Heyy guys samaira here with the first shot thanks for ur response on the intro hope i dont disappoint u guys..
Let Start:-
The Scene starts with a girl sitting on the floor with a frame in her hand sitting devasted… Her hairs r shows messy and tears r not stopping to flow..
The girl is just keep on crying while no one is there to console her…
Let s see abt what is she thinking and what has happened to her..
FLASHBACK:-
The same girl is shown sleeping on the bed peacefully cuddling with her teddy.. looking really pretty.. She was sleeping in sleep too dreaming abt her Prince charming…
Just as she was abt to see the face of her prince suddenly water was thrown to her..
A gorgeous lady in her late 20 s was shown standing their angry,, And a man was trying to calm her down..
Lady- SWARAA she shouts.. As still the girl was sleeping..
Swara sits on the bed rubbing her eyes looking damn cute..
Swara- RAGU di dis is not done ur not uposses to wake someone up like this..
Ragini- accha ji i called u more than a 1000 times u didnt woke up and now telling to me..
Swara-(mumbles) huhh liar ..
The man standing there hears it and smiles..
Ragini- u should get ready in 10 mins or else see..
Ragini goes while the man was standing there..
just as she goes ..
BOTH says HITLER and laughs…
Swara- seriously laksh jiju ur wife is hitler..
OK so tht man was Laksh..
Laksh just smiles..
Just then they hear a voice making them scared..
Ragini- i heard it.. she screams from outside..
Both bites their tounge…
Laksh- shona get ready soon or ur hitler didi will eat up alive..
Swra giggles.. Laksh smiles and goes to ragini,.
Outside:-
Laksh was pacifying ragini..
Ragini- laksh u know na Swara is now 22 she is no more a kid.. what would happen to her if we dont be there.. she is still so inncoent dont make her so much depended on her..
Laksh holds Ragini with her shoulders..
Laksh- ragu baby dont worry jaan we will always be there for our elder kiddo and the talk abt making her responsible we will do tht ok..
Ragini nods and both hugs..
Swara side:-
Our heroine was still deciding what to wear..
She is standing in her bathrobe.. with her wet hair looking divine..
She has a blue kurti and Pink one both the colours r her faviorate so she wasnt able to decide…
Swara- huhh what to do..
Suddenly she gets an idea in her little tiny brain
Swara takes out another kurti from the cupboard!
Swara- y to decide in these 2 i will take another..
She wears a white jurti and black legins looking like a beautiful angel…
Swara goes to the hall..
RAGLAK smile seeing her…
Swara and both Raglak sit for the bf..
Swara- di where is champ..
Just then the little cupid comes rubbing his eyes looking very adorable,,
Ragini smiles..- VEER got up my baccha..
Veer nods..
Swara smiles seeing their bonding..
Veer goes and directly sits in Swara s lap eating the bf,… as his daily routine..
RAGLAK smiles seeing their love for each other…
After the bf swaveer were busy playing with each other..
Just then raglak comes there..
Ragini- shona mrs sharma called us so me and laksh r going ok..
Ragini feels some unknown pain and sadness in her heart..
Suddenly she gets tear eyed nd kisses swara and veer s forehead…
Same was with Laksh..
Making swara and veer worried as this never happens..
Swara and veer comes to drop them off till car..
RAGLAK were continiously looking towards swaveer..
They both leaves..
Swara also feeling something bad dont know something was happening in her heart..
Leaving all the thoughts swara nd veer gets busy with playing and talking with each other..
NIGHT 10 pm:-
It was late night.. just as every second was passing swara was just feeling scared as only she and veer were in the hom and this never happened tht raglak dosent reach home..
Veer also slept being tired..
Swara was really scared she tried to call RAGLAK a lott of times but no response..
Swara then calls mrs sharma..
Mrs sharma- hello beta..
Swara – namaste just wanted to ask where r ragini di and laksh jiju i mean they still didnt reach here…
mrs sharma- what r u speaking beta they left from here 3 hrs before only..
Swara was damn shocked and suddenly tears started to flow from her eyes..
Mrs sharma hears it..- beta dont worry we r coming there..
Swara nods..
Just then Swara gets a call making her sit with a thud!!
Op- SORRY BUT THEY R NO MORE..
Swara was devasted and not ready to believe..
Just then veer comes out from his room and gets worried seeing his maasi like this..
Veer- maasi what happened..
The little soul also started crying..
Seeing veer swara broke down more as he was just 4!
Just them mrs sharma and her husband comes there..
After knowing what happened all rushes to the city hospital where raglak s bodies had been..
HOSPITAL:-
Swara and Veer runs ..
Just then the doctor sees them inquirying..
Dr- mrs swara their bodies r here..
Swara breaks down completely,..
Veer was not understanding anything but still crying..
Swara sees him and consoles him..
Veer was crying badly seeing his parents lying in a pool of blood..
Just then the person who brought raglak bring them here comes..
Swara sees him..
Man- im sahil really sorry for what happened both were lying in the pool of blood in xyz area as their breaks failed suddenly..
Swara was just crying .. Sahil went away after consoling her little,..
Veer was not in the state of talking something…
WE Say tht right no matter whoever person comes in our lives.. no one can take the place of our PARENTS..
# to be continued..
16 Comments
Nice
Heart touching
Awesome dear???
Awesome…
Nice dear
Emotional
Thanks for ur comment dear let’s see what will happen in next shot!!
nice epi dr i think i know d serial but i m not going to tell its name so dont worry n i m not going to bash u either becoz u r my fav n nice epi dr
Thanks a lotttt ur comment means a lot to me hope it done treated much to the serial love u tc..
Nice and heart touching plzz update fasttt
Aww thanks a lot for ur comment I would update it soon do check out my other stories too thanku
nyc start dear
Thanku so much dear
It’s loosely based on meenu mausi i guess???????? a show which was intended to b sanaya’s comeback , but never aired , is it??
Hey dear thanks for ur comment nope it’s no tht!! If u want I can reveal
It’s so emotional and heart touching dear. Plss post soon