forgive me?” She asked him because no one can change in overnight. Laksh smiled.
” I was just angry with you that you used our friendship swara. It just needed sometime for me to settle down. And I can’t even loathe you after knowing about your past” he lowered his voice at last.
Swara inhaled deeply ” sympathy, I hate it laksh”
Laksh furrowed his eyebrows and then fisted his hands ” why do you always take words in other direction? This is not sympathy because it is life. I won’t be pity for anyone” he snapped and left the place. Her heart swell for his words. Yes one must be pity for other bit should not even forget that it is life’s game and showing sympathy would just worsen the situation that it is. Laksh is really mature, she thought.
Swara opened her wardrobe to select something special for evening as sanskar said that he had a surprise for her. She opened the door casually but her jaw dropped seeing the stuff. Her dresses are no more inside the closet but are replaced by new ones with tags still on them. She randomly picked a price tag and her eyes widened seeing 14,500 on it.
“Who gave the right to change my wardrobe” she yelled descending the stairs. Sanskar raised his eyebrow before fixing his eyes to laptop.
” will you just answer my question?” She asked him crossing her arms
Sanskar sighed humorously “you really suck at fashion swara. So I just decided to…”
” what’s the need of expensive dresses?” She cut him off completely annoyed but not angry.
” you should learn to live rich” he stated and walked past her “and ha, I am waiting for you in car” with that, he left the room slipping keys into his back pocket. Swara rolled her eyes and followed him and soon they reached police station.
” here is our artist. Just give him the details of the one whom you saw day before yesterday” ragini said to swara pointing an artist who occupied a corner of the room. swara bit her lip nervously but gained courage when sanskar patted her.
” so, how did laksh react about kamala bai?” Ragini asked sanskar when they came out of the room leaving it for swara.
” shocked, depressed ” he shrugged “and finally uttered few philosophical lines about birth and death” ragini chuckled at his words. Sanskar’s mobile rang flashing ‘bade papa’ on it. It has been nearly a one month that he contacted him. He took a deep breath before receiving the call.
” hello papa” he greeted nervously.
” oh, you remember me?” Durga Prasad questioned sarcastically which pained his heart.
” I am sorry..actually… I..I was busy” sanskar fumbled. He didn’t want to say any circumstances happening here that would become a threat to durga Prasad.
” is everything fine there?” He asked ” I called laksh”
Sanskar’s heart skipped a beat. What if laksh had said everything? Of course laksh too didn’t like to inform badepapa
” his voice was nervous and tensed so I call you” durga Prasad ended. Sanskar let out a breath of relief.
” nothing as such papa..take care. Gotta go” he immediately disconnected the call. Deep inside, he felt bad for lying to his own but he did it for the good health of his badepapa’s heart.
” will you come out today?” Sanskar yelled from behind the door.
” more five minutes” swara responded adjusting her hair. She is so excited to see the surprise of sanskar. She chuckled listening the curses given by sanskar outside her room and took a final glance of herself in mirror before leaving but much to her surprise, sanskar is no more. She turned her head to check the corridor but he is not there even.
“Sanskar! ” she screamed his name descending the steps to hall. The entire Manison is quiet and her words echoed from the walks. Sanskar asked ramu kaka to leave early in the evening and she didn’t see laksh after lunch.
” sanskar” she calmed again when something bad came to her mind. To raise her bad thoughts, she saw a boquet of red roses similar to the one she sent to Sanskar in Sydney on kitchen counter. Her heart raced as she approached it. She saw a small note between the flowers.
‘You shouldn’t have be late’
Swara gulped and tiny drops of sweat formed on her face. She tried to compose herself thinking that nothing would have happened to him but her wits are not allowing her to do so. She ran upstaris to her room and is all panting when she opened the door. Her eyes widened seeing another note on bed. She immediately grabbed it.
‘ you need to pay for being late. Come to terrace to see what you are wishing to’
Tears came to her face. What if she gets to see a dead body of his. It would be easy for anyone to kill sanskar as no one is in the house. She stumbled and staggered all the way to terrace. Second by second, she grew pale. Cool breeze touched her cheek when she opened the doors of terrace. The air smelled so fresh.
” this way mam” someone said to her in a very polite way and she opened her eyes just to see a man of some thirty years dressed in white uniform standing infront.
” what?” She asked him totally confused.
” sir is waiting for you, this way” he leaded her to the other side of the terrace. She forgot to breath for a minute at the sight.The blue and metal colored helicopter infront of her looked so huge. She has never seen it so close to her. It had ‘maheswari’ engraved at one end of it. Sanskar is standing beside it dressed in her and his favorite black suit with sky blue shirt. She gulped seeing how handsome he looked.
Sanskar smriked and came forward covering the distance between them.
” ready?” He asked. Swara is still staring him and helicopter with open mouth.
He rolled his eyes and motioned her towards the copter.
“You own a chopper!” She exclaimed. Sanskar smriked at her innocence “ofcourse swara, we lead in business”
Swara sat inside it and he immediately shut the door before walking to the pilot’s seat. She saw him and the man talking something and after few minutes, he is by her side.
She turned to him still not believing what is happening around her. Sanskar smriked at her and gave her a set of head phones.
” but…h..how?” She fumbled.
” you are becoming amnesiac day by day swara” he complained before turning few switches on ” you said to me in early days of our friendship that you dream of having a chopper ride.”
Did she?, well she is really suffering from amnesia.
She glanced around. Her heart is becoming heavy out of happiness thinking how he can eaisly read her like a paper. She felt something getting tight around her waist and looked down. Once again, her breath stopped seeing sanskar leaned to her buckling the seat belt.
” ready?” He asked winking. She is officially dead now. Receiving a faint nod from her her he positioned himself.
” maheswari Manison, MAHESWARI is ready to take off, is everything clear, over” sanskar said to someone through his speaker of head phones.
” yeah sir, the route is clear, over” she heard answer coming out from a speaker infront of her
” you…you are going to fly this?” She asked him with a horror expression.
” of course” he shrugged ” we will use it sometimes when we have to reach places at time” and she understood how they managed singhania’s project.
” does laksh know to fly?” She questioned and he nodded.
” Kolkata tower, MAHESWARI is all set to flight, over and out” sanskar once again said. He sounded so professional and breath takingly hot to swara. Her heart is pumping in her mouth. sanskar turned to her with a smile and placed his palm on hers
” breath” he ordered. She then recognized that she stopped breathing for a while. She felt butterflies all over. The chopper slowly started to raise from its place. Swara screamed out of excitement. She tried to avoid meeting his eyes because she didn’t want to make the atmosphere more suffocating already that it is. Sanskar kept exchanging glances with her and his intense eyes held a emotion, a strong one.
Swara is at the top of Everest with the building happiness inside her. His care, his intensity, his love is all she want for rest of her life. Her palms started becoming sweaty due to pressure as it is her first time to ride in a copter. She turned to window to enjoy the beauty of night. The whole land of Kolkata is bathed with various lights ripping out the darkness that is the color of night. Howrah bridge which is so familiar to her looked strange viewing from high altitude. Hooghly river flowing down the bridge added more charm to it.
Soon they landed on a building probably a thirty storey one.
Sanskar got down and opened the door for swara
” welcome to Mumbai sir” a very young man welcomed them “I hope you had a good time travelling”.he handed some keys to sanskar.
” come” sanskar wrapped his arm around her shoulder to which she flinched.
” it has been two years sanskar. I didn’t visit Mumbai after leaving my orphanage” she sounded like a child with his favourite chocolate in his hand. She tears in her eyes.
They both reached to ground floor through elevator. Another man who looked like a watchman, opened the doors of the restaurant.
” Audi?” She asked surprised.
The same person opened doors for both of them and sanskar started driving.
” it is so uncomfortable for me to be treated like some higher official by your employees ” she said in a low voice completely embarrassed.
He smiled ” you need to learn to live rich swara”
” restaurant? ” she asked him after few minutes of comfortable silence.
” yeah, we have partners in almost all fields of business ”
” but the restaurant name isn’t it MAHESWARI, is it?”
” no, we have our names on what is ours. We are just partners of maria’s group of business of hotels, simple” he explained.
” where are we going now?”
” that is for you to find” he answered sheepishly and her heart again skipped a beat.
Their car slowed down which felt a very know place to swara. She got out of the car followed by sanskar. The whole place is dark. He held her hand and took her inside the house, which she thought to be. Suddenly the lights are on and she saw many familiar faces infront of her.
” happy birthday swara di!” All of them exclaimed. Swara cried now realizing that he brought to her to her home, the orphanage. The decorations looked like a preplanned one.
” happy birthday once again” a chirping voice made her turn back and she saw laksh along with ragini.
” how..how did..I..mean..you” she fumbled. Her vision becoming blur due to dizziness that is in turn because of over happiness
” our India is blessed with air transport my sister” ragini winked. Swara turned to sanskar who is with all others smiling at her. Love is written on his face.
Everything is so perfect now. this is the best ever birthday for her because, life gave her a sister, a friend and a family in name of sanskar after snatching her family from her, tweleve years ago.
I love you sanskar
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A small curiosity. As this chapter is a very light one, I just wanted to know your opinions about the story just to know how successful I am in getting it to your brains.
Whom do you think is back of sanskar and why?
Kamala bai’s murder mystery.
Anyword about kunal or Dean dayal gadodia and do you think they have their fingers here?
Who might be the murderer of swara’s parents? And why?
75 Comments
amazing….just loved it
Thank-you kinnera.
Sree…. Another amazing episode…..
Seriously too good!!
Loved the way it started… the dream then everyone cheering her up.. And Laksh gifting her the friendship band was really cutee…
And Sanskaar’s surprise…. <3 <3 <3 😀 😀 😀
As for ur questions… I'm not going to answer them per se… But for some reason, I can't believe DP…. Idk why… I might be perfectly wrong… But that's what i think…
Anyways… SUPERB EPI… How're you? Enjoying the hols? 🙁
I don't get any until june…
Hey anjli, I am totally pissed off. How dare TU changed my profile picture if acceptance. I struggled a hard to edit it..ugggh
Leave it, this is just a filler but it has some information for future. You will have to wait for it. Even I won’t comment of any of your answer because the curiosity will be lost
Yeah spending happily. Note the sarcasm. Actually suffocated dear. Many works are pending and i am not at all getting time. You said that you will get holidays from may then why did it suddenly jump to June?
Even I am sooo pissed off….
Stupid coll….
Actually the elections are gonna be there in mid may na…
So we were supposed to have exams in the first 2 weeks and finish it off…
But now they decided to postpone it until after the elections..????
So exams finish in may end only ????
Work pending???
Sad….. I am soo confused…. next year I get to choose my core and electives so it’s like a huge choice for me….
Have no idea what to do
I hope you will select the right one next year. Awe so sad. I can understand how it feels when exams vets postponed. We have to study and spend our days at college while others are enjoying their vacation, especially summer
But don’t worry, you will do best on exams and we all are here to entertain you
vansh…may be..he only informed swara. abt rp being murderer of her paremts
Thanks for sharing your view.
Amazing dear..as usual wonderful!! Loved it!!! Love yayy three!! ?
Haha..thank-you so much aashi.
dear it’s amazing…I just want to cry…I cn feel d swara emotions…amazing writing…superb…fabulous…
You shouldn’t cry dear instead feel happy for swara. She has got everything what she needs now.
OK sree.. U write so well..amazing.. I came 2 know about ur ff through anjali and anu.. You three are really good writers..awesome storyline.. Keep it up dear..
Hey richa, thank-you so much. I am glad that you came here to read it and I will surely entertain you.
Finally finally finally! Sree I read ur story and I regretted reading it not before. Its simply awesome 🙂
Loved the mysterious things. And loved Sanskar a lot! It just reminded me about the Sanskar of one of my prvs Fanfic. So selfless, and understanding. But he has this mask of businessman. Angry young man but so timid in front of love. Ahh! I loved him ?
And then I loved the plot. Wondering who might have killed Swara’s parents. It cant be Swara’s grandpa as he can’t kill his own son. Maybe Kunal or Vansh. I don’t know really. But anyway, I know you are going to rock it by unexpected stuff. Just waiting for that.
*Hugs* for being such a nice friend. You and Anjali have become so close in a matter of days. Love you two to the moon! And you are seriously the best writer right now. I always loved ur, Saba’s, Anjali’s, Vini’s fanfics. They are just amazing ♥
Love you too!!! And I agree…. Sree’s the best right now…. :*
Love you bothh…
Never imagined that I would have close friends such as you twooo
Wow an amazing episode. Sanskar nailed it. But the fear which Swara still carries of loosing him gives me same pain. Sanskar’s surprise was out of the world. I hope both soon heal each other’s pain.
Hello dhara di, sanskar is always sanskar and swara will also fear for loosing him because he is the one who gave her the taste of love..they wil surely heal each other but not so soon.
Hey..yipeeeeee. Finally you are here. I thought you will read today but this a surprise for me as I gave for swara. Sanskar is selfless and selfish at the same time. It’s the reason that he didn’t let swara leave him. I love arrogant sanskar more than any other shadr and then intense lover..
Thanks for sharing your views but I won’t answer because it kills your curiosity.
*hugs you back* even I never thought I will get a very good chain of friends here. Thanks to TU for providing a platform for me to get connected with you..love you too anu and of course you too Anjali..
?????? u both….
Haha Sree. I was going through the comments. I loved the story like anything. Love you three idiots Dhara, Anjali and Sree. I’m the fourth one too. An idiot. A big one though ?
May be i m the first to comment on ur ff to day
Sree I m not that much smart but may be din dayal.. Or the 1st whom sanskar behaved rudely in 1st episode.. N to days episode.. Full of surprising.. Loved a lot.. Full of joy n happiness.. N finally everything sort out b/w them.. Lakshya also forgive her I m really surprised that ragini also behave good with her.. N sanskar finally love is blossoming again amid swara n sanskar..
N about ur question.. Full mysterious all the episodes.. N loved ur ff.. N I think something fishy.. Bcs kamlabai’s murder n swara’s parents murder connected..
But in my mind lots of confusions running now..
I don’t know whether I satisfied u about ur que or not but if u feel disappointed so sorry for that.. Bcs I really don’t like CID types story.. But this is amazingly decorated with emotions n twist n turns.. So I can’t ignore that also.. Love u dear..
Keep writing always.. 🙂
Hello dear, if you see, ragini and sanskar are sensible among the four and she is not a heartless person. So, she forgave swara so eaisly. Love is not blossoming dear. It is already present between them but some other emotions dominated. Thanks for sharing views dear
And I am surprised to read that you don’t love detective stories, only few are not interested in them. Don’t worry, I will make it interesting for you.
It’s superb marvellous enjoyed alot nd finally every rift between them is sorted out but still left with many to be sorted waiting eagerly to know everything……..curiosity is increasing day by day
Yeah SWASAN are becoming one now. Don’t worry dear, everything will be sorted with time.
Again a wow chapter. … After reading this I remembered 50 shades of grey. … It had some what same scene… Christian grey said the same to anastansia steele that Learn to be rich… I m nt comparing just saying as I love 50 shades trilogy I just loved this ep… u have read 50 shades … or it just a coincidence….plz upload nxt ASAP. …. swara’s crave for love is being filled by sanskar…. I love the character of Christian grey n how much he loved ana…. just imagining varun kapoor as himm… giving so much happiness can’t explain….
Madam when are you updating your FF? Please update soon I’m waiting too read more on I’m not your husband
Srry sree will upload nxt ASAP. .. actually was really busy… really sorry again
Following your suggestion, I just saw the trailer of fifty shades in YouTube and regretted the next minute. So I just read the story line from Wikipedia dear..seriously, I cannot handle it. Sorry and you will get to know why I have added that line at climax not exactly though of this fiction.
Sree I agree with the thing that movie is aweful… I have watched it n also regreted that I wasted my 3 hrs in it… Dr novel is truely nyc… actually it’s a best seller to… I recommended to read to novel…. hope u will understand. … sorry for giving you an awesome experience. .. I know movie is pathetic
Hey sujatha, don’t take me wrong dear. It’s just I am a bit uncomfortable, you know. I feel inconvient and sometimes awkward when I read a simple scene of a miss so I need to prepare myself really really strong which I cannot. I am rely sorry for disappointing and I can understand why you suggested me.
50 shades.. The BDSM one right? Someone mentioned about it in Saba’s ff. But so sorry this is a mere coincidence and a very much preplanned one. Infact this while ride and few sentences of this episode is base for future story…thanks for appreciation and he asked her learn to live rich because he is born rich. Of course she is born rich bit she has seen other extreme side..did you get the link for future? If not you will understand the reason too. It really plays a key role in climax..that’s what all I can say for now.
Yup same BDSM one… actually it had the same scene in which Christian grey took anastansia steele in his chooper…. n she was a middle class girl so he said the same line…. even though his coopers name was charlie tango n grey enterprises was engraved in it. .. as u too mentioned so I thought u might have adapted it from there. … sree a suggestion If u get tym plz read this trilog u will love it nt bcoz of BDSM bt bcoxz of the intensity of love Christian had for ana if you want I can even give you pdf of all… n waiting for the nxt…
sorry i write this comment on half sleepy so if i disappoint u sorry for that ..
n about late comment in previous one my exams r running but i m not studious type of girl so i read ur ff when u uploaded yesterday.. but i feel so sleepy that after reading i dozed off on bed.. n thank you lots of love.. 🙂
It’s okay dear, I really don’t feel bad about it because studies are more important than any other thing…and I am happy that you are finding my fiction as a relief.. All the best dear and love you too.
http://apne.tv/news_article/Finally!-Swara_Sanskar-to-consummate-their-marriage-on-Swaragini!
FINALLY!
Thanks for sharing the link zoya.
Sree, this is indeed a light and heart warming chapter. Loved it to bits. She finally got a family now along with a man who loves her beyond anything else. The four of them will unfold the mystery behind all these events.
DP is he good or evil is one thing thats bothering me now. Is he really a good guy? And Sanskar and Laksh are more close to him and not RP. Where is he btw?
As for her parents death I’m sure its not RP. Its the same person who is behind Sanskar, who hired Vansh and killed Kamala bhai for the purpose of keeping a secret safe. What is the secret and how is all this connected is the question you should be asking.
I’m waiting to see what your beautiful brain has cooked up for us. Maybe I’ll find some clues in the upcoming chapters and then I can start predicting. Till now you are pretty much tight-lipped.
Hey Sree, finally, the desk phase for swara has finished dear so she must be blessed with what she requires.
DP is on business trip now but surely be will be back with a bang. Until then, keep guessing.
RP is also a mystery but will be revealed soon. Thanks for sharing your views. From the next chapter, the threads start loosening.
Awesome…..lovely episode……
Thank-you aeisha.
Fantastic episode…… D way u described it is really awesome
Thank-you so much nandu. I think you are new here
wow…even I was eager for swaras birthday surprise .. jus nailed it.
Thank-you stoneheart BTW how did you guess that I will add it? You are good at prediction.
I noe u want to show sanskars care towards her… n this is the best way…!!/
Wow..so sweet of you.
Sree wat an epi yaar lovd it n it was too good 2 read it
Thank-you dev..I lived in swara’s charecter today.
superb……..as usual. ….the way u describe omg I had became a fan of you……I really don’t know what to tell dear…totally speehless…..n raglak my god its d best part laksh finally revealed his past….good job…keep rocking dear….
I will keep rocking just because of your support girl. You again hurted me yaar, not fan but friend.
I knw that I am ur friend but from now onwards I am ur fan for ur writings…..oooooo…sry for hurting I didn’t mean that. …
Aww.. the bonding between those 4 was shown soo nicely.. swalak are soo cute when they fight..sanskar’s surprise for swara was superb.. very nice epi.. Great work dear.. suspense is awesome.. I guess it’s something related to sanskar’s past..
Of course it is SANSKAR’S past only dear..and thanks for the appreciation. This is a small filler for next chapters.
OMG….sanskar is so nice…I am madly in love with him????And about the questions u asked I really don’t know the answers because I have doubt on everyone buy hope the truth will come out soon
And again thanks for the wonderful epi….I am becoming addicted to it day by day
Even I am but not love dear, I just like him because sanskar is swara’s. No need to say thanks dear and lol..you doubt everyone? What if I make sanskar as main villian?? Just kidding ha!
It was superb dear
Thank-you siya
Sree sree sree sorry I’m late but what a birthday surprise truely enthusiastic loved it in every way oh my god I also want such birthday surprise yaar you know when sanskar planned a helicopter ride for swara in SR I was like Aww but in your ff I died oh my god my jaw dropped with everyone’s performance ragini laksh sanskar swara and yeah that kaka too tremendous look sree I don’t wanna give any answers to your questions bcoz I don’t have any right now I’m just in the bliss of your epi ???????truely it’s an epic sree……. Girl you nailed it oh I also want such surprises
Oh God! You are acting like a typical teenager now. And please don’t be sorry for being late neha. I can understand you. In serial, I was more excited for the dance rather than helicopter actually…well you will gain life in next episode, I promise you because the story will start getting intense once again.
Enjoy your bliss till evening dear because the next episode gives many questions to you…I pray God for you to give a life partner like him..
Sree I don’t know why I commented between Anu and Anjali’s comment. I hope you read that.
I read it and replied to you even. I think I forgot to mention your name there di. I will check once.
Extremely awesome dear……loved it to the core….I don’t know how many shades of sanskar u are going to reveal but I am just loving each and every shade of sanskar……awesome……
Even I am very much happy to note that ragini is calling and treating swara as sister……..
And yup even more ecstatic for swalak patch up….. Oh god friend ship band as gift….u really nailed it dear…..I must say harini ur each and every fiction is soooo unique in its way…..and I am really loving this story…..hatts off dear….
Hey sweety, sorry for not replying dear, I am just out of words sweety. But from next episode, the story once again gets intense so I gave this light episode..
Awesome dear… Loved it
Thank-you anu.
Hello guys, sorry everyone. Actually I just wanted to concentrate on some ground work of my both fictions so I really want a leave friends. I won’t even be active here but will promise to read all the stories that I am currently reading and planning to read.will be back on Friday.morning
Will wait for you 🙂 ur leave granted 😛
Will miss you….??
But I get it…. ???
Will wait for you…. ??
After my return, you all will be treated with two episodes daily..sabar ka phal meeta hota hai.
aww… surprise… surprise… surprise… full of surprise… Didnt expect this epi after kamala bhai death mystery… morethan swara I’m surprised…!!! 🙂 🙂
Hehe. I wanted to prepare you all for upcoming intense track so this is a filler..God! I am happy that you were surprised.
Wow.. Loved it yaar…Sanskar holic…
I read this ffs from strtng today …..
i really appreciate ur ffs…. waiting for more mystery … 🙂